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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)
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Hii friends 
This is my new story Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)  Smile
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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Update 1
Mega update 

Ak river main larka (behosh) behta hua jaa raha hai. Kabhi kese pather (chattan) sey takrata hay to kabhi dusre pathar (chattan) se jism par zakham hai. Or khoon beh raha hai.
22 saal pehly flashback

Ik aurat hafty huay apny 2 jurwa bacho ko utha kar bhag rahi thi or apne bacho se kuch bol rahi thi...

Us Kay pichy ek shaks hota hai Jo us aurat or bache Marne ka prayas karta h ( us shaks ka sharir ek alag tarha ka hota hai Jo kisi janwar se shakal ki tarha lagta hair.)

Wo aurat pull (bridge) Kay upar sey guzar rahi this ( bridge jis kay niche say highway guzarta hey).
Achanak us ka paoun ik pathar sey takraya jis se ik bacha hath (hand) se nikal kar gir gaya aur us pull (bridge) se niche ja gira.

Or Aurat zamin par giri jaldi se khud ko sambala or apne ek bache ko utha lia or us pull (bridge) niche dekhne lagi...

Lekin bacha kahi nahi dikha.
Bacha nazar Na aya yeah dekh Kar wo rony lagi...
Achanak kisi ki awaz aai..
Shaks: ab kha bhag Kar jaigi tu me ek ak aasur hu or tu ek insan Mujse bach nahi sakti.
Or vo aasur jor se hasne lagta hair.
Hahahahahha
Or vo apne ( hand) me ek aag (fire) ka gola banata hai.
Or us aurat ki taraf fekta hai.
Yean dekh (see) kar aurat dar Kar phir se mahakaal ( bhagwaan shiv) ka naam lekar bhagny lage 
Aaurat (bagte hue man me ) : prabhu aap meri etni pariksha kiu le rahe aapki kirpa see mujhe bohot bohot pariksha Dane k baad apne mujhe ye bache diye hai.
Or bhi aap mujhse chinlena chahate ho 
Meri madad karo prabhu mere bache ko bacho us assur se yeh kehte hue us aurat ke eyes me sadhu(tears) a jate h.
Tabhi ek car agge se aati hui Nazar aai car main kreeb 40 saal ki ek auraat or 50 saal ka ek aadmi hota hai.
Jab us admi or aurat ne yeah manzar deikha to unki rooh kaap gai..
Or foran apni car ko whi sey mor lia 
( Edhaar me car me baithi (sit ) auraat ko aurat 2 kahuga )
Admi : beti jaldi sey car main aaa know.
Aurat car ke pass aai too pechy se vo aag (fire) ka gola us auraat ke ja laga jisse uske muh se aaaaaah nikal jati h
Jisse vo bacha us aaurat se nikal kar auraat 2 ke pass ja gira
Aurat us admi se : mera bacha mushkil me hai. Par plzz mare bachy ko bacha lijiye me pehle hi apni bachi ko kho c. Chuki hu... Aaah...( Bhari awaz me sans ubri hue) or vo niche gir jati hai.
Auraat man me : prabhu Etni mushibato ka samna karne ke baad bhi aap meri bache ko bacha nahi sakte aap hii ne kha tha. Ki mere bache ka janam logo ki bhalai ke liye hua hai.
Meri madad nahi ki to Sab logo ka bhagwaan par se vishwaas uth jaega.
Aap nahi aaa sakte te mere bache ko bachane k liye kisi ko bhejiye prabhu)

( Ek maa ka dil bhi esha hota h ki etna shakti shali aag ka gola lagne k baad bhi apne bache ko bachane ke liye us dard ko bhi jhelne ki taqaat aa jati h apne dard ko bhul Kar apne bache k bareme soch ti hai) 
Or car me baithe vo auraat 2 or admi gabra jate hai.
Or shayad us bache bhi vo dard ka abhas ho gaya or vo bacha bhi jor jor se rone lagta hai.
Us bache k rone me etni dard tha ki bhagwaan ko bhi shayad us par daya aa gayi or unka dil bhi rone laga.
Jiske karan asmaan me bhi garajna chalu Kar diya or bohot tezz barish hone lagi..

Tabhi vo aasur car ke pass a jata or or kuch mantar parke aag ka gola us car ki Taraf fekta hai.

Tabi vaha koi a jata hai. Or vo us aag ke gole ko ..........
...........
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Update 2

Tabi vaha koi a jata hai. Or vo us aag ke gole ko apni Shakti se rok leta hai.

Aasur : tu mujse ladne aya hai...
     Hahahahahahahaha
Or vo aasur bohot se aag ke gole fekta hai.
Jisse bachne k liye vo shaks apni shakti se ek kawaj (shield) Charo or  teyar karta h. Or usse rokne ki kosis karta  h.
(Vese lagta h ye aasur haqatwar to h magar dimak nahi tezz barish me aag ka gola kya karega )

kear tezz barish me aag ke gole ka asar us shield par koi jyada nahi padta

Shaks (car me us aadmi or auraat de) : aap is bache ko lekar yaha se chale jaaiye. Mere me itni shakti nahi h. Ki me usse jada der tak rok saku.
Auraat 2 : (us shaks see) hame us aurat ko bhi utha kar le jana chahiye..

Shaks (us auraat se ) : tum unki fikar mat karo
Me jyada der tak us aasur ko rok nahi pauga.
Or vo aasur dekhta hai. Ki aag ke gole ka koi asar us kawaj (shield) par nahi ho raha.h
To vo kuch mantar padne lagta hai. Or ek Katar ka Nirmaan karta hai. Or vo katar us kawaj (shield) ki or fekta hai.

Jab tak vo admi car lekar vaha se chala jata hai.

Dusri taraf..............


Ek admi apni pregnent biwi ko hospital ley kar jaa raha tha (Jeep main). Biwi agy wali seat par baithi kraaaah rahi thi admi apni biwi ko samjha reha tha.

Admi : hasla rakho meri Jaan hum abhi thodi dair main pahuch jayege.

Achanak pul Kay niche se guzarty huay admi ki Jeep ko jhatka laga us ko ehsaas hau koi chez niche giri h. Jeep main us ney piche daikha to back seat par kuch tha kapry main lapita. Par admi ko jaldi thi too usne dhyan nahi dia or hospital chal diya..

Hospital main us ki biwi ko ek beti hui par wo mari (dead) hui paida hui.

Doctor ney jab yeah baat us admi ko bataya too wo rony laga.
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Admi ko dar tha kay ager us ki biwi ko ye baat pata chali ki uski bachi mar gai hai.
To usey bohot dukh hoga

Wo sochta hai kahi wo apni biwi ko kho na dey.

Admi (maan me) : hey bhagwan me apni biwi ko kya batauga ki uski beti mari (dead) paida hue hai. Vo to jeete ji mar jaegi bhagwaan meri madad karo us se shakti dena  is dukh se nikalne me.

Medical store sey madicines leny jesy hiii jeep main baitha too kisi bachy kay rony ki awaz aai (uske rone me etna dard tha ki )

Jab jeep me pichi seat par daikha too usi kapry main koi bacha tha.

Us ney jaldi sey kapra hataya too andar ek behad khubsuraat choti se bachi thi. Jisy daikh uss admi ki akho me aashu (tears) ane lage yeah too...........

