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Story is awesome...  bht sohne trike nal agge leke ja rhe o ... meri prsnl advice aa k incest na kreyo baki pind de amli bhaiye ja gundeya kise kolo v le chlo dove behna nu

Dhanwaad ji.  Main tuhade suggestion da dhyaan rkhuga ji.  Bs aida hi support krde rheo

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waiting

Great story

Story bhuhat vadia a likhde raho.

Bahut bahut dhanwaad dosto.

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Wah beebi di bund kaimm aaa bahut.

[Zaspreet]

Kant story .... keep it going

waiting

y update v kro

Dhanwaad doston.  Actually main kal likh reha si update.  Half ho gaya si par Phir jaroori kamm pai gaya tan poori nahi likh sakeya.  Aj hun shaam nu kruga update. Thoda big update houga naale.

[Zaspreet]

waitinggg

Waiting update

Ok bro

waiting

kro update

Dhanwaad doston.

[Zaspreet]

UPDATE-11

Ramu ne dekhya ki navdeep mudddi lammi payi hai te usdi bund uppar wal nu hi hai. Kamre bahar jagde bulb di halki roshni usdi bund te pai rahi si. Hayeee...usda dil kita ki sidhaa usde uppar jaake let jaave te usde gore te mote mote chidtan de utte apna kaala lunn ghasave. Usnu navdeep de doven chitad pahadd diya chotiyan lag rahe si jisnu usda lunn charna chahunda si. Usne apna pajama thalle kita te apna mota kaala lun kaddke mutth maaran lagga. Naal naal oh aala dwaala vi dekh reha si ki koi hor na dekh lave. Par sabh paase shaanti si. Oh chupchaap navdeep di bund nu vekh vekh mutth maari janda hain. Man ch tan oh navdeep nu nangi krke usdi bund vich lun dhakk reha hunda hai. Usnu pata nahin laggeya ki kado usne ankhan band kr lyian. Mutth maarni usne jaari rakkhi si. Achanak usnu kujh khadaka sunya. Usne ikdum aankahn kholiyan tan usde tatte gale tak aa gaye. Saamne manjeet manje toh uth ke baithi hoyi usde val dekh rahi si.

Hun Aaggee...

" Kon...hai...kaun hai.....?" Manjeet ne ankhan malde hoye cheekhya. Usnu nehre krke shayad ramu da chehra nazar nahin aaya.

Ramu jhatt gall samaj gaya ki usnu manjeet dekh nahin paa rahi. Oh dekhde hi dekhde thalle jhukya te uthon daddu waang sharapapa maarda hoya  9 do 11 ho gaya. Usne ainni furti dikhayi ki manjeet nu samaj hi nahin laggi ki saamne jehra usne parshaayi dekhi oh zameen nigal gayi ya asmaan khaa gaya.  Oh buri tarah darr gayi te usne raula paa ditta.

" Bhoot..bhooot....bhoot......bhoot......ve mar gayi....bhoot....."

Kujh hi mintan vich ghar di saari lights jal uthiyan. Kol lammi paayi navdeep vi uth ke manjeet kol aa gayi. Kuldeep v apne manje toh utthke pajjya aaya. Jasmeen te dilpreet v manjeet de manje kol aake baith gaye. Ramu v pajj ke manjeet kol a gaya.

Kuldeep te puchan te manjeet ne saari gall dassi. Navdeep ne apni maa nu paani da glass leya ke ditta.

" Ramu dekh zara bahar ...chor hona koi saala..." Kuldeep ne ramu nu keha. " Jaa dekh jaake.."

Ramu usdi gall sun virandah ch peya gandasa chakk ke bahar chala gaya. Jado manjeet thodi shaant hoyi tan kuldeep ne usnu puchya.

Kuldeep- " Vehem tan nahin tera?" Manjeet de sir te hath rakhde hoye ne keha.

Manjeet- " Nahin main sach kehni aa. Oh ithe saamne hi khada si. Uccha lamma...par agle hi pal oh gayaab ho gaya. Jiven nehre ch aloop ho gaya hove. " Oh kehndi kehndi darr rahi si.

Kuldeep- " Par je koi banda andar aaya hove tan iven nehre ch kive alop ho sakda " Kuldeep nu shayad hale v lagda si ki manjeet nu koi bhulekha lagyaa hai.

" Bahar to koi nahin hai sardar ji. humne sabh thaa shaan maari hai..." Bahro gandasa chakki aayunda hoya ramu boleya. Usde saah ch saah aaaya jado usnu laggeya ki manjeet ne usnu pehchanya nahin.

Manjeet- " Par main keh rahi aa naa...koi si ithe..main apnia ankhan naal dekhya. Par oh fir kidre gayaab ho gaya..." Manjeet ne phir ucchi deni keha.

