Misc. Erotica The Hunt - (A Wife's Adultery Love Story)

[Devilmaycry]

Wating for updates Bro...

Thanks man but it was a rather turbulent week ,I could not write a single letter .

[Devilmaycry]

Your art of writing has been awesome and humorous makes me wanna read further and further.

I  enjoyed the jokes, pun, gag, one liner, all in all the humour part

Again thank you for such a great entertainment

What the fuck man ?!!!  Where have you been dude ?You are one of my early critics .I enjoy your criticisms cause you recognize the humour part of the story so well .You see through the deception and recognize that I am actually mocking everything .

[Devilmaycry]

He touches Shilpa's perky boobs with one hand " he needs the  hints of your mountains."

Mahesh's fingers brurshes shilpa's nipple over her baggy blouse and bra "He loves challenge, unless he knows there are two high peaks ready  to be conquered ,how he gonna even think of even climbing?"

Mahesh's other hand roams on Shilpa's flawless back which is entirely covered " If he does not know how smooth it is, why would he dream of the adventure of skiing there? "


Shilpa get tensed under Mahesh, Mahesh's hands travel furthur and lighly grabs Shilpa's plump ass " If he can't see how wild you sway while you walk, how can he be wild enough to committ wild blunder losing into the wilderness of your junoesque  landscape "


To feel what I feel when I watch my wife's body,it was made for men to fight over ,it was made for crime and that is what this body is gonna committ ."

एक सब्र है इसके सिवा कुछ पास नहीं है, बर्बाद तमन्नाओं का एहसास नहीं है /
कमज़र्फ नहीं हूँ के जो मैं मांग के पी लूं, और ये भी नहीं है की मुझे प्यास नहीं है //

Nice poem ,i had to translate it but I like it. 
I remember writing that chapter . I was trying to establish Mahesh as a criminal mastermind .

To feel what I feel when I watch my wife's body,it was made for men to fight over ,it was made for crime and that is what this body is gonna committ ."   

I am translating the story in another language but this line here does not sound as good as it is in English . 

This chapter contains a foreshadowing by the way.

[Devilmaycry]

Ashish is feeling restless today at office,the stock market is making him so bored "Oh come on!!!! Don't buy YES bank share,what are you guys fools .The world is full of morons ,this stock's price rise even people hear the directors are meeting someone over a cup of coffee "

  CHAPTER 25 .


Ashsih was right     . Today Yes bank share plunged 55% .

It's India's fifth biggest private bank .The fall of Yes bank in more serious for indian economy than coronavirus for short term .

[Theflash]

What the fuck man ?!!!  Where have you been dude ?You are one of my early critics .I enjoy your criticisms cause you recognize the humour part of the story so well .You see through the deception and recognize that I am actually mocking everything .

I gotta say thank you
Coz first time in my life some one has enjoyed my criticism. Usually i am just like you, in real life i just give my opinion without any filter and they say i fuck them.
So i tried believe me I really tried very hard to not hurt them.
But what the hell i am supposed to do if i can't sugarcoat the lies or bullshit they immersed themselves into.
So similarly i use the jokes, pun, gag, sarcasm to fucking mock there reality(lies).
Another thing I feel connected to your story is that about 90 % of psychological, historical bunch of other facts i do know it should i say studied it. So its amazing to read when you choreograph this facts with the plot of the story.
Once again thank you for such a great entertainment.
Another thing I dont comment much is bcoz i just dont want disrespect someones hardwork by just writing GOOD WORK, Or UPDATE SOON.
And whatever I want to say it atleast takes 4-5 sentences. And the shittest part is i am not good with keyboard.

[KurtaPhaad]

एक सब्र है इसके सिवा ...... taken from famous qawaali " Ae Meri Jaan E Gazal". Glad that You and Kamdev99008 like it. JAI HO.

"I am translating the story in another language."

Now the time has come for me  to learn to read a new language.

