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Good update

vir ji main v ae update pehla read kite hoye ne pr koi gl ni  jidda writer likhde ne unna nu likhan do , sanu new updates di wait rahegi

Thanks veer. Kal toh jehre updates aayuge oh brand new houge veer.

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Good update

Bhra koi thukai wala update deyo plzzzzz......

Edi bund te kine kine pappian lenian

Hayee kinni kaim bund aa rann di. Eho jehi bund te hazaar paappiyan v ghat ne veer.

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Good update

Very good update bro.  I think navdeep really has a soft corner for that baba.  I am sure one day that baba will take full advantage of her big wide ass.  I would love to see her fuck in doggy style.

But bro i have not read this story and I think there are many new readers who are reading the story for first time. The updates are generating lot of curiosity . I would also love to see navdeep big booty taken by baba in every pose.

Dhanwaad veer read karn layi and comment krn layi.

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UPDATE-9

Navdeep-" tusi sahi keh rahe ho baba ji....par mainu tan eh v nahi pata ki eh aatma hundi ki hai...mainu isda koi gyaan nahi baba g" NAvdeep ne babe val vekhdya saawal kita.

Baba-" beeba ji aatma di asliyat to tan saare vanje hun isliye dukhan di tokri sir te chukkni pe rahi hai unha nu. Tuhade varge sulje hoye naujwaan hon tan dukh nereyon v naa fatkan. Bhut changa laggya ki tuhade kol eh soji hai ki tusi aatma baare janan de ishuk ho"

Navdeep-" bilkul baba g.....mainu aatma baare gyaan dayo. " Navdeep ne vare hi pyaar naal babe nu kehndya hoya neevi paayi.

Hun Aage....

Baba-" Jaroor beeba ji. je har beebi tuhade vang sochan lag jaaye tan duniya vahli changi ho jaaye" baba ne navdeep diyan sohniyan ankhan nu takde hoye keha jo jhukiyan hoyian sn.


Navdeep ne neevi paayi hoyi c te usdiyan gallan laal surkh ho gayian sn.


Baba-" Beeba ji eh jo atma hai na. Eh jugo jug atal hai. Sada shareeer tan bas ik kapra hai jisne isnu dhakya hoya hai. Mrityu hon te manukh di har ik cheez mitti ch mil jandi hai sivay eh atma ton. Eh sada amar hai. eh na paida hundi hai te na kadi khatm hundi hai. " Baba navdeep val dekhda hoya usnu sab samja reha c.


Navdeep sb kuj inne dhyaan nal sun rhi c jiven oh sadiyan to is gyan di bhukhi c. Ik ik lafz nu oh apne andar tak utaar rahi c.

Baba-" Jo bhi manukh bure karm krda hai eh sb uskolo usda shaitaan man krwanda hai jo hamesha bhatakda rehnda hai. Atma Bilkul pavitr hundi hai te hamesha hi manukh nu galat kamm krn to rokdi hai. Islyi shareer nu tan asi ishnaan karke roz saaf suthra rakhde aaa. Par aatma nu asi aiven hi shadd dinne aa. Usnu v usda ahaar milna chahida hai jo roz satsang sun ke te poorn gyaan nal milda hai. " baba navdeep nu smja reha c te naal naal usde halke jhe dis rahe mote-mote mummean nu akhan ch utaar reha c. Navdeep ik cheli di tarah apne guru di gal sun rhi c.

Baba-"Atma di aawaz manmukh nu hamesha sunni chahidi aa. Isdi aawaz nu sunan de layi atmik gyaan hona bhut jaroori hunda hai. Jo bhi manukh is gyaan to vanja reh janda hai oh kadi v is duniya di maya de jal to bahar nhi nikal skda."

Navdeep kaur babbe de mooho gyaan naal bharpoor gallan sun ke jive nihaal ho jandi hai. Preet inder singh hun usnu duniya da sb ton sohna te gyaani banda japan lag janda hai.

Baba-" te beeba g tusi eh gal jaroor yaad rakhni hai "Ishwaar Ansh Jeev Avinashi". Kehke usne navdeep de cleavage wal dekheya. " Shareer Nshwar hai lakin Atma Amar hai" .