Kuldeep- " Koi bura sapna dekhya hou . Idda da kujh nahi hunda. yaa tan tera bhulekha hai . Yaa tan koi chor andar aaya hai. Main khabar karda kal savere saare pind ch. "

Ramu- " Sardaar ji ik baat kahen...agar aap maano toh.." Ramu jhijkda hoya boleya.

" Haan bol ramu..." Kuldeep ne jawaab ditta.

Ramu- " Wo bhoot hote hai sardaar ji. Hamara gaon main bhi ek aurat ko bhoot dikhte rehte they hamesha. Par logon ne yakeen nahin kiya. Par kehte hai ek din bhoot us aurat ko khaa gaya sardaar ji.." Ramu di gall sunke manjeet hor v darr gayi. " Aur yahan is gaon main bhi suna hai raat ko chudail ghoomti hai. ..."

" Chup kar ramu. Kive befazool gallan kari jana peya. Iven da kujh nahin hunda samje. Mudd ke na gall kari , anparh jeha dangar.." Kuldeep usnu garaj ke peya. Ramu nu apni besti mehsoos hoyi par h saara gussa pee geya. Usne gardan lamka ke hanji ch jawaab ditta.

" Hun sovon saare jaake. Savere gall karde aa. Navdeep tun apni maa de manje naal manja jodh ke paija..." Kuldeep ne keha te saare soun layi chale gaye.

Raat nu phir toh sabh sunsaan ho gaya. Saare apne bistreya te pai gaye si. Manjeet de sir te navdeep hath rakh ke usnu suvaun di koshish kar rahi si. Kuldeep sharaab de nashe ch dobra vi sheti saun gaya. Par shayad ramu nu neend nahin aa rahi si.

Ramu - " Saala yeh sardar ji ne accha nahin kiya. Badi sardarni ji ( Navdeep) ke saamne meri besti ki. Humko jhootha bola. Yeh aacha nahin kiya . " Mann ch ramu kuldeep diya jhirkan baare soch reha si. " main batayuga sardaar ji aapko bhoot hote hai ya nahin hote. Abh yeh bhoot hi gaand farhega sabki ."

SAVER

Saver da vehla ho gaya hain. Raat kawele soun krke saarya di ankhan ch hale v neend chaari hoyi hain. Baddal garaj rahe ne. Lagda hai ki baarish jaldi hi shuru hon wali hain. Ghar de saare ji rozmara di tarah apne apne kamm karan lagge hun. Raat ki ghatna toh manjeet hale v thoda dari hoyi hai par savere savere kuldeep nal gall karke oh jhidka nahin khana chaundi. Iskarke chupchaap rasoi ch chaa-paani bana rahi hai. Dilpreet apne college layi nikal geya te jasmeen college layi. Kuldeep vi khetan val nu tur peya . Navdeep hale tayaar ho rahi hain. Ramu Dangran nu kakhh paa reha si.

Manjeet- " Ni kudiye....tayaar nahin hoyi college jan layi? Kaala shah baddal charreya hoya hai. Jaldi chal ja putt phir jana aukha ho jana..." Asmaan ch shaaye kaale shah baddlan wal jhaat marrdeya hoya manjeet boli.

Navdeep- " Bas mummy challi aa....aa gyi bass.." Andro aawaz maardi hoyi ne keha .

Thodi der baad jadon navdeep andor bahar aayi tan ramu di nazar us uppar daurdi gayi.

Chitte suit ch navdeep da ikalla ikalla samaan saaf nazar aa reha si . Inj lagda si jiven punjabi suit us rann de jism ch fasseya hove. Moddeyan di chorayi toh laike pattan di golayi saaf diss rahi hai. Mote-mote mummeyan da cut v jyada hi doonga hai. Usde doven chitadd tan jiven salwaar toh 2-3 gitth bahar nu nikle hoye ne. Ramu da lun farrate maaran lagga. Usne bahut der baad navdeep nu chitte suit ch dekhya si.

" Ramu...main tere naal ik gall karni hai" Navdeep ramu de kol aake boli. Usde hathan ch ik lifsfaf c jis ch kitaban te roti wala dabba si. Navdeep de nehre aaundeya hi ramu di ankhan fattan nu a agyian. Chitte suit ch Navdeep da shareer gundwa te rang lishka maar reha si.

Ramu- " Hanji sardarni ji..." Navdeep de mummeyan vichkarli tareer te ankh gadd ke usne jawaab ditta.

Navdeep- " Bas ehi ki kal jehri baba ji ne tainu jagah dassi si. Oh kithe hai? Koi sarovar hai?"