"Oh come on!!!! Don't buy YES bank share,what are you guys fools ". Forecasting .

Must need to read between the lines /images.

this line here does not sound as good as it is in English .

Don't know how will you justify it but strongly believe you will justify it.

I am a bit concerned and enthusiast about this line though - "
“The amount of  holiness oozing from your hole could even purify the satan himself”
(I tried translator, it was hilarious)
Hindi
"आपके छेद से पवित्रता की मात्रा भी स्वयं को शुद्ध कर सकती है"

Anyway i heard something about revenge today then it remind me of "Bambino."

Rahul returns soon with a bottle of cold drink in his hand....
"Cold drinks, dad?!!!" Rahul offers Mahesh sleeping pill mixed cold drinks glass....
Shilpa, You want some?"Rahul asks.....
Rahul got what he wanted, both of his victims are now filled with the drugs in their respective blood circulatory system. He just could not believe it......

"Revenge is a Drink best served Cold."

By the way I learned something new today "Foreshadowing"

Thank You again and Hats Off. 

[King Kesavan]

You are awesome writer. For some reasons, i did not like the last episode.
I dont want to write anything bad about it to hurt you.
We know you spend your precious time on this. Looking forward for the next update.

[Devilmaycry]

एक सब्र है इसके सिवा ...... taken from famous qawaali " Ae Meri Jaan E Gazal". Glad that You and Kamdev99008 like it. JAI HO.

"I am translating the story in another language."

Now the time has come for me  to learn to read a new language.

"Oh come on!!!! Don't buy YES bank share,what are you guys fools ". Forecasting .

Must need to read between the lines /images.

this line here does not sound as good as it is in English .

Don't know how will you justify it but strongly believe you will justify it.

I am a bit concerned and enthusiast about this line though - "
“The amount of  holiness oozing from your hole could even purify the satan himself”
(I tried translator, it was hilarious)
Hindi
"आपके छेद से पवित्रता की मात्रा भी स्वयं को शुद्ध कर सकती है"

Anyway i heard something about revenge today then it remind me of "Bambino."

Rahul returns soon with a bottle of cold drink in his hand....
"Cold drinks, dad?!!!" Rahul offers Mahesh sleeping pill mixed cold drinks glass....
Shilpa, You want some?"Rahul asks.....
Rahul got what he wanted, both of his victims are now filled with the drugs in their respective blood circulatory system. He just could not believe it......

"Revenge is a Drink best served Cold."

By the way I learned something new today "Foreshadowing"

Thank You again and Hats Off.   

Rahul has his reasons for revenge but his validation for taking revenge is based on a false incident. And I find  the whole thing funny and sad at the same time.

[Devilmaycry]

I gotta say thank you
Coz first time in my life some one has enjoyed my criticism. Usually i am just like you, in real life i just give my opinion without any filter and they say i fuck them.
So i tried believe me I really tried very hard to not hurt them.
But what the hell i am supposed to do if i can't sugarcoat the lies or bullshit they immersed themselves into.
So similarly i use the jokes, pun, gag, sarcasm to fucking mock there reality(lies).
Another thing I feel connected to your story is that about 90 % of psychological, historical bunch of other facts i do know it should i say studied it. So its amazing to read when you choreograph this facts with the plot of the story.
Once again thank you for such a great entertainment.
Another thing I dont comment  much is bcoz i just dont want disrespect someones hardwork by just writing GOOD WORK, Or UPDATE SOON.
And whatever I want to say it atleast takes 4-5 sentences. And the shittest part is i am not good with keyboard.

Nah it's not disrespect.
I can surely say that a good deal of writers stopped writing just cause many readers hesitated to write those few words like 'update soon' etc.

[Devilmaycry]

You are awesome writer. For some reasons, i did not like the last episode.
I dont want to write anything bad about it to hurt you.
We know you spend your precious time on this. Looking forward for the next update.

