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Mera School te Mera Pind....
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Hi Friends,

      Main Xossip da regular reader si, par note kar reha han ki Xossipy te punjabi stories te writers bahut ghatt ne. Meri favorite writer "kavitakhullar" (along with SexyReet, Waliaz and BluePrince) ne kuchh stories jaroor shuru kitiyan, par regular update nahi aa reha. I hope she comes back soon. 
       I am no writer, but thought of giving it a try, so created 1st draft. Please let me know how you guys felt about it, and I may provide subsequent updates, based on reader's feedback....
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#3
kya baat.nice start
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#4
Good start
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#5
Very good start. Yeah i am also fan of all the writers but my personal favorite is The Blue Prince. Its good to see you starting new story. Hope to have blossom in punjabi section again.
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#6
Kaim baiii
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#7
Bhut ghaint story
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#8
bahut sohne .....nice start
keep going
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(12-05-2019, 08:25 PM)Waliaz Wrote: Very good start. Yeah i am also fan of all the writers but my personal favorite is The Blue Prince.  Its good to see you starting new story.  Hope to have blossom in punjabi section again.

Thanks a lot brother. It means a lot coming from you, as I have always admired your writing.....
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Thanks a lot guys. I really appreciate your support (Although I was hoping that more readers will like this), but anyhow. Even though I started this story just for time pass, but as few people did liked it, so I have written another update (a bit smaller). Will see how it is taken by the readers and then may continue it further.
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#12
update tan kaim bro.bt length too small.ohdan writing skills vdia ne
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#13
Bhai thoda lamva update paya kro
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#14
Agla update 22 maa dhee nu ik bari iko.bed te koda krayi swad ah ju
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(14-05-2019, 03:06 PM)iron man Wrote: update tan kaim bro.bt length too small.ohdan writing skills vdia ne

Thanks for the appreciation bro. Will try to provide longer updates. But since I am writing for the first time, I may take some time to settle down.....
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(14-05-2019, 03:53 PM)Aman.singh Wrote: Bhai thoda lamva update paya kro

Sure Bro, will try to provide longer updates.
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(16-05-2019, 04:01 PM)Tera_happy Wrote: Agla update 22 maa dhee nu ik bari iko.bed te koda krayi swad ah ju

Sure 22. I hope that such scene comes up, but may not happen in the next update.
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#19
Bhut ghaint story
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#20
Chaka 22 tanga sheti pr 22 tu na lsyi yr ehna di bahero hi thukvayi
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