Adultery The Cheating Wife ?

[bikiniking]

Few thoughts!

OP - This was a great story, one of the best! Detailed, erotic and slow. Loved every bit of it.

Now, coming to critique:

1. Too many female characters - This is Ganga's story (no not even Sreenu's) and most of the readers like to have one central character - The fire of out Loins. Please don't dilute that with side characters.
2. Divulging in past puts a Dampner on what's happening in the present - We loved the way Ganga behaved, but what are we trying with the past stuff here - yes, there is a hidden desire, but story (mostly) should move forward.
3. Slow updates - Kills the joy! Maybe not huge ones, but once a two week or so could be a good pace.