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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

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Update 43


Last update of chapter 1

Double Maha mega update

Sunaina ( chillate hue ) : rohaan rohaan

Or vaise hii peter ko koi takkar marta hai
Or peter urta hua bohot door jakar girta hai ....

Ab aageee.......

Or ek tiger tezz dahar ke sath sunaina ke piche se nikalta hai.

Jisko dekhkar peter ek dum chock jata hai

Or vo tiger sunaina or seema ki taraf ek kawaj bana deta hai.

Peter : tiger tu yaha par
Iska matlab yeh hai ki yeh sunaina or koi nahi.

Iske aage bolne se phele hii

Tiger ek insaani roop dharan karke bolta hai.

Tiger ( peter se ) : tune sahi shamjha yeh or koi nahi rohan ki sunaina hai.
Jisko tune marne ki kosis ki hai.

Yeh baat sunkar sunaina or seema dono shocked ho jate hai.

Sunaina ( rote hue tiger se) : rohan kaha hai.
Mera rohan kaha hai.
Jaldi btao mujhe  ( yeh baat sunaina ne tiger ka collar pakarte hue bola )

Tiger ( sunaina se ) : mujhe nahi pata mata ki malikk ( rohan) kaha hai.
Magar vo jaldi hii aapse milege.

Sunaina rote hue.

Sunaina ( rote hue) : mujhe or kitna intzaar karna padega rohan ka
Kya mein kabi rohan se mil paugi.
Ya bas rohan ki yaad mein zindagi bhar tadapte rahugi.
Aaj mahadev ko mujhe rohan se milana ho

Sunaina ( upar muh karke ) : mahadev aaj apko rohan se milana hoga.
Mataparvati aaj apko apni putri ka yeh dard kam karna hoga
Maa parvati meri madad karo ( yeh baat sunaina ne chillate hue kahi )

Tiger sunaina ke aakho se nikal rahe aashu pohochte hue.

Tiger ( sunaina se ) : mata aap jaldi hii malikk se milegi.

Sunaina : ab mere pass kuch nahi bacha inlogo ne meri mom or dad ko chin liya
Or is kamine kamlesh ne mere sache dost sahil ko bhi nahi bachane diya.
Or rohan bhi mere pass nahi hai.
Ab mein zinda rehkar kya karugi mujhe bhi mar jana chahiye.

Tiger ( sunaina se ) : nahi mata apka jeevan bohot anmol hai
Yeh baat abhi aapko bhi nahi pata
Or malikk ( rohan ) ke liye pata nahi kitne logo ne apni kurbani di hai iska apko abhas bhi nahi hai.

Apko or rohan ko dekhne ke liye aaj tak raajlok taras raha hai.
Pata nahi kitne dard jhel raha hai.
Or aap us kurwani ko jaya nahi kar sakti mata.
Aapko mazbut banna hoga.
Kiuki agar aap tut gai to rohan malikk bhi tut jaege.
Or ager rohan tut gaya to is duniya kya saare universe ka sarvanash ho gaega.

Sunaina shocked hokar

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : tumara matlab kya hai.

Tiger : aapka jeevan anmol hai mata
Yeh jeevan bohot important hai.
Or rohan to hamesha apke sath hai
Us locket ke roop mein
Or aapke mom dad bhi zinda hai
Unko kuch nahi hua hai.

Yeh sunkar sunaina ko chakkar ane lagta hai.
Or sunaina girne wali hoti hai

Tiger : mata shamal kar

Sunaina khud ko shamalte hue

Sunaina : kyaaa
Par meine to dekha tha ki mera ghar puri tarha se bomb ke dhamake se khatam ho gaya hai.

Tiger : yeh sach hai ki aapka ghar bomb ke dhamake se ud gaya tha par

Sunaina ( chillate hue ) : par kyaa

Tiger : us bomb ke dhamake mein apke mom dad nahi mare the unko jab tak vaha se nikal kar kahi or bhej diya gaya tha.

Sunaina : mere mom dad ko kisne nikala or mere mom dad kaha hai.

Tiger : vo to mujhe nahi pata magar roma ko shayad pata ho

Sunaina : roma ko pata kese hoga.

Tiger : vo sab aap jab roma se milegi tab pata chal jaega.
Kiuki mujhe achanak ek awaaz aae thi usne mujhe yeh bataya.

Peter or robert jab raajlok ki baat tiger ke muh se sunte hai to ek daam se shocked ho jate hai.

Robert ( ghabrate hue ) : yeh nahi ho sakta.
Yeh vahi rohan hai jisne pure sehtan lok ko ek zatake mein khatam kar diya the.
Kya isse der se rakshas guru yaha se bhage the.

Tabi
Peter ( robert se ) : sir mein yahi to apko batana chaha raha tha ki
Jab mein is aauraat ( seema ) ke ghar gaya to mujhe vaha atma mani dekhi jisko sirf rohan ke alawa koi nahi hasil kar paya tha.
Or nahi koi us atma mani ko prapt kar saka tha.

Robert ( kapte hue ) : atma mani or yaha dharti lok mein
Uska matlab rohan hii vo hai.

Peter : khon sir khon

Or aise hii subha ho jati hai.
Magar rakshas chakra ke karan vaha raat hii rehti hai.