Us ney usy siny se laga lia....(bachi kay galy main ek locket tha)
Us ney us bachi ko apnane ka faisla kia or usy apni biwi ki goud  main dal diya.

(Uski biwi bohot Kush thi uss ney apni biwi ko pata nahi chalne dia kay yeah uss ki beti nahi hair)..

17 years later.........................
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Aab Bhai yaha par char jagah ka jikar hoga


  1. Pehla dharti me reh rahe insaan jis jagah ko me (dharti lok ) kahuga

  2. Dusra patal yaha aasur rehte hai.. ....jis jagah ko me (patal lok ) kahuga

  3. Tishri jaha hamare hero ka jaha dharti se pehle janam hua tha magar kisi karan vash use dubara punar janam lena pada us jagah ko me (raaj log ) kahuga..............
  1. Or jaha bhagwaan rehte h us jagah ko (bhagwaan lok) kahuga.
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Patal lok characters
Is lok me main 5 aasur hai. Or ek aasur guru hai.
Baki uski sena (soldiers) vahera hai.
Ab chalte hai. Introduction ke taraf
  1. Aasurraj ( ye Patal lok ka raja hai.). Maha shaktishali jiski shakti ki koi seema (ye koi ladki nahi hai.) Maha vidvansh Kari.

  2. Aasur danva ( ye aasurraj ka dusra Bhai hai.)

  3. Aasur kamasur ( ye aasurraj ka tisra Bhai hai )

  4. Aasur kutra (ye aasurraj ka 4 bhai hair.
Prerna ( ye Charo Bhai ki ekloti bhai hai. In pacho ko kuch vardan prapt hai. Vo samay ane par pata chal jaega.....

Or ek aasurguru 
Bhai characters koi shamaj Na aae ho to bta Dena......
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Update 3


Chalo ab chalte hai. Patal lok ki taraf

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( Bhai muje nahi pata ki patal lok ki ladkiyo ko kya kaha jata hai isliye me unhe ladki hii kahuga )

Yaha karib 30 ladkiya hoti hai. Or ek shaks un sabi ladkiyo ko ek ek karke chod (fucking) raha hota hai.

Ladkiya bohot bebas hoti hai.
Chor ki bhik magti hi. Par vo nirdayi shaks un ko kutiya ki tarha chod (fucking ) kar raha hota hai.
Ladkiya bebas hokar bas chilla rahi hoti hai.  Aaaaaah.. hame chor do
Aaaaaaah..... Hame chor do
Magar vo shaks koi reham nahi karta or jor jor se chor (fucking) kar raha hota hai.

Shaks : .Teri chut se to jyda teri gand maza deti hai.
Kitni saari ladki ko choda (fucking) ki par har ladki ki gand or chut me alag hiiii maza ata hai..
Mera land khus ho jata hai.

Vo ladkiya dard me bohot chillati hai.
Un sab ladkiya ki chut or gand phad raha hota hai.
Or unki phati gand or chut par bhi koi reham nahi karta......
Unki boobs (chuchiya) noch noch kar ek ek karke bohot dabata hai
Or unki boobs par lal (red) nishan par jate hai.
Magar vo bereham
Kabi kisi ki gand me land (penis) dalta hai to kabi kisi ki chut (pussy) me....

Chaaro taraf un ladkiyo ki chut (pussy) or gand se khoon nikal raha hota hai....
Or pure kaksh (kamre) me dard se chikne ki awazz Aaa rahi hoti hai....
Aaaaah. aaaaaaah.
Jise sunkar vo shaks tezz tezz hass raha hota hai........
Or tezz chillao or tezz chillao
Hahahahahhahahah
Kabi ulta karke chodta (fucking) hair..
To kabi ghodi banake to kabi khada hokar un ladkiyo ko apne god me uta leta hai.
Or apna land (penis) daal chut phad raha hota hai...




Tabi vaha achanak koi aa jata hai or bolta hai...........



Kamasur tum ye kya kar rahe ho..
Kamasur : aao bhai aao iski
                   Inki gand faro kabi chut pahdo magar me kaam ( work) me vign (pareshani) mat dalo
Inki gand deti hai maza yahi hai inki saza tum bhi aakar tum bhi aakar phado in sab ki gand or chut ko yahi hai inki saza.......
Hahahahahhahahah
Aasurraj. : Tum hamare rajya ki kanya ko ase chodte rahoge to hamare lok me koi ladkiya nahi bachegi.....
Tabi
Kamasur :  to dusre lok se uta wa lege
                    Or tezz tezz hasne lagta hai...

Sath hiii aasurraj bhi hasne lagta hai...

Tabhi piche se koi ata hai or bolta hai..

Murkha (bewakoof ) ..............

Chalo ab chalte hai darti lok ki taraf ............

Ek bohot hi khubsurat ladki apne bed par so (sleep) rahi hoti hai...

Uski khubsuraat etni alag hoti hai ki koi bhi ek nazar dekh le to uska dil khayal hiii ho jaye
Etna khubsuraat saarir
Uska sarir etna gora hota hai ki koi ek nazar koi dekh le koi bhi ladka pagal ho jae or land (penis) mashalne lag jae....

Magar us ladki ne apne sarir ko kabi nihara nahi hai or agar nihaar leti to khud hiii sharam se pagal ho jati....

Kiu nahi nihara ye apko time ane par pata chal jaega....

Uski muskurahat etni katilana thi ki koi ek baar dekh le to behosh ho gaye...
Shayad ye koi sapna dekh rahi hai.
Chalo dekhte hai...

Jisse dekh kar ye etna muskura rahi hai......

Ladki bhagte hue ek ladke ko pakad ti hai
Or bolti hai..
Dubara ASi galti nahi hogi ek baar muje maaf kar do plzzzzz

Jab ko us ladke ko dekhti hai to us ladke ke aakh (eye) bohot lal (red) hai..or  uske aakh (eye) me ashu hote hai..
Shayad bohot dard hota hai uski aakh me....
Ladka : ager tum ne apne aapko dubara chot pahochaee ......
To me mar. (dead) jauga ....

Ladki  us ladke ke muh (mouth) par hath (hand) rakte hue...

Ladki : enta pyaar karte ho mujse
            Magar muje to sirf kata chuba tha...

Ladka (aakh me ashu liye ) : pyar ki koi haad nahi dard ka koi nivaran nahi hota
Chahe karlo mujpe kitne bhi jurm
Magar tume halka bhi dard dikai deta hai mera dil haazaar mout mar (dead) ho jata hai...

Jitna dard tume us kate se hua
Tumare pair (leg) se ye behata hua ek boond khun (blood) bhi mere dil ko bohot taklif deta hai..

Ladki (aakho (eye) me aashu (tears ) liye) :    ek baar muje maaf kar do agli baar me kuch bhi aisa nahi karugi plzzzz muje maaf kar do..
Etna haad to koi kisi se pyaar kese kar sakta hai...
Ladka ladki se kuch bolta hai ki achanak
Ek dusra dirshya (film type ka kuch ) ane lagta hai..

Jisme ek ladka aag (fire) me jal raha hota hai.....

Tabi .....

Us ladki ki aakh khul jati hai or us ladki ka pura jarir pasine me bhig jata hai or sath me bura sarir jal raha hota hai...