Ramu - " Accha woh sardarni ji. Woh toh ek shota sa sthaan hai. Jaise shappar hota hai ji. Usme ishnaan karke saare paap dhull jaate hain aur buri nazron se bhi bach jaate hai. " Ramu kehnda hoya usde mummeyan di shape nu naap reha hai. " Pind ke bahar hai thoda sardarni ji.."

Navdeep- " Accha .. Mainu pind de bahar da jyada pata nahin hai ramu. Par main baba ji toh puch layugi raasta ..." Hale navdeep gall poori karan hi laggi si ki ramu ne usnu tokeya.

" Nahin sardarni ji. Aisa mat karna. Baba ji ka hum par se vishwaas uth jayega. Unhone kaha tha ki yeh baat kisi ko mat batana. Agar abh unko pata chal gaya toh humko paap lagega. Woh phir humpar kabhi vishwaas nahin karenge. "

Navdeep- " oh sach...sorry ramu. Main bhull gayi si. Par phir mainu raasta kiven pata lagguga? Tu kadi geya uthe? Tainu pata changi tarah?" Oh usde hor nehre aa gayi te sawaal karan laggi . Ramu usda jism dekh paagal hon lagga. Ucchi lammi mutiyaar chitte fassve suit ch jado samne khadi hove te usde ik ik ang di shape nazar aayundi hove tan koi v mard paagal ho jauga.

Ramu - " Hum kabhi geya nahin hun sardarni ji. Par raasta humko barabar maaloom hain. Humne apne dimaag main fitt karke rakh liya tha jabh baba ji bata rahe they. " Ramu usde chitdan nu dekh ke boleya. " Main aapko le chaluga wahan. Par wahan ishnaan karne ka ek samay hota hai sardarni ji. Kewal agar amavasya ke samay wahan ishnaan kare toh hi paap mukt hote hain."

Navdeep- " Accha ramu. Hun phir kado aa rahi amavasya?" Navdeep uthe jan lai bahut utaawli ho rahi hai.

Ramu- " Bas agle hafte hi sardarni ji. Hum bhi uska hi intezaar kar rahe they tabhi nahin jaa paaye wahan..." Ramu usnu samne khadi dekh bahut mushkil nal khud nu rok reha si. Dil tan usda karda si ki uthe hi navdeep de kapde farah ke kodi kar lave. Par oh mauka dekh ke chauka maarna chahunda si. " Ek baat aur sardarni ji. Ishnaan karne ki ek khaas vidhi batayi hai baba ji ne....Shaayd aap kar na paayo..."

Navdeep- " Kehri vidhi ramu? Main sabh kar layungi. Tu dass tan sahi kive karna hai ishnaan?"

Ramu- " Wo thoda atpata hai sardarni ji. Apko shayad aacha na lage..." Ramu usde mummeyan te nigah tika ke kehnda hain.

Navdeep - " Je baba ji ne keha hai tan mainu sabh manjoor hain. Tu dass tan sahi ramu."

Ramu- " Theek hai sardarni ji. Baat yeh hai ki waha ishnaan karne ke liye aapko apne saare..."

Ramu apni poori gall khatam karda isto pehla di zor di bijli lishki te baddal garje. Jisnu sunke manjeet rasoi bahar aa gayi te navdeep nu hale v utthe dekh ke zor di cheeki.

" Hayee ki sadaa hoya tainu kuriye...meeh sir te aaa te tu hale tak gayi nahin...." Manjeet ramu te navdeep kol aaundi hoyi burburayi. Manjeet nu kol aayunda dekh ramu vi chup kar gaya. Navdeep ne usnu puchan di koshish kiti par ramu kakh paaun wal ho gaya.

" Putt baad ch samja dayi ramu nu ...meeh wawa charya hai...tu jaldi nikal ja college layi...bhijj naa jaayi...." manjeet ne navdeep de sir te hath rakh keha. Navdeep nu v samaj aa gayi ki hun gall nahin honi ramu naal. Oh vi chupchaap picche mur gayi te ramu nu nazran nal inj dekhya jiven keh rahi hove ki aake gall sunugi. Jandi hoyi di hildi bund dekhen layi ramu ne gardan ghuma rakhi. Khabbe-sajje hunde usde doven bread-piece ramu de shareer ch current maarde hain.

Navdeep- " Ok mummy main chaldi aa. " Dikki ch samaan rakhan toh baad scooty start kardi hoyi boli." Bye mummy.." Scooty te baithdi di bund iven chorhi hoyi jiven mote ghubbare nu kise ne dabb ditta hove te oh full gaya hove.

Manjeet- " changa dheeye...saayi naal jaavin...." Dobara rasoi wal jandi hoyi manjeet ne jawaab ditta.