Robert ( mayasur se ) : mayasur insab ko khatam kar do
Or jaldi bhago yaha se

Or mayasur tiger or sunaina ko khatam karne ke liye ek khanjhar unki taraf fekta hai jisse tiger ka vo kawaj tut jata hai.

Or tiger door jakar girta hai.

Tiger ( sunaina se ) : mata ab sirf vo locket hii hum sab ko bacha sakta hai
Kiuki is rakshas chakra ko sirf vo locket ya rohan hii tod sakte hai.
Mein is rakshas se jyada der tak nahi lad pauga.

Sunaina ( rote hue ) : meine vo locket fek diya.

Tiger : kyaa
Apne rohan ka locket fek diya.
Ab hume koi nahi bacha sakta.

Sunaina ( rote hue ) : mujhe maaf kar do
Ab mein khud is aasur ko rokne ki kosis karugi.
Mein kisi ko marne nahi dugi
Jab tak mein zinda hu koi nahi mar sakta.

Or sunaina khade hokar sab rakshas or mayasur ki taraf badne lagti hai.

Tiger ( chillate hue ) : nahi mata rukh jao
Aisa anarth mat karo.

Magar sunaina ko to kisi ki bhi awaaz sunai nahi de rahi thi.
Seema bhi chillati rehti hai magar sunaina ab kisi ki baat nahi sunti.

Kiuki ab sunaina ko apne desh ke logo ka dard or saha nahi jata
Or us dard ko mehsus kar rahi thi
Sunaina soch rahi thi ki uske zinda rehte hue kisi bekasur ki jaan nahi ja sakti.
Or sunaina kabi aisa nahi hone de sakti.

Sunaina ko is baat ki fikar nahi thi ki iska anzaam kya hoga .
Sunaina bas yeh chahati thi ki jis desh mein sunaina ne janam liya hai vo us desh ke kisi bhi bekasur shaks ko nahi marne dena chahati hai.

Us chiz mein sunaina ko kitna dard hone wala tha
Sunaina ko iska look fikar nahi tha.

Or sunaina bhagte hue rakshas chakra ke samne khadi ho jati hai.

Tiger ( chillate hue ) : mata upar dekho.

Tabi
Sunaina upar dekhti hai vase hii ek katar jakar sunaina ko lagti hai.

Jisse sunaina ki ek cheekh nikal jati hai or sunaina vahi gir jati hai.

Sunaina : rohaaa mein jaa rahi hu.

Yeh awaaz sunte hii rohan ka dil tadap jata hai.

Fir suru hota hai maut ka tandav.

Tabi

Ek tezz ki awaaz ati hai.

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Rohan : sunainaaaaa

Or jaise hii un rakshas ki nazar rohan par padti hai
Vo aab ghabra jate hai.

Har rakshas ke man mein vo dehsat ka nazara yaad aa jata hai jab rohan ne ek jhatke mein pure rakshas lok ko hii nisto nabut kar diya tha.

Har taraf hahakar mach jata hai.

Rohan ka sarir se aag ki lapte nikal rahi hoti hai.
Or aakho mein khoon utra hota hai.

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Or ek aawaz sunai de rahi hoti hai.

Bhadra kaal lochanam kapal chand tandavam aasur damankarnam rakshas sarvvinasnam

Rohan ka sarir ek dam kala ho gaya tha kuch is tarha



Rohan ke gussa dekhkar sab rakshas kaap rahe the.

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Or kuch rakshas jo naye the  or  aasur bhi apni shaktiyo se rohan ko rokne ki kosis karte hai.
Vaise hii rohan bhagne lagta hai or rohan ki speed aise hoti hai ki kisi ko kuch shamaj me nahi ata
Or achanak se rohan ke hand mein ek talvaar aa jati hai.
Jisse rohan bas 3 second mein hazaro raskshaso or aasuro ka sir kat deta hai
Kuch is tarha



Or pure desh 2 mein katle aam mach jata hai.

Or jaise hii rohan ki nazar mayasur par padti hai.

Mayasur puri tarha ghabra jata hai or pagal sa ho jata hai



Mayasur : mahakaal

Or mayasur ke muh se itna hii nikalta hai
Or mayasur bhagte hue rohan ke leg mein gir jata hai.

Rohan ( chillate hue ) : sunainaaa

Or rohan ki talvaar ki vaar se bas har jagah khoon hii khoom gita hota hai .

Or mayasur kuch bol pata usse pehle hii rohan ek tezz vaar ke sath mayasur ka sarir us talvar se fad deta hai.

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Or mayasur tadapte hue kuch hii second mein bhagwan ko pyara ho jata hai.
Tab bhi rohan ka man nahi bharta or rohan mayasur ka sir ukhad kar door jakar fek deta hai.

Fir rohan jaise hii apni talvaar jamin me ghusata hai


Or issi ke sath ek tezz zatake se pura desh 2  hil jata hai
Or rakshas chakra tut kar bikar jata hai

Or saare rakshas idhar udhar udate hue nazar ate hai.

Rohan ( gusee me chillate hue ) : sunainaaaaa

Or ek rakshas bhagne lagta hai

Tabi rohan us rakshas ka leg pakarta hai or uska beech se hii fad deta hai

Rohan ko kuch sunai nahi de raha tha or naa hii kuch dikai de raha tha
Rohan to bas sunaina hii sunaina chilla raha tha
Or har taraf tabahi maza raha tha.

