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Agla update thodi der ch aa reha doston.

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UPDATE- 7

Navdeep ne ucchi deni cheeka maaarnia shuru kar dittian. Par shayad kise nu kuch pata nahin lagga.

Jisnu sun fatafat unha ne bike start kiti te furr ho gaye te Navdeep pajj ke apne ghar de hor nehre nu aa gayi.

Navdeep de piche aayunde hoye shayad kayi mundeyan ne navdeep de chitddann di aawazz ucchi deni suni hove. Par oh kuch pakka nahin keh sakdi si kyunki usdia cheekan sunke vi koi nahin aaya si.  Navdeep nu bhut gussa aa gaya te pajj ke apni gali val gayi te ghar de andar varh gayi.

Hun Agge.......

Navdeep kaur da saah upar-haithan hoyi ja reha hai. Oh paj ke apne ghar de andar varh gayi te dharam deni booha bandh kita te andar val nu pajji aayi. Andar tv vale kamre vch aayi tan jasmeen lammi ppaayi tv dekh rahi hai.

Jasmeen-" ki hoya didi......????? aidda pajj ke andar aaye ho? JAsmeen nu haafdi navdeep nu puchyaa.

Navdeep-" naa koi gall nhi aaaa.......hmmmm. bebe kithe aaa?????????" navdeep ne apne saahan nu kaboo vch kardeya jawaab ditta te bebe baare puchyaa.

Jasmeen-"bebe tan tere naal hi gayi c.....seva karayun......" jasmeen ne dsdeya keha.

Navdeep-" hale aayi nai aaa........?"

Jasmeen-" nhi hale tan nahi aayi"

Navdeep-" chal aah mera phone farhaa de hun.........mai zara charging te laa devan" navdeep ne jasmine de hathan vch farhe phone nu fardeya keha.

Jasmeen-" ki aa didi......masa tan shutti aale din mainu phone milda.......kinni vaari keha ki mainu v le do......." jasmen ne bachean vaang ronde hoyeeya keha.

navdeep-" bas kar......ik din tainu dinne a phone....sara din kherha nhi shad di.....je kite tainu pakka hi de ditta phir pata nhi kde soya v karengi. " navdeep ne apni behen nu samjaynde keha.

Ainne nu bebe v aa gayi.......andar aayundi bebe nu navdeep ne puchyaa......

Navdeep-"bebe late ho gaye......kithe gye c ?"

MAnjeet-" oh bas uthe kirtan sunan lag payi saa......pichle paase........tainu mai laheya te phir lagya ki tu chali gayi honi aa........"

Navdeep-" mai v tuhanu labhya c....mai kirtan vale paase nhi gaye.....nahi tan tuhade naal hi aa jandi....."

Phir navdeep te mandeep raat di roti di tayarai karan lag gaye. Tori hi der tak Dilpreet v motorcycle nu "dharammmmmmmmm.....dagrammmmmmmmm" karda aa gaya........

MAnjeet-" ve kholdi aaaaaaaaa......sabar rakh zara........" manjeet booha kholan layi nass ke gayi te dilpreet nu keha jo bahar uchi aawaz vch motorcycle di race de reha c.

Manjeet ne booha kholya te dilpreet andar aa gaya te apni jagah te bike khalaarke andar chala gya.

Manjeet-" ve kuj sharam v haigi aa tainu........saver da gaya hun murrya.......ghar de kamm kaaj v karne hunde ne./" manjeet dilpreet nu taaran laggi par dilpreet ne ansuna kita te apne kamre vch varh gaya te kapre badlan lagg gaya.

Jasmeen hale v tv dekh rahi hai. Navdeep te manjeet rasoi vch kamm kar rahian ne te dilpreet bhi apne kamre ch baitha phone te gallan mar reha hai.