Kamre me etni garmi paida ho jati hai ki koi normaal insaan us garmi ko jhel nahi sakta ....
Or us ladki ke muhh se kisi kaa naam nikalta hai..
Or tezz tezz rone lagti hai..

Jise sun
Koi uske kamre ka gate kholta hai..
Magar kamre me etni garmi hoti ki vo kamre me nahi ja pata.........
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Update 4
                   Mega update

Or vo shaks us ladki se beti sunaina tum thik to ho na
Sunaina : ha mom me thik hu or apne ashu poch leti hai.

Rinky (mom) : kya hua beti tumne firse vahi sapna dekha kya
Or vo haaa me apna sir (head) hila deti hai .
Suresh (dad) : beta tum thik ho na din pe din ye tumare sarir me garmi badti hi ja rahi hai itni garmi kha se aai tumare sarir me
Sunaina : pata nahi Dad aisa mere sath kiu ho raha hai
Fir majak me
lagta he me kuch jyada hii hot hoti jaa rahi hu. Mom se bhi jyada
Fir sunaina hasne lagti hai.

Or sath hii sab hasne lagte hai.
Hahahahah

Or sunaina ke dad dekh te hai ki jo locket sunaina ne gale (neck) pe hai
Vo chamak raha hota hai
Or sunaina ke dad bhi sunaina ki mom ko ishara karke us locket ki chamak dikate hai.
Fir uski chamak band ho jati hai

Rinky (sunaina se) : beta mujhe lagta hai ye sab is locket ke karam (bajese) ho raha hai
Tum usko utaar kiu nahi deti

Sunaina (khoi hue kisi soch me ) : achanak se bolti hai nahi mom ye locket muje koi vada yaad dilata hai vada kya hai muje nahi pata magar kabi muje bohot pyaar bhi ata hai or kabi muje usko khone ka bhi dar lagta hai isliye me apne pyaar ko kese gale se kese utar du.
Fir dad sawal ki chadi dete hai

Dad (majak me) : beta kahi tune koi ladka to nahi passed kar liya
Beti muje pehle hii bata dena kahi uski sath bhag mat jana
 Or dad hasne lagte hai.
Hahahahha
Sunaina (bhi majak me): dad mane ek ko nahi do ko fasa rakha hai.
Or me unse behad pyaar karti hu.
Vo bhi mujse bohot pyaar karte hai.

Mom & dad ek sath :  kyaaaaaaaa

Dad : humse to ek nahi jheli jati tune do fasa rakha hai
Thoda serious hokar
Par beta ek se hii shadi karna..

Mom (dad or sunaina ko ghoorte hue) : bata beta kon hai vo or do ko fasana ka kya matlab hai.

Sunaina (pyaar se) : matlab ye hai ki mane apni mom or dad ko fasa rakha hai apne pyaar me
Sunaina dono ko ghoorte hue ....
Kiu aap dono mujse pyaar nahi karte..

Mom (pyaar see): meri pyari beti hum dono tujse bohot pyaar karte hai...

Mom majak me
Magar koi hai to jarur batana
Or mom dad se tume to baad me dekugi
Ki kitna jhelna padta hai muje.
Or mom break fast tyaar karne chali jati hai.
Dad (sunaina): beta tu muje ek din marva degi
Or haa beta tume collage nahi jana admission k liye..
Jaldi tyaar ho jao hum break fast par tumara intzaar kar rahe hai.

Or dad niche chale jati hai.
Sunaina bhi washroom chali jati hai.
Or tyaar hokar thodi der bed par let kar us locket se baat karne lagti hai.
Sunaina (locket see) : tum jo koi bhi ho bohot pareshan karte ho tum or tum jis din miloge. Us din sari pareshan ka badla lugi.
Jaha ho jaldi aa jao naa plzzzzzZ.
Plzzzzzz
Or vo locket thoda sa chamakta hai fir chamakna band ho jata hai.
Or sunaina us locket ko kiss karke haste hue niche chali jati hai.
 Mom (dad see) : hamari beti haste hue kitni achi lagti hai.
Dad (mom se) : akhir beti kiski hai
Fir asi hii bate hoti rehti hai or sunaina aakar jaaldi se khana khati hai.

Sunaina (mom& dad se) : mom late ho raha hai admission ka time nikal jaega baki ka baad me kha lugi.
Or jaldi se scooty pe baith kar collage ke liye nikal jati hai.

Jab vo college pahochti hai to college ko dekh kar hairaan ho jati hai
Or sunaina excited hokar jaldi se admissions ki line me lag jati hai. Or
Admission  ka form bhar deti hai
Admission hone ka time khatam ho jata hai.
Magar usse pehle sunaina form jama kar deti hai.
Sunaina bhar ki taraf jane hii lagti hai ki use kisi k rone (carry) ki awaaz  sunai padti hai.
Or vo us taraf dekti hai to ek ladki bohot ro (carry) rahi hoti hai.
Jab sunaina us ladki ki taraf jakar usse puchti hai
Sunaina (ladki se) : kya hua tum ro (carry) kiu kar rahi ho .
Ladki (sunaina see) : addmision ka time khatam khatam ho gaya hai ab mera admission is college me nahi hoga

Mane bohot mushkil se mom ko is college me addmission ke liye manaya tha magar ab me kya karu
Mera admission is college me nahi hoga.
Or bohot jor se rone lagti hai.

Sunaina kuch sochte lagti hai.
Fir apne phone me kuch karne lagti hai
Or sunaina us ladki se
Sunaina (ladki se) : apni detail muje do.

Ladki apni detail sunaina ko de deti hai fir 5 minute baad sunaina us ladki se

Sunaina (ladki se ) : lo tumara admission is college me ho gaya hai.
Ab rona band karo .
Ladki (sisakte hue) : mu. Muje maajaakk mat karo
Tume kyaaa acha lag raha hai. Mera majak udana..

Sunaina ( mann me) : ye ladki etni badi ho gae hai. Or ro (carry) to ase kar rahi hai jese bachi ho.
Koi to baat jarur hogi isliye ye is college me admission ke liye pagal hai.

Sunaina ( ladki se) : ye dekho admission slip isko me tumare phone me forward kar deti hu shop se print nikal waa lena..

Fir sunaina apne phone se admission slip us ladki ke phone me forward kar deti hai.
Jese hii vo ladki apne phone me admission slip dekti hai.
Uski khusi ka thikana nahi hota or khusi ke mare vo ladki sunaina ko gale laga leti hai.

Ladki (sunaina see) : yahooo mera admission is college me ho gaya
Ab me bhi is college me pad sakti hu
Sunaina (ladki see): ab to tum khus ho na vase tumne apna naam nahi bataya.

Ladki (sunaina se ) : mera naam roma hai.

Sunaina (roma se ) : vese itne sare college hai or tum is college me admission kiu lena chahati thi

Roma (soche hue ) : vo bad me bataugi pehle ye batao tumne ye sab kiya kese

Sunaina ne vo bola jisse sun kar roma shoked ho gai

Sunaina (roma see) : pure college ka sarver hack karke

Roma : kyaaaaaa

Sunaina : jyada shoked mat ho.
Roma : is college ka server hack karna bohot mushkil hai. Or tumne 5 minute me hack kardiya
Or tume dar nahi laga.