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Rohan ko itne gusse me dekhte hii pure desh 2 mein katle aam mach jata hai.
Saare rakshas or aasur rohan se bachne ke liye kisi kutte ki tarha idhar udhar bhag rahe the.

Pura asmann red se black pad jata hai.
Har taraf se bhayanak bhayanak awaaze ane lagti hai.

Vahi
Peter bhi aise bhayanak aawaaz se ghabra jata hai.

Peter ( darte hue ) : yeh kya ho raha hai achanak se
Pura aasman kala kese pad gaya
Or desh 2 itna hill kiu raha hai.
Or yeh rakshas chakra ek jhatke mein kese tut gaya.

Ek rakshas chillate hue robert ke paas ata hai.

Robert ( us rakshas se ) : abe kya ho gaya or teri pisab kiu nikal jayi.

Rashaks : sir meri to pisab hii nikali hai.
Aapki to gand hii fad dega vo.
Sab ko chir fad raha hai.

Robert ( gusee me ) : kiski itni himmat hai jo mere rakshas ko mar sake
Bata mujhe abhi jakar mein usko batata hue.

Rakshas : robert sir mahakaal rohan ki
Vo aa gaya hai.
Or bohot gusse mein hai unhone mayasur ko kuch bolne se hii pehle chir phad diya or usse bhi unka mann nahi bhara to mayasur ki garden pakar kar ukhar di.
Pure desh 2 mein kohram macha hua hai
Aisa katle aam humne aaj tak nahi dekha.

Rohan ( behad chillate hue ) : sunainaaaaaaa



Or bas kuch hii minute mein rakshas or aasuro ki aadhi se jyada sena khatam ho jati hai.

Har taraf rakshaso ki behad dard ke sath cheeche or dard ki aawaaze aa rahi hoti hai.

Rohan itni nirdaya ( curel ) tarike se saare rakshas ko mar raha tha ki bas jaha se bhi rohan guzarta piche haddiya or sarir ke hazaro tukre dikai dete.
Pure desh 2 ki dharti khoon se red ho gai thi.

Yeh dekh robert or peter vaha se teleport hone ki kosis karte hai par koi bhi teleport nahi ho pata.

Tiger ( robert se ) : meine pehle hii tuze shamjhaya tha ki bhagja yaha se.
Magar tu nahi bhaga
Ab tuze koi nahi bacha sakta
Khud bhagwan bhi aa jae to bhi tuze koi nahi bacha sakta.
Aaj tera ant nischit hai.

Rohan bas 10 minute Mein caroro se bhi jyada rakshas or assuro ko mar deta hai.

Rohan ke sarir se nikal rahi aag ki lapto se aas pass ki saari chize jal kar rakh ho jati hai.

Or rohan puri rakshaso or assuro ki sena ka shaghaar kar deta hai

Robert peter ke pass jata hai

Or rohan ko dekhte hii robert vahi aadmara ho jata hai.

Rohan ke itne chillane ke bad bhi jab sunaina ki awaaz sunai nahi deti.

To rohan or pagal ho jata hai.
Or kisi darinde ki tarha react karne lagta hai.

Ek pal ke liye tiger or seema bhi ghabra jate hai.

Rohan ka pura sarir ab khoon se latpat hota hai.
Or aspas ki saari chize jal kar rakh ho gai hoti hai.

Har tarab tabahi ka nanga nach macha hota hai.

Nishant ki team bhi yeh khofnak nazara dekhkar bohot der jati hai.
Or unko lagne lagta hai ki aaj unko koi nahi bacha sakta or sab bhagkar tiger ke piche chup jate hai.
Tabi

Rohan jaise hii kamlesh ko dekhta hai.

Kamlesh bhagkar seema ko pakar leta hai.

Or seema ke sir par gun rakh dena hai.

Agar kamlesh chupchap mafi mang leta to shayad bach jata
Magar yeh galti karke kamlesh ne bata diya ki kutte ki doom kabi seedhi nahi hoti.

Kamlesh ( ghabrate hue ) : mujhe chor do
Nahi to mein is aaruraat ko mar duga.

Yeh sunkar rohan ki aakho se khoon behane lagta hai.

Or rohan ki neeli aakhe ek dum lal ho jati hai.

Or tabi
Kamlesh ka sarir kaam karna band kar deta hai.

Or kamesh ka sarir uske control se bahar ho jata hai.
Or khud hii us gun ko apne dil par rakhkar goli chala deta hai.
Or goli lagte hii kamlesh door jakar girta hai.
Or vaise hii rohan apni talvaar kamlesh ke pass phekta hai or vo talvar kamlesh ka dimak ko fadte hue dusri taraf se nikal jati hai.
Or dubara rohan ke pass aa jati hai.

Robert apni shaktiyo se bohot saare rakshaso ka firse nirman karne lagta hai.

Yeh dekh rohan ka gussa or badhakne  lagta hai

Or rohan
Apna hand upar karta hai jisee asman me kadak rahi bijali rohan ke talvar mein ghusne lagti hai.

Iske baad rohan is talvar ko tezz ki jamin par marta hai
Jisse puri dharti mein halkar sa bhukamp aa jata hai.

Jiise sab log gir jate hai
Rohan talvar phekar robert ke dono hand kaat deta hai.
Or hand katte hii robert bohot tezz chikne lagta hai.