(Raat 9 baje)

Sareyan ne roti khaa layi hai. te apne apne kamre vch chupchap soun diya tayaarian kar rahe ne. Kuldeep singh hale tak nahi aaya hai. Oh keh ke gya c raat nu late aavega par manjeet nu pata hai ki oh apne dostan naal baith ke daru pinda hona te raat nu late hi aavega. Navdeep kaur apne kamre ch baithi aj seva karayun vele hoyi Preet Inder singh naal mulaqat baare soch rahi hai. Oh soun di koshish kardi hai lakin usde man vch us babe da chehra baar baar aa reha hai. Oh aj usnaal gall karke bhut prbhavit hoyi hai. Babe di sohni soorat te usde mithhas bhare hoye shabd te usnu uttam gyaan vaale gun baar baar navdeep nu us babbe nu yaad karan layi majboor kar rahe ne. Navdeep ik sarhane nu apne done vadde mummean thalle dabdi hoyi us babe baare soch rahi hai. Duje paase dilpreet sukhpreet nal gallan maar reha hai naale apne lun nu hath vch farhke muth maar reha hai. Jasmeen tv dekhdi hoyi neend vch kadi v ja sakdi hai. Manjeet nu aj v chain nahi hai.

Manjeet apne bed te lammi paayi apne prayune da intezaar kar rahi hai. Oh sochdi hai ki pehla tan aidda kade nhi si hunda. Par pata nhi ajkal usda pryuna bada late hon lag peya hai. Daaru te meat masshi naal dostan vch baithna ghij gaya hai. Manjeet bhaaven tinn bacchean di maa c par usde jism hale v lun lain layi agg di bhatthi vaang tapda rehnda hai. Roz rat nu tapp-tapp ke lun len vaali manjeet nu laghbhag saal to uppar ho challeya c ki lun len tan door di gall kise mard ne usde jism nu changi tarah hath tak nahi laya c. Manjeet apne viahh de pehle 3 saal yaad kardi kardi ron lag jandi hai. Kinna maaza ayunda c udo jado kuldeep usnu apne hathan de zor naal chakk ke khich khich ke usdi fuddi vch lun vaarhda hunda c. te oh maaze naal cheekdi hoyi apniyan goriyan baahan usde gale vch paa ke khull ke usda poora lun apni fuddi vch laindi hundi c. Raat nu 2-3 baar tan kuldeep udii fuddi thokda hunda c. Saver nu usde jism te lalli te paye hoye danda de nishaan oh nahaun vele baar baar sheeshe vch vekhdi c te raat nu milya maaza yaad kardi hoyi hasdi c.

Par ajkal tan bas sapnea vch hi oh fuddi marayun baare soch sakdi hai. pata nhi Usd fuddi de andar da paani jehra pehla jharnea vaang vaagda c hun jiven us utte sukkka pai chuka hai. Inj lagda ki sadiyan beet gayian hon te usne viahi aurat vala maaza nahi leya. manjeet eh sochdi sochdi karvata lendi hoyi son di koshish kar rahi hai par neend tan jive usde kolo nhi fatakdi.

{Dusre Paase)

Kuldeep aapne dostan naal ik motor te baitha hoya daaru de pegg lagataar pe reha hai. Naal ande te meat leyanda hoya hai. saare dost ikatthe hi ral mil ke shakk rahe ne. Saarean ne daaru ainni ku pee rakhi hai ki unha nu khyaal nahi hai ki oh ki bol rahe ne te kisde baare bol rahe ne. Bass har gall te bulle urra rahe hun..vcho ik dost billa hai usne sehej subah hi gal kitti........

Billa-" bai kuldeepya......sadi bhabhi tan vahli hi sohni a.........pata nhi tainu patandara kithon labbh gayi"

Kuldeep-" oh bas aidda hi hai fir.....yaara te rab di meharbani aaaa......"

Billa-" yaar oh ainna takda maal hai......je kite asin hunne hun nu ghar jaa ke raat rangeen karde hona c.......te tu yaar itthe baitha ......"

Kuldeep-" yaara aidda di gall nahi.......saala batheriyan raatan rangeen kityan viah to baad. sala bina nagha paaya fatte chakda reha haan mai.......par hun usde vch oh gall nahi rahi......."

Billa-" ley kamaal kardaa.....sara pind us utte talli hoya peeyaa...te tu kehna gall baat nhi........."

Daaru de nashe ch tunn hon karke usnu chagi tarah kujh samaj nahin aa reha si ki eh tan usdi janani de baare puutha siddha bol rahe ne.

Kuldeep-" hun bas aapa oh ho gaye aa us ton......ki kehnde angrezi vch yaar.......usnu.b........babba........hhhhhhhhhhhh h"

Tippi-" boreeeeeeeeeee" nal baithe dost tippi ne jawaab ditta.........." Usda jawaab sunke saarea ne haami bhari.