Ki kisi ko pata chal gaya to kya hoga
Or tumne ye kiu kiya me to tume janti bhi nahi.
Sunaina ( pyaar se ): kisi ki madad karne ke liye janna jaruri nahi hota muje laga ki ye jaruri hai to kar diya.
Or rahi baat darne ki to vo log muje kabi nahi pakad payege.
Tabi piche se kisi ki aawaz sunai deti hai.
Jise sunkar dono ghabra jate hai.

Ladka : muje pata chal gaya.

Sunaina (shoked hokar) : tum hamari baat sun rahe the.

Or ladka haa me sir hila deta hai.

Ladka (sunaina se) : magar tension mat lo me kisi ko kuch nahi batauga.
Vese mera naam sahil hai.

Sunaina (sahil se ) : nice to meet u sahil (azib tarha se bolti hai)

Sahil (dono see) : vese me bhi yaha par new hu kya hum dost ban sakte hai.

Sunaina (mann me) : isse dosti karni padegi nahi to kahi ye kisi ko kuch bata na de.
Bad me isse dekh lugi.
Roma (sahil se chidte  hue) : nahi hame nahi karni kisi
Tabi sunaina bolti hai.

Pehle sunaina roma ke kaan me kuch bolti hai
Fir sunaina roma se
Sunaina (roma see) : aare roma hame dosti karni chahiye sahil se muje lagta hai sahil bohot acha ladka hai.
Or hamara dost bhi
Sunaina sahil ki taraf dekhte hue haina sahil.
Sahil khus hakar haa me gardan hila deta hai.
Or teeno thodi der baat karne lagte hai.

Ki tabi
Ek manchala ladka vaha se sunaina ko ghoor kar guzar raha hota hai or sunaina ki kamar  touch karke nikal raha hota hai.

Sunaina usi time hath pakad kar ek bohot hii tezz thapad uske gaal par marti hai.

Thapad itna jor ka hota hai ki uske muh (mouth) se khoon niklne lagta hai.
Or jaha thapad pada tha vaha se  uska gaal laal (red) ho jata hai.

Sab ladke or ladki vahi shoked ho jate hai
Or khusur pusur karne lagte hai.

Or vo ladka chup chap vaha se nikal jata hai.
Tabi
 roma (sunaina see) : tuje kya jaruraat thi usse marne ki vo to bas tuje ghoor hii raha tha or side se nikal raha tha shayad galti se uska hath (hand) teri kamar me lag gaya hoga.

Sunaina (thoda gusse me roma see) : logo ki niyat me ache se janti hu.
Or rahi baat thapad ki to abhi ye muje ghoor raha tha.
Kal mera wait karega
Fir muje pareshan karega
Isliye pehle hii thapad mar dugi to kuch karne se pehle hajaar baar sochega.

Fir thoda majak
Vese bhi college me pehli baar sunaina aai hai. Kuch dhamaka to hona chahiye na

Fir ase hi baat karte hue sab apne ghr ki taraf nikal jate hai
Or jese hii college ke gate par pahochte hai
Sunaina dekhti hai ki uske scooty ka tyar panchar hai.

Sahil (sunaina se ) : lagta hai shayad kisi ne tumara tyar panchar kar diya hai.

Roma (sunaina se ) : muje lagta hai kahi ussi ladke ne to nahi kiya

Sunaina (dono see) : usko to me baad me dekh lugi magar ab me kya karu.
Sahil (sunaina se ) : tum mere sath chal sakti ho. Me tume ghar chor duga ab ye mat kehna ki me nahi jaugi akhir we are friends or tumne ne kaha tha ki logo ki madad karna acha hota hai.

Sunaina (sahil se) : mane ye kab kaha tha.

Sahil (udas hokar) : akhir we are friends na itna to ek friend kar hii sakta hai.

Sunaina (sahil se ) : thik hai chalo.

Roma dono se thik hai tum jao me bhi chali bus se apne ghar
Sunaina (roma se) : tum bus se kiu jaogi tum bhi hamare sath chalo.
Nahi to me bhi nahi jaugi sath me chalege bus se
Ye sunte hii sahil roma se
Sahil (roma se) : vase bhi mere pass car hai. Hum sab  sath chal sakte hai. Me tume bhi ghar chor duga.
Plzzzz
Roma thik hai ab chalo muje late ho raha hai.
Sunaina (sahil se ) : magar meri scooty ka kya hoga.

Sahil (sunaina se ) : tum uski fikar mat karo me kisi se bol kar scooty ghar bhijwa duga.
Fir  teeno car me baith kar college se nikal jate hai.
Raste me
Sunaina (sahil se ) : vase tumare pass car hai to tum bohot amir hoge.
Sahil (sunaina se ) : itna bhi amir nahi hu or ye car dad ki hai me leker aa gaya tha kiuki dad abhi kuch din ke liye bhar gae hai. Isliye
Roma (sahil see) :  vese tamare dad kya karte hai.

Sahil (roma se) : vo ek khufiya agency (raw) ke cheif hai
Roma acha.
Fir ase hii baat karte hue
Car red light (traffic light) par pohoch jati hai.
Ki tabi.
Ek car uske bagal me ruk jati hai.
Us car me chaar (four) log hote hai .

Ladka 1 (sunaina se ) : ooe chamiya tune hamare bhai ko maar kar acha nahi kiya.
Ladka 2 : tu dekh abse tere saath kya kya hota hai.
Or charo hasne lag jate hai.
Hahahahhahah
Tabi sahil kuch bolne hiii wala hota hai ki sunaina usse rok leti hai.

Sunaina (gusse se un ladke se):  mere sath jo hoga vo baad me dekha jaega
Magar ab jo tumare sath hone wala hai uske bare me socho.

Or fir sunaina or tezz hasne lagti hai
Sunaina ko dekh  kar roma or sahil samaj nahi ata.
Vo ladke car me : lagta hai ye pagal ho gai hai hame dekh kar.

Fir sunaina apna mobile nikati hai.
Or usme kuch karne lagti hai.

Or tabi traffic light green ho jati hai.
Or sahil gusse me car aage bada deta hai.

Or  un ladko ki car piche ho jati hai
Or vo bhi car aage badane lagte hai.
Or unki car jese hii traffic light se aage badti hai. Or traffic light ke beech me jati hai tabi. (Matlab beech chorahe me)
Achanak
Taraffic light red ho jati hai.
or dusre taraf ki light green ho jati hai or vaha ki car tezz aage badti hai.

Ki fir tesri taraf ki light bhi green ho jati hai.or vaha ki bhi light green ho jati hai.

Or vo ladke jis car me hote hai dono taraf ki car tezzi se unki car se takra jati hai.
Or unki car puri tarha se tut jati hai.

Ye sab achanak se hota hai ki vo ladke kuch samaj nahi pate.

Or un ladko ki halat bohot buri ho jati hai.
Or vo ladke jhakmi ho jate hai.

Or sahil or roma piche dekhta hai to shocked ho jate hai.

Sahil (sunaina se ) : ye Sab tumne kiya or kese kiya


Fir sunaina apna phone dika deti hai.
Or sahil & roma shamaj jate hai.

