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Please continue the story. Don't decide the success by the comments. There is a silent majority liking your story. However I will post comments as it will encourage authors.
You are among the best writers and I expect more from you. This story is a rare original plot and with a lot of scope. There are lot of ideas to develop, but I thought your own will be the best. I will give some ideas if you wish
Anyhow pl continue.
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(07-08-2020, 09:58 PM)mdu1964 Wrote: Please continue the story. Don't decide the success by the comments. There is a silent majority liking your story. However I will post comments as it will encourage authors.
You are among the best writers and I expect more from you. This story is a rare original plot and with a lot of scope. There are lot of ideas to develop, but I thought your own will be the best. I will give some ideas if you wish
Anyhow pl continue.
thank you mdu 1964. Comments are like a tonic to guys like me. Thank you for your generous words. I am aware I am just an amateur writer but this being a porn forum, I do not want to delve in to complicated emotional conflicts. Pl feel free to write your own views on future plot.
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(07-08-2020, 10:24 PM)rimpikhatun Wrote: Nice thread
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(09-08-2020, 04:26 PM)rimpikhatun Wrote: Good going
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An update is posted in my story Seduction of Nisha,the happy Housewife by elder guy. Hope you will enjoy reading the update.
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An update is posted in my story. Smita and Janki journey from conservative housewife to Hot wife to Cuckoldress. Hope you will enjoy reading the update.
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An update is posted in my story RAMA, A JOURNEY FROM PRUDE TO HOT WIFE by Elder_guy. Hope you will enjoy reading the update.
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A big thank you to all readers, a million thanks to all those whoo spared time to comment and support. Greetings on the occasion of our Independence day.
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An update is posted in my story Seduction of Nisha,the happy Housewife by elder guy. Hope you will enjoy reading the update.
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kahaani khatam
baat khatam
what to comment on?
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(19-08-2020, 10:59 AM)ruby.bhatia Wrote: kahaani khatam
baat khatam
what to comment on?
thank you ruby. Yes the story has ended bit there are requests for extension. You too could have added your view. 
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Pl don't stop the story. This theme has a lot of potential. Rajesh being BM meets a man who is having a small business and needs loan. Rajesh goes to the house of the man and meets the wife of the man who is very beautiful. She is a housewife with kids. Rajesh falls for her. She is very conservative and modest. Rajesh approaches her in many ways but she is reluctant. But rajesh helps the man with loan and slowly seduces her. This is only an outline of a theme and I hope with your style of writing it will come out superb.
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(21-08-2020, 11:37 AM)mdu1964 Wrote: Pl don't stop the story. This theme has a lot of potential. Rajesh being BM meets a man who is having a small business and needs loan. Rajesh goes to the house of the man and meets the wife of the man who is very beautiful. She is a housewife with kids. Rajesh falls for her. She is very conservative and modest. Rajesh approaches her in many ways but she is reluctant. But rajesh helps the man with loan and slowly seduces her. This is only an outline of a theme and I hope with your style of writing it will come out superb.
Thank you mdu1964. Very interesting thoughts from you. Actually writing 3 stories at a time has become taxing and I thought this story lacked views too. Will surely think if writing some episodes. But will take time. In the meanwhile if you have any other thoughts pl free to write here. I may weave them in the story.
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An update is posted in my story. Smita and Janki journey from conservative housewife to Hot wife to Cuckoldress. Hope you will enjoy reading the update.
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mdu64, i have asked you to give any other ideas too. Pl feel free to respond.
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