Adultery Betrayals & Sacrifices...
want to know of the betrayal of wife.
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Awesome update
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(13-09-2020, 04:26 AM)kamdev99008 Wrote: great...........

so the 6th april 2018 is the landmnark day

1- ronny unknowingly disclosed about yasmin (sohail's wife) in front of sohails rival jalal
2- security officerwoman offered a deal to dilip ............ against razia
3- dilip bargained in deal with security officerwomen........... sohail's defeat
4- arjun get installed cams in his apartment

so much activities going on at the same time...........
and all the persons involved are connected with  each other..............directly or indirectly

interesting

i'm more eager to know the inside story of binisha's betrayal and arjun's family involvement.....even his real mother's involvement..............
because this is not only unexpected.......but unthinkable also

other parallel thriller escapades are some common .............. but ithink all of this mess is connected with each other....

waiting eagerly for next update

All of the tangled webs will be untangled.... Slowly.
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(13-09-2020, 12:24 PM)Uday Wrote: Hi bro,


that is awesome of tempo build up. I hope you don't get confused with so many of characters & twists. I thought the lawyer as Krishna but now eager to know who is actually is.

Also with the bugs installed, may be Arjun will come to know the reasons of Betrayal or is it Banisha's sacrifice for he sake of family..?

Also to see how Nisha is going to enjoy her outing with young guys Big Grin Big Grin

Hope to get more updates in the coming days.

Good work, keep the tempo.

I needed all of these characters for the story to unfold. So there is no chance for me to get confused. It's upto you guys to decide who is the Krishna of this story. I am sure there will be more than one character in the future to try to fit in the "Krishna" role. But here I said "Entering Krishnaa"- a small difference in the name. Will that make a difference? Let's see...
Few updates we had seen less of Binisha. After 'Entering Krishnaa', we will have an whole update dedicated to Binisha. 
Already working on the next update. Hope you guys enjoyed the story till now, and will more in the future.
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Hi,
Oh, yes, I am enjoying the story, turn of events and wish to have back to back updates Big Grin Big Grin .
    :   Namaskar thanks :ఉదయ్
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Super. Waiting
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Waiting, please post next update .
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Super. Too. Many characters that give rise to too many guesses. Keeping the fingers crossed
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Love this story and narration. 

Since I can’t remember all character correctly. I read the story again. Listing out the character present in the story below for reference.
Hats off to author for giving such complex nice story 

Arjun - Male - Main character
Binisha - Female - Arjun Wife
Dev and Nokul - Male - Arjun Twin Brothers
Mahendra Lal Das - Male - Arjun Father (Dead)
Supriya Lal das - Female - Arjun Mother
Mishty - Female - Arjun Step mom - Mother of Dev and Nokul (Dead)

Champa - Female - Maid in Arjun home
Basu - Male - 2nd shift Watchman of Arjun Apartment complex - Champa husband
Mihir - Male - 2nd shift watchmen of Arjun Apartment complex
Selim and Rajan - Male - 1st shift watchman of Arjun Apartment complex
Jashim and Kader - last shift watchman of Arjun Apartment complex

Razia - Female -  Arjun Friend - Doctor Profession
Murad Hasan - Male - Razia Husband
Rahim - Male - Receptionist in Razia Office
Shakil and Rasel - Male - Murad gym Friends

Shohel or shohail - Male - Razia Friend - Lawyer
Mariam - Female - Shohel Wife
Mini - Female - Shohel Daughter(Kid)
Jami - Female - Shohel Younger Daughter (Kid)
Reshnmi - Female - Shohel assistant

Gopal Sen - Male - Kid who meet with Accident
Suvandra - Female - Gopal sister
Gopal mother

Mrs Yasmin - Female - Attorney

Jalal Khan - Male - Goon and Gang leader
Dilip Rai - Male - Builder
Ronny - Male - Shohel daughter tutor
Shimul - Male - Dilp rai son
Prakash, Rasel and shakil - Shimul Friends
Kalam - Male - Goon working for Jalal Khan
Kalu - Male - Gonn right hand man for Jalal Khan

security officer OC - Female 
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(16-09-2020, 06:31 AM)Siva82 Wrote: Love this story and narration. 

Since I can’t remember all character correctly. I read the story again. Listing out the character present in the story below for reference.
Hats off to author for giving such complex nice story 

Arjun - Male - Main character
Binisha - Female - Arjun Wife
Dev and Nokul - Male - Arjun Twin Brothers
Mahendra Lal Das - Male - Arjun Father (Dead)
Supriya Lal das - Female - Arjun Mother
Mishty - Female - Arjun Step mom - Mother of Dev and Nokul (Dead)

Champa - Female - Maid in Arjun home
Basu - Male - 2nd shift Watchman of Arjun Apartment complex - Champa husband
Mihir - Male - 2nd shift watchmen of Arjun Apartment complex
Selim and Rajan - Male - 1st shift watchman of Arjun Apartment complex
Jashim and Kader - last shift watchman of Arjun Apartment complex

Razia - Female -  Arjun Friend - Doctor Profession
Murad Hasan - Male - Razia Husband
Rahim - Male - Receptionist in Razia Office
Shakil and Rasel - Male - Murad gym Friends

Shohel or shohail - Male - Razia Friend - Lawyer
Mariam - Female - Shohel Wife
Mini - Female - Shohel Daughter(Kid)
Jami - Female - Shohel Younger Daughter (Kid)
Reshnmi - Female - Shohel assistant

Gopal Sen - Male - Kid who meet with Accident
Suvandra - Female - Gopal sister
Gopal mother

Mrs Yasmin - Female - Attorney

Jalal Khan - Male - Goon and Gang leader
Dilip Rai - Male - Builder
Ronny - Male - Shohel daughter tutor
Shimul - Male - Dilp rai son
Prakash, Rasel and shakil - Shimul Friends
Kalam - Male - Goon working for Jalal Khan
Kalu - Male - Gonn right hand man for Jalal Khan

security officer OC - Female 


You just made life easier for me. A very sincere thanks to you for your efforts. I appreciate it a lot.
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Very nice
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Waiting, please post next update .
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Waiting for the sluttiness of nisha to come out
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Interesting plot
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Excellent. waiting
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Next update comes tomorrow.
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Come soon. Great story.
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Sorry for the delay, guys. Had some internet issues while posting the update. I forgot to save the update to draft before posting, so lost the whole writing. Please wait one more day. I promise to post it tomorrow evening. Sorry And Goodnight.
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(18-09-2020, 09:49 PM)worldlover Wrote: Sorry for the delay, guys. Had some internet issues while posting the update. I forgot to save the update to draft before posting, so lost the whole writing. Please wait one more day. I promise to post it tomorrow evening. Sorry And Goodnight.

Oh sorry to hear this. 
We can wait for one more day. No problem thanks for informing us
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(18-09-2020, 09:49 PM)worldlover Wrote: Sorry for the delay, guys. Had some internet issues while posting the update. I forgot to save the update to draft before posting, so lost the whole writing. Please wait one more day. I promise to post it tomorrow evening. Sorry And Goodnight.

that is sad bro. I know how strain to rewrite the whole thing. good luck, next time don't forget to save Big Grin
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