Rohan fir se tezz ki chillate hue

Rohan : sunainaaaaa


Tabi door se sunaina dard se tadapti hue awaaz deti hai.

Sunaina : rohaaaan

Or rohan ki nazar jaise hii sunaina par padti hai
Rohan ka dil dehal jata hai
Sunaina ki aisi halat dekhkar cheekhne lagta hai.

Roham ko to sunaina ke sarir se nikla hua ek boond khoon bhi bardasd nahi hota tha magar yaha to sunaina dard se cheekh rahi thi.
Sunaina ke shoulder se khoon beh raha tha.

Yeh dekh rohan ro padta hai.
Rohan ko aisa lagta hai ki kisi ne uska dil nikal kar kahi fel diya ho.
Or rohan ke sarir ki atma bhi kaap jati hai.
Sunaina ko dard mein dekhkar.

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Fir rohan pater or robert ki taraf dekhta hai
Jisse dono ki fad kar char ho jati hai
Dono admare to pehle hii the ab puri tarha marne wale the.

Or peter rohan ko aisa dekhkar khud hii apna gala cur karke khatam ho jata hai.
Kiuki peter rohan ke hatho kisi kutte ki mout nahi marna chahate tha.

Ab bas robert hii bacha tha mar vo khud mar bhi nahi sakta tha.
Kiuki rohan ne uske dono hath jo cut kar diye the.

Tabi rohan uspar ki taraf dekhta hai or upar se ek tezz bijali nikal kar robat par girti hai
Jisse robert pal bhar mein hii ek jhtkar ke sath khatam ho jata hai.

Fir
Rohan nishant ki taraf dekhta hai.

Jisse nishant ki bhi fad jati hai
Or tiger se chipakar bolta hai.

Nishant : bhagwaan aaj bacha lee
Agar aaj mein bach gaya to rozz teri puja karuga or tuesday parsad bhi chadauga.

Seema : rohan beta

Or rohan ka sarir ek dam shant par jata hai
Or rohan seema se

Rohan ( seema se ) : masi abhi aapko jana hoga sab apka intzaar kar rahe hoge.
Or mein kuch dino ke baad aauga.
Jab tak apko sab ko shamjana hoga.
Rahul ki bhano ko bhi shamajana hoga.
Kiuki mein kuch din vaha nahi houga.

Or seema kuch bolne wali hoti hai tabi
Rohan seema ko teleport karke sonam ke ghar bhej deta hai.

Rohan ( tiger se ) : in sab ko ghar bhej do or sunaina ko mere bangle mein hii le jana or vahi rehna


Tiger : jii malikk

Or rohan bhagkar sunaina ke god mein apna sir rakh deta hai.

Rohan sunaina ke shoulder par hand rakhta hai or rohan ke hand se ek tezz roshni nikalti hai

Or sunaina ke shoulder me ghusne lagti hai.
Jisse sunaina ka beh raha khoon dubara sunaina ke sarir mein ghusne lagta hai or thode der mein pura ghab bhar jata hai.
Or kuch minute mein sunaina thik ho jati hai.

Sunaina rohan ko dekhti hue aakho mein aashu liye bolti hai.

Sunaina ( rohan se =) : kaha chale gaye the tum
Apni sunaina ka chor kar
Pata hai mera kya haal tha tumare bina
Kitna tarpi hue or kitna tarsi hue mein pata bhi hai tume.

Rohan bas sunaina ko bas pyaar se ghoor ghoor kar dekhta rehta hai.

Sunaina : aab bologe bhi

Rohan : kya bolu tumara chehra ( face ) itna masoon or pyaara hai ki mein tume dekhte hii sab bhul jata hue.

Sunaina rohan ke hair sehlate hue.

Sunaina ( bacho sa massom face banate hue ): kya tume meri kabi yaad nahi aae.

Rohan (nam aakho se) : tumare pass to mera locket hai par mere pass to vo bhi nahi tha.
Jisee mein tumse baat kar saku tume yaad kar saku.

Sunaina ( rote hue ) : ,ab  nahi hai tumara vo locket mere pass

Rohan : tum kabi us locket ko fek sakti ho

Sunaina shocked hokar

Sunaina : kya matlab

Rohan ( pyaar se ) : matlab yeh ki vo locket roma ke pass hai jakar le lena usse

Sunaina : kyaaa
Par meine to usse fek diya tha.

Rohan : haa
Magar tumne us locket ko feka to us locket ko roma ne uta liya tha.
Ab mujhe jana hoga sunaina.

Yeh baat sunkar sunaina dubara ghabra jati hai.

Sunaina rohan ko kas kar apne gale lagate hue.

Sunaina : nahi ab tum kahi nahi jaoge mein tume kahi nahi jane dugi.
Kya tum mujhe fir se tadapta hua chor sakte ho.

Rohan : kya tume aisa lagta hai ki
Me tume kabi chor sakta hue.

Sunaina : kabi nahi
Fir tumne mujhe chorkar jane ki baat kiu kahi. (Yeh baat sunaina ne masoom se sakal banakar kahi.

Rohan sunaina se alag hokar vapas apna sir sunaina ki god mein rakhkar

Rohan ( rote hue ) : tum jitna tadpi ho usse jyada mein tadpa hue tumare liye.

Sunaina : fir tum jana kiu chahate ho.

