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Madhu and Tushar
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21-09-2021, 12:14 AM
Looking ahead for reviews and suggestions so please do take some time to put some comments to help me write and complete the story
21-09-2021, 01:19 AM
If you guys dont like the story i will stop updating as i dont see any review or any suggestions or comments
22-09-2021, 12:14 AM
Hope you like the start of the relationship finally and looking ahead for feedback
22-09-2021, 12:16 AM
(21-09-2021, 04:08 AM)Desmond Miles Wrote: The story is going pretty great, bro.. Don't even think of stopping it please.. But I have a small suggestion to you. That, please avoid using coloured or bold text for the story. Its difficult to read at sometimes (you know.. When our hands are busy and mostly in darkness of our room..) Just use normal black text and it will be comfortable for everyone.
All the very best for the future updates.. <3
Thanks will take care of the fonts
22-09-2021, 10:09 PM
(22-09-2021, 09:54 AM)Desmond Miles Wrote: Whatever you do to make her change in character, please try to give a nice long update on the drama part, ok bro.. We've been waiting to see what actually happens in it as its an erotic themed one.. (Also was thinking Tushar and Madhu's relationship takes a turn only after performing the play too, but thats okay.)
If you want to add some pics to the story, let me know. Will help with that. Atleast can comment the pics right after your each updates.
Yes please the pictures should help and looking ahead based on the story and matching the story line
23-09-2021, 12:17 AM
Looking for your comments and review for the latest parts posted
23-09-2021, 12:42 AM
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