[Zaspreet]

Wah maza aa gaya

Bahut dhanwaad dost.

[Zaspreet]

Naam bade or darshan shotte

Jiven tuhanu lagda veer. Dhanwaad read and reply karn layi dost.

[Zaspreet]

Vry vry superb story...   ehda jwab ni.. bs updatw jldi te bdi deya kro

Bahut shukriya ji. Jaroor ji . Thanks again for the support.

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Je nhi Vdhia lgi te agge na aayo is  thread te tuc.. pr writer nu discourge na kro.. sanu bht psnd eh story .. tuv koi hor pdh lo

Tension na laoo radha ji. Kam se kam readers comment tan karde ne ji. Baaki main jehre pasand karde ne readers unha layi story diya updates jaroor karda rahuga. Thank you very much.

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Nice please update soon

Dhanwaad dost read karn layi and comment karn layi.

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kaint  ji update  karo yar  jaldi story  bhit sohni a

Thank you so much dost. Hanji koshish ehi rahugi ki update jaldi deya karan ji.

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Amazing update bro.  The description of every character is top notch. On one side navdeep is learning about that one should not beleive on superstitions and on other side ramu is doing kaala jaadu.  Hats off for this creation .

I didn't understand your comment bro.  Are you saying the writer name is big but not his story?  Or you are saying particularly about this update???

Thank you so much dost for always supporting me. Veer jisnu jiven lagdi story usnu comment karn dao. Ghato ghatt oh apna review tan de rahe ne .

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waitingggg

NYC..... But babe nl mel krao

Thank you very much friends.

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kro update

Very interesting update bro. Ramu toh dona kudiyan de tanke tudwayo

Bahut dhanwaad doston for reading and replying.

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Ramu and Navdeep Di conversation  Leke Aao ...
Usdi Wait Nhi hundi ...

Navdeep nu taan Babe and Ramu naal Rakhiyo Scene because Zyada naal complicated hoju ...

Choti kudi Nu Bapu de Dosta Naal Scene Shuru karlo ..Bapu De Amli Dost Usdi Choti kudi baare ganda bolde ne and Pher Bapu aapni choti kudi vaal attract hunda ..

Thank you so much ji for reading and replying and also giving valuable suggestions.  Bilkul ji sabh scenes match kruge .

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Next update kal karuga doston.

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update kardi yaar

Waiting for next scene

Veer ji waiting

waiting

kro update

Waiting

waiting

update

Bro update

Sorry for the delay friends.  Update poora krn da time nhi milya. Par aj ik big update kruga shaam nu.

[Zaspreet]

Thanx veer ji please aaj shaam nu update jaroor karna pls

waitingggg

Veer ji kardo kripa

Ji krdo hun updaye

Update waiting

Kidhr aa o vddi update

Hanji friends bas huni kar reha update.

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Baki sb ehna ne shi keha bs kde v is story nu incest na banyo... tang aaye pye aan sb story incest ..
Story di jan nikl jani incest ton.
Baki niki kudi nu  peo de dostan nal krvao .. k o ghr aaun te chhed chhat hou kudi nal

Okk ji...main hun change kar ditta hai plot ji.

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Bai ek correction karni a... Genre ta tu "INCEST" ditta par hje tak koi v "INCEST " seen ni aya.... na kite koi gall hoi a.. ek jagah bas Kuldeep nu ohde dosta ne kaha ohdiya Dheea bare... par oh just ek gal hi c... mere vang shyad kyi jane confusion ch a.. ke story "Adultery " a ke "INCEST "  ???

Te duji gal bai 1 sex seen likhya tu... hje tak .. ohde ch Sirf kuldeep ki feel kar oh dasya... jahdi kudi nal oh kar raha ohdi ta tu koi feeling ni likhi... just ena likhya kudi nu maza aun lagga... bas ... sex seen nu bhut improvement di lod a.. bai... je vadiya lagge ta.. dasi.... correction jrur kardi uppar jo kaha mai

je kuch hoya ta.. pakka dasu.,,, baki all good a..

Thank you so much veer jo tusi story dhyaan nal parhi and apna review ditta. Tuhade naal main poori tarah naal ehmat haan and niche jawaab main de reha haan ...

1) Bilkul sahi keha veer k main genre incest likhya hai par story ch hale tak koi incest da scene nahin aaya. Reason eh hai ki pehla eh story incest hi likhi si and hun vi incest hi likh reha si par phir incest di supply jyada hon karke main plot change kar ditta hain. Pehla is story ch ik character si jehra pure incest si . Par hun eh story incest nahin hougi. Main isda genre change kar dena hai ji. Eh adultery hougi story hun.

2) Hanji veer ik sex scene aaya hai kyunki veer ik-do nu shaddd ke meri story de characters thode '. kism de hai jo aini jaldis sex ch nahin fass sakde jiskarke sex scenes ghatt hai. And jehra kuldeep vala sex scene si us ch kudi valo tan nahin dasseya kyunki oh kudi gasti ( Prostitute) si and meri story da main character kuldeep hai. Iskarke kuldeep de point of view toh dasseya hai. 

Baaki veer jo hor v kamiyan hai jaroor dsseo. Main shai karda rahuga. Bahut bahut dhanwaad veer.

[Zaspreet]

Veer ji aaj taa mausam vi bada sexy hai please aaj jaldi hi update Karo please sadda KLPD no ho jaawe

Waiting for the  update bro.

still waiting for update

update

Lkhak di kahani de agle ansh de intezaar vich.

Bro plz update

Bas huni aa reha update doston.

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Nahi time hai ga te thread delete mar de
Var var check te na karni pau

Veer kayi vaar banda kama karrach busy vi ho janda jiskrke update likh nahi hundi . Par main roz iskrke reply karda rehna ki sarya nu pata rahe ki writer haiga hai. Kyunki veer reply karn ch tan 1-2 minute hi masi lagde par update likhan layi 1-2 hours chahide oh v koi v disturb na kar reha hove.

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Incest ni to to fir kya

Veer main soch reha Adultery kar dava story. Tusi incest read karna chahunde ho?

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Doston meri next update bahut important hai. Us vich story da genre change ho skda hai. Iskrke mainu eh dsso tusi is story nu pure incest read krna pasand kroge ya Pure Adultery. Ya phir mix incest + adultery.

Doston please reply Jaroor krna tanki story phir us genre de according hi challe.

[Zaspreet]

Incest plus adultery kardo

Saare readers happy ho jaange

Adultry

Jive marji likh de bai par likh

pure adultery

update ta dao

 adultry

Incest+ adultry

update

upfate

Bahut dhanwaad friends for the replies. Main decide kar leya hai ji ki story " Incest + Adultery " hovegi. Umeed karda haan dono genre nu pasand karn wale readers jude rehnge story naal.