[Neo_]

Hi Friends,

      Main Xossip da regular reader si, par note kar reha han ki Xossipy te punjabi stories te writers bahut ghatt ne. Meri favorite writer "kavitakhullar" (along with SexyReet, Waliaz and BluePrince) ne kuchh stories jaroor shuru kitiyan, par regular update nahi aa reha. I hope she comes back soon. 
       I am no writer, but thought of giving it a try, so created 1st draft. Please let me know how you guys felt about it, and I may provide subsequent updates, based on reader's feedback....

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Very good start. Yeah i am also fan of all the writers but my personal favorite is The Blue Prince.  Its good to see you starting new story.  Hope to have blossom in punjabi section again.

Thanks a lot brother. It means a lot coming from you, as I have always admired your writing.....

[Neo_]

Thanks a lot guys. I really appreciate your support (Although I was hoping that more readers will like this), but anyhow. Even though I started this story just for time pass, but as few people did liked it, so I have written another update (a bit smaller). Will see how it is taken by the readers and then may continue it further.

[Neo_]

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update tan kaim bro.bt length too small.ohdan writing skills vdia ne

Thanks for the appreciation bro. Will try to provide longer updates. But since I am writing for the first time, I may take some time to settle down.....

[Neo_]

Bhai thoda lamva update paya kro

Sure Bro, will try to provide longer updates.

[Neo_]

Agla update 22 maa dhee nu ik bari iko.bed te koda krayi swad ah ju

Sure 22. I hope that such scene comes up, but may not happen in the next update.

[Neo_]

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[Neo_]

Bhut ghaint story

Thanks Brother.....

[Neo_]

Chaka 22 tanga sheti pr 22 tu na lsyi yr ehna di bahero hi thukvayi

Will try yaar. But pta nahi je meto na reha gya tan, ki pta main hi chakk dema kamm.......

[Neo_]

NYC story,  keep it up dear

Thanks for appreciating it brother....Will try to update it today....

[Neo_]

Bhai update jaldi jaldi paya kr

Sure Bhai...Actually main weekend te busy c...Will try to post one update today.

[Neo_]

To all the readers who appreciated this story: Main story da title thoda change kita hai te pind da angle bhi add karna legya han. I hope you guys like it....

[Neo_]

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bahut sohne.....
bahut wadiya likhde ho.....
kafi chir baad koi panjabi writer vekhya jo enna sohna likhda hai te enna detail ch scene create karda hai....
maza aa gya pad ke....
u r an amazing writer...
keep going dear
keep writing

Thanks a lot brother for such great words. It goes a long way to encourage the writer...

[Neo_]

Babe dhak pah ti hun tah sheti maa dheya iko bed te leh ah swad ah ju

Thanks brother. Ahh update da last part main kaafi hadd tak tere hi comment to inspire ho ke create kita c :D ...So keep supporting.

[Neo_]

Good aa... On the right way dear.... Pls fast update

Thanks bro..I will try, but next update may take time as i haven't got much idea on which way to take the story. Still will try to post as early as possible.

[Neo_]

veeray apni story nu thoda mirch masala lao...
hagdi hui mummy di bund vekhni chup k...
ya fer khetan vich kavi hagdi howay kamij uper chuk k.. tey veera usdi gori chitti bund nu khali hundian vekhay...
fer baad vich veera jis time sex krega tey ina dowan dey chittad khol k bund di mushk leni, chatni etc..
gandian gallan naal maja wad jaye ga

Jaroor Veere, will try to include some of your suggestion.....

[Neo_]

Bhut ghaint story siraa....

Thanks for the appreciation brother......