Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute

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The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale a tribute

Finally I have decided to give this story a decent finish. Not like nobody tried to achieve this. amethyst1982 has made an attempt. Subsequently, Breville1 actually had finished it. My search for Kavita’s motive could not be fulfilled. Aberration to her behaviour remained elusive.
 
All along, I had been baffled with the story. To some extent it appeared to be realistic. This is apparently, a forced cuckold story, where Manu is forced to submit under pressure to accept his wife’s blatant adultery.
The writer indicated the span of seven months. In due course of life, he was found to be healthy and successful in life.
 
How story continued from the point Indiansubmale abandoned is anybody’s imagination.

We had very clear mindset about Manu and his predicaments to accept the incidents leading to his forced submission into cuckoldry. He was full of fear and anxiety. One moment he accepts his inadequacy and inferiority over Prem. The next moment he is enthusiastic of reclaiming his wife. Not to accept defeat before death. He is under continual turmoil of positive and negative feelings. His character is well defined. In future he was successful in life. Nobody with so much fear and anxiety can be successful in life. It’s cannot be miracle.

Prem character is also well defined and crystal clear. He is physically strong with immense sexual power. He is arrogant, selfish, womanizer, pervert with sadist mentality.

Gowrie is not well defined. She is a tamil woman (May be *****) staying in Bangalore alone on job. So she is sort of independent woman. Her behaviour against Manu’s phone call draws suspicion. Engaging in 3 some sex with her fiancé’s lover, Kavita in presence of Kavita’s husband raises doubt. We have seen her always dressing conservatively.

We have no insight of Kavita’s thinking. However, we have following details:

She had pre-marriage physical relationship with Prem.
She loves children.
She is sexually starved.
She is exhibitionist.
She is trying to manipulate Manu in effeminacy & cuckolding.
She does not want to desert Manu from her life. She was not contemplating divorce.
She is afraid of Prem’s bossism.

The questions are:

Is she promiscuous or sex maniac?
Is she pervert and sadist?
What is her motive?
Why did she not divorce Manu?
Why she had to dress obscenely outside, knowing very well her social image will obliterate?
Why she had to engage in 3 some with Prem’s fiancé.
Why she resorted to intimacy and sex in front of outsiders. (A/c crew) She resorted into a very risky encounter.  How this does help her in achieving her goal.
Why she selected Prem? Is it only because of her earlier acquaintance with him or something else?
 
And many more.

 
I will try to find out logical answers to all above in my attempt to finish the story. I have sketched outline for a decent logical ending. This will help me not to veer around under pressure.  There will not be any explicit raw sexual description. No more humiliation. I had enough. I look forward to begin by Oct 2020 and finish by year end.
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(14-07-2020, 05:18 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote:  congrats Manasi... For starting this sequel. 
I am thankful to you for Your efforts to finish this epic  keeping original storyline and characters intact.

Only one request....  Do not delay the starting... So long.... Start as soon as possible...  

Waiting eagerly dear

It would be my pleasure for early start. Unfortunately, I don’t see it feasible.
For information, I have out lined the story. Right now, I am writing the last episode. Technically, an improper decision may be. After completion of this episode, I will touch the first one. Posting will be only after completion of 50%
Thank you all for overwhelming support.
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(15-07-2020, 11:30 PM)kittepo Wrote:   
Hi Manasi, I want to answer some questions as well as correct 1 details that we know. ( I am reading it again . happy  )

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I hope yours is better than others. I strongly believe author was really telling his own tale and how he accepted and started living as a cuckold. it needed only 7 more chapters (as he indicated)

Thank you kittepo for revealing your thought process. I have made a note of it. Though tempted, presently, I will refrain from any arguments to prove my points. I look forward more such thought processes from other members as well. I have pictured the protagonists in brief for benefit of myself as well as for all readers of this forum. Please reveal any deviations observed in characterization. Further inquisitions are always welcome. I only request for providing logical reasoning based on the story rather than mere feeling. Logical interpolation and extrapolation are acceptable.

Thank you once again.  
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(17-07-2020, 07:58 AM)twinciteeguy Wrote:  Agree there are many issues unexplained. You have taken up a complicated subject. all the best.

I am eagerly waiting for a forum discussion on unexplained issues.

