02-01-2019, 12:23 AM
(31-12-2018, 01:18 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: Well said. opinion of many.Sorry bro, that I disappointed you. And I'm disappointed to hear you've given up on the story because 'something' did not happen.
Have given up on story.. not worth waiting for another unclear-ending update
almost 20 chapters and nothing remains except our expectation of something will happen
anyway, to be in piece and be far way from this, have un-subscribed this thread
Byeeeeee
Well, I want to tell you that when it happens, or if it ever happens, or wherever happens, it should happen naturally. Even though there are many dramatic twists there in the story, if you look closely, none of them happened 'suddenly'as Fasterboy had suggested earlier.
For example, Atul's Mumbai trip wasn't a sudden twist. It was coming since Shreyas had a conversation with him in an earlier chapter.
All the events might look like they happened suddenly but in my opinion, they are just the usual things that can happen in anyone's life. All I do as a writer is to put them where it catches your attention the most.
So my plan is to go for that 'something' too in a natural way. It won't happen just because the readers are demanding it, but will happen when/if Anvita goes for it. Keep looking for the clues.
I hope you'll come back to the story. I'm glad that you didn't hold your concerns in your mind. Like I said in the past too, I'm open to criticism and compliments alike.
Thank you all for the wonderful comments.
Keep reading and keep posting.
Wish you all a happy New year.
Krish.