Fir sahil sunaina se kuch or bhi pochne wala hota hai. Magar puch nahi pata  hai.
 Roma (mann me) : ye ladki samaj me nahi ati college ke admission ke Samay itna kuch kar diya. Baad me kya kya karegi.
Pehle pura college ka sever hack kar diya. Or fir college me us ladke ko thapad maar kar pure college me dhamaka kar diya or aab traffic signal hack karke un ladke ko hospital pahocha diya....

Agar ye eesi hai to uska bhai ya koi boyfriend hoga to vo kesa hoga tabi

sunaina (ramo see): kha kho gai tera ghr aa gaya hai.
Or roma utar kar sabko byeee bol kar apne ghr chali jati hai.

Or thodi der me sunaina ka bhi ghr aa jata hai.or vo bhi apne ghr chale jati hai.
Or sahil bhi apne ghr ki taraf nikal jata hai.

Vahi dusri taraf..............

Ek jagah me ring me fighting chal rahi hoti hai.

Jaha par sung lu lee (top duniya ka sabse khatarnaak fighter )

Kisi shaks se ladai kar raha hota hai.

Or us sakhs  ko buri tarha se maar raha hota. Hai.
Us shaks ki halat bad se bhi jyada badtaar ho jati hai.

Uske muh (mouth) se khoon nikal raha hota hai.
Or us shaks ke sarir par bohot jhakam hote hai pura sarir khoon se lad pat hota hai.
Vahi
Bagal me jaha log ring me fight dekh rahe hote hai.
Vaha ek aauraat ro rahi hoti hai
Or bol rahi hoti hai.

Aauraat : plzzz chor do mere veer ko mat maro
Plzzz chor do
Or bohot rone lagti hai.
Sung lu lee : ye bhartiye log itne kamzoor kiu hote hai 2 minute bhi mere se thik se ladai nahi kar sakte
Fir kiu ate hai mujse ladne

Fir sung lu lee us veer  ko jaan se maarne hiii vala hota hai ki.
Tabi.
Ek ladka gate se aa raha hota hai. Uska sarir puri tarha kapdo se dhaka hota hai baas uski aakh (eyes) dikai de rahi hoti hai
Blue colour ki..
Or uske piche se ek awaaz aa rahi hoti hai.
Bohot hiii darawani awaaz hoti hai jisse sunkar sab ki rooh kaapne lagti hai

Vaha par katle aam macha hai jaha par mahakaal khada hai jab ye shampaan hoga vahi bachega jo anant hoga........................








 
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Continue karuga.
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Ek pal ke liye to sung lee lu bhi ghabra jata hai..
Or vo ladka direct ring ke ander chala jata hai.
Ladka : itna khus hone ki jaroorat nahi hai
              Sung lee lu ek baar mujse to bhir leee...

Sung lee lu : koun hai be tu..
Ladka : teri mout aawaaz sunai nahi deti tuje...
  VAHA KATLE AAM MACHA HAI JAHA PAR MAHA KAAL KHADA HAI JAB YE SAMPAAN HOGA VAHI BACHEGA JO ANANT HOGA...

sung lee lu (thoda ghabrate hue) : aaj me tuje bhi nahi choru ga..
Tum  log bohot kamjor hote ho is awaaz se muje dara nahi sakte..
Ladka : jab mout ati hai to har koi dar jata hai
Tu hum hum ko kamzoor shamaj ta hai...
" Bhagwaam ki banai hue dublicate copy"
Tabi
Ek awaaz sunai deti hai us ladke ko jisse sunkar us ladke ka gussa or bad jata hai..

Auraat( ladke se ) : bhaiyaaa....
Chorna mat is ko isne mere veer ko mara hai bohot buri tarha se..........
Or aakho (eye) me aashu liye rone lagti hai.
Uske saath me dusri ladki
Ladki (us auraat see) : bhabhi rona band karo ab kuch nahi hoga bhai ko ...( Vo ladki us ladke ko pahachan jati hai uski blue eye dekh kar )

Or vo ladka us veer ko dekhta hai jiski halat bohot buri hoti hai.

Ladka us veer ke paas jakar bolta hai.

Ladka (veer se) : dard ki shaam ho ya. Sukh ka sawera ho.
Sab kuch qabool hai agar saath tera ho.
Mujko bula leti hai roz ek naye bahane se teri yaad waqif ho gayi hai mere har thikane se.
Shayaad veer bhi us ladke ko pehachan jata hai..
Veer ( ladke se) : bahut dard ke sath bahut udas hai koi shaks tere jane se ho sake to lout aaa kisi bahane see,
Tu lakh khafa ho par ek baar to dekh le koi bikhar gaya hai tere jane se.

Ladka (veer see) : rishton me duriyaa to aati  jaati rehti hai. Phir bhi dosti dilon ko mila leti hai,
Wo dosti hii kya jisme narazgi na ho
Par sachi dosti dosto ko mana hii leti hai.

Ye sun ke veer k dil ko acha lagta hai or isi ke sath veer behosh ho jata hai..

Sung lee lu (ladke se ) : tu usse baat hii karta rahega ya mujjse pitega bhi...

Or ise ke sath sung lee lu us ladke ko marne ke liye age badta hai.
Tabi
Ladka (sung lee lu se gusse me ) : tu hum bhartiyo ko kaamzoor shamjta hai
Dekh te hai kitni taqaat hai tere andar

Maar muje maaaaaaaar jitna daam hai tujme maar..............
Tere paas 2 minute ka time hai.

Isse ke saath sung lee lu us ladke ke chest par ghusa marta hai .
Magar uske ghussa marte hii uski finger ki haadi tut jati hai or puri jalne lagti hai (usse aisa lagta hai jese kesi aag (fire) ke samunder me kisi bohot hii kator chiz par ghusa mara ho.)
Usse ke sath vo bohot jor se chillane lagta hai.
Aaaaaaaah
Or us ladke ke bina mare hiii vo sung lu lee niche gir jata hai.
Or vahi logo me khus - phus hone lagti hai.

Or sung lee lu ko dubara marne ki himmat nahi hoti.
Ladka ( sung lee lu se ) : bas itni hii taqaat thi tere ander mere se takrane ki.
Thodi der ke baad sung lee lu dubara khada hota hai.
Fir
Ladka : your time is over now my time.

Or vo ladka ek teez ke thapad uske gaal par marta hai
Jisse uske niche ki gardan ki haddi tut jati hai.
Or vo sung lee lu on the spot mar (dead ) jata hai

Vahi ring ke bhaar ek aadmi bolta hai
Aadmi : ye log aisa hii hota hai chale to chand tak
Nahi to shaam tak..

Or vaha bharat mata ki jai ke nare lagne lag jate hai.
Bharat mata ki jai
Or kuch log jai mahakaal bolne lag jate hai.
Tabi
Vo dono auraat or ladki veer ke paas aa jate hai..
Magar vo ladki veer ko na dekh kar us ladke ki neeli aakhe dekhne lag jati hai
Tabi
Ladka manager ko awaaz lagata hai

Or manager bhagta hue us ladke ke pass ata hai.
Ladka ( manager se) : jo paise is fight ke milne vale hai vo is aauraat ko de do..

Jisse vo veer ka ilaaj kara sake.