(19-07-2020, 08:22 PM)sarit11 Wrote:  Epic Cuckold Story - The Unwanted House Guest Sequel


One more thread to Refresh this story.

My tribute will continue starting with the last posting of Indiansubmale. I request followers for refreshing memories with original posting of Indiansubmale.
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(22-07-2020, 07:27 PM)Uday Wrote:  Hi Manasi
I happened to read the story (the original and later the 2 developed ones)
I am waiting eagerly how you are going ahead with your version. 
Anyway I like your decent descriptions, views and the "2 sentences of your description where I changed the colour" is the most fitting one, even I also had enough of Manu's humiliation.
But in my view it is also one of the reasons that the story got so many followers, critics and so on as most are empathizing with Manu to some extent and made the story a success. Even someone openly admitted as his also the similar case and he accepted his wife's domination blaw..blaw..
All the best, try to start a bit early if possible.

I could not follow your "2 sentences of your description where I changed the colour". There are something missing. If possible, kindly clarify. I dont visit the forum regularly and must have missed some important points.

@Man4u90036

I do remember both the incidents and they will be addressed.

breville1 was good in expression and devlepment of the story. his logical conclusion was fantastic. However, I find him shying away explaining the motive of Kavita. Though this may be attributable, to some extent, to amethyst1982. Unfortunately, breville1 continued from from the reins of amethyst1982.

Thank you all for participation.
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I am grateful for reposing faith in me. I promise to continue by Oct 2020 to complete by Dec 2020. In between I may go off for some time. It will be required to meet my other necessities of life. So please have patience and continue with your valuable inputs.


(23-07-2020, 09:27 PM)kittepo Wrote:  Hi Manasi, here are my (probably final thoughts)

In this case - Kavitha is the "hot wife" - brains behind entire thing. Prem/Amir is a "bull" for her needs. I think she truly loves Manu -- but she wants Manu to be a her "cuckold" or control him unconditionally. She is not a "slut". She wants Prem to satisfy her "sexual" needs. But she wants Manu for everything else.  When Prem wanted to leave (while taking Manu to hospital), she wanted him to stay. She was training Manu to be at "her" beck and call. The person who can do that is Prem. With Prem she exudes control as well. Prem likes women and she knows if she can feed his ego, she has him as well. This is where Gauri, Rachna and other girls in Prem's photo album comes in.

Did Gouri appear in Prem's photo album? I doubt. Kindly give me the episode no. I may have over looked.
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(26-07-2020, 12:48 AM)Ramesh_Rocky Wrote:  Hi


Manasi it a great challenge for you to continue the story and justify all questions in readers mind but i have faith in you. i read your past comments in other threads your views and reviews about the stories are good. hope all go well. start the story when you are ready and make sure you have couple of updates before posting your first update.

I am overwhelmed with your worm gesture. I will try with my limited knowledge to justify all questions in readers mind, provided the questions are put in black & white in this forum.

Thank you.
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(27-07-2020, 08:02 PM)MASTER90 Wrote:  Jaldi suru kar yar.... ? please don't mind for selection of my words..

Language should not be viewed as shortcomings expressing our moods. You are welcome in your selection of words.
Please wait till Oct 2020. A very few persons are bestowed with literacy skills and definitely I don't fall in that category. Moreover, my tribute is in justifying the characters pictured by great 'indiansubmale'. Inflicting fresh sex and humiliation is not in my schedule. I request you to refresh your memory with the original story avoiding contribution from other writers built on this storyline to avoid mixing up. And definitely don't forget to raise your concerns.

Looking forward for valuable contribution to picture the characters concisely.
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@Theflash

Your request is thought provoking and interesting.

I would like to emphasize on a few things here.

I have made some basic assumtions.

1. The srory has some truth in it. Otherwise, it will be meaningless, to justify the characters in real world.
2. The characters mostly accepts the truth, when they speak to their mind.
3. Every character has even chances to go wrong while reading other's mind. The perceptions go in line with the character's own mental state at that point. For example you see somebody smiling at you. It can be jovile, hostile, crucked, pleasant, sly, grin, twinkle etc etc Not necessarily character's perception is always correct. He may construe a hostile one as crucked.