Kuldeep-" haan boree ho gaya......hun tan seal bandh fuddi di lorh aaa yaaraaa"

Billa-" teriyan tan kuriyan v aato...ath maardiyaa.......unha nu hi chakk ley kise nu....." Bille ne nashe di haalat vch bol ditta par kuldeep te koi asar na hoya te oh v gall nu vandhayun lagg paya.

Kuldeep-" Kuriyan nashe di purrian..." Kehke oh neendra jeha ho gaya te gardan sitt ke baith gaya jiven kutta davka maarke bithaya hove.

Tippi-" Yaar ehda tan lagda ho gaya kamm ...." Gardan lamka ke havshiyan vaaang paye kuldeep nu dekhke oh bolea. " Par yaar isdi kudi di mil jaave tan samjo mukti mil jaave.."

Billa-" kerhi vaali di yaar jassu ya navi????"

Tippi -" yaar jassu tan hale bacchi jehi lagdi mainu.........vaddi kuri aaa pataka..........navdeep kaur........usdi mil jaave tan saari zindagi de vaare nyaare ho jaan" Tippi nashe vch ainna tun ho chkka hai ki usnu samaj nhi a rahi oh ki bol reha. " Behenchod gurudware ch jado mattha tekan layi kodi hundi aa naa...hayee...dil karda bund ch dhakk dava lull ..."

Billa-" sahi gall aa teri yaara........Sare munde gurudware navdeep di bund dekhn hi jande aa yaar...jo gal us vch aa oh kise pind diyan janani ch nahi....bariyan bariyan gundwe sharee valiyan v paani bhardiyan ohdaa"

Tippi- " Jado sewa karid turdi aa na...hayee khabbe sajje hunde chitadd mooh te vajjde mere ..." Oh besharam hoke hun bolan lagge. " Ji karda hunda lun de naal naal tatte v usdi bund ch dhakk deya yaar..."

Billa- " Ohh teri di balle ....dil tan mera v karda hunda saali di '. fuddi te bund nu lun da parshaad khilayun layi. Main tan sunghno na shadda usda chugatha. Behenchod hor tan hor saali da padd v mehka khilaarda hona pakka...."

Eh gal sunke saare jaane thaka maarke hassan lag payee.


Tippi -" sahi gall aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.pata nhi kiidan daaaa lagnnaaa..........." Tippi ne hale aini ku gal kahi hi c ki unha de ik dost ne scorpio gaddi kacchi sadak te lejandeya hoya unha saamne aa roki.

Billa-" aah gaya sada maal......hun aaju swaad"

Rolla jeha sunke billa ne kuldeep nu v jhonjreyaa tan kuldeep de v dele khull gaye. Gaddi di aawaz sunke oh barkaa maaran lagga.

Kuldeep-" hun bani gallllll..........burrhhhhhhhh" Kuldeep bhi uth ke khara ho gaya......te scorpio di takki kholi tan unha da ik dost "Bhola" utteryaaa te usne piuchli takki kholi tan us vchi ik sohni sunakhi ucchi lambi naar nikli. Jisne bhut hi sohna patiala suit paya hoya c. Lambi guttttt......laal bull.....gora rang..motiyan akhan.......kanna vch vaaliyan.nakk vch koka.......ucha lamba kadd.......mote mote mumme te usto v mote te chorhe chutadddddddddd. Saare dost us naar di khoobsoorti nu dekh ke paagal hi ho gaye.

Kuldeep-" veere eh sappp kitho kadd leyanda tusi???????" Nasheri jehi aawaz ch kuldeep ne bhole nu puchya.

Bhola-" poore 10000 take da maal aaa.........college ch pardi aaaaaa hale.......fuddi de naal naal bunddddd v marayundi aaaaa......rajj ke maje dayu,,,,,"

Kuldeep-"oye balle .....swaad leya ta yaara.........hun tan poori raat mehfil challu ithe......aaja leyaaa"

Uthe kuldeep nu mila ke 5 hor bande c. yaani ke panja ne us kuri di fuddi maarni aa saari raat. Tippi nu usnu dekh ke navdeep di yaad aa gayi. Par ah kuri da jism v nadeep de aage kuj nhi haiga. Sare jaane us kuri nu lai ke motor de andar challan lagge.....