Rohan : jana padega sunaina hum vidhi ka vidhan nahi badal sakte
Magar mein vada karta hue ki jald hii vapas aauga tumare pass.

Sunaina : nahi rohan mein tume nahi jane de sakti.

Tabi rohan ka dheere dheere sarir gayab hone lagta hai.

Rohan : mein jaldi aauga sunaina

Sunaina : mat jao na rohan please.

Rohan : acha pata hai mein tumse kitna pyaar karta hue.

Sunaina : kitna

Rohan ek gana gate hue bolta hai

Rohan :

Main Duniya Bhula Dunga Teri Chahat Mein
Main Duniya Bhula Dunga Teri Chahat Mein
O Dushman Zamaana Mujhe Na Bhulaana
Main Khud Ko Mitaa Dunga Teri Chahat Mein
Main Duniya Bhula Dungi, Teri Chahat Mein
Main Duniya Bhula Dungi Teri Chahat Mein
Tera Sath Chhoota Ye Vaada Jo Toota
Main Khud Ko Mitaa Dungi Teri Chahat Mein
Main Duniya Bhula Dunga Teri Chahat Mein...
Meri Saansein Teri Khushboo
Mere Dil Mein Teri Dhadakan
Meri Mehfil Teri Baatein
Meri Aankhein Tere Darpan
Bin Tere Kuch Bhi Nahin Main
Bin Tere Kuch Bhi Nahin Main
Main Har Gum Utha Lungi Teri Chahat Mein...
Tera Sath Chhoota Ye Vaadaa Jo Toota
Main Khud Ko Mitaa Dungi Teri Chahat Mein
Main Duniya Bhula Dunga Teri Chahat Mein...
Seene Se Lag Jaa Tu Main Hoon Tera Dewaana
Mujhe Tujhse Milne Se Rokega Kya Zamaana
Chhorrungaa Na Saath Tera
Chhorrungaa Na Saath Teraa...
Main Sab Kuch Loota Dunga Teri Chahat Mein...
O Dushman Zamaana Mujhe Na Bhulana
Main Khud Ko Mitaa Dunga Teri Chahat Mein
Main Duniya Bhula Dungi Teri Chahat Mein
Tera Saath Chhoota Ye Vaada Jo Toota
Main Khud Ko Mitaa Dungi Teri Chahat Mein
Main Duniya Bhula Dunga Teri Chahat Mein
Teri Chahat Mein Haan Teri Chahat Mein...

Or isse ke sath rohan ka sarir puri tarha se gayab ho jata hai.

Sunaina : mein bhi duniya bhula dugi rohan
Tumare pyaar mein mein bhi khud ko mita dugi rohan tumare pyaar mein
Tumare seva or koi nahi hoga rohan is dil mein
Tumari aakhe hii to mera darpan hai rohan
Tumare bina mera kuch nahi hai.

Or aise hii sunaina khoi huye hoti hai
Tabi tiger bolta hai.

Tiger : mata ab hume yaha se nikalna chahiye.

Or sunaina haa mein sir hila deti hai.

Or kuch samay mein sab log teleport hokar apne desh apni mitthi india mein aa jate hai.
Or seedha rohan ke mehal ke shahar 2 wale ghar pohoch jate hai.


Now end of pyaar ki had par - family loves forever ka chapter 1

Next update se chapter 2 shuru hoga jisme
Chapter 2 : rahul ka mahakaal se samna , mahakaal ka raaz , rohan sach aakhir rohan khon hai , sunaina or rohan ka love affection , sunaina hacking continue , entry of kaal , sunaina ke locket ka raaz continue , entry of bhagwaan lok , rahul ka business , or end of 22 saal flashback update 1 ka , rahul or sunaina ke janam ki story , 

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Is update ko banane me pure 6 ghante ka samay laga hai.

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Or aaj hii time nikal kar update de diya.

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(22-04-2019, 08:14 AM)Rani Wrote:  Nice story age lekho

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(22-04-2019, 05:47 PM)Raj355407 Wrote:  ab ye dekhana hai ki kya rohan ko yaad rahata hai ki sunaina ki jaan bachaya hai ya nahi......
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(22-04-2019, 06:03 PM)Rani Wrote:  Next part

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(22-04-2019, 08:03 PM)sexxy neha Wrote:  Super Update Dude....Keep it up....??

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(24-04-2019, 03:16 PM)Raj355407 Wrote:  update ka intazaar hai

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Bhai chapter 2 start karne se phle mein apse yeh bolna chahatu ki 



prastut kahaanee ke sabhee paatr evan ghatanaakram kaalpanik hai. yadi kisee paatr aur ghatana ka kisee bhee prakaar se kisee vaastavikata se sambandh paaya jaata hai to ise maatr ek sanyog kaha jaayega. is kahaanee ke maadhyam se mera ek lekhak ke taur par kisee jaati , dharm ya sampradaay kee bhaavanaon ko thes pahunchaane ka koee uddeshy nahin hai apitu is kahaanee ke maadhyam se main ek lekhak ke taur par aap sabhee paathakon ka apanee kahaanee ke maadhyam se manoranjan karane kee mansha rakhata hoon.


Meine jo bhi khanani ya desh ka jikar karuga isme koi bhi chiz sach nahi hai

To please aap sab kisi bhi baat ko kisi personally desh ya kisi dharam se na jore

Yeh sab bas apka manoranjan ko maza lene ke liye dikhaya ja raha hai.

