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"I wanted to punch him in the face. Who the hell is he to tell us we won't get any rooms there?" I said when we were back in the auto.

"Me too." She added.

I looked at the watch. It was 11.10pm.

The night was supposed to be very long.

***

We checked two more hotels but rooms were not available. 

Then the auto driver suggested he knew of a hotel which is not so good but will definitely have rooms available.

I asked him to take us there.

In twenty minutes we reached a place that was a filthy mess. 

However, the hotel had rooms available. I asked for two single rooms.

The old man at the reception gave the keys to a boy and he led us to the rooms. But it was really disappointing. Filthy rooms, untidy bed sheets, smelling bedbugs and leaking taps. The toilet looked like it wasn't cleaned for long.

"Fuck! No!" I said and walked out. 

She said nothing and followed me.

We were soon back in the auto.

"What now?" She asked.

I rubbed my face with my hand.

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Fate is driving them to unison

Yes, it's the destiny that guides their acts .........

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Core realistic narrative

Thx bro for the compliments ........ keep visit the thread regularly ..........

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Feel good type so far

You will also feel good in future updates ......... keep visiting regularly .........

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Fantastic bro

Thx ........ have regular visit .........

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Superb …. early waiting for more .. in the imagination it’s like a movie running in my head .. great going

Yes, there is no fantasy or extraordinary narration.....only justified realistic narration ........ hope you will enjoy ........

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Good update

Thx ..... keep regular visit ...........

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"Let's try another. What else?"

I asked the auto driver not to take us to such places.

Next one was hotel Prem Sagar and luckily, it had a room. Only one room. A double one.

I asked her to book that for her.

"What will you do?"

"I'll keep searching." I replied to her and stepped back to the auto leisurely with a blank and tired face.

She thought for a moment and proceeded to the reception.

Before reaching the auto I heard hasty footsteps approaching me. I looked back and found none other than Naina with her chap.

“What happened?” I enquired.

With a gloomy face she answered they are not allowing a single woman to board in the middle of the night.

“Then?” I asked.

She has nothing to say. She only looked at me with praying eyes.

"Are you thinking about taking me in?" I asked with a pause.

"Mmm... Yes. I have no other option" She nodded her head smilingly.

"Are you gone mad? It's very dangerous... You know, just you and me in a room. Oh God, no!"

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I had a playful smile on my face. She knew I was teasing her.

She pinched on my wrist.

"Oh! Come on. Don’t tease me" She smiled.

"Are you sure? Think again." I teased her again.

"Yes. It'll have a double bed. We can split the beds and sleep, can't we?"

That was really logical. Most of the hotels do this trick. They attach two single beds to make a double bed.

"Yeah we can. But why take so much risk?"

"Because I'm also caring. Learn from you."

She smiled looking directly into my eyes. It was very pleasing.

So we took the room. I paid two thousand rupees in advance. I relieved the auto as well.

Soon we were in the room. It was a spacious one. Large mirror, shelf, TV, towels, centre table, western style bathroom, hot and cold water, telephone, nice bed sheets and all. 

But with only a problem.

The bed wasn't separable. Actually, the bed frame was two pieces, but the mattress was single piece.

"Oh shit! There is also no option" I smiled.

I laughed and said, "I am going for a shower. You split the bed. Okay?"

She looked at me helplessly.

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Yes difficult situation. They will put the child under the bed and fuck on top of it.

Ha ha ha ............ to produce another one ..........

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Super update.
Naina has already started thinking wish she had a husband like him who is very caring and make her smile always. Time to thank.

Yes, Siraj is like that ........ he never seduces any but girls get attracted to him for his personality ......

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The stage is getting set. Nice update

Yes, now the play will start within no time or it will be KLPD ..........?

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Hope this story does not have the same end like the original. She deserves a better life and Siraj has to take her with him. Let them leave the child to karthik and say good bye.