Bhola-" oye mitrooo aithe koi nahi aayun lagga.....manja bahar kadddo te khuli hawa ch mauja kro......poori raat koi parinda v parr nhi maarda ithe. "

Sareyan ne bhole di gall sundeyan hi usnu bahar le anda. Kuri rajj ke sohni te sunakhi hai. usda jism bhaara te bilkul punjaban vaang bhakhda peya hai. Sab to pehla kuldeep usnu chumbar gaya .Usde sharree nal lagdeya hi us kuri de mote mummeeee kuldeep nu mehoos hoye. Kuldeep ne usdi chunni la ke paran sutt ditti te usde bull hawashiyan vaang chusan lag peyaa. Saare dost usde naal khare hare apne lun te hath feran lagg paye. Kuldeep ne usde bullan nu apne sharab naal mehek rahe mooh nal inj chooseya jiven usne patt ke lai jaane aaa. Kuri v mast ho ke usnu apne bullan da rass peyaun laggi. Kuldeep ne fir usde kameez nu hath paaya te usnu fatafat upar kar ditta.......uffffffffff.....us kuri di chiitii braa vch kaid usde 38 size de mumme baldi agg ang garmi shaddan lagge. Kuldeep ne fatafat usdi bra nu hath paaya te upar chukk ditta. to be continued

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zaspreet mi mi tuhada bahut wada fan ki kahani hi sach koi jawab nahi jinni wari marzi pado lagda  pehli war pad rehi hi sachi tuhadi kahani pad ke lulla baithan ta naa hi lenda khayala vich hi naveddp di  vadi bund disdi ha haye  baba ne kado navdeep di salwar da nada kheenchna  te navdeep   nu apne lulle de darshan karwane

Bahut bahut Dhanwaad veer inna pyaar den layi.  Saare hi navdeep di vaddi bund de deewans hun te wait kr rhe hun ki kdo oh rann kodi hovegi bund ch lulla fsayun layi.  Babe da v lulla khada rehnda navdeep di bund chodan layi.  Shayad babe di koshish rang leyave.

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Excellent bro

kaim ..

Thank you so much veer.

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Good going keep it up

please share more images of this kind. Beautiful. Tag the women.

Thanks for the replies veer.  Hayee is rann di bund di mori chattan nu ji krdaaa

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Great post... dova kudiya te v ehna tappi te bille jehe kolo jrur hath firvayo... m tan kehni start e ehna to hona chahida khas kr jasmine da

Thanks radha sharma ji for reply and suggestions.  Hanji update read kri jayeo.. Shayad tippi te bille nu mauka mil jaave hath feeran da.

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Bahut Vadiya Story Hai g
Jasmeen Nu Bapu te uss de Dosta Naal Rakhooo
Mazaa aajuga

Thank you veer for the reply. Hanji veer updates read krde rheo.

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ypdate duyo zaspreet ji ho sake te manjeet  nu bihari kaala naukar ramu kolo hi thukwao

Thanks for reply veer.  Tuhadi suggestion note kr layi gayi hai veer.

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kinna  alag nazara bhare badan di sardarni  ek bhaiye kolo apni taangas chukwaye

Hanji veer majedaar scene bnuga.

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Bahut vdia update

Very sexy story zas brother. Swaad a janda read krke.  Really very tempting story.  Rated FIVE

Update plz

No plz.. is story nu incest na bnayo... kinni incest chldi pehla e

Bahut bahut dhanwaad doston story read krn layi and comment krn layi.

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bahut hi vadia vir ji .. pr ithe tak ran asi read kiti c pehla .. umeed ae hun complete hovegi kyuki tuhada jawab nhi ....  manjit bare v kuch likho .... waiting for nexttttt

Thanks manpreet veer for the comment.  Hanji story poori hovegi.  Manjeet baare vi updates khull ke aayugia veer.

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Update waiting

Bro update plz

Hanji dost aa reha update ajj.

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Bahut umda lekhni hai lekhak di. Main khud ik bahut mashoor Akhbaar vich te ik rasale ch kahania shaapda han. Par meri kahania da visha vilakhan hunda hai kaamuk  ta ton. Lekhak ton vibhinn visheya te kahania di umeed krda haan.

