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(11-04-2021, 12:50 AM)ronylol Wrote: how ?
he is correct, i lost the track, i started of like showing ajourny of her marraige life, then started that flash back of college days, it initially went well, i should have stopped it with her dad, arun and friends and should have returned to post marraige, but the flow took it somewhere, and the biggest mistake i did was make her acting in porn and once she turned prositite, i dont have ideas to right and cant get back to current state as well since it contradicts a lot...
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(14-04-2021, 11:07 AM)revathi47 Wrote: he is correct, i lost the track, i started of like showing ajourny of her marraige life, then started that flash back of college days, it initially went well, i should have stopped it with her dad, arun and friends and should have returned to post marraige, but the flow took it somewhere, and the biggest mistake i did was make her acting in porn and once she turned prositite, i dont have ideas to right and cant get back to current state as well since it contradicts a lot...
There is nothing stopping you now from coming back to original state [keep college life as - as past is past or like some detailed background analysis of Revati's past]
But now at present, the adventures can continue and may be the past flames can trigger more fires at present.
why did you ever stop.....Do start again. Marriage life can be a sex filled adventure tooo.
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(15-04-2021, 08:46 AM)Givemeextra Wrote: There is nothing stopping you now from coming back to original state [keep college life as - as past is past or like some detailed background analysis of Revati's past]
But now at present, the adventures can continue and may be the past flames can trigger more fires at present.
why did you ever stop.....Do start again. Marriage life can be a sex filled adventure tooo.
thanks for your encouraging words, but currently i am writing a different story with a story line that i had till climax ...and for this tooo i am getting lot of positive comments, so currently concentrating on this new story, once this is over, and if i get ideas, i will continue to re-write this old story..
if you like 100% soft core, pls try this..
https://xossipy.com/thread-34368.html
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Please restart this jewel again kindly.
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I am attempting to Write or continue this Story which was half done.....
Please visit the link below and share your Ideas and Votes......
Thank You.
https://xossipy.com/thread-44249.html
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(22-12-2021, 07:29 PM)FantasyKing21 Wrote: I am attempting to Write or continue this Story which was half done.....
Please visit the link below and share your Ideas and Votes......
Thank You.
https://xossipy.com/thread-44249.html
+1 voted there.......
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(22-12-2021, 07:29 PM)FantasyKing21 Wrote: I am attempting to Write or continue this Story which was half done.....
Please visit the link below and share your Ideas and Votes......
Thank You.
https://xossipy.com/thread-44249.html
+1 voted
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(22-12-2021, 07:29 PM)FantasyKing21 Wrote: I am attempting to Write or continue this Story which was half done.....
Please visit the link below and share your Ideas and Votes......
Thank You.
https://xossipy.com/thread-44249.html
Most welcome ........
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Hi Guys.....
Me Also - No Offense to any one......
I have just written a small version of the same story in a new thread......
Please read and share your comments.....
Thank You.
https://xossipy.com/thread-44599.html
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waooo you both try to expand this story please.
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