RAASTE CH

Navdeep poori speed te scooty daraundi hoyi jandi payi hai. Hale oh thodi door hi gayi ki usnu hun lag reha hai ki usdi maa ne sahi keha si ki oh jaldi nikal jaave. Kyunki halki halki kinnminn honi shuru ho chukki hai te navdeep da college hale 5-6 kilometer door hain. Baarish diya boondan usde jism nu gilla kar rahian ne te scooty te jandi hoyi nu jehri hawa pai rahi aa oh usnu thandak pahuncha rahi hai. Achanak meeh tez ho gaya. Navdeep ne scooty hor v tez kar layi. Par baarish aini tez si ki usne jhatt usde chitte suit nu bheyon ditta.

" haye rabba...main aj chitta suit kyun paaya?...mera v dimaag khraab si.." Man ch navdeep apne aap nu kosan lagi. Par hun bahut der ho chukki si. Navdeep da poora shareer bhijj gaya si. Usda chitta suit jehra usda jism kujh der pehla dhakk reha si . Hun suit ne jawaab de ditta si. Kyunki bhijan karke oh poori tarah transparent ban geya si. Hayee...us jawaan '. rann de mummeya nu kaid karke jis bra ne rakkhya si usda rang te design saaf nazar auna shuru ho gaya si. Uff....chitte rang di bra te chittia taniyan. Bra di hook pishli side te si. Usde tiddh da mass v suit cho halka halka nazar aa reha si. Bhijji salwaar karke usde mote pattan di shape barabar diss rahi si. Mote-mote chitdan ch v baarish da paani varhan lag peya si.  

Usnu hun laggeya ki usdi haalat khraab ho gayi si. Hun oh college tan bilkul vi jaa nahin sakdi. Usne socheya ki aale dwaale scooty rok ke kujh der vishkraam kar lave. Phir jado baarish hat jaugi tan oh ghar wal vapis tur jaugi. Par aale dwaale usnu koi v jagah rukan layi sahi nahin laggi. Phir thori door achanak usnu kujh naazar aaya jisnu dekh ke usnu apniyan ankhan te yakeen nahi hoya.

Saamne preet inder singh baba sadak de vichkaar khada si. Navdeep ne bilkul usde kol jaake brake maari. Baarish bahut tez pai rahi si. Usnu samaj nahin aaya ki aini tez baarish ch preet inder singh sadak de vishkaar ki kar reha hain. Phir jado usne dhyaan nal dekhya tan usda dil paseej gaya. Preet inder singh baba sadak te paye ek katoore nu chukk reha si. Katoora tez baarish te bijli karke darr nal kambb reha si te sadak de vichkaar hi baith gaya si. Usdi maa aale dwaale kite nahin nazar a rahi si. Preet inder singh ne usnu puchkaar ke apne hathan ch farhheya te sadak to chakk ke oh side te lai geya. Navdeep eh dekh dang reh gayi. Je preet inder singh us katoore nu naa side te karda tan shayad oh kise cheez de thalle aa janda. Preet inder singh vi poora bhijj gaya si.

" garam karke doodh pilayoo ji bejubaan nu..." Apne rumaal naal katoore nu lapetde hoye oh boleya. " ahh farhoo ji..lai jaoo jee nu andar.." Ik hor babe nu katoora fadaunde hoye baba boleya.

Navdeep uthe hi khadi babe val dekh ke mantarmugt ho gayi si. Baarish shamm shamm kardi hoyi hale v pai rahi si te bahut tez si. Oh buri tarah nal pijj gayi si te shayad usnu thand v lagg sakdi si kyunki hun thandi hawa v tez chalni shuru ho gayi si. Achanak navdeep ne dekhya ki preet inder singh thode tez kadma naal chalda hoya us wal aa reha hain. Oh usda rohaani andaaz dekh ke pehla hi pigal gayi si te hun usde dil di dhakan tez ho chukki si.

" Beeba ji...ki gall ho gayi? Thand lag javegi...aajoo andar zara..thamm len do kudrat nu.."preet inder singh navdeep di scooty kol aake boleya. Hayee...bhijji hoyi navdeep da shareer dekh preet inder singh da gille pajame ch v lun ik second ch khada ho gaya. " Eh tan tusi ho navdeep beeba ji..."

Navdeep- " Bas dhanwaad baba ji. Bas main ghar wal nu jaa rahi aa...Meharbaani .." Navdeep ne jhootha jeha laara maarya. Jis tarah usne keha usnaal inj lagga jiven oh preet inder singh toh door jana nahin chahundi.

Preet inder singh- " Nahin beeba ji...kudrat hale badi joban te hain . Jado eh thodi shaant hovegi udo chale jayeo ji. Aa jaoo tusi v andar..Chah da langar laggya hai.. Aajaoo jaldi beeba ji.."  Baba usde chitte bhijje suit ch nazar aa rahe mumeyan toh nigah nahi hata paa reha si. Usda lunn tan ive patthar ban gaya si jiven usne 2-3 viagra khaa layian hon.

