[Neo_]

Veer story boht wadia aa regularly updated dainda rahin best of luck

Thanks for the support Veer. Will try to be regular (atleast 2 updates in a week)....

[Neo_]

Yr jina ho sake app na layi 22 dujia toh karvayi
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Dekhade hain Baai ki kisdi kismat khuldi hai.....

[Neo_]

Att story veere .. waiting

Thanks brother.....

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[Neo_]

NYC update..... Agg lade Mazda aa reha pura

Thanks bro....

[Neo_]

Wadia update par aik gal da dihan rakhin kavi no billa kolon na chudwa dain sara maza khrab hojana ondi mummy no chudwa

Thanks for the suggestion bro....Dekhade hain agge ki bnada hai.

[Neo_]

wow.....nice update dear...
wadiya likhde ho....mahol bada sohna create krde ho.....story plot bahut pasand aaya....
conversation hot & seductive rakhiyo padan wich jyada maza aayega.....PUNJABI story padan wich wakhra hi swaad hai.....te tuhadi writing ...WONDERFUL
waise kahan di lor nhi.....u got amazing skills of writing
keep going dear
keep writing

Thanks a lot brother for such good words. Will try my best to entertain you guys...

[Neo_]

story vadia ja ri ay  bas veeray ae billay kolun na thukwaen kavi nu

Thanks for the suggestion bro.. Will C.

[Neo_]

Awesome update buddy, very arousing you have really good skills with the plot, environment and story telling, thankyou very much for a wonderful update. I also a request for other readers that please don't try to influence the story this early like who will be good with whom, let the writer express what he initially set out to do. Once the story is in with first few scenes then writer can take suggestion if i wants. If the writer asked for suggestions in the first place then i apologizes. In any case i would like to request writer that he goes forward with what he has in his mind first and take suggestion later if he wants. Anyhow thanks again for a wonderful update, keep it up.

Thanks a lot for appreciating the story brother.........

[Neo_]

Osm upadate

Thanks bro...

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[Neo_]

Awesome .. mja aa reha story te play dono ch.. reet chalu aa te case hoya koi tahi bhej rhe ... college ch kavi te reet da system jyada lvayo awara mundeya to.. bench te beh k chhed chhad vgera.. keep it up te update continue te jldi rkheyo

Thanks for liking the story dear and also for the suggestion. I will keep them in mind.... Updates main next week ton regular den di try karunga., will be busy this week, but will try to provide a short update just to keep the readers involved...

[Neo_]

Veer update kar dai

Trying to provide a short update...regular update will be coming from next week. Iss week main thoda busy han...

[Neo_]

Hi readers,
 I am currently out of station and will be back by Sunday
Will try to provide update by Monday.

My current draft is almost complete but needs some editing..

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Very good story dost. Carry on the good work. Good conversation between mummy and maami.

Thanks a lot bother. I have been a big fan of your writing for along time and your comments means a lot......

[Neo_]

Aa e wadia update

Thanks brother......

[Neo_]

Hi friends,

 I have removed the story as people were getting too impatient for updates and I was not getting time because of some personal reasons. 

Sorry for the confusion. If I could ever complete the story then I will post it whole....

Thanks to all the readers for liking/commenting the story......