Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

[krish_999]

Hi dear Author Krish,

I just wanted to suggest you a point regarding your writings.
No doubt that you are a brilliant writer and you always give logics behind the story and always proceed with a pace which actually makes it a erotica. But just a suggestion that I personally feel that you sometimes lack sexual tension in your updates. There have been instances where sexual tension was indeed felt but it do lacks if take the story as a whole. Please don't mind, I am just speaking my mind.
           Either you at instant provide with direct sex scene or there are just logical conversations which we do admire but sexual tension is also something which should be there in an erotica. I never meant it should be full of baseless sex or just sex ,I meant that if there is sexual tension developed , then it keeps the reader on the edge. It's not just sex scenes which actually arouse the most readers but the scenario how its happening. of course we can not manipulate the characters and personality of the characters.. its just that some scenarios makes it way more arousing than the actual sex scene.
I hope you get my point and don't take in opposite sense. 
Just wrote what I had in my mind....

Thanks

Thanks for writing what's in your mind. I think comments like this will only help one improve as a writer. Thanks for not holding back.
I also have no issues when people speak of what do they expect to see happen next in the story. Even though I don't change my plot based on them, such comments makes me understood what readers are expecting and how they are perceiving the emotions in the story.
I'm really thankful for all those who've posted comments here. It gives me great joy when I come back to the site and see so many comments.


The next chapter looks a smaller one, and I am looking forward to post it sooner than usual.
Thanks again.
With love.
Krish.