Navdeep kaur apni chunni nu set krdi hoyi te dikhde mumme dhakdi hoyi babbe diyan gallan nu pallle ban rahi c.

Baba-"beeba ji islyi mai kehna hunda eh sansaar de kamma karan di chinta jyada nhi krni chahidi. Atma nu hamesha shuddh rkhna chahida hai. Nhi tan insaan di junne pain da koi fayda nhi hona "

Navdeep-" baba ji mai apni juune khraab nhi krna chahundi. Mai inha karam kandhan to uppar uthna chahundi aaa" Navdeep ne bare hi pyaar nal babbe nu puchyaa.

Baba-" Beeba ji paap-punn to uppar uthan lyi pakke man di bhut loorh paindi hai . Te pooran gyaan haasil krn layi ik guru dhaaran di lorh hundi hai" Babbe ne navdeep val dekhya hoya keha jo babe de val hi dekh rahi c.

Navdeep-"Baba ji mera mann pathar to v pakka hai te mai poora atmik gyaan payun layi kuj v krn nu tayaar haan. Bas main inha duniyavi karam-kaandan to uppar uthna chahundi aaa" Navdeep ne jhatt hi jawaab ditta.

Baba-" Mainu bhut khushi hoyi jan ke tuhade vargi beebiyan v ajkal ne jo inhe '. vichaar rkhdiyan ne. Chalo phir theek hai beeba ji Je tusi apna mann pakka bna hi leya hai tan Phir bas apna koi guru dhaaro jo bhut soojvan hove te tuhanu poora atmik gyaan dve" Babbbe ne navdeep de mote te takatvaar pattan val ik nazar maardeya keha.

Navdeep (Kuj der sochdeya)- "baba ji mai tuhanu apna guru dhaarna chahundi aa. " Navdeep ne bari hi niamrta de naal babbe nu keha.

Navdeep de muuho eh gal sun ke babbe de jiven sutta Lun ik jhatke de naal uth khara hoya. Lagda c jive navdeep ne babbe di koi aisi manokamna poori kr ditti hove jisda oh sadiyan to bhukkha c.

Baba-" mai tan ji shota jeha sevadaar haan ......mere to bare sujvaan te pahunche hoye mahapursh ne. tusi unha kol jaayo beeba ji. " babbe ne hath jordya hoya keha.

Na;vdeep- "nhi baba ji. mere layi tusi hi sb to mahaan ho. Tuhade andar gyaan da poora bhadaar hai. Tuhanu guru bana ke mai dhann dhann ho javangi baba ji. " Navdeep jiven babbe nu tarle paa rhi c.

Baba-" theek hai beeba ji tuhade andar gyaan di aini bhukh dekh ke mera man bhut khush hoya. Tusi kal to roz gyaan da path paran aaya kro te jo v bandhishan hongiyan mai tuhanu dass deya krungaa" babbe ne navdeep de poore badaan nu ik saar takdeya hoya keha. Navdeep tan jive khushi nal bhar gayi. Usde chehre te noor jeha shaa gyaa.

Navdeep-" jaroor baba ji. Tusi bhut kirpa kiti mere te" Navdeep ne bhut khushi nal keha. Babbe nu apna guru banaun di khushi navdeep de ang ang ton pata lag rahi c.

Eh sun ke baba khara ho gaya te navdeep v usde naal hi uth khari hoyi. Uthde saar hi navdeep ne babbe de pairin hath laaye te udo babbe nu jhuki hoyi navdeep di bhaari bund de darshan hoye. Hayeeeeeee navdeep di bund tan daarun to jyada nasha charayun aali c. Do vadde vadde chitaddd inj lag rahe sn jive do vadde vadde matke navdeep ne apne piche banne hon. Babbe diyan akhan ch jive navdeep di chorhi bund andar tak utar gayi te usde lun nu jiven jhanjorr ditta. Babbe ne navdeep di naram pithh te hath ferdeya hoya usnu ashirwaad ditta. Phir kaafi der babbe ne navdeep nu hor vi succhian gallan samjayian te navdeep v sabh bade chah nal suni gayi.

