27-09-2021, 12:42 AM
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27-09-2021, 12:59 AM
This bring me to almost the end of the story
Hope you guys loved it and looking ahead for feedback and reviews
Hope you guys loved it and looking ahead for feedback and reviews
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27-09-2021, 11:36 PM
Thanks for the comments and hope many other readers also love this story
06-10-2021, 11:46 PM
Hope you all love this story and keep reading and posting your comments
13-10-2021, 01:54 AM
I do understand your views and suggestion but I have already put so many thing in this story. I will try to work out but wont happen soon plus would love to see more views and decide if I really wish to continue but I will need theme some change in this.
Sorry If i have disappointed you guys it is difficult to take time and put words however I will think if the story goes beyond 50K views
Sorry If i have disappointed you guys it is difficult to take time and put words however I will think if the story goes beyond 50K views
13-10-2021, 02:02 AM
(27-09-2021, 06:24 AM)Desmond Miles Wrote: Didn't like the forced sex of this update, bro.. You could've easily made Arun or Rahul seduce her while on the process of Massage and Photoshoot instead of all that forcing her by Tushar.. Sorry bro, it wasn't your best update.. But the beginning of this update was going really good though.. Then at the last part, you just hurriedly wrapped up the Photoshoot bit like it meant nothing for this update..
Anyway, hope you ends the story on a happy note.. Just take your time and write accordingly.. Good luck bro..
Not heard from you and the views and suggestions from your side. Always looking ahead to hear from you so please do take time and write back in detail
13-10-2021, 02:24 AM
(13-10-2021, 02:11 AM)nishanthtu Wrote: Story is marvelous, I really enjoyed it and it looks complete to me. Try writing an another story bro, you are an awesome writer who has total commitment to the story. Never seen many writers give timely updates
Thanks for your kind words was really disappointed reading views of other users. It is very difficult to put story in words and I tried my best. You can check my other story and reply
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