Dhanwaad veer story read krn li and apne vichaar den layi.  Bahut khushi hoi jan ke ki tusi vi likhde ho newspaper ans magazines ch stories.  Aasha karda haan tuhada saath banya rahuga.

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Next update aj aa reha doston.

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UPDATE-8

Kuldeep ne fir usde kameez nu hath paaya te usnu fatafat upar kar ditta.......uffffffffff.....us kuri di chiitii braa vch kaid usde 38 size de mumme baldi agg vang garmi shaddan lagge. Kuldeep ne fatafat usdi bra nu hath paaya te upar chukk ditta

Hun Aagge......

Usdi bra de chukkan nal hi us punjaban mutiyaar de mote mote te vadde mumme khuli hawa vch azaad ho gaye te kuldeep di jeeb laara shaddan laggi. Aine sohne te gol matol mumme dekh uthe khare sare jane hairanaan reh gaye. Gore mass de bne hoye tarbooj varge mummean de upar takreban 2 inch de nipples sakht asan vch khare salaami de rahe ne. Usde mummean de nipples de aale dwaale vala gheraa v bhooraa te halke gulabi rang de mel naal bnya hoya bhakhde tandoor vang agg la reha c. Kuldeep taan usnu dekhdeya hi us kuri de mummean te tutt peya. Kuri di kamar nu hath pa ke apne val zor di khichdeya hoyan usne usde toppan varge mumme mooh vch paa laye. Hayeeeee...kuri diyan kilkaariyan nikklan laggiyan. Kuldeep ik bhukhe sheer vang sohni hirni da shikaar karan lagga. Usde ik mumme de mote nipple nu mooh vch maa ke bacchean vang saah andar nu khich khich ke chusan lagga te duje mumme nu apne doosre hath naal janwara di tarah maslan lagg pey. Kuri ne apne hathan nal kuldeep di pith farh li te usnu apne joban rass da swaad poore maaze nal shakaan laggi.

Kuldeep de sathiyan to v reh nahi ho reha c. Unha ne apne apne pajame laaye te besharma vang khule asmaan de thalle te thandiyan chal rhian raat diyan hawaawa vch bilkul nange ho gaye. Unhe nu kuldeep v mumme choosda hoya apne poore kapre laa chukka c. Usda mota takda lund kuri di salwaar naal lagda hoya usdi fuddi naal zor ke ghisaar reha c. Kuri de gulabi bull choos choos ke kuldeep ne fikke kar ditte sun. Hun oh usde mummean nu changi tarah nichorr reha c. Kuldeep ne mumme chooosdeya hoya hi us kuri di salwaar nu hath paa leya te jhat hi kuj seconds vch hi usdi salwaar fuddi te pattan nu dhakan di vajaye zameen te diggi payi c.Thalle paayi hoyi kaali kacchi nu hath payunde kuldeep ne usnu manje te sutt leya. Oh halle v usde doven mumme baari baari sir choos reha c. Hun usne usde tidd te jeeb feeri te holi holi chatda hoya usdi dhunni de dwale jeeb ghumayun lagga. Kuri nu v maaze aayun lagge jiskarke usdi lattan kambann lag gayian. Kuldeep ne usdi dhunni vch apni gilli jeeb dabb ke paayi te pchhhhhh pchhhhhhhhh kardeya usnu changi tarah choos choos ke saaf kita.

Hun usne thalle usdi kacchi nu hath paa leya te bare hi bedard tareeke naal khich ke usde jism to alag kar ditti te sarean ne us kuri de luke hoye husn de jalwe da deedar kita. Shave kiti hoyi bina vaalan vaali chamakdaar gulabi fuddi sarea de lunna te teer vang chubban laggi. Kuldeep te oh kuri v hun poori tarah nange ho chuke ne. Kuldeep ne kuri nu apne upar bitha leya te aap manje te baith gaya. Jisnaal usda lun kuri di mulayam fuddi te lagataar ragar khanda hoya maaze den lagga. Kuldeep ne jado usnu apne upar litaya tan oh maaze vch pagal ho gaya. Kuri de mumme kuldeep di shaatiyan vch jiven dhass hi gaye. Usne apna hath kuri de vadde mass naal bhare hoye chitddaaaa te rakhe te dona chitdaaan nu hathan vch farh ke guttan lagga. Hayee roo vaang pole te mulayam chitaddd kuldeep de sakht hathan karke laal ho rahe c. Kuri v kisi takde mard hathon apni bund nu patayundi hoyi maaze vch dubbdi ja rahi c. Kuldeep ne rajj ke usde jism de ang ang nu pattya te fir usnu thalle lammi paa leya te lattan chorhi kar layian.