Akhir navdeep babbe nu matha tek ke uth khari hoyi jisnal usde vadde tarbooj jidde mumme kass ke uparr thalle hoye te aapas vch vajje. Babbe nu oh drishey jiven hor maaza de gaya. Usne navdeep de sir uthe hath rakheya te keha "jeeyundi reh putt" . Navdeep ne akhan band krke usnu poore tan man nal kaboolya. Phir navdeep kal da vaada krke vapis jayun layi ghum gayi te tur payi.

Navdeep de turan naal hulaare khaa rahi usdi mote maas de lothreya naal bhari hoyi bund sajje-khaabbe val khandi hoyi babbe de lun nu alag hi swaad de rahi c. Jiven jiven navdeep palaang putdi uven uven usde doven chitadd aapas vch milde te babbe nu us jawaan mutiyaar di poori bund nu akhan naal mehssoos krn da swaad milda. Motte chorhe patt usdi bund nu hor v nikhaar ke pesh kr rhe c. Navdeep thumke maar ke vapis jaa rahi c Te babba apne khare hoye lun nu baar baar set kr reha c. Phir navdeep us jagah to bahar aa gayi te apne ghar val nu tur payi. Raaste vch roz di tarah har koi usde bhakhde shareer nu apniya akhan de naal noch reha c. Munde tan munde buddhe v usde shalla maarde mummean te karaari bund de deewane sn. Navdeep apni pabb boch boch ke dhardi hoyi apne ghar pujji.

Us time shaam da vela c. Jasmeen Tv dekh rhi c te manjeet raat nu jo sabzi banauni c usnu saaf kr rhi c. Navdeep nu dekhdeya saar manjeet ne keha..

Manjeet-" ni aa gayi dheeyiye.......vava der laga ditti aaa" Manjeet ne sehje subah hi gall kiti.

Navdeep-" hanji bebe....uthe baba ji mil gaye sun. ohna ton satsang sunan lag gyi c te mai unha nu apna guru v dhaar leya. " navdeep ne ikko saah vch saari gall dss ditti.

MAnjeet-" Ni sacchi........ainni jaldi dhaar leya. na dekhna v painda hai ki keho jeha insaan aaa.....ajkal mahol bra khraab aaa kuriyee" Manjeet ne sabzi shadd ke us val dekhya hoya keha.

Navdeep-" nhi bebe....oh bhut pahunche hoye gyaani hun. Uthe seva krde hun. Kehnde c roz aa jaya krin. unha nu sara gyaan aa. tuhanu v milavangi unha naal...shayad tusi kadi miley hovo.......haan dekhya jaroor hovega tusi unha nu" navdeep jiven Babe de rass vch gul chukki c. usde chehre te babbe di sifat krdeya ik alag noor jhakal reha c. " Preet Inder Singh Ji naam hai "

Manjeet-" aacha.......chal fir je tu dekhya hai tan changa hi hou. Maariya gallan naalo tan changa hai ....... Ja aaya krin roz......" Manjeet kuj sehej hoyi te dobara sabzi saaf krn lagg payi.

Navdeep-" Theek aa bebe.....Aacha ramu aaya nhi dhaar kaddan da time ho geya aaa. ?" Navdeep ne majjan val dekhde hoya puchya

Manjeet-" Aayun vala honaaa......."

Navdeep-" chal jad tak aayunda ramu, mai kadd leni aa dhaaran........" Navdeep kol payi balti chukk ke paani naal dhon lag pyi te ik hath vch dounghe vch pani lai ke apni vaddi saari bund matkayundi hoyi majjan val tur payi.