Navdeep dei jhoothi jehi naa jyada der na challi te oh scooty laike babbbe de naal andar varh gayi. Eh pind ch inna babbeya da dooja '. ashthaan hain. Ithe jyadatar samagam te langar chalda rehnda hain. Navdeep ne scooty parking ch lagayi te bhajj ke shatt thalle aa gayi. Andi vi kyun naa..jis babbe nu usne guru dhaarya hai ohi usnu andar bula reha si. Apne guru nu mana kiven kardi.

Andar ik bujurg baba baitha hoya si jithe saare mattha rek rahe c. Navdeep ne preet inder singh wal dekhya te phir apne bhijje hoye suit wal nazar maari. Suit da paani cho-cho ke pairan tak digg reha si. Oh shayad soch rahi si ki andar mattha tekan kive jaave gille kapreyan ch. Preet inder singh gall nu samaj geya te boleya.

" Rabb da ghar sabh layi khulla hain beeba ji. Jado man vichkaar sharda hove tan bahrle moh maaya de saadhan kise kamm de nahi hunde beeba ji. Duniya de mutabik nahin apne vishwaas de mutabik chalna chahida ji..." Babbe diya gallan nu jiven navdeep jhatt samaj gayi. Usnu pata lagg geya ki babab keh reha hai ki kapdeyan da ya lokan di soch naal koi farak nahin paina chahida. Sirf apne dil di gall suno. Jis te vishwaas hai apne man ch usnu rakho.

Navdeep usdi gall sunke darwaza kol us kamre ch chali gayi. Preet inder singh nu pata si ki hun usnu kehra nazara dissan wala hai. Andar ginti de 4-5 log hi baithe sn. Navdeep sir te chunni leke te hath jordi hoyi bujurg babbe de bilkul kol pahunch gayi. Sarya di nigah navdeep de gille shareer te payi. Preet inder singh ne apne lun te hath rakh leya. Oh godeyan bhaar jado hi jhuki tan uthe baithe har ik mard de lun te jive hathoda vajja. Gilli hon karke chitti salwaar usde mote-mote pattan nal poori tarah chipak gayi si. Jiskarke mote gol pattan di poori di poori shape bilkul saaf nazar aa rahi si. Baithdi di bund da jo nazara uthe baithe lokan nu disseya shayad oh soch vi nahin sakde si. Pind di sabto '. te vaddi bund di poori shape unha diya aankhan saamne si. Chitdan upar paayi hoyi chitti kacchi vi uthe sabh nu nazar aa rahi si. Saarya di nigah uthe baithe babbe toh hat ke navdeep di bund wal atak gayi si.

Jado phir navdeep ne mattha tekan layi thalle sir rakheya tan jiven waqt ruk gaya. Sabh diya ankhan usde vadde vadde chidtan de size te tikk gayian. Oh kadi supne ch v nahin soch sakde si ki unha nu ainni vaddi bund da size v kadi patta lagg sakda. Par jhuki hoyi kodi hoyi navdeep tan unha nu laggeya  jiven unha nu keh rahi hove ki " Dasso tan meri bund da size zara...".

Koi andaza laganda si "36 inch di bund.." Koi soch reha si "40 inch da chugathaa".. Koi man ch sochda " 45 inch de chitadd.." Par preet inder singh jo sochda si oh shayad koi vi nahin soch reha si. Preet inder singh de man ch chal reha si " Inha pahaad varge chitdan di khusbuu te swaad len wala tan karma wala hi houga..."

Apni bund de changi tarah darshan karva ke oh uthh gayi. Phir oh bahar aa gayi jithe preet inder singh khada si. Oh babbe de bilkul kol aa gayi.

" Main chaldi aa baba ji hun. " navdeep ne preet inder singh diya ankhan ch dekhde keha.

" Beeba ji chah-paani da langar tan shakk ke jaayeo. Nale kudrat tan hale v zoran te hain..." preet inder singh tan lagda ajj usda swaad chakkna chahunda si. " Ithe aajo andar...thodi garmahat milugi beebi ji..." Ik kamre wal ishaara karda hoya baba boleya. Navdeep ne phir jyada naa-nukkar nahin kiti te oh kamre andar chali gayi.  to be continued.

[Zaspreet]

Very good veer ji maza aa gaya kasam naal

Anand aa gaya next update bahut jaldi devo pls

bahut vadia ... waiting for next

Bahut bahut dhanwaad doston.

[Zaspreet]

Bro update was so sexy but plz upload the sexfull update

Koi thoka thukai leyayo

Dhanwaad veer.  Saare scenes aayuge veer .