Why ????    Why do you hesitate to do reasonable criticism?

[xavierrxx]

You cannot satisfy everyone with every episode. In the episode shilpa with harsh, she was totally a different woman. It was not something expected from her character from the previous episodes. So, it is a shocker. It just happens. Please go ahead and continue

[Devilmaycry]

You cannot satisfy everyone with every episode.  In the episode shilpa with harsh, she was totally a different woman. It was not something expected from her character from the previous episodes. So, it is a shocker. It just happens. Please go ahead and continue

"First of all thank you for encouraging me.But I want to respond to Shilpa and Harsh incident.

Here is the foreshadowing of  Harsh's fate .Chapter 28   ----------------------


"Shilpa seizes the moment, "Then you admit you enjoyed groping and grinding against my body? Come on, perv cough up."
Rahul sees no way out, and He throws himself at Shilpa's feet " I am sorry...You are beautiful, hot ...but I did not enjoy myself." he grabs her feet.
Shilpa does not back off; she instead push her toe on his lips " I don't believe you...You know what I think, I think you love sucking toes like the perv you are." pushing her toe forcefully inside Rahul's mouth and scratching his gum with her toenail "I think you are the kind of creepy perv boy who loves to eat dirt from a woman's feet like the frail male you are."
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Shilpa thinks this whole drama she just did was to put Rahul in his place and also to terrorize him so that he does not do any funny stuff. She feels safe. She found out Rahul is just a weak, sniveling boy without a spine, now she feels she is in control.

That is what she thinks the only thing that happened. But that is not the whole story, and something else was happening. This entire act of her was a sexual act. Her conscious mind did not realize dominating a male whom she finds weak and unworthy of her is like riding a dick. She was getting sadistic sexual pleasure by tormenting him. That only made her flood her panty. It's like dancing, which is just another art form of sex, a mating ritual you can perform in public. Shilpa gets off by insulting men whom she thinks unworthy of her. In regular times she would have never thought of doing that with Rahul, but she is under sex drug influence." CHAPTER 28,PART 2


 It was not out of the blue.The problem is the story is so big it's hard to keep track for the readers what happened where or who said what.

I wrote more than 80 pdf pages in one month ,so .....yeah nobody got that much time to spend behind a single story.

That's why I am taking it slow,never going to make the same mistake of writing so much words in so little time.

[Gitaranjan]

Your efforts to this story is really amazing. The narration is just awesome. Please continue in your style.

[beastinme]

When will we get next update?Eagerly waiting for that.

[Shrimaan]

I AM NOT GOING TO GIVE A DEADLINE FOR POSTING THE STORY EVER AGAIN HAHA :D .......AS IT TURNED OUT I AM VERY BAD AT KEEPING PROMISES.
SORRY FOR THAT. NEEDED THIS HOLIDAY TO WRITE THIS UPDATES UP.
ENJOY THE UPDATES GUYS. ALSO THANKS TO ALL WHO WAITED FOR THE STORY AND ENCOURAGED ME IN THE COMMENTS.
HAVE FUN.

EDIT: ANOTHER THING I BELIEVE THAT THESE UPDATES HAVE MANY ERRORS AS I WROTE THESE AT A STRETCH.SO PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR THAT AND IF YOU FIND ANY SERIOUS FAULT LET ME KNOW IN THE COMMENTS.

Mind-blowing update bro!

[manmohar]

Is this story again dead.. last updated on 24 Feb

[twinciteeguy]

Is this story again dead.. last updated on 24 Feb

24 is not that far, think of those who posted months back>?

[manmohar]

Yeah..I know but can't wait for next update...story speed reduced to local from superfast ??

[Siva82]

Hope you are fine and doing good. Lot of bad things are happening around the world due to coronavirus. I really pray u r safe and good. When everything is good from
Your end give us updates. At least I will wait patiently till then

[mkgkkr]

Bro... update?