I hope so ...... but changing either the basic theme or the climax will be an insult to the original auther..... It's just the modified not changed version of the original ..........

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Yes i was also dd not like the climax of original. Thought it should have been different.

Agreed, but we should not insult the original author by changing the story completely .........

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Nice story.
Any housewife will fall for the man who gives everything she misses in life.

Yes, that gives birth to the adulatory .........

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The author rewriting the story means, he also want to have a different climax. Otherwise, it can be a copy paste. 

I do not think so ......... Let's see ..... what more can be done to the original story ......... I do not have any right to change the original completely ...........

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Story bagundi, way of going on ..

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I took some clothes from my bag and walked to the bathroom. I took a grand shower and I felt really relaxed. It was a long restless day. Must have crossed midnight.

I wore the T-shirt and trousers from the bathroom. And I washed my shirt and hung it on the hangar.

As I stepped out, she was breastfeeding Vinnee and I looked directly at her. She had her sari pallu removed and her blouse open, and a part of her milky white bulge was visible. I saw it and she saw me seeing it.

It was a great embarrassment for both of us.

"Oh shit! I’m Sorry!" I blurted and quickly looked away.

She tried to hide her open skin with her hand. She was sitting in the chair, facing me, so she couldn't turn away.

"I'm very sorry, Siraj!"

I heard her say. I didn't look at her.

"What sorry? You have shown me that." I said.

"Yeah I know. Please forget it."

"Yeah, I know, I should. But I don't think I can."

"Why?"

"Oh come on, let's better not talk about it."

"OK."

I heard her giggling.

"What? Why are you laughing?"

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"No, nothing.."

I was standing in front of the mirror. She finished feeding the child and got up. He seemed to be asleep. She lay him on the bed.
 
Her sari pallu fell again and I had that scene again. This time both of those hillocks with two medium sized gbangs at their top center.

She had hooked her blouse back but it betrayed it's purpose of hiding her secrets. 

Her nicely shaped round mounds, the white and silky skin cleavage between them, and, when she got up, her stomach and it's flaps and navel revealed Just for a moment, and she covered those all with her pallu.

I stood watching it all mesmerized. My mouth was left open.

"Stop staring." She said.

And I regained my consciousness.

"Oh, yeah."

"You're caring, but you're shameless also."

"That's a really, really nice compliment, Your Highness." I showed my teeth while bowing my head.

She laughed. What a beauty! I felt like her beauty was increasing to have an effect in my mind with each passing moment.

"I have one more compliment for you." She said,

"Oh please, please stop talking now and go take a bath. You badly need one. It's already past twelve thirty." I pleaded as I wanted to hide my feelings.

"Yeah. Sure."

She walked off to the bathroom and returned after a quick shower. She wore the clothes I had bought for her. She looked gorgeous as well as sexy. The churidar was indeed made for her. It made no attempt to conceal her curves. Starting from the low cut neck with orange coloured border that highlighted her glowing skin, through her chest bulge which were not so large but were definitely round, to the flat belly that led to the broadening hip, her curves made quite a view and I again forgot to blink my eyes.

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A story can have different versions. Just a character name change will alone not make the story different. Situations, conversations, introduction of new characters and finally a new climax acceptable by the readers in a more acceptable manner. Otherwise, it will be old wine in new bottle. The challenge and victory is how to make the reader think this as classic compared to original. It is not insulting the original author. Its just a different thought process.

Thx for your kind suggestion. Yes it's a modified version not remake of the story in which we can do anything like changing the climax, adding new characters, new concept and theme along with the old one. A modified story is nothing but new wine in old bottle with a changing taste. Yes it's wine not rum in a wine bottle. A lot of controversies were there for the same issue and we should avoid that.

Yes, I am in search of a acceptable solution that will fulfill the readers demand and will not hamper the original writer.

Readers acceptable kind suggestions solicited.

Do not worry there must be a solution which will not hurt the writer nor the readers emotion .........