So please is kahani mein kisi bhi baat ko personally mat rehna.

Aisa meine isliye kaha hai ki kisi bhi readers ko aisa na lage ki koi unpar ya kisi bhi tarha se kisi bhi desh par personally comment kar raha hai.


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Update 44


Pyaar ki had paar ka Chapter 2

Sabhi log teleport hokar apne desh apni mithi india mein aa jate hai.

Vahi
Jaha desh 2 ki vo jagah jaha kartle aam macha tha or vaha ka nazara jo itna bhayanak tha
Vo pura change ho jata hai achanak se
Rohan or sunaina ke jate hii
Pura desh 2 un rakshasho ki gulami or atyachar se azad ho jata hai.
Pure desh 2 mein khusiya cha jati hai or saare rakshas or assuro ki died body achanak vaha se gayab ho jati hai.
Or us jagah ki sundarta aisi ho jati hai ki koi ek baar dekh le to dekhta hii le jaye
Rohan or sunaina ki kuch der ki pyaar bhari baato se vaha ki hawao mein bhi sachai , pyaar or vishwaas ka sanchar ho jata hai.
Or vo jagah kisi jannat ki tarha ban jati hai.

Desh 2 or kisi bhi desh ke logo ko kuch pata nahi chalta ki yeh kese hua
Or us jagah par kya hua tha
Bas desh 2 ki janta ko yeh pata hota hai ki mahakaal ne un sab ko is dukh or takleef se  azaadi dilai hai
Jisse desh 2 ki janta pata nahi kitne saalo se un takleef me thi.

Vahi
Jaise hii sunaina shaher 2 ke rahul ke banaye hue  bangle par pohochi hai .
Tabi

Nishant ( rote hue ) : mein apne bete ko nahi bacha paya mujhe iska dukh hai.

Or sahil ki yaad ate hii sunaina ke aakho mein bhi pani aa jata hai.

Sunaina ( nishant se rote hue ) : yeh sab mere bajase hua hai uncle
Meine apna ek sacha dost kho diya.

Tabi
Tiger ( nishant se ) : apka beta sahil zinda hai uncle.

Sunaina nishant shocked hoker

Nishant : kaha hai mera beta.

Sunaina : kaha hai sahil

Tiger : unka abhi ilaaz chal raha hai.
Kuch time ke baad bilkul thik hokar sahil apke samne hoga.

Sunaina : sahil ko kisne bachaya.

Tiger ( sunaina se ) : malik ne ( rohan )
Malikk ( rohan ) kabi bhi apke kisi bhi dost ya parivaar ko kuch nahi hone de sakte.
Aapki liye to ek baar rohan bhawan mahadev se bhi lad gaye the.
To yeh ya chiz hai.
Apke pyaar ke liye rohan kuch bhi kar sakta hai mata ( sunaina )
Jaha tak ki jaan bhi de sakte hai.

Sunaina tiger ke muh par hand rakte hue


Sunaina ( nam aakho se ) : kabi rohan ke bare me jaan dene ki baat galti se bhi mat karna.

Tiger sir jhukate hue

Tiger ( sunaina se ) : maaf karna mata

Nishant ( rote hue ) : khon se hospital mein hai sahil mujhe jaldi btao

Tiger : .............. Hospital mein hai.

Or nishant ki team jaise hii murti hai
Tabi
Tiger nishant ke saare team valo ki yaad bhula deta hai
Vaha kya hua tha.
Bas nishant ki team ko yeh pata rehta hai ki sahil hospital mein hai or uski jaan mahakaal ne bachai hai.

Sunaina yeh baat shamaj jati hai ki tiger ne unki yaad bhula di hai.

Sunaina : tumne aisa kiu kiya tiger

Tiger : mata yeh karna jaruri tha agar mein aisa nahi karta to  nishant or uski team us der or khof mein jiti rehti ki vaha yeh sab kese hua.

Sunaina : thik hai .

Tabi sunaina samne dekhti hai to dekhti hii reh jati hai.

Sunaina ek bohot bade farm house ke samne khadi hoti hai.

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : mujhe bhi sahil ko dekhne jana chahiye.

Tiger : mata kal chali jana sahil abhi thik hai.
Abhi apko apne mom dad se milna chahiye.

Sunaina haa mein garden hila deti hai.

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : yeh kiska  farmhouse hai or tum mujhe yaha kiu laye ho .
Or yeh yaha itne guard kiu hai .
Or yaha koi bada aadmi rehta hai kya
Jisse milvane tum yaha mujhe laye ho.

Iske aage sunaina kuch bol pati sunaina dekhti hai ki samne se roma us farmhouse se nikal rahi hai.

Or yeh dekh sunaina shocked ho jati hai.

Sunaina ( roma se ) : roma tu yaha rehti hai.
Tumne kabi mujhe bataya nahi
Bohot hii khubsurat ghar hai
Lagta hai tu bohot ameer hai.

Roma : tu pagal ho gai hai mera kaha aisa ghar ho sakta hai.
Yeh to tera ghar hai.

Is baat par fir sunaina ko ek jhatka lagta hai.

Sunaina : kyaaaa.

Roma : haaaa

Sunaina : magar mera ghar to bomb ke dhamake mein ud gaya tha na.