[Zaspreet]

Wow!  Thats amazing update.  This is the writing of legend writer.  Thats why many writers also  follow you. You are brilliant writer who knows how to mix eroticness with the plot of the story.  In this update the depiction of navdeep,  ramu and baba is very well written.  We can have exact look at their nature.

Bahut bahut dhanwaad dost.  Man nu khushi hundi jado readers dhyaan nal read krde ne and bahut detail ch review dinde ne update da. Thanks again.

[Zaspreet]

Siraa update keep going

good bro keep it up

Bhut umda lekhni.  Ucch darje de lekhak ho tusi. Saroteya nu keel ke rkh dinde ho.  Bakaamal kalam hai.

Bahut dhanwaad doston story read krn layi and reply krn layi.

[Zaspreet]

Bahut Kamaal Di Update Likhi hai ... Ramu Te Navdeep Di Conversation di wait nhi hundi ...

Uss Vich Poora Masala Paa diooo ....
Baba De Muhre vi Nangi kardoh holi holi

Bahut bahut dhanwaad ji.  Bilkul ji masala bharpoor hovega.  Bahut jaldi nangapan vi shuru hovega.  Thanks again for reading and replying .

[Zaspreet]

Update veer

Brilliant update. I am loving the navdeep character more and more as the story progress. Ramu is a very clever man.

Update waiting

waiting

waiting

Bahut bahut dhanwaad doston.  Bahut khushi hundi jado support milda.

[Zaspreet]

waiting

Navdeep nu karo nangi te deo update jaldi

kro update g bhut time ho gya

super update bro.. waiting for next

Bro update krde

Veer ji story da update ajj aa reha hai.

[Zaspreet]

Uodate?

Veer aj update kar reha ji.

[Zaspreet]

Bai story kida likh hove gi

Veer bs koi theme socho te characters te likhna shuru kar do veer.

[Zaspreet]

bdi vdia story aa thodi ji ... menu bda mza aunda pdh ke mein tah vaar vaar pdh rhi aa

Bhut bhut dhanwaad ji.  Bs ise tarah hi support krde rho.  Thanks alot.

[Zaspreet]

waitinggggggg

Bhra kithe reh gya tera update?

Veer sorry for delay.  Kal update nahi ho paaya.  Likh reha si par poora nhi ho paaya si.  Aj shaam nu krduga veer promise.  Thoda likhyaa hai te thoda rehnda hai bs.

[Zaspreet]

Balle balle veer ji

Lekhak di agli update de intezaar ch.

waiting

Hanji doston. Update poore 11 baje post kar deni main. Bas thoda jeha reh gaya.

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UPDATE- 12

Koi andaza laganda si "36 inch di bund.." Koi soch reha si "40 inch da chugathaa".. Koi man ch sochda " 45 inch de chitadd.." Par preet inder singh jo sochda si oh shayad koi vi nahin soch reha si. Preet inder singh de man ch chal reha si " Inha pahaad varge chitdan di khusbuu te swaad len wala tan karma wala hi houga..."

Apni bund de changi tarah darshan karva ke oh uthh gayi. Phir oh bahar aa gayi jithe preet inder singh khada si. Oh babbe de bilkul kol aa gayi.

" Main chaldi aa baba ji hun. " navdeep ne preet inder singh diya ankhan ch dekhde keha.

" Beeba ji chah-paani da langar tan shakk ke jaayeo. Nale kudrat tan hale v zoran te hain..." preet inder singh tan lagda ajj usda swaad chakkna chahunda si. " Ithe aajo andar...thodi garmahat milugi beebi ji..." Ik kamre wal ishaara karda hoya baba boleya. Navdeep ne phir jyada naa-nukkar nahin kiti te oh kamre andar chali gayi. .

Hun Aggee....

Kamre andar varde saar usne dekhya ki chaaro paase vakh vakh '. mahapurshan dia tasveeran deewar te tangian sn. Kamre ch ik kone ch sofe da vadda set rakhya hoya si jis te ikko time 5-6 bande baith sakde sn. Te usde vichkaar si ik vadda saara single sofa. Shayad bujurg babba ithe baith ke kujh meetings ja hor gallan karde honge.

"Tikkkk"

Aawaz hunya hi uppar lagga jhoomer jag uthya jisne kamre de chaaro paase apni roshni bekheer ditti. Jithe navdeep khadi si uthe bilkul saamne usnu ik vadda sheesha nazar aaya jis ch usnu aapna poora jism nazar aa reha si. Usde baal poore bhijj chukke sn. Chitte suit chon hale v paani nicchr reha si. Paayi hoyi chitti bra di vadri bilkul nigah ch pai rahi si. Mote-mote mummeyan di poori di poori shape diss rahi si. Patle tidh de maas to laike mote mote pattan tak da saara maal nazar aa reha si. Usdi kothe jiddi bund naal salwaar chipak gayi si. Jisnal jhoomer di roshni ch babbe nu navdeep de chitdan di shoti to shoti curve vi nazar aaa rahi si.

