Adultery Betrayals & Sacrifices...
I believe in quality over quantity. The story is still in it's early stage. As the story progresses these small updates won't be enough anymore. So I will try to increase the quantity also. Please send your feedback adout the story.
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(16-08-2020, 09:16 PM)paamu_buss Wrote: [quote pid='2298558' dateline='1597269665']
 
clps thanks
yourock super, but feel sad for arjun, nokul enjoy with binisha infront of friends... What kind of mother giving permission to his son? twists excellent
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this update is so much confusing................
neither they talked about the reasons behind their physical relationship with their boudi binisha
neither the exposed involvement of their mother in this betrayal episode
neither they shown any disrespect towards arjun....instead they portrayed him as their ideal

i think you are creating unnecessary suspense by skipping natural topics in conversations also skipping interactions
most important thing you skipped is binisha's POV

you remembered me of a famous writer from xossip...also a respected member of this forum too......... BhaiyaJI
his style of narration is same...........every update is unconnected with previous and next ones........... just to make readers confused

now what can we do...except wait & watch ................

so...............................update fast
waiting eagerly for the next update
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(16-08-2020, 09:24 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote: this update is so much confusing................
neither they talked about the reasons behind their physical relationship with their boudi binisha
neither the exposed involvement of their mother in this betrayal episode
neither they shown any disrespect towards arjun....instead they portrayed him as their ideal

i think you are creating unnecessary suspense by skipping natural topics in conversations also skipping interactions
most important thing you skipped is binisha's POV

you remembered me of a famous writer from xossip...also a respected member of this forum too......... BhaiyaJI
his style of narration is same...........every update is unconnected with previous and next ones........... just to make readers confused

now what can we do...except wait & watch ................

so...............................update fast
waiting eagerly for the next update

Brother the story just started. I just want everyone to know what the characters think about themselves. The mother and binisha's pov will also come. But before that a few incidents needs to happen and a few characters needs to be introduced. We don't need to agree but if we can still relate to the motives of each character then I think is called a proper character building. Sorry,  but if the updates were not so small then it would not have felt unnecessary suspence. So, I am also the guilty party here.
I will just ask for your patience here and try to regularly update the story so that you guys will not be bored of the slow pace. 
Thank You...
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(16-08-2020, 09:58 PM)worldlover Wrote: Brother the story just started. I just want everyone to know what the characters think about themselves. The mother and binisha's pov will also come. But before that a few incidents needs to happen and a few characters needs to be introduced. We don't need to agree but if we can still relate to the motives of each character then I think is called a proper character building. Sorry,  but if the updates were not so small then it would not have felt unnecessary suspence. So, I am also the guilty party here.
I will just ask for your patience here and try to regularly update the story so that you guys will not be bored of the slow pace. 
Thank You...
Just 1 thing, brother.. we don't want any forced sex unless really important for the story.. otherwise you are going in the right way.. good luck.. ??
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very good narration
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(17-08-2020, 04:19 PM)Desmond Miles Wrote: Just 1 thing, brother.. we don't want any forced sex unless really important for the story.. otherwise you are going in the right way.. good luck.. ??

agree
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Waiting, please post next update .
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nice story
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Agla update kab aayega ?
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(18-08-2020, 11:58 PM)axma55 Wrote: Agla update kab aayega ?

Next update will be on Friday.
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(19-08-2020, 03:37 AM)worldlover Wrote: Next update will be on Friday.

bro...the promised update is this Friday or next Friday Smile as this Friday is almost over Sleepy
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(21-08-2020, 08:04 PM)Uday Wrote: bro...the promised update is this Friday or next Friday Smile as this Friday is almost over Sleepy
I remember brother. I am working on it right now. Will post an update after an hour or two.
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(21-08-2020, 08:42 PM)worldlover Wrote: I remember brother. I am working on it right now. Will post an update after an hour or two.

Thanks.. ? waiting, brother
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Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 10- A New Morning

(Friday 4.30 am, the day after Arjun's accident. Inside Arjun & Binisha's bedroom.)