Majjan de vaare vch pahunch ke ik majj de thalle balti te doungha rakhya te Apne kapre swaaran lag payi. Apni chunni utaar ke naal lamakdi taar te paa ditti te apni pajami de paunche chukk ke thalle baith gayi. Hayee is pose vch baithan nal navdeep di vaddi bund hor v chorhi te uttejit krn vali ban gayi. Usdi patli jehi pajami usde pattan te vadde chitdaan nu lukoon vch asafal saabit ho rahi c. Usde mumme v chunni na hon krke adhe tan saaf saaf nazar aa rahe c. Hun navdeep ne paani nal majj de thann dhotte tan usde doven mumme rubber vang hillan lag gaye.Usne hale thana nu farhya hi c ki ramu v gate kholda hoya andar aa gaya.........to be continued

[Zaspreet]

Bahut vadhia story

bahut hi vadia vir ji .... waiting for next .....

Bahut bahut dhanwaad .

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Bahut vdia update

Keep going

Dhanwaad veer.

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tatti wala pose

rann di bond vekho

Hayee tatti wala pose v att hai veer.  Rann dj bund tan bhut vaddi aa Navdeep vrgi.  Thappad maar maar chodan da swaad aayuga.

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Zaspreet bhra update vdiya c. Bro ramu toh  navdeep d seal tudwade.

Dhanwaad harry veer.  Bilkul ji bilkul swaad aayuga.

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Aaj kal garmi bahut hai

or pic bhejo is aurat ki plz

veer full kaim aa update aa

Awesome story.  Thw plot is really good.  Carry on the good work.

Thanks tuhada saarya da doston.  Read krn lyi and reply krn lyi.

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Shandaar update.  Waiting eagerly for the next now.

Umda lekhanshaili. Patran da rupantran vava mazedaar hai.

Bahut dhanwaad tuhada dostan da.  Thanks alot.

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bai enia updates de k v ikk v incest wali khani ni disi vich.. issnu incest category ch kyn paya erotic ch paa

Veer story incest hi hai.  Par pure incest nahi hai.  Is vich saare scenes aayuge veer. Keeper reading dost.

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isdi bund sungni tu

lyo fer kro mjay.. google tay search kro.. rann dey hor photo mil janay

Waiting for further update bro.

Waiting update

Waiting for update bro

Dhanwaad doston for reply.  Hayee ainni kaim bund nu tan sungna v and chatnaa v aaa.  Phir lull v dhakknaa hai.

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y ikalia pics na pao update v kro

Veer ajj update shaam nu aa reha hai. I

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UPDATE-10

Majjan de vaare vch pahunch ke ik majj de thalle balti te doungha rakhya te Apne kapre swaaran lag payi. Apni chunni utaar ke naal lamakdi taar te paa ditti te apni pajami de paunche chukk ke thalle baith gayi. Hayee is pose vch baithan nal navdeep di vaddi bund hor v chorhi te uttejit krn vali ban gayi. Usdi patli jehi pajami usde pattan te vadde chitdaan nu lukoon vch asafal saabit ho rahi c. Usde mumme v chunni na hon krke adhe tan saaf saaf nazar aa rahe c. Hun navdeep ne paani nal majj de thann dhotte tan usde doven mumme rubber vang hillan lag gaye.Usne hale thana nu farhya hi c ki ramu v gate kholda hoya andar aa gaya

Hun Aagge

Ramu- " are saradrni ji aap kyun kasht kar rahe ho...." Navdeep de kol aunda hoya ramu boleya. Samne tatti wale pose ch navdeep di bund usde ankhan saamne lishak payi.

Navdeep- " Aa gaya ramu..." Ramu nu kol khada dekh navdeep ne keha. " Ajj masa kawela kar ditta aayun nu..."

Ramu- " Wo beebi ji raaste main ik bujurg sardar ji cycle se digg gaye they...Unhe chakne ke liye koi aaya nahin..." Navdeep de kol baithke ramu dassan lagga. Naal naal oh bina chunni toh adh nange hoye usde kharbooje varge mumme nu jhaank reha si.

Navdeep- " Hayee...phir ramu? Tu chakkeya phir bujurg nu?"

Ramu- " hor ki beebi ji. Humne uthaya sardar ji ko. Woh ghabra gaye they...kaamp rahe they. Maine socha unko ghar tak shor aayun. Isliye kawela ho geya sardarni ji." Ramu apni kahani sunaunda usde mummeyan nu khaa jaan wali nazar maar reha hai.