Preet inder singh- " Ithe baith jaoo beeba ji. main langar paani da bandobass karda ji..." Kehke babba kamre de andar da ik hor darwaza khol rasoi val chala gaya. Navdeep ne haan ch sir hilaya te sofe te baith gayi. Usde andar laddu futt rahe si ki oh apne guru de kol hai. Jisde baare oh raat bhar sochdi rehndi hai. Kuch der baad usne dekhya tan oh sharmindi ho gayi. Usda guru usdi seva kar reha si. Babbe de hathan ch plate fadi si jisde uppar 2 cup cha de glass te naal kuch biscuits paye si.

Navdeep- " baba ji..please..isdi koi lorh nahin si. Seva tan mainu karni chahidi hai tuhadi. " kehndi hoi oh spfe toh khadi ho gayi. Babbe ne dekhya tan jithe oh baithi si uthe sofa geela ho gaya si te uste navdeep di bund di poori shape ban gayi si. Usdi gilli bund ne addhe toh jyaada sofe te nishaan banayaa si. Babbe da lun ikdum khada ho gaya.

Preet inder singh- " Sewa hi asli guru hai beeba ji. Tusi baitho ji. Koi insaan vadda ya shota nahin hunda ji. Sewa tan koi v kar sakda hai ji. Isde mauke tan main labhda rehnda ji.." Kehnda hoya babba v usde naal de sofe te baith gaya te saamne ik table te samaan rakh ditta.

Navdeep- " Baba ji tusi bahut sulje hoye ho ji. Kaash main vi apna man sulja lava.."

Preet Inder Singh- " Bilkul sulja sakde ho beeba ji. Oh saamne sofa dekh rahe ho. Usdi side te jehra table hai. Usde uppar jehri kitaab payi hai . Us vich tuhade saawalan de kayi jawaab mil jaange. " Babbe ne isshaara karde hoye jawaab ditta.

" baba ji main zara dekh lavan ji.." Navdeep ne jawaab ditta.

Preet Inder Singh- " Jaroor beeba ji. Eh tuhade varge soojwaan naujwana layi hai. "

Sunke navdeep  oh table val chali gayi. Usdi jado hi pitth babbe wal hoyi tan Uff usdi vaddi chauri bund chitte suit ch dekh oh dobara pagal ho gaya. Salwaar de andro paayi chiiti kacchi oh dekh sakda si. Dhyaan naal dekhya tan usnu pata laggeya ki eh '. rann V shape kacchi paundi hai jo laghbhag poore chitadd cover kar di hai. Par navdeep di bund vaddi hon karke usde addhe chitadd fir vi dhakk nah hoye sn. Babbe da lunn patthar ban gaya.

Navdeep ne kitaab chakki te oh vapis sofe de kol aa gayi. Kitaab de cover te dekhya tan usnu vadde vadde kaale akshara ch nazar aaya " DAS (10) ANDHVISWAAS "

" Ghar jaake is kitaab nu changi tarah parheyo. Tuhade kayi andhvishwaas door ho jaange. Eh oh andvishwaas hun jo sirf koi soojwaan insaan hi samaj sakda ." Preet Inder singh usde gille jism nu goor goor ke keh reha si. " Tuhada mann nu bharpoor khuraak milegi.."

" Jaroor babba ji.." Navdeep ne jawaab ditta.

Navdeep usdia gallan sunke bahut prabhavit hoyi te oh v sofe te baith gayi. Usnu phir ikk vaar mehsoos hoya ki usne sahi guru dhaarya hai. Phir dove babba te navdeep ise tarah diya gallan karn lagge. Naal naal oh chah di chuski lendi hoyi biscuits khaa rahi hai. Babba garam garam chah usde gille bullan raahi gore gale toh utarke tidd ch jaandeya saaf mehsoos kar reha hain. Usnu control karna mushkil ho reha hain. Saamne usde pind di sabhto sexy te gundwe shareer waali '. rann baithi hai, oh v poore gille kapdeya ch. Koi hor hunda tan navdeep hun tan sofe te kodi krke bund te thappad maar maar bang kar dinda , par preet inder singh bahut dheeraj wala banda si.

Udhar navdeep nu garam chah peen naal gille kapdeyan ch garmayish mili. Par oh bar baar apna duppata set kar rahi hai. Usnu lagda hain ki usde suit da gala bhut deep hai te shayad usde guru nu usde mummeyan vichli tareer naa dissi jaave te babba usnu vi galat kudia vaang samje.

