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:) laari ni gudde mundhu harika kanabadi " akkada aamayi Evaro help Kosam chustundi" ani raja to cheptadi, raja akkada Ki veltadu , acham ga harika lage untadi , raja to " please help me" ikkadi to story "The End"
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I am speechless for your storie bro ending dialog matram superb
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Excellent story and narration
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I can't resist to comment here.... Katha chala bagundhi... Naku baba nachindhi
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wen are you going to start a new story???
Pl read n comment
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Smita n Janki
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tragic ending for a nice meaningful and realistic story
life lo anni positive ga undavu andariki
sujita