I felt an amazing sensation in my groin area and felt like my penis was moving in something wet & soft. When I opened my eyes I saw Binisha laying down there with my semi hard dick in her mouth. She was kissing, nibbling and sucking on it softly. She was looking in my eyes groaning all the while. When she saw me opening my eyes she took out my dick and wished me good morning. "Wow, your way of waking me up every morning is every guys dream come true." I said to her. She giggled a bit and started to suck me with more intensity. She started to take more and more into her mouth until she gagged. Although she couldn't take all of my 7 inches in but her efforts were more than satisfying for me. She was really amazing in giving head. She came a long way since our marriage. The same girl who felt like vomiting even thinking about sucking my penis now wakes me up every morning with world class blowjobs. ''Uff, no matter how much I try I can never take your one fully into my mouth. Why is it so thick?" Binisha said while taking a little breath. And then again put my cock back in her mouth. I asked her," does it mean that you don't like it because it's too thick?" Binisha laughed," no stupid, it's the best. I like it the most. When you put it inside me it streches me so much that I can't describe how good it feels. You are the best shona." she resumed her sucking after that. She was trying to complement me. But I could only understand one line. ''I like it the most" was she comparing me with someone else? Was she comparing me with my brothers? Is she satisfied with me? With all these thoughts running in my head I remembered all that I saw my wife do with my brothers yesterday afternoon. My cock started to deflate and eventually become soft. Binisha became puzzled at what just happened, she asked me the same. "I think it's the result of my accident. The doctors also advised me not to engage in sexual activities for some days. I forgot to tell you yesterday." She looked concerned and said sorry for not asking me about it herself. She softly hugged me for some time and got up from the bed. She told me not to go to my usual exercises today as I am not fully recovered yet. I told her ok, but I will go to the gym just to meet my friends. Since I will not do anything there today hence I will go 1 hour later than usual today. She smiled and said ok. After that she moved to the wash room. I tried to calm my mind and thought about getting up a little late today. When she got out from the bathroom and went out of the room again checking on me and telling me to rest a bit more, she will start her morning works. I was feeling restless laying down, so I also got up from bed. I got out of our room walked to the kitchen to get a glass of water. It's strange! If Binisha is not here in kitchen then where is she? I looked around but did not see her anywhere. Not in the kitchen, not in the drawing room, not even in the prayer room. This only leaves my mother's room, the guest room and the twins's room. Mom gets up at 6, and the twins normally gets up at 7 or 8 as far as I know. While returning from the prayer room I slowly walked to my brothers's room. I stood there and saw the door was not fully closed. A little light was coming from inside the room through the slight space on the door side. The dim light was on inside the room and the curtain was also open on the window. The drawing room was dark. With a pounding heart I peeked inside through the gap of the door. I don't know what I was expecting but what I saw took the wind out of me for the second time in 24 hours. There was my loving, religious wife on her knees on the floor sucking one of my brother's dick while he was still sleeping on his bed. After a minute or two my brother stirred a little and opened his eyes. He did not look surprised at all. He wished her good morning. 
Binisha: Good morning, Nokul. Today is your test na? I came to wake you up early so you can study a bit. 
Dev: Wow boudi your mouth feels so good. But I am Dev, not Nokul.
Hearing this Binisha tried to take his dick out if her mouth but Dev did not let her. He grabbed her head and pushed her by saying..
Dev: Please boudi, I am close. Please first finish with me. Then go to Nokul.
 After bobing three times on Dev's dick Binisha moved Dev's hand from her head and got his dick out of her mouth. She sat on the bed beside Dev and asked him.
Binisha: What are you doing in this side of the bed then? Don't you always sleep on the other side?
Dev: Yes but yesterday I slept a little late to work on one of my sketches. Nokul was talking to me and after some time just slept there on my side. So when I came to sleep I did not wake him up. 
Binisha: Ok, now you go back to sleep. I will wake up Nokul now.
Saying that she got up on the bed went towards Nokul's side. Dev holding his dick on one hand told her...
Dev: How can I go back to sleep like this boudi. Please help me na. I will finish in five minutes. 
Binisha: I don't have much time now Dev. I have to wake Nokul, take bath, do the prayers and then make breakfast also before everyone gets up.
Dev: Ok, you just wake up Nokul like you always do. I will just fuck you from behind and finish soon. Pls. Pls. Pls. Boudi. Don't give me blue balls right at the start of the day.
Binisha: Ok, but your brother is in the house. We can't take any risks. I will go and check on him first.
She started to get down from the bed, I quickly got into my room on the bed and pretended to sleep. She came inside the room and checked if I was asleep or not. Then she again went out. I waited two three minutes after she left and again went in front of Dev and Nokul's room. This time the door was locked from inside. There was no way of seeing what was going on inside so I went back to my room & laid back on the bed. My wife sure came a long way since our marriage. The pleasure of waking up with a world class blowjob from my wife was not exclusive to me anymore. Hell, my wife was not exclusive to me anymore. Every male in this house got full access to all three of her holes. And I don't even know if the access is only limited to only the three of us. Does she have any more lovers?  If she has then where she meets them. I have no way of knowing since I am at work all day. I don't know my wife anymore, don't know if I ever knew her at all.
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(Friday, 7.30 am, Healthcare Gym)
Murad (Razia's husband) was on the treadmill when he saw Arjun come in. There was two of their gym friends Shakil & Rasel.
Murad : Hey Arjun, how are you doing now buddy? I was just telling Shakil & Rasel about your accident. I thought you won't come today. But here you are. 
Arjun: Hey everyone, what's up? I do not want to do any exercise today. I just came to hang out with you all.
Murad: Good that you came. Shohail also called , he will be here in an hour. He said he needs to talk to you too.