Navdeep- " Phir tan vaahla changa kita tu ramu. Rabb teri jaroor madad kruga ." Navdeep usnu kehndi hai te usde man ch ramu di izzat hor vadh jandi hai.

Usdi gall sunke man ch sochan lag janda " Rabb madad kare tan hum to apko v chakk de sardarni ji.."

"pach pach...pach pach....chrrrr"

Dhaaaran di aawaz baalti ch pai rahi hai. Navdeep apne sohne-sohne hathan nal than ghuttke dhaara kadd rahi hai. Ramu usde kol hi baitha hai. Oh usde hilde mummeyan nu dekh dekh paagal ho reha hai. Naal thalle chorhi hoyi payi bund usde lun nu khada kar rahi hai. Ramu ne bahut baar keha navdeep nu ki oh kadd layuga dhaaran par navdeep usnu mana kar dindi hai tan aap hi dhaaran kaddan lagdi hai. Naal naal oh usnal babbe di gall sherh lendi hai.

Navdeep- " ramu tu oh baba ji baare jaanda ...preet inder singh ji...jehre oh '. jagah te baithde hunde aaa..."

Ramu- " Wo jinki kaali daari-mooch hai...Roohbdaar chehra hai..." Ramu shayad pehchaan gaya hain.

Navdeep- " Han han..jinha dia aankhan ch noor jhalakda hai..." Navdeep sehej subah hi boli.

Ramu- " Noor toh aapki gaand se bhi bathera jhalakda hai.." Holi jehi aawaz ch ramu boleya.

Navdeep- " ki hoya ramu? sunya nahin ki keha tu?"

Ramu- " hum..hu...hu...humne to yehi kaha ki unki to poore chehre se tapakta hai..." Ramu gall sambhalda hoya boleya. " Wo baba ji bahut aache hain. Mujhe bhi ek din unhone laakh rupeye ki baat kahi thi.."

Navdeep- " Ki ramu? kehri gall kahi si?" Navdeep da chehra tan jive laal ho gaya. Oh gall sunan nu bahut utaawali lag rahi si. Ramu eh dekh ke thoda chaunk gaya hai.

Ramu- " Wo aise thodi batayenge sardarni ji. Unhone kaha tha ki kisi ko mat batana . Wo gyaan bahut anmol hai.." Ramu jaanbuj ke navdeep nu tadfayaun lagga.

Navdeep- " aidda da kehra gyaan jo lukaun di lorh pave? Ramu chupchaap dassde ki dasseya baba ji ne." Navdeep dhaaran nu shaddke usde jiven tarle paaun laggi.

Ramu- " Wo gayaan anmol hai sardarni ji. Isliye shupane ko kaha hai baba ji ne. Wo nahin hum bata sakte aise hi..." Ramu de dimaag ch kujh pakkan lagga si.

Navdeep- " Ramu dassde please. Unha baba ji di har gall moti di tarah hundi hain. Tu jo kahega tainu oh bana ke khilayugi...tainu paise v vadh dilwayugi . Oh gayaan da khazana mainu vi dassde.." Navdeep hun hor vi tarle maaran lagi.

Ramu- " Nahin sardarni ji. Hum khaane ke thodi bhookhe hai. Ya paise ke thodi bhooke hain. " Ainni gal kehke ramu ruk gaya .

Navdeep- " Tan phir jo tu kahega oh miluga ramu. Bass baba ji di har gall mainu dassde ..." Navdeep ne kaahli kaahli ch usnu eh gall vi keh ditti.

Ramu- " Pakka sardarni ji. Hum jo mangega woh aap deoge. Chahe kujh vi maang lun.." ramu ik vaari pakka karna chahunda si.

Navdeep - " Bilkul ramu kuch v mang li. main mana nahi karugi. Bas mainu baba ji di gall dassde.." Navdeep tan jiven gall pisshe paagal ho gayi si.

Ramu- " Phir theek hai sardarni ji. Par baad main mukarna mat ji." ramu de mooh te shaitaani muskurahat aa gayi hai.

