03-01-2022, 01:20 PM
(This post was last modified: 03-01-2022, 01:21 PM by Blue Bull. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(03-01-2022, 11:21 AM)Samshree Wrote: Cheers!!!
Just a thought...
Jaya, Arvind, Pushpita, Kaamna & even driver are all enjoying the blood & sweat of Shekar and still Arvind chides and jaya accepts. Alok being biological son & CEO subjected to this theme of humiliation to the core. A bit unacceptable.
Further, story had a daughter character of Arvind and she is totally out of picture as theme is humiliation centric.
Still, there can be balance. Just my point of view. Please dont take otherwise
Thanks!!!
Though I'm not connected to this thread anyway just got a PM today from a old veteran n active reader/viewer of this forum .... I think such type of stories are not for healthy reading ..... my personal opinion not to discourage the writer but to discourage such type of narration ..... not to be taken otherwise .....

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