Or vo ladka bhaar jane lagta hai.
Or gate ke pass pahochta hii hai ki
Vo ladki bhagti hue piche se aa jati hai.
Or us ladke ke piche se gale lag jati hai.

Ladki (us ladke see) : tum muje firse chor kar jana chahate ho. ( Or us ladke ko or tezz se gale laga leti hai.) Plzzz muje chor kar mat jao..
Ladka ( ladki see) : kon ho tum me tume nahi janta

Ladki ( ladke se ) : tum aisa kiu bol rahe ho mera pyaar itna kaamzoor nahi ki me tume na pehachan saku.
Acha tum muje nahi jante haaa.
Thik hai fir tume kese pata ki us ladke ka naam veer hai...

Or ab fir tum mujse door chale gai na to me mar (dead)  jaugi ........

Or rote hue vahi baith jati hai...

Ladka us ladki ko utate hue ( aakh nam hote hue bol ta hai )
Ladka ( ladki se) : tum rooya (carry) karogi to muje acha nahi lagega.
Me jald hii vapis aauga . Or veer ko bhi bol Dena.
Or apna khayaal rakhna
Ladki ( siskariya lete hue) : me tume dubara khona nahi. Chahati me tut jaugi.

Ladka ( nam aakho see) : pyaar ka topha har kisi ko nahi milta ye vo phool hai jo har bhaag me nahi khilta is fool ko kabi tutne mat dena kyoki toota hua phool vapas nahi khilta..
Tum meri kamzoori banna chahati ho ya taqqat agar tum tut gae to me bhi tut jauga.

Or ladka usse ek chota sa dibba deta hai or bolta hai isse tum jab kolna jab me tumse miluga
Tume meri kasaam hai tum usse pehle ise nahi khologi..
Or me bas kuch saalo me jarur bapas aauga mera kuch saal or intzaar nahi kar sakti.

Ladki ( ladke se) : me tumari taqaat banna chahati hu.
Or me tumara kuch saal to kya jindagi bhar intzaar kar sakti hu..
Jab tak ke liye me is dibbe ko dekh kar jee lugi.

Or vo ladka vaha se chala jata hai...

Agli subha.....................
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Ek aur de do bhai
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Thanks for supporting bhai
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Abhi deta hu bhai ek or update
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Agli subha ......
Roz subha subha rahul 5 baje utha hai or bhar jogging ke liye jata hai.

Uske baad aakar 1 ghanta exercise karta hai.
Fir chal deta hai apni bhano (ruchi & nisha ) ko jagane ke liye magar usse kya pata vo pehle se hii jaag rahi hai.
Kamre me .

Ruchi ( nisha se) : aaj bhaiya hame uttane wale hai school ke liye

Nisha (ruchi se ) : to kuch dhamaka machaye kya..
Are nahi
Fir nisha ruchi se
Ruchi kuch bolti hai nisha ke kaan me
Fir dono hasne lagte hai.
Or chup chap sone (sleep) karne ki acting karne lagte hai.

Jese hii rahul room me enter hota hai
Dekhta hai ki ruchi or nisha dono ek dusre ki baho me gale laga kar so rahi hoti hai.
Dono etni pyaari lagti hai ki koi bhi mohit jae.
Or rahul un dono ke paas pohoch ta hai or apni dono bhano ko utane ke liye pehle unke mathe (forehaed ) par kiss karke .jese  hi kuch bolne wala hota hai.

Vese hii dono
Achanak se

Rahul ka hath ( hand ) pakad leti hai or usko bed par gira deti hai
Or ruchi rahul ke upar baith jati hai.
Or nisha uske bagal me baith jati hai.

Or dono rahul ke gaal par tezz tezz kiss karne lagti hai or uska pura gaal (chik ) geela kar deti hai.

Or fir bolti hai.
Bhaiya kiss ese karni chahiye jisme thoda jyada pyaar ho.

Rahul ( mann me ) : lagta hai ye kuch dhamaka karne wali hai.
Kahi ye mera bang to nahi karne wali .
Nahi yaar ye to bhan hai esa nahi karegi.
Fir kya karegi

Ruchi ( bade pyaar se ) : bhaiyaa aaj hame aapkaa ek din chaihiye or hum jo bolege vo aap karo ge hamare school se ane ke baad.

Rahul ( dono se) : kiu tum dono kam par gai ho ghar me dhamaka karne ke liye jo muje bhi shamil karna chahati ho.

Nisha : nahi mere pyaare bhaiya hum to bus shopping par jana chahate hai

Kuch samaan kharidna hai.

Or ruchi jo rahul pe baithi hue thi uski gand rahul ke lund par gis rahi thi
Jisse rahul garam hone lagta hai.
Iska abhas jise hii rahul ko hota hai.

Vo jaldi se ruchi ko apne upar Se utta deta hai or baith jata hai.
Rahul ( dono se) : payal ke sath chale jana
Ye sun kar dono udas ho jati hai.
Jise rahul bhi dekh leta hai.

Nisha : bhaiyaa hame apke sath jana hai.

Ruchi bade pyaar se rahul ka muh apni taraf karte hue.
Bhai plzzz
Rahul ( dono se) : thik hai ab jyada emosinal blackmail mat karo..

Fir dono hasne lagti hai..
Or bhagte hue washroom me chali jati hai.
Or bolti hai bhaiyaa yaad rakh na bhul mat jana..
Or rahul thik hai bol kar chal deta hai .
Apni padaku bhan payal ke pass.
Rahul jese hii room me enter hota hai.

Room me dekhta hai ki payal book ko seene se lagae so (sleep) rahi hoti hai.
Rahul payal ke paas jakar uski book ko side me rakh ta hai ki
Achanak uske book se ek photo niche gir jati hai.
Jise dekh kar rahul thoda shocked ho jata hai.
Fir sochta hai shayad ase hii rakhi hogi
Or vo book ko side me rakh deta hai.

Or payal ko utane lagta hai.

Payal : bhai sone do na 5 minute baad utt jaugi..
Rahul : utti hai ki me bua ko bulau..
Payal bua ka naam sun kar utt jati hai.

Rahul : college jana hai hai ki nahi addmission ke liye jaldi tyaar ho jaa..

Me bhi tyaar hone jaa raha hu.
Or rahul vaha se nikal jata hai.
Apne room me tyaar hone.

Payal jab book ki taraf dekhti hai to thoda shocked ho jati hai
Payal ( mann me ) : kahi bhaiya ne vo photo dekh to nahi lee.

Yahi soche hue payal bhi nahane nikal jati hai.
Jab rahul tyaar hokal niche ata hai to dekhta hai sab dinner par rahul ka hii
Intzaar kar rahe hai.
Jab sab rahul ko dekhte hai to hairan ho jate hai.
Kiuki rahul bohot jyada handsome lag raha hota hai in kapdo me..
Ruchi rahul ko dekh kar bolti hai.
Ruchi : bhaiyaa aaj aap bohot hamdsome lag rahe ho.
Bhaiya college addmission ke liye hii jana kahi kisi ladki ke chakkar me mat fas Jana...
Tabi
Nisha: haa bhaiyaa nahi to hum kaware reh jaege.
Is baat par mala (bua ) kitchan se ate hue dono ( ruchi & nisha) ko aakh dikane lag jati hai.
Or payal unko gusse me dekhkar bolti hai.