The story is described in Manu's version. He is expected to be biased on certain aspects. If the same story is presented by Kavita or Prem, even in real sceniaro, they will differ quite widely. Folw of communications are always aberrated. No communications are exact replica of originals.

In science we call for best fitting  curve matching with  a set of given points. In two dimensions we search for line. In three dimensions we go for fitting surface. Here Manu has provided a set of incidents involving Kavita, Prem, Gowri and some other characters introduced at different points. My effort is to find a fitting geometric (psychological ) relationship logically acceptable explaining as much incidents as much as possible. The incidents ( I say points ) are already generated and existing. I can't change the coordinates of said points. Maximum I may allow some deviations to find the fittest relationship.

So I neither accept your request nor reject.

Thank you. Please continue with your valuable suggestions.
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I was expecting some burning questions bubbling up in readers mind while revisiting the original classic of 'indiansubmale'.
This indicates, readers are not interested in reading the original any more.

It will be my pleasure to reverse my opinion.
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(08-08-2020, 08:00 AM)kittepo Wrote:  Hi Manasi,

You said you will start in October - so we are waiting for this --
But in the meantime - here is a tidbit. On the first paragraph, the original writer indicated the what the end is. His story is about how he got to the end. If you want, I can copy and paste it. Please make sure your continuation goes to that end.

Thank you Sir on your commemoration. Please go ahead to reproduce the prelude.

I will appreciate you to add a few lines on your views on the first paragraph. The views you generate (the unforced one) without going into details whatever followed subsequently.
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(11-08-2020, 11:31 AM)kittepo Wrote:  Here is the first paragraph from that story  - check the font color (highlight)

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CHAPTER 1: Wives, cuckolding, emasculation, humiliation, pregnancy 
My name is Manu Sharma, 40 years old, one of the respectable hardworking guys you might have 
known in your own lives. This is a multi-part story revolving around incidents over a period of 7 months, 
during which I went from being an inadequate husband to a completely emasculated cuckold. It is hard 
to write a story from the beginning, many years in retrospect, as I am doing now. It is easy to argue in 
retrospect that had I done things differently at this stage, or that stage, I could have prevented some of 
the things that happened. Likewise, it is easy to reflect on incidents, so many years after they happened, 
on what I might have done wrong in those circumstances, knowing how things unfolded later. Also, 
using the knowledge of what happened later to describe what happened at a point in time also fails to 
capture the powerful feelings I went through during those experiences. I will try my best to make an 
effort to not describe what happened in the future, while describing any given part of the story. 
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Thanks kittepo for taking pain to re-post the essence of the story.
I sincerely regret missing your personal views.
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(10-08-2020, 03:57 PM)xx30 Wrote:  This story doesn't need a sequel, I went through all the replies, looks like everybody has taken this story seriously and some are even thinking that it is inspired from real life incidents. 
This story is inspired (and upto some extent copied) from interracial cuckold humiliation stories. Cuckolding in real life is different from erotic literature, in real life many married couples living mostly in metros try a lot of stuff to spice up their sex life, like having sex with different partners and then sharing the experience with spouse, swapping or becoming a cuckold or cuckquean where either a husband watches his wife having sex with another man or a wife watches her husband fucking a more beautiful woman.But interracial cuckold stories are different, they are very popular in western countries specially in usa.

The author cannot give that kind of ending to an Indian story , this is where some creativity is required which he lacks. So this story is not inspired from true events and actually do not need an ending.

In literature, cuckoldry may be a concept. In societal life, it exits. A man - wife relationship takes different dimensions under various forces, many a times beyond their control. We know form history, the powerful landlords forcefully bedded wives of landless farmers. In modern society, instances are many, where people bribe their wives in return of advantages. not necessarily sex is always a reason for transaction. Factors beyond sex are not ruled out. Sugar daddy may be considered a cuckoldry relationship, if the woman involved is married. By definition, every adultery relationship involving a married woman is cuckoldry.

Everybody is not a gifted writer and so while writing personal life stories, chances are high to get motivated by others. Copying writing styles or getting ideas of presentation does not prove a story a real or fake one. Originality is compromised to increase acceptability. All amateurs like me find it difficult to express their views.

If I accept this story is not based on some real incidents, it calls for immediate closure of this thread.