Haye sohni sunakhi mutiyaar ne apniyan akhan lun len de layi bandh kar layian te lattan pooriyan khol layian. Kuldeep ne usde mooh vch thori der lun paa ke gilla karn layi chuswayaa. Hayee usde gulabi bullan andar lun jaan di der c ki kuldeep tarfan jeha lagg geya. Us kuri di mulayam jeeb te gilla garam mooh usde lun nu poore maaze naal thuk naal bheyon rahe ne. Kuldeep diya cheekhan nikal gayian. Kuldeep ne apne tatte tak us kuri te mooh vch dabb dabb ke paaye te goliyan changi tarah chuswaayian. Jado dil bhar gaya tan usne us kuri di gori garam bhurkdi fuddi de upar apna mota lamba lun rakheya te ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ik hi jhatke vch hathyaar apne nishane val chala gaya. Pachhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh di ucchi jehi aawaz karda hoya kuldeep da lun us kuri di garam tight fuddi de aakhir tak pahunch gaya. Kuri ne zordar cheekh maari te kuldeep ne maaze naal daharaa mardeya hoya usnu lakk to farhya te batt batt ke usdi fuddi maaran lagga. Fatak fatak fatak fataaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakkk.....ghasse inj maar reha c jiven garam lohe te hathode maar reha hove.

Manja aage peeche buri tarah hilan lagga te kuri di fuddi jiven leero leer hon dayi c. Kuldeep ne usnu bund to farhya hoya c te us utte poora bhaar sitt ke fach fachhhhhhhhhhhhh di zordaar aawaz karda hoya fuddiii nu lun naal buri tarah faarh reha c. Lun te fuddi di takkar diyan aawazan door door tak suniya ja skdiyan sun. Par uthe koi nahi c ayunda isliye khulle vch punjaban mutiyaar di izzat luttan da maaza aur poore aaram naal le reha c. Usne kuri di bund vch pehla ik ungal paayi .........phir do ungla paayian te dekhdeya hi dekhdeya usne tinn unglan kuri de chitdaan di mori vch vaarh dittiyan.

Hayeeee......naal naal fuddi nu paarhda hoyaa kuldeep usdi bund nu v khulla karda ja reha hai. Kuri poore maaze naal usda lun apne tidhh tak le rahi hai. Poori fuddi lagataar paani shadd rahi hai jisnaal kuldeep da lun tilkda hoya us kuri de andar varh reha hai te chodann da anand dovan nu bharpoor mil reha hai. Kuldeep ne laghbhag adha ganta kuri da fudda paarhyaa. usne maar maar ke usdi fuddi nu bhosra bana shaddeya. Lagda c ki kyi saalan to oh aisi jawaan fuddi da bhukaaa fir reha c te hun mauka milde hi saari kasar laa reha c. Us kuri di aisi fuddi thoki usne ki usdiyan akhan cho hanju tak aa gaye. aakhirkaar kuldeep ne apne lun de vcho maal diyan dharavaaan us kuri de fuddi vch hi shaddiyaan.....

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..........bhenchod................ ..maa yaaviyeee...........gaalan kad da hoya kuldeep bina condom to usdi fuddi vch jharan lagga te dekhdeya hi dekhdeya usne apna saara maal us kuri de fudde vch bhar dittta. Ahhhhhhhhhhh......kuri nu fir kite ja ke saah aayaa te apne saahan de fullan di aawaz kanna nu sunayi den laggi. Kuldeep nasheriyaan vaang usde upar jiven bejaan jeha lit gaya. Usde dostan ne usnu uthaya te oh besurt jeha ho ke naal bhunje hi lit gaya. Hun us kuri de upar usde dost tutt paye. Baari baari sir.....Billa, tippi, bholaa us kuri di izzat apne lun naal luuutde rahe. Unha ne saari raat laga ditti te saver tak kuri fuddi marwayundi rahi. sareaan ne apni reej rajj ke laahi te apne lunna nu oh skun ditta jo kayi samey to unha nu nahi milya c. Sare jaane fir us kuri de aale dwaale hi nange let gaye te so gaye. Savere ithde saar hi unha nu hosh aayi te unha ne kuri nu scorpio ch bitha ke bhej ditta. Te sare dost apne apne ghara nu chall paye.