Roma ( apni aakhe gol gol ghumate hue ) : ,tera  ghar  udd to gaya tha magar lagta hai tere is locket ko vo utna chota sa ghar pasand nahi aya tha isliye isne tere liye yeh mehal bana diya jisse tu aram se reh sake or maze kar sake or kabi tuze koi takleef na pohoche ( yeh baat roma ne apne pocket se vo locket nikalte hue kaha )

Or jaise hii roma apni pocket se vo locket nikalti hai vaise hii vo locket roma ka hand jhatak kar dubara sunaina ke gale mein apne aap chala jata hai.

Roma ( gusse me ) : ,bada  hii bekar hai yeh locket tuze dekhte hii mera hand jhatak diya.
Or tere gale mein apne aap chala gaya .
Mein khonsa isko apne pass rakhne wali thi .
Jo isne mera hand jhatak diya

Is baat par sunaina hasne lagti hai

Sunaina : roma yeh locket bekar nahi hai.
Bas mujhse kuch jyada hii pyaar karta hai.
Or nakhre bhi mujhse hii kuch jyada karta hai.
Shayad yeh itne ghante mujhse door raha hai na isliye isne aisa kiya hoga.

Roma ( udas hokar ) : haa bhai jab premi ke samne uski premika ho to aisa hii hota hai.
Bhale hii locket ke roop mein ho.
Kash mujhe bhi itna chahane or pyaar karne wala mil jata to maza aa jata.

Vahi tiger roma ko dekhkar ussi mein kho jata hai.
Or tiger ke dil ki ghantiya bajne lagti hai.

Or roma ko dekhkar tiger ko ek awaaz sunai dene lagti hai.

Dil hai ki manta nahi pehli nazar mein pyaar ho gaya hai magar vo hai ki pehchanti nahi.

Tabi roma ki nazar tiger par padti hai.

Roma : yeh khon hai kahi yeh rohan jiju to nahi bohot hii handsome lag raha hai.

Roma tiger ke khande par hand rakhte hai.

Tabi tiger ka dil tezz tezz dhadakne lagta hai.
Fir tiger ko ek awaaz sunai deti hai.

Pehla pehla pyaar hai pehli pehli baar hai.

Roma ( tiger se ) : to mere handsome jiju apko hamari dost kesi lagi.

Tiger roma ko dekhte hue

Tiger : bohot hii achi
Aaj tak humne aisi achi ladki nahi dekhi.

Roma : vo to hai.
Par apko yeh itni asani se nahi melegi.

Tiger : vo to mujhe pata hai.

Roma ( nakhre karte hue ) : bohot papad belne hoge tume hamari dost ko dubara apna banane mein.

Tiger puri tarha roma mein khoya hua.

Tiger : papad belne ki kya jaruraat hai mein abhi apko bohot saree papad de deta hu.

Or tiger apne jadu se ek bori bhar kar papad piche se nikal kar roma ko de deta hai.

Roma ( ghoorte hue ) : bohot tezz ho aap
Sara intzaam kar rakha hai.

Tiger : apse jyada smart nahi hu.

Roma ( itrate hue ) : vo to hai.

Tabi
Sunaina tiger ko dekhti hai roma mein khoye hue

Sunaina ( mann me ) : lagta hai yeh tiger roma ko dekhkar flat ho gaya hai.

Sunaina tiger ko hilate hue.

Sunaina ( haste hue) : tiger yeh ( roma ) mere or rohan ki baat kar rahi hai.

Tiger fir bhi khoya hua

Tiger ( sunaina se ) : par mata mein to inki ( roma ) ki baat kar raha hue.

Roma jaise hii sunaina ke muhse tiger naam sunti hai to tiger se door ho jati hai.

Roma ( sunaina se ) : yeh rohan nahi hai.

Sunaina : nahi roma yeh rohan nahi hai.

Roma ( haklate hue ) : fir khon hai.

Tabi tiger apna hand age badate hue.

Tiger ( roma se ) : nice too meet you roma
My name is tiger.

Roma ( mann me ) : yeh to mere par line mar raha hai.

Fir roma ne tiger ko


Chota update but kal ke baad aaj bhi update de diya

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(26-04-2019, 10:59 AM)sexxy neha Wrote:  Roma ki Bhi love Story start.....keep it up....

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Update 45


Roma ( mann me ) : yeh to mere par line mar raha hai.

Fir roma ne tiger ko

Ab aageee.........
Roma azzeb bhaw se tiger ko dekhti hue jhooti hasi ke sath tiger se hand milati hae

Roma : nice to meet u

Sunaina : roma tune bataya nahi yeh locket tere pass kese aya meine to usko fek diya tha.
Or tu is mahel mein kese pohochi.

Roma ( itrate hue ) : jab tune is nakrebaaz locket ko fek diya tha.
To meine is locket ko uta liya tha.
Mujhe pata tha ki tu abhi gusse mein hai.
Baad me mera locket kaha gaya bolti firegi
Isliye meine is locket ko uta liya tha.

Sunaina : vo to mujhe pata hai mujhe yeh bata ki tu yaha kese pohochi.