I request you to analyze and give some logical reasoning in favour of falseness of this story, helping me deciding in positive note.
Looking forward for your critical analysis.
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(16-08-2020, 11:38 PM)xx30 Wrote:  
Tried to post a reply but xossipy not accepting .

Please contact Admin or moderators.
They will be happy to settle all technical issues.
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@ xx30
I appreciate your laboured homework. I could enrich my knowledge.
I don't find much to dis-agree with your views. Your cordial approach has overwhelmed me, in particular, the suggestion for a new beginning.
Thank you. I decline, as I have no interest to be in lime light.

At this point I stress only one thing. This particular story is not written for sexual gratification. Though, there were plenty opportunity, the author has carefully avoided vivid description of sexual mating which is uncharacteristic to the erotic stories devoted to sex. Human minds are heavily conditioned. All communal riots are best examples of conditioned minds. I request you to look at the story with free mind, free from conditions of cuckold sex.

Your input could not provide enough information to declare this story as an absolute fiction. So, I will continue to justify the protagonist in real life, avoiding fresh humiliation and raw sex.

Look forward for your well thought deliberations in future also.
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(24-08-2020, 03:34 PM)Theflash Wrote:  Manasi
I think you have found the way to kill the readers with anticipation.
Full marks to you on that.

Just kidding
Please start soon

Thank you for your continual encouragement.  Sorry for keeping you all waiting. I promise to start by Oct 2020. Early start depends on my home front and progress in research. I am struggling to logically justify two incidents. Hope to find ways to veer around.
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@XX30

I once again appreciate your views.

I don't deny that Indiansubmale may have been encouraged by some prominent writer and adopted style.

But the story has not been ploted long back. Precisely, it must be dated between 2001 to 2010 and heavily inclined towords 2010. People were using cell phone and SMS. WhatsApp came sometime in 2010. Five day week is in force in some private industries. Shopping malls started functioning. People are going to movie halls and tickets are available. I mean demand for tickets are not so high during weakends . So, it is transition period prior to multiplexes took over from earlier cinema halls.

I congratulate the original author for precisely adopting the time frame even if it turns out to be copied from fantasy story.

Please continue with your feedback.
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(10-09-2020, 06:21 AM)Dhundari Wrote:  Hi manasi, any possible date or month... delhi abhi bahut dur lar rahi hai horseride Tongue Big Grin


I promised Oct 2020, and find no reason to miss deadline unless KOVID-19 play havoc.
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(10-09-2020, 12:40 AM)lordrb Wrote:  Hi, it is fascinating to note how exciting everybody is analysing, fantasising, assuming whether this really happened or just fanfasy and imagination.

Well, let me state that most of the stuff in the story can happen  in life and is happening in a lot of peoples life. I have known atleast a couple people who, one willingly, and another ubwillingly forced in those situations. Except, the humiliations, sadistic behaviour, depravity, and slutty and worish behaviour, most of other things happens in real life.So, you decide whether to finish it taking into consideration what i stated. Good Luck.

Mind is conditioned.
Life is under compulsions.
If sex is driving force, behavioural aberrations are natural.
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(15-09-2020, 06:36 AM)kittepo Wrote:  @mansi - When I read the story again - Manu is going to be a emasculated cuckold. Will he be humiliated - it will depend what a person will be considered humiliation. I read this again, and how Kavitha is conditioning Manu is becoming clear. The initial masturbation and the navel ring with A.A at the end of unfinished story are leading to that. I also believe Kavitha will stay with Manu -- but will have total control. With regard to Prem (Amir) and Gowri -- that is the interesting part.

Remember Kavitha's question and her "suggestions"

@ kittepo

Its heartening seeing you refreshing for the tribute. My sincere thanks to you and all the readers anxiously waiting for the tribute.

I sincerely draw your attention on following:

A.A had appearances four times in the story.

At 2nd instance of tatoo Manu converse with Kavita.

[Ch. 23 Pt. 1]

"Don't pretend to me, Kavi. The letters A.A were in the middle of the heart and you know it, and I know you know it."
There was a long silence from her end, as I heard her exhale deeply.
"If that's what you think it says, Manu, then that's what it says."

[Ch. 22 Pt.2]

Kavita says in a different context.

"Things are not necessarily what they look like."

I personally believe, things are not necessarily same always, what they look like. A conditioned mind falls prey to illusion.
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