(Duje paase)

Svere sab kuj routine mutabak ho reha hai. Jasmeen apne college nu fit jeans te gaint jeha tight top pa ke chali gayi hai.Dilpreet bhi college layi samey sir nikal geya hai. Par Navdeep kaur aaj college parhayun layi nhi jaa rahi. pata nhi usda dil aaj college jaan nu nahi kita. Usnu babe diyan kahiyan gallan da bhut asar ho reha hai. Usde dimaag vch Preet inder singh (Babe da naam) de sohne mukh cho nikliyan galla kanna vch baar baar sunayi de rahian ne. Oh tayaar tan poore time te ho gayi c par ain waqt te usda man badal gaya te oh college nahi gayi. Aj usne bhut hi att sohna jeha Pajami suit paaya hai. Jamni rang di kameez te chitti pajami paayi hoyi oh husn di mallika laggan dayi hai. Usde mote pahar varge mumme challan te mast tareke naal hil rahe ne. Naal hi vaddi hulaare khandi bund v saaf hildi nazar aa rahi hai. Te aaj tan usde mote pattan da aakar v saaf saaf dikh reha hai. Manjeet ne usnu college na jande hoya vekh puchya...

Manjeet-" ni ki hoya aj collegee parhaan nahi jaana.......ki shutti hai tenu???" manjeet ne sawaal kita. "Kal tan dasseya nahin kujh?"

Navdeep-" nahi bebe shutti ni hai bas aaj jaan da dil nahi kita. man ashaant jeha lag reha, kuj v karan nu dil nahi kar reha. " Navdeep ne mooh jeha bnaunde hoya jawaab ditta.

Manjeet-" phir putt aidda karna c....jaa ke matha tekya.dekhi tan-man nu shaanti mil jaani aa" Manjeet ne usnu keha. Navdeep da chehra eh gall sun ke jiven navdeep di udaasi kite gayab hi ho gayi. Jiven usdi man di gal usdi bebe ne keh ditti hove. usne jhat haan kardeya keha.

Navdeeep-" han bebe....tusi sahi keh rahe ho. mai jaa ke uthe matha tek ayundi aa te naale is time bheerh v ghat hundi a. " Navdeep jiven pehla to hi tayaar c.Oh fatafat uth khari hoyi te chall payi.

"bebe mai shaam tak aa javangi. uthe seva v kara dvangi" navdeep ne jandeya hoya keha.

"theek hai dheeyiye. Tarkaala tak pakka aa javi. " Manjeet v rasoi vch kam kardi hoyi kehn laggi.

Navdeep ghar to bahar nikkli te us jagah val chall payi. Usde mukh te bhut khushi jhalak rahi c. Shayad eh us babe nu milan karke jyaada c. Navdeep de man vch babe vaare koi galat vichaar nahi c par oh usdiyan gallan sunan layi jyada kaahli c. Usnu babe diya gallan bhut changiya lagdiyan sun. Isliye oh uthe jana chahundi c te babe nu milna chahundi c. Navdeep us din diya babe naal hoyian gallan sochdi hoyi us jagah tak pahunch v gayi.Oh babe diyan gallan vch ainna gwaach chukki c ki Usnu pata v nahi lagga ki oh kehre time te utthe appar gayi.Aj us din de muqable bheerh bhut ghatt hai. Usne parshaad leya te andar matha tekan chali gayi. Andar kuj lok hi baithe sun. Usne andar kodi ho ke matha tekya te jinne v lok uthe baithe saarean ne usdi haseen vaddi bund nu bare chaah naal vekhya.