Roma : is locket ke bajase
Jab tune mujhe apne mom dad ka pata lagane ke liye kaha tha.
To meine socha tu bohot tarif karti hai is locket ki to meine socha ek baar puch lu is locket se.
Shayad meri baad sun le or vo khatarnak wala jhatka na de.
Or mere jaise hi is locket se pucha janab ne mujhe vaha se gayab karke yaha is mahel mein pohocha diya.

Sunaina : acha
Magar mere mom or dad us dhamake se kese bache.

Roma : vo sab mujhe nahi pata.
Yeh tume locket hii bataye ga.
Or abhi tumare mom dad so rahe hoge shayad.
Meine jab tumare mom dad ko dekha tha to tumare mom and dad thode pareshan the tume lekar ki sunaina abhi tak kiu nahi aae.
To meine bol diya ki sunaina vahi party se apni ek friend ke pass rukh gai hai.
Subha tak vapas aa jaegi.

Sunaina : magar tume kese pata ki mein subha rak vapas aa jaugi.

Roma : kabi kabi yeh locket bhi mujhe kuch kuch bata deta hai.
Jab tum uske sath asi harkat karti ho.
Yeh locket janab to future bhi dekh lete hai.

Roma : pata bhi hai jitne ghante tum isse door rahi bichara rota raha.
Or us locket se pani nikalta raha.
Bohot shamjaya meine isko magar fir bhi rota raha.

Sunaina locket ko tezz tezz chumte hue.

Sunaina ( locket se ) : itna pyaar karte ho mujhse.
Ab kabi mein galti se bhi aisa nahi karugi.
Ek baar maaf kardo.

Or fir locket thoda chamkta hai fir chamakna band ho jata hai.

Roma : vaise tumne bataya nahi ki yeh tiger tumare sath kese.
Or yeh khon hai tumara.

Sunaina : yeh mera door ka bhai hai.
Bachpan mein iske sath bohot masti karti thi.
Fir mujhe kese karan jana pada
Ab dubara yeh vapas aa gaya.

Tabi tiger kuch bolne wala hota hai to sunaina tiger ko chup rehne ka ishara karti hai.

Roma : acha bhai hai tumara .
Acha sunaina mein chalti hu.
Mummy pareshan ho rahi hogi.
Kiuki meine bola tha ki mein raat me sunaina ke sath uske ghar rukugi.
Magar ab to dohper hone wali hai.
Meri mummy tension kar rahi hogi.
Ab college bhi start hone wala hai to uski bhi thodi tyaari karni hai.

Roma bye karte hue.

Roma : acha sunaina chal byee.
Or tiger jii apko bhi.

Tiger ( mann me ) : , haye kitna piyara jii bola hai
Mein to khayal hii ho gaya.

Or roma vaha se chali jati hai.

Sunaina tiger ko dubara hilate hue.

Sunaina : ,ab  vo chali gayi hai janab ab dekhna band karo.

Tiger harbarate hue.

Tiger ( niche garden karte hue ) : nahi mata mein us ladki ko nahi dekh raha tha.

Sunaina ko us harkat par or aise piyare jhoot par hasi aa jati hai.

Sunaina ( haste hue ) : acha thik hai.
Vaise tum mujhe mata kiu bolte ho.

Tiger : iske piche bohot badi kahani hai.

Sunaina : vo kahani bad mein batana
Or yeh dharti lok hai.
Yaha mujhe mere naam se bulaya karo.

Tiger : mata yeh nahi ho sakta .

Sunaina : kiu nahi ho sakta.

Is baat par tiger apni garden niche kar leta hai.

Sunaina : acha thik hai to tum mujhe sister bulaya karo.

Tiger : vo kya hota hai mata.

Sunaina ( gusse me ) : fir mata.

Tiger : maaf karna sister
Magar yeh hota kya hai.

Sunaina ( ghoorte hue ) : abhi to tum bohot english jhar rahe the.
Us ladki ke samne or tume sister ka matlab nahi pata.

Tiger apna sir ghujate hue.

Tiger : sister vo to bas apne aap hii muh se nikal gaya tha.

Sunaina ( haste hue ) : acha thik hai.
Mujhe pata hai tumari feeling.
Vaise sister ko hindi mein bhan bolte hai.
Ab yeh to bol sakte ho na.

Tiger : magar

Sunaina ( gusse me ) : ab isme problem kya hai.

Tiger : koi problem nahi hai.
Thik hai mein apko sister bulauga.

Sunaina tiger ki peeth thap thapate hue.

Sunaina : good boy.

Sunaina : acha tiger mere mom dad bache kese
Us dhamake se

Tiger : yeh baat apko yeh locket bata dega sister
Aap isse se puch lo

Sunaina : acha tume pata hai is locket mein kya hai.

Tiger ( anjan bante hue ) : nahi sister mujhe nahi pata.

Sunaina ( tiger ko ghoorte hue ) : jhooth mat bolo tiger.
Tume pata hai.

Tiger ( udas man se ) : magar sister me apko nahi bata sakta.
Vo sirf malikk ( rohan ) hii bta sakte hai.

Sunaina : kiu

Tiger : kiuki mein vo baat tak batane mein shaksham nahi hu.

Sunaina : kiu shaksham nahi ho.

Tiger : vo to mujhe bhi nahi pata.

Sunaina : acha thik hai.
Lagta hai suspence mein hii jina hoga abhi.

Fir sunaina apni ek eye brow upar karke locket se puchti hai.

Flashback
Sunaina ke mom dad yaha kese aae.



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