10-04-2019, 09:26 PM
(06-04-2019, 07:24 PM)love_couple Wrote: I have got addicted to this story. It feels as if it's a part of my life now and I have to know what is going on in Atul's & Anvi's lives each day.Overwhelmed to see such detailed comment. Thank you for finding time to pen this one. And I must thank all others who've added valuable comments every day. It feels good to see new comments whenever I return to the story and it's a huge inspiration to continue.
I as a reader I simply can't thank or praise Krish_999 enough that he is providing us with this kind of amazing story and that also for free of cost. Honestly I would pay to read such content because I truly can see how much effort Krish is putting in this story. Now I cannot even use this line that you are one of the best authors Krish because I feel you are nonpareil in your field & you are actually THE BEST author who always delivers consistently. I have never read stories like yours anywhere on the internet.
Your stories are not just sex stories, they are much much more than that which actually unconsciously affects your mind too . The way you turn us on with all those character conversations and realistic sexual scenarios is simply commendable. I absolutely salute your rhetorical skills.
But I have to be honest here and I personally do not enjoy Atul's other part of life which is linked with people like Ridhima or any other woman (I always read that part hurriedly :/ , though i know you give your 100 percent in that too but what to do ,I do not find it exciting unless our protagonist Anvita is there).
I am always up for the part where Anvita is mentioned and her perspective of the story is which I really enjoy the most and look forward to. Her encounters and conversations with all the different characters like Rajat, her boss, Maniesh etc just give goosebumps and keeps us on the brink of excitement.
Talking about characters , I have to say her encounters with this "boy" Prithvi isn't exciting because I feel that Prithvi is like a kid who is too young for Anvita and he is childish which actually does not turn you on.He tends to get Anvita physically only by requesting or persuading with love/care which is really kinda unexciting. This is just my personal viewpoint.
For me if asked , the guy who turns the situation the most exciting is Rajat (man) because though Anvita hates him, still somehow he is cunning/smart enough to get him around her which is really an achievement , although his earlier blackmailing Anvita part was not at all expected of him (it was such a turn off and the same goes for George's part). banging Anvita was really not expected or needed.They Way Rajat makes his way cunningly towards Anvita is admirable and infact exciting and the same goes for Maniesh, we all are waiting how he would proceed with Anvita when she already knows that he is such a lecherous guy who is just after her body. lets see how smartly he breaks her resolve and able to befriend Anvita in future. (Hoping Anvita is hard nut to crack for him, lately she has started physically submitting herself very easily. One has to just kiss her somehow and and she is ready for you. Is that what real Anvita is ??has she become so weak now?? I hope not. )
Till now the most exciting and turn on part was of Varun and Anvita in his car. (OMG the way you described that part of Anvita spitting on him and still making out with him was something unique(although Anvita succumbed to his request very easily but yeah he had played well and chose the way of emotional words which somehow affected Anvita and she did a favour for him ) .This car incident made me remember your last story which made you the star in the the world of erotica). Hope he tries to get back at her without blackmailing her since he has got one advantage which he used last time that is having "big fat dick" which I guess Anvita got intrigued to.
I have seen that a few readers here are hell bent on to find out who was in the video having sex with Anvita and they keep naming different characters of the story. I don't know but its that really needed?? Its really an irritating thing to do although its understandable that we all are curios to find out his name but I feel at some point , unconsciously it puts pressure on the Author and he might have to change his script just to avoid the suggested names by the readers. I feel we should go with the flow of the story and just enjoy it without putting any pressure on the Author. He knows what he is writing.
A few here are calling Anvita a slut/characterless and Atul a person of no reed/cuckold. I wanted to ask those people if you are here to see Anvita in a sati Savitri role? or the story to end with a happy note that nothing physically happened with Anvita. If that is so then you probably shoudn't be here reading an erotica. I guess we all are here for an erotica otherwise this thread would be a waste.
we all know how much Atul and Anvita loves each other and that is what the most important thing is .I do not find Anvita a slut because if she were a Slut, she would sleep with any character of the story without any logic (just like a pornography or most of the sex stories) . Here she always fights back and its the cunning characters of the story may it be Rajat,Varun,her boss or anybody ,who makes their way to her for her body. She herself never approaches any guy, does she?? she is not filled with lust for any body. Her husband is not able to satisfy her, still she does not go out looking for men for sex. Such is her character. She loves Atul and only Atul and talking about Atul, does being a cuckold makes you a person of no reed ?? That is so illogical. If Rajat is able to generate cuckold feelings in Atul then I guess it would be a win win situation. I just imagine how wonderful it would be if that actually happens. Though It would be a real challenge for our Author here which actually is he is forte.
I feel Erotica is only complete when it has both sex and emotions involved based on realistic life approach and I have seen only a rarest of rare author could this. hats off to our author here. I really respect the way he takes out his precious time for all us readers. Salute you !!
Now we all are curious because its Anvita part which has to come now ..... waiting for the update
About the plot points, I am opting out to comment anything for now. However, it is not meant to say I do not welcome plot suggestions. Even though I do not deviate from the storyline after reading the suggestions, I must admit that they are very helpful in finding loopholes in the story.
I know I am going a little slow now it's mainly because of the fact that the story is entering the final phase, and I have to often go through the previous chapters to avoid leaving loose ends. It's a process I think most of the writers can understand. Anyways, I will try my best to post one update in five days maximum.
As I have mentioned earlier, I welcome both positive and negative feedbacks.
Looking forward to more comments and thoughts.
Keep reading and keep posting.
Krish.