Par navdeep nu oh baba kite nahi dikhayi ditta.Oh matha tek ke seva karwyun layi jaan laggi tan usnu baba uthe sarovar de kol baitha dikhayi dittta. Usde chehre te jiven khushi shalka maaran laggi. Oh tezi naal palanga putdi hoyi us babe val nu chal payi. Chalde hoye usde mote mumme te vaddi bund poori shaan naal hulaare khaa rahe ne. Uthe baithe saare lokan nu hilde mummean te chitdaan di paindi dhamak jiven saaf saaf sun rahi hove. Navdeep nu dooron ayunda vekh baba v khush ho gaya. Te navdeep de husn nu akhan ch utaarda hoya usde jism nu gor naal dekhan lagga. Poori punjaban mutiyaar lag rahi hai. Mathe te chunni te sadhe kapre...par phir v nirri agg jo lun nu ik mint vch saarh deve. Navdeep ne nerhe aa ke babe nu bare aadar te sanmaan naal bulaya. babe ne v usnu pyaar naal kabool kita.

Navdeep nu babe ne naal hi baithan layi keha te navdeep apne vadde chitddan nu farsh te tika ke baith gayi. Babe ne dekhya chounkri maar ke baithan naal navdeep de mote pattan da poora aakar saamne disan lag peya. Aine mote te takde patt vekh koi banda tan apna aapa kho deve par babe ne apne aap nu sabhaal leya te puhcyaa.....

Baba-" hor beeba g,,,,,,aj svere svere kive aayuna hoya.......kamm te nahi gaye?" Babe ne bare pyaar nal puchya.

Navdeep-" nahi baba g. aaj kamm te jaan da dil nahi kitta." navdeep ne mithi aawaz ch neeviyan payunde hoye keha.

Baba-" Hanji beeba kayi vaar thakavat ho jandi aaa. tan-man nu shaanti v deni chahidi hai kadi kadi" babe ne jiven usde man di gall nu baamp leya . Navdeep babe de mooho eh gall sun ke hairaan reh gayi.

"Inha nu kive pata lagga ki aj mera man kuj ashaant jeha hai. " navdeep apne man vch sochan laggi. babbe ne dekhya navdeep kuj soch vch payi hai te puchya..

Baba-" kithe leen ho gaye beeba g.......?"

Navdeep-" nahi baba g.....bas tusi sahi keh rahe ho.....aj mera man kuj ashaant jeha hai. Sukun jeha nahi mil reha mainu" navdeep ne apne dil di gal babbe saamne rakhi. Babe ne sundeya hi haami bhaari te usnu bare pyaar naal keha.

Baba-" beeba ji....eh sabh kuj us upar vale da khel hai. Kayi vaari tann tandrust hundeya hoya v andro aatma tandrust nahi hundi. " babe ne navdep de tandrust jism val vekhdya hoya keha.

Navdeep-" tusi sahi keh rahe ho baba ji....par mainu tan eh v nahi pata ki eh aatma hundi ki hai...mainu isda koi gyaan nahi baba g" Navdeep ne babe val vekhdya saawal kita.

Baba-" beeba ji aatma di asliyat to tan saare vanje hun isliye dukhan di tokri sir te chukkni pe rahi hai unha nu. Tuhade varge sulje hoye naujwaan hon tan dukh nereyon v naa fatkan. Bhut changa laggya ki tuhade kol eh soji hai ki tusi aatma baare janan de ishuk ho"

NAvdeep-" bilkul baba g.....mainu aatma baare gyaan dayo. " Navdeep ne vare hi pyaar naal babe nu kehndya hoya neevi paayi. To be continued

[Zaspreet]

bahut vadia vir ji ... waiting for next

Dhanwaad veer.

[Zaspreet]

uff.. kadun baba navdeep di vaddi bond di moshk lau

Dhanwaad veer for the comment. Bhut jaldi veere bhut jaldi.

[Zaspreet]

Good update

Very good update

Thanks for the comments doston.

[Zaspreet]

Good update

Bahuut khoob.  Bhashaa te pooran pakad hai.  Patran de vivahar da chitran badi bakhoobi krde ho

Bahut bahut dhanwaad doston read krn lyi snd comment krn lyi.

[Zaspreet]

Good update

this story is already written... i dont know why writer is taking so much time to copy paste the existing updates & then continue writing new updates of the story...
pehli story vich v navdeep chudan tu bach geyi...
writer sab tusin agay likho jithay ey story chad ditti si.. yaa fer update change kro tay thukwa dyo navdeep babay kolun

Hanji veer eh story pehla vi likhi gayi si te udon kujh readers di problems krke story band kar ditti si. Bich thode updates modify vi kite aa veer. And hun kal ton brand new updates aayugian veer. Saare scenes aayuge veer bas wait kroo ji.