Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

[krish_999]

See everyone knows that you are one hell of an exceptional & amazing writer but a few things I really wish to mention about your writing trend, Hopefully you'll take them in a positive manner.

1) I have always felt that you intentionally end each and every update with the content for which the reader came to read . Seems as if you want the reader to keep craving and force him to desperately wait for next update and when the next update comes, you again do the same thing.
let me try to explain ......
It's like, a reader reading your story is excited and is getting horny reading the update and slowly he is reaching to the point where he actualy wants to ejaculate as its getting too erotic but he is not able to climax and is left with utmost disappointment at the end of the update..You know why ????? because you don't let him ejaculate as you will always end the update at the very exact moment which he actually craved to read.
        For instance you finished the last update writing 5-6 lines about Desai and Krish finding Ananya in Desai's bed. It was the part which reader wanted to read the most but you purposely ended it there. You gave petty details in the starting 90% of the update and strategically ended it exactly at the point which reader wanted the most . I assume just to keep reader hanging and tied to the story that he will have to keep waiting for next update and trust me the next update will also be the same.The start of the update will be beat around the bush (important but not exciting)and last few lines will be ones where you will end it and again the reader will be left craving. ( I am not saying at all that the starting content is irrelevant in any way , I know it is what which is  making the story but the way you end the update is really upsetting). Would it really lessen the number of your readers if you didn't end the update there and would have written a bit more ?? 

Trust me its really really irritating and frustrating when you end every update like that.Its like intentionally snatching away the moment of peak excitement which the reader wants. He eventually have to ejaculate watching some porno or some other story just because you excited him but didn't let him finish off.You also know that you won't lose any reader if and a reader will always come back reading your story & you need to realise this by imagining yourself in readers' shoes and stop doing this petty thing. It's not some web series where you should end the episode with a plot that the user must come looking for next episode. Its an erotica and you should give something to a reader so that he feels happy at the end.
You can always take more time to write and give all the details which is the backbone of the story but at least give the reader a long update and the content they want and don't end the update like that.

2) I felt that you are way too hungry for views and comments (I know that is not wrong from an author's perspective as it encourages the writer but its really irritating the way you do it). I just saw that around 2 months back you gave a preface of story but made the viewers wait for all these months before actually start giving the updates. I'm sure if you gave a preface , then you must have had a plot ready in mind but still you made the views wait . I guess just to increase the views till you actually start writing.

why do you do it intentionally when you very well know that you're really good at writing and eventually your thread will get all the views you need.

Hopefully you will think about my views and not get offended.

It feel great when I log in to this site and see somebody has written a long paragraph to me. And if the paragraph is about someone's honest review about my story (let it be good or bad), then I feel even greater. I mean to say I'm not at all offended by your views.
I have a few thoughts to defend my style of writing. It is not something I prepared as a reply to your questions. It is rather my own justification for how I write the story the way it is.
1. About the chapter ending: 
It is true that I like to end the chapters on a high. I want my readers to be eager to read the next chapter.
I know this is basically an erotic story but without a plot that captures the reader's attention you can't have a great sex scene. So I have to build the story without losing the erotic nature of the story. I achieve this by giving hints about where the story is heading to. These hints are everywhere. But the hint that comes at the end of every chapter is the one that makes you desperate. 
In the previous chapter, I can tell you of a few hints that I could strategically end the chapter.

i) When Tejas told Krish this:

"You always talk about your wife. I think I should meet her."

ii)

Within a few days, Meera was quite comfortable with masturbating in front of me, while I locked my eyes with hers and stroked myself.

iii)

"What did you do? How did you do it? Did you do it with lights on? Did she allow you to watch her cum?" His questions were never-ending.
But I did not help him with answers for any of them.

iv) Fourth hint is where I actually ended the chapter.

The first three hints did not bother you at the time of reading because you didn't have to stop there; you were reading on. But at the fourth hint, the chapter came to an end. That's why this hint comes as jolt. When this last hint is erotic in nature, like my other friend suggested, it feels like KLPD.

My style of writing is developed on an idea that the sexual encounter in an erotic story has to happen in the reader's head. No matter what I write or how long I explain about Desai having sex with Ananya, if the reader fails to imagine this scene in his head, my writing is of no use. And if the reader is able to ejaculate thinking about it without having read a single line, then that's my story's success. If you're watching a porn and suddenly you think it's Desai fucking Ananya, then that's my story's success. If you are having sex with your wife/gf and you begins to imagine you're Desai and you're fucking Ananya, then that's my story's success.

I'm not killing your view with my justification. I understand that some of the readers are frustrated due to my habit of hanging it in the middle. But like I said, such plot points and everywhere, and I have to end the chapter in some way that captures your attention the most. I think the problem would have been solved if I were able to post the chapters every two days. It's a big IF.

2. About being hungry about views:
I don't like to agree with this, but I would be lying if I disagreed. I'm hungry for views and comments. What else am I writing here for? But I have to disagree that I manipulated my readers for it. I had posted the preface two months earlier than starting this story but it wasn't aimed at gathering views and comments even before starting the story. Since I finished my last story NODAS readers have been regularly asking me about the next one. When I revealed my plan to write Knowing...-III, they began urging me to start posting. I was getting so