Payal ( nisha se ) : tumara kuwara rehne se kya matlab hai.

Nisha b( mann me ) : ye didi bhi na kuch nahi samajti bohot sarif banne ki kosis karti hai.
Ek din inka bhandaa jarur phoru gi..
Ruchi baat ko shamalte hue ..
Ruchi ( payal se) : didi nisha ka matlab hai ki vo ladki kuwari mar jaegi.
Kiuki bhaiya to hum logo se pyaar karte hai na..
Nisha ( usdas hokar) : or payal didi se kuch jyada hiii.

Jisse sukar payal didi thoda muskura deti hai. Or mann me bolti hai.
Payal (mann me ) : or nahi to kya rahul ko to me sirf me hii sirf me pyaar karti hu .
Or vo mujse bhi jald hii pyaar karega..

Or thoda hasne lagti hai.

Nisha ( ghoorte hue)  : didi hame bhi bata do aap kiu hass rahi ho.
Payal harbarate hue. Bolti hai kuch nahi bas ase hii.

Tabi
Rahul sab ki baat sunkar sochta hai mann me..
Rahul ( mann me ) : ye BC kya drama chal raha hai kuch shamaj me nahi aa raha..
Kahi ye...... Me kuch bhi soch leta hu.

Or tabi.
Mala (bua) sabko breake fast karati hai.
Mala ( bua) : mera beta to hai hii handsome kahi kisi ki nazar na lag jae..

Or mala (bua) rahul ko kajal ka tika laga deti hai.

Fir teen ( payal, ruchi , nisha)
Kya hum nahi hai. Lag rahe kubsuraat maaa
Is par rahul bolta hai.
Jise sunkar teeno socked ho jati hai....................
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Mast update bhai
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Thanks for supporting Bhai next update posted
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Agli subha ......
Roz subha subha rahul 5 baje utha hai or bhar jogging ke liye jata hai.

Uske baad aakar 1 ghanta exercise karta hai.
Fir chal deta hai apni bhano (ruchi & nisha ) ko jagane ke liye magar usse kya pata vo pehle se hii jaag rahi hai.
Kamre me .

Ruchi ( nisha se) : aaj bhaiya hame uttane wale hai school ke liye 

Nisha (ruchi se ) : to kuch dhamaka machaye kya..
Are nahi
Fir nisha ruchi se 
Ruchi kuch bolti hai nisha ke kaan me 
Fir dono hasne lagte hai. 
Or chup chap sone (sleep) karne ki acting karne lagte hai.

Jese hii rahul room me enter hota hai 
Dekhta hai ki ruchi or nisha dono ek dusre ki baho me gale laga kar so rahi hoti hai.
Dono etni pyaari lagti hai ki koi bhi mohit jae.
Or rahul un dono ke paas pohoch ta hai or apni dono bhano ko utane ke liye pehle unke mathe (forehaed ) par kiss karke .jese hi kuch bolne wala hota hai.

Vese hii dono 
Achanak se

Rahul ka hath ( hand ) pakad leti hai or usko bed par gira deti hai 
Or ruchi rahul ke upar baith jati hai.
Or nisha uske bagal me baith jati hai.

Or dono rahul ke gaal par tezz tezz kiss karne lagti hai or uska pura gaal (chik ) geela kar deti hai.

Or fir bolti hai.
Bhaiya kiss ese karni chahiye jisme thoda jyada pyaar ho. 

Rahul ( mann me ) : lagta hai ye kuch dhamaka karne wali hai. 
Kahi ye mera bang to nahi karne wali .
Nahi yaar ye to bhan hai esa nahi karegi.
Fir kya karegi 

Ruchi ( bade pyaar se ) : bhaiyaa aaj hame aapkaa ek din chaihiye or hum jo bolege vo aap karo ge hamare school se ane ke baad.

Rahul ( dono se) : kiu tum dono kam par gai ho ghar me dhamaka karne ke liye jo muje bhi shamil karna chahati ho.

Nisha : nahi mere pyaare bhaiya hum to bus shopping par jana chahate hai 

Kuch samaan kharidna hai.

Or ruchi jo rahul pe baithi hue thi uski gand rahul ke lund par gis rahi thi 
Jisse rahul garam hone lagta hai.
Iska abhas jise hii rahul ko hota hai.

Vo jaldi se ruchi ko apne upar Se utta deta hai or baith jata hai.
Rahul ( dono se) : payal ke sath chale jana 
Ye sun kar dono udas ho jati hai.
Jise rahul bhi dekh leta hai.

Nisha : bhaiyaa hame apke sath jana hai.

Ruchi bade pyaar se rahul ka muh apni taraf karte hue.
Bhai plzzz
Rahul ( dono se) : thik hai ab jyada emosinal blackmail mat karo..

Fir dono hasne lagti hai..
Or bhagte hue washroom me chali jati hai.
Or bolti hai bhaiyaa yaad rakh na bhul mat jana..
Or rahul thik hai bol kar chal deta hai .
Apni padaku bhan payal ke pass.
Rahul jese hii room me enter hota hai.

Room me dekhta hai ki payal book ko seene se lagae so (sleep) rahi hoti hai.
Rahul payal ke paas jakar uski book ko side me rakh ta hai ki 
Achanak uske book se ek photo niche gir jati hai.
Jise dekh kar rahul thoda shocked ho jata hai.
Fir sochta hai shayad ase hii rakhi hogi 
Or vo book ko side me rakh deta hai.

Or payal ko utane lagta hai.

Payal : bhai sone do na 5 minute baad utt jaugi..
Rahul : utti hai ki me bua ko bulau..
Payal bua ka naam sun kar utt jati hai.

Rahul : college jana hai hai ki nahi addmission ke liye jaldi tyaar ho jaa..

Me bhi tyaar hone jaa raha hu.
Or rahul vaha se nikal jata hai.
Apne room me tyaar hone.

Payal jab book ki taraf dekhti hai to thoda shocked ho jati hai 
Payal ( mann me ) : kahi bhaiya ne vo photo dekh to nahi lee.

Yahi soche hue payal bhi nahane nikal jati hai.
Jab rahul tyaar hokal niche ata hai to dekhta hai sab dinner par rahul ka hii
Intzaar kar rahe hai.
Jab sab rahul ko dekhte hai to hairan ho jate hai.
Kiuki rahul bohot jyada handsome lag raha hota hai in kapdo me..
Ruchi rahul ko dekh kar bolti hai.
Ruchi : bhaiyaa aaj aap bohot hamdsome lag rahe ho.
Bhaiya college addmission ke liye hii jana kahi kisi ladki ke chakkar me mat fas Jana...
Tabi
Nisha: haa bhaiyaa nahi to hum kaware reh jaege.
Is baat par mala (bua ) kitchan se ate hue dono ( ruchi & nisha) ko aakh dikane lag jati hai.
Or payal unko gusse me dekhkar bolti hai.

Payal ( nisha se ) : tumara kuwara rehne se kya matlab hai.

Nisha b( mann me ) : ye didi bhi na kuch nahi samajti bohot sarif banne ki kosis karti hai.
Ek din inka bhandaa jarur phoru gi..
Ruchi baat ko shamalte hue ..
Ruchi ( payal se) : didi nisha ka matlab hai ki vo ladki kuwari mar jaegi.
Kiuki bhaiya to hum logo se pyaar karte hai na..
Nisha ( usdas hokar) : or payal didi se kuch jyada hiii.