Preet inder singh- " Eh baar baar duppata kyun theek kar rahe ho beeba ji..?" Preet inder singh ne usnu baar baar ikko cheez kardeya tokeya. Pehla tan oh hairaan reh gayi ki babba ji nu pata hi hou ki oh duppata kyun theek kar rahi hai . Usne gall nu taalna chaheya

" Nahin babba ji..kk...kk..kk...kk....kuch nahin.."

Par preet Inder singh mauke nu bhaamp geya si. Usne phir dobara pucheya.

Preet Inder Singh- " Beeba ji je man ch kujh duvidha hundi hai tan dass deni chahidi hain. Je asi man nu saaf karna hai tan usde saalwan da jawaab de ke hi kar sakde haan ji..." Usne badi shaleenta naal jawaab ditta. Naal usda poora dhyaan eh naapan ch hai ki usde mummeyan di tareer kinni ku dhoongi jaa rahi hai.

Navdeep phir sharam naal laal ho gayi te idha udhar sir maardi rahi. Par jado babbe ne ik-do baar thoda zor de ke pucchya tan navdeep nu bolna hi peya.

" Baba ji..oh is maaya roopi shareer nu dhakk rahi si..."

kehke navdeep ne mooh thalle kar leya. Shayad usnu bahut sharam aa rahi si.

Preet Inder Singh- " Accha beeba ji. Eh gall hain. Par ik gall kahan beeba ji.."

" Hanji baba ji..."

Preet Inder Singh- " Shareer vi rabb di hi den hai beeba ji. Eh koi maadi cheez nahin hai. Eh aisi cheez rabb ne banayi hai jo behad khoobsoorat hai. Isnu galat kehen waale oh insaan hun jinha di soch galat hai. " Oh usde mummeyan di tareer jo ki 1 inch thalle tak jaa rahi si usnu dekhde hoya boleya.

" Accha baba ji..." Usdian gallan sunke navdeep tan jive ulj gayi. Usnu inj lageya ki usnu tan kuch samaj hi nahin si. Eh baba ji tan bahut pahunche hoye ne.

Preet Inder Singh- " Insaan nu apne jism nu kapde naal islayi dhakna peya kyunki insaan si soch galat ho chukki hain. Oh is shareer nu apne gandi aakhan naal dekhda hai. Je insaan apni soch sahi kar lave tan kapdeyan di lorh nahin jism nu. Eh bina vastra toh kudrat da anmol khazana lagde hun." Babba usde wal dekhke usnu keh reha si. Asal ch oh eh keha reha si ki navdeep usde saamne nangi ho jaave tan oh kudrat da anmol khazana dekh sakey.

" Hanji baba ji..."

Navdeep de mann te babbe diya gallan hathode waang vajj rahian si. Ik-ik shabad usde man-tan nu keel ke jaa reha si. Usde mann te babba holi-holi haawai ho reha si. Usnu babbe diya gallan duniya di sabto sacchian gallan lag rahian si. Ajj babbe ne usdi ik hor soch badal ditti si.

DUJJE PAASE

Uthe navdeep de ghar ch manjeet apne kamm kaar nabeed ke manje te paayi aaram kar rahi si. Baarish poore zoran te ho rahi si jiskarke laghbhag sabh apne ghar di chaar diwaari ch hi sn. Par ik insaan si jo bahar baarish ch v mitti khod reha si. Usde matthe te kaala tikka si. Modde te jhola tangya si jo baarish kaaran poora gella ho chukka si. Ik hath ch nimbu farhya c jis ch 3-4 suuian aar paar kitia te utte lall rang da sindoor shirkeya hoya si. Oh navdeep huna de ghar de chaaro koneya te miiti patt ke us ch nimbu gadd reha si . Naal naal mooh ch mantra da jaap kar reha si. Usne adhe gante ch ghar de chaaro paase nimbu gadd ditte. Andt ch jhole cho ik koli kaddi, usda dhakkan kholeya . Vich laal rang da taral padarth si. Shayad eh kise janwaar da khoon si. Usne hath vich paaya te usde shitte ghar de chaare paase maare. Naal naal oh jaap karda reha.

Apna saara kamm karan toh baad usne jhole chon ik khidona bahar kaddeya. Eh ik guddi lagh rahi si jiste kaale rang da kapda charya hoya si. Usnu dekh ke oh man ch sochan laga.

" Abh pata chalega aapko sardaar ji bhoot hote hai ya nahin hote. Mujko jhootha kaha. Meri besti ki badi sardarni ji (navdeep)  ke saamne. Abh dekhna kaise sabki gaand maarta hun main. Ik-ik ko apne lun pe nahin nachwaya toh hum bhi tantrik kaaluraam ka chela nahi. Jai ho tarntrik kaalu raam ji ki..." to be continued

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bahut hi vadia vir ji ..dekhde aa kdo tak mantar kam krda .. waiting for next

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