Navdeep- " Kade vi nahin ramu. Main kadi vi jhooth nahin boldi hundi. " Navdeep ne ramu de val vekhdeya keha.

Ramu- " To phir theek hai sardarni ji. Wo baba ji ne bataya hai ki Yeh jo shareer hai naa..woh ik kapde ki tarah hai. Asli insaan toh shareer ke andar shupa baitha hai. " Ramu ne ainni ku gall boli te phir apne waalo vi masala jorh ke usde saamne bolan lagga . " Jaise shareer se kapde utaar de toh woh nanga ho jayega. Aise hi shareer ko utaarke andar jhaanko toh insaaniyat nazar aayegi."


Eh aakhiri gal kehnday hoya ramu navdeep ne adh nange mummeyan da size ankhan naal nappan di koshish karda hain. Oh andaza laganda hai ki ik-ik mumma 2.5 - 2.5 kilo da chakki firdi aa sardarni.

Navdeep- " Dhann hai baba ji. Unha di gar gall dhooongi hundi hain. " Navdeep man sch babbe baare sochke boli. 

Ramu- " Aur unhone kaha hai ki agar aap asli insaan banna chahte ho toh logon ki sewa karo. Unki musibat main madad karo . Tabhi main aaj bujurg ko ghar tak shor ke aaya sardarni ji." Ramu ne bade salike naal samjaya . Usda kaala lun sardarni de gore mumme vekhke farrate maaran lagg peya hain. 

Navdeep- " Sacchi gall kahi hai baba ji ne. Lakh rupeye di nahin crore rupee di gall hai. " Navdeep ramu nu kehndi hain .

Ramu- " Aur pata hai sardarni ji..unhone ik jagah batayi hai. Kaha hai agar wahan ishnaan kar lo toh saat janmo ke paap nasht ho jaate hai.." 

Navdeep- " Accha ramu...? Kithe hai oh jagah?" 

Ramu- " Wo hamare pind ke bahar hai. " Ramu ne usde hilde mummeyan nu phir toh gooreya.

Navdeep- " aachaa...pind de bahar koi jagah vi hai ishaan karn di? Main tan pehli vaar sunya?"

Ramu- " Tabhi to kaha tha anmol gayaan ki baat batayi hai baba ji ne. " 

Navdeep- "  Tu jaake aaya ramu ?"

Hale ramu jawaab den hi lagga si ki manjeet di aawaz aa gayi. " Ve ramu dhaaran nahi kaddiya hale tak". Sunke ramu te navdeep gallan toh bahar aa gaye. Hale adhi baalti vi bhar nahin hoyi si. 

Ramu- " Aap rehne do sardarni ji. Main jaldi jaldi kar deta hun..." ramu ne usnu keha te thana nu hathh paa leya. Usnu inj mehoos hoya jiven usne navdeep de mulayam mummeyan nu farh leya hove. Navdeep usdi gall mann ke uth ke khari ho gayi te chitadd nu hath nal jharaan laggi.

Hayee...ramu da jiven lun da paani niklan hi lagga si. Navdeep de hath laggan naal usde vadde vadde chitadd iven hile jiven spring de bane hon. Usnu pehli vaar ainni kolo navdeep di bund di poori shape nazar aayi hai. Oh tan paagal hon lagga si. Phir navdeep ne chunni naal mumme dhakke te andar chali gayi. 

RAAT DA SCENE

Adhi raat ho gayi hain. Saare ghar de jee sutte paaye hain. Sivay navdeep te ramu ton. Navdeep moodhi paayi hoyi preet inder singh baare soch rahi hai. Usde man ch khyaal aa reha hai ki preet inder singh diya gallan kinnia sacchiyan te keemti hun. Usnu ajj ramu di gall sunke vi poora yakeen ho gaya si ki usne  sahi guru dhaareya hain. Moodhi paayi hoyi di bund uppar nu hai. Te lammi paayi hon karke hor v moti te chorhi lagg rahi hai. Usde man ch eh chl reha hai ki kado saver hove te oh preet inder singh kol jaave te usnaal gayaan dia gallan sanjiyan karey. 