Jisse sukar payal didi thoda muskura deti hai. Or mann me bolti hai.
Payal (mann me ) : or nahi to kya rahul ko to me sirf me hii sirf me pyaar karti hu .
Or vo mujse bhi jald hii pyaar karega..

Or thoda hasne lagti hai.

Nisha ( ghoorte hue) : didi hame bhi bata do aap kiu hass rahi ho.
Payal harbarate hue. Bolti hai kuch nahi bas ase hii.

Tabi 
Rahul sab ki baat sunkar sochta hai mann me..
Rahul ( mann me ) : ye BC kya drama chal raha hai kuch shamaj me nahi aa raha..
Kahi ye...... Me kuch bhi soch leta hu.

Or tabi.
Mala (bua) sabko breake fast karati hai.
Mala ( bua) : mera beta to hai hii handsome kahi kisi ki nazar na lag jae..

Or mala (bua) rahul ko kajal ka tika laga deti hai.

Fir teen ( payal, ruchi , nisha) 
Kya hum nahi hai. Lag rahe kubsuraat maaa
Is par rahul bolta hai.
Jise sunkar teeno socked ho jati hai....................
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Jise sunkar teeno socked ho jati hai....................
Ab aage.....
Mere teeno bhan to khubsurat nahi hai.
Or teeno socked ho kar gusse me dekhne lagti hai.
Teeno aakhe nam karke bolti hai hum aapko achi nahi lagti....
Fir rahul dubara bolta hai.
Rahul ( teeno se) : meri saari bhan to pari hai or pari khubsuraat nahi hoti bohot khusbsurat hoti hai.
Or teeno aakar rahul ke gale lag jati hai.
Tabi.
Mala bua bolti hai..
Mala bua : or nahi to kya 
Mera beta handsome hai to meri beti pari hue na..
Or fir 
Mala bua un teeno ko bhi kala tika laga deti hai. 
Tabi bhar school ki bus aa jati hai.
Or ruchi & nisha ko late ho raha hota hai.
To jaldi se break fast karti hai.
Nisha ( rahul se ) : bhaiya yaad rakhna bhul mat jana.
Or rahul bhi haa me mundi hila deta hai.
Or ruchi & nisha school ki bus me baith kar nikal jati hai.
Tabi payal bolti hai rahul se 
Payal ( rahul se ) : ye kya yaad rakne ke liye bol rahi thi.

Mala ( bua) : ha beta kuch dhamaka to nahi karne wale ho. 
Muje lag raha hai kiuki bohot din se kuch nahi hua hai.

Rahul ( dono se) : nahi bua vo sham ko nisha & ruchi ko kuch saman kharidna hai isliye shopping par jane ke liye bol rahi thi..

Tabi 
Tv par ek news aa rahi hoti hai.
Ek ring fighting me sung lee lu ki death ho gai.
Ye duniya ka sabse khatarnak fighter tha.
Aaj tak isse koi hara nahi saka.
Uske upar bohot bang case or nirdosho ki hatya ke bhi aroop the.
Sutro se pata chala hai ki.
Hairaani ki to baat ye hai ki 
Koi ladka achanak se ring me ata hai.
Or uske piche se ek bohot hii darawani awaaz ati hai.

VAHA PAR KARLE AAM MACHA HAI JAHA. PAR MAHAKAAL KHADA HAI. JAB YE SHAMPAAN HOGA VAHI BACHEGA JO ANANT HOGA.

Kya raaj hai is awaaz ka kuch bhi pata nahi chala hai

jise sunkar pehle to sab ghabra jate hai 
Or kuch pata nahi chala hai.
Or 
Fir 
Jab vo ladka ek hii thapad me sung lee lu ko thatam kar deta hai.
Or fir vaha 
Bharat mata ki jai or mahakaal ki jai ke naare lagne lagte hai.
Kon hai ye mahakaal 
Kya ye koi hero hai.
Kaha se aya hai ye.
Kya ye bharat mata ka beta hai.
Ya koi or 
Iski pehchan abhi bhi gupt hai.
Ye khabar pure india hii nahi bhar desh me bhi pahoch jai hai.

Fir 
Mala ( bua) : kon hai ye mahakaal jisne itne khatarnaak fighter ko ek thapaad me khatam kar diya.
Agar ye ladai karta to kya hota.

Payal : jo bhi hua acha hua 
Maa apne suna nahi kitne bang or nirdosho ki hatya ki hai is nai.

Rahul : or nahi to kya aso ke sath aisa hii hona chahiye.
Fir rahul payal se bolta hai 
Rahul (payal se ) : late ho raha hai admission ke liye chalo.
Fir hum dono college ke liye nikane lagte hai.
Piche se mala bua bolti hai 
Mala ( bua) : beta dono ache se jana or koi taklif ho to phone kar dena.
Or 
Me payal ko apne sath bike me baitha kar nikal jata hu.
Magar payal mere se kuch jyada hii chipak kar baithi hai vo aisa kiu karti hai.
Shaala bhi tak shamaj me nahi aya.

Jab me college me pohocta hue to un ladko ko dekte hii bohot hairaan ho jata hu........................

Chalo chalte hai patal log ki taraf.............

Murkh ( bewakoof ) ho tum 
Tabi piche se aasur guru aate hue dikai dete hai. Or ye dekhte hii vo dono aasur ladkiyo ko le jane ke liye seni ko ( shipahi ) se bolte hai. Or vo sabhi ladkiyo ko yaha se le jate hai.

Phir se aasur guru 
Pass ate hue..
Murkh to yaha maze kar raha hai.
Or yaha tumne socha. Ki 17 saal se danvasur yaha nahi aya uska kya karan ( bajaye)hai.


Aasur raaj : humne bohot kosis ki par ........................
Jab tak hamari sakti punna ( dubara ) vapas nahi aa jati 
Hum kese pata laga sakte hai ki danvasur dharti lok se kiu vapas nahi aya

Kamasur : magar bhai dharti lok me asi koi sakti nahi hai. Jo danvasur ko rok sake 
Fir kya karan ( bajaye) ho sakti hai.
Aasur guru : sirf us shakti ko chor kar or vo.........
Aasur guru : konsi shakti guru ji or vo kya .....
Aasur guru : vo ladka or vo locket ko chor kar . Jisme usne ..........................

Kamasur : magar vo ladka to us time bacha ( child) hoga naa 
To vo kya kar sakta tha....
Or vo locket to uske paas tha to vo dharti lok kese jaa sakta hai.
Kya usne bhi fir se janam liya tha..

Aasur guru : muje sirf lagta hai. Vishwas se nahi bol sakta...

Aasur raj : ab hum kya kare guru ji aap hii bataiye koi rasta dikaiye jisse hum
Us kawaj ( shield) ko tor sake or dharti lok jaa sake...

Aasur guru : ek raasta hai ..
Vo hai mahadev ( mahakaal)

Kamasur : vo hamari madad nahi karege apko pata hai aasur guru kiuki .................

Aasur guru : muje pata hai.
Magar prerna ki to madad karege naa.....
Kiuki.................
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