After exactly one hour Shohail joined them and all three of them went to a park nearby to sit and talk. After siting in a quite area Shohail starts the conversation.
Shohail: Ok guys, first let's talk bussiness. First Murad, I found out about the goons that occupied the land you bought. I found out who they work for. They are goons of Jalal khan's gang. Apparently builder Dilip Rai hired them to get your land. I also think they also have some fake papers to say that land is his property. There is a new OC that was just transfered here . Let's see if she will help us or not. Murad, we will go to the security officer station tomorrow.
Murad: Jalal khan's gang huh. Isn't it the same group that gang bangd a mother and daughter two months before? 
Shohail: Yes that's the same. security officer did not get any evidence connecting them. Even the eye witnesses refused to testify against them. But you don't worry. This time I got a chance to stop them. I will get your land. 
Murad: Ok.
Shohail: Now Arjun about your situation, I have all the equipments ready to get information of your family's betrayal. I will need your apartment keys. One of my friends will go to your house and bug all of the rooms. He will set small cameras for you in all rooms. You can see what they are doing through out the day in your phone.
Shohail: You some how have to get your house empty today. Take everyone to visit somewhere atleast for 30 to 40 minutes. 
Arjun: ok, I will try.
We talked and made some plans about how to progress, what to do and what not to do. After some time all of us had to leave for work.
Shohail: Ok bye then. 
Murad : Where are you going now Arjun? 
Arjun: Yesterday I left my car in the hospital parking lot. Now I am going there to get my car.
Murad: Ok, bye. See you tomorrow.
Arjun : Bye. Have a good day, both of you.

To be cont.....
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Good one.. but honestly, I expected more, bro..
This update just detailed more of the witnessing of his wife.. and also a bit reasoning for Shohail's wife's fate later.. but its still not enough to justify the curiosity we had in these past days' waiting..
Anyway, we don't want to let you down by criticism.. you have the full story cooked up in your mind.. just go with that flow and try to give more frequent updates.. otherwise the flow will be lost for the readers.. good luck again..  Blush
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very good narration of inner conflict
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bro...nicely done even though I was expecting more of the story, but never the less it's good.

Banisha is very good and is doing justice equally to all three brothers and am very eager to know how come a shy person who vomits by the thought of sucking cock turned out to be a woman who wakes up the males in the house with blow jobs and even ready to get fucked in the presence of her husband and that too not showing any regrets, fear, proud etc...I mean feelings. 

And Arjun...ummm...it must be very difficult to control his feelings and not to show any emotions outside and behave normally...may be you could have named as Dharmaj who is the "ajaatha satru" who doesn't have enmity towards any one.

It seems this story has got all the ingradients for a masala movie...sex, adultry, gangbang, kidnap, goons, lawyers, public servants, mother for sentimental scenes....oh...very eager to know

Thanks bro, if possible please post more updates sooner
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can't understand binisha.............
let's see.... will arjun succeed to get home under surveillance

murad's dispute with a builder and goons.....

waiting eagerly for nrxt
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