Udhar ramu da bura haal hoya peya hai. Ajj navdeep naal kaafi der usne gallan kitiyan si. Nale navdeep de adh nange tarbooj varge mumme usne bilkul kolo dekhe si. Nale kharbooje vargi bund di shape oh kive bhull sakda si. Usnu neend bilkul vi nahin aa rahi si. Oh navdeep baare soch soch apne lun nu masal reha hai. Ant uskolo reha nahin janda. Oh apne manje toh uthya te himmat karke navdeep de kamre wal chala gaya. Pehla usne ainni himmat kade vi nahin kiti si. Par ajj uskolo reha nahin jaa reha si. Ik tan hafte ton usne mutthh nahin maari si kyunki usnu mauka nahin milya si. Utto ajj navdeep di bund jo dekh layi si. Oh Luk-luk ke dabbe pairan de naal navdeep de kamre de boohe agge pahunch gaya. Darwaza khulla hi si kyunki ghar vich andarle darwaze saare khulle rakh ke hi saunde si. Usde naal waale manje te manjeet sutti paayi si. 

Ramu ne dekhya ki navdeep mudddi lammi payi hai te usdi bund uppar wal nu hi hai. Kamre bahar jagde bulb di halki roshni usdi bund te pai rahi si. Hayeee...usda dil kita ki sidhaa usde uppar jaake let jaave te usde gore te mote mote chidtan de utte apna kaala lunn ghasave. Usnu navdeep de doven chitad pahadd diya chotiyan lag rahe si jisnu usda lunn charna chahunda si. Usne apna pajama thalle kita te apna mota kaala lun kaddke mutth maaran lagga. Naal naal oh aala dwaala vi dekh reha si ki koi hor na dekh lave. Par sabh paase shaanti si. Oh chupchaap navdeep di bund nu vekh vekh mutth maari janda hain. Man ch tan oh navdeep nu nangi krke usdi bund vich lun dhakk reha hunda hai. Usnu pata nahin laggeya ki kado usne ankhan band kr lyian. Mutth maarni usne jaari rakkhi si. Achanak usnu kujh khadaka sunya. Usne ikdum aankahn kholiyan tan usde tatte gale tak aa gaye. Saamne manjeet manje toh uth ke baithi hoyi usde val dekh rahi si.  to be continued

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zabrdast sirraaaa awesome end, koi shabd nahi haige mere kolo. super update bai g.

Sirraa update

wah vir ji kamaal ae ... waiting for next ... jldi dena update

sirra..
intresting ho gai hun..
updare karo

Sexy update and twist in story after waking Up manjit.

Umda te uttam update.  Kaamuk masale nal bharpoor. Ant vich jehre tikkha mor leya hai kahani ne,  usne badi jigasya jaga ditti hai dil ch.

Bahut bahut dhanwaad doston stort read karn layi and comment krn layi.  Bahut encouragement mildi hai

[Zaspreet]

Veer ji likhan nu ta bhot kuch a par sayad jo loga nu pasand a koi likhde ne writers asli bandi ohi jo oh likhda jo read karn waliya nu acha lagda va duj gal veer ji eh ki ethe sab apne dil diya galan likhde ne dil wich incest hunda ya incest de soch par jo v story bhot nice a good luck bro

Bilkul veer main tuhadi gall naal agree krda haan.  Writers ohi ne jo readers di psnd mutabik likhde ne.  Dil diya gallan nu kahani de roop ch likhna hi ik writer di sacchi pehchaan hai.

[Zaspreet]

Bahut wadiya

Dhanwaad dost.

[Zaspreet]

Bahut khoob veer, bass update jldi dea kro

Thanks alot veer.

[Zaspreet]

Hats off bro for the update.  I love to read thrillers and this update has made story very very interesting.  I loved reading conversations between ramu and navdeep about gupt gayaan.  And in the end the encounter with manjeet.  Ramu has become really special  now.

Bahut dhanwaad veer story interest nal parhn layi and review likhn layi.  Thank u very much.

[Zaspreet]

Veer update kdo aa reha?

Very good ji eagerly waiting for next

Dhanwaad doston.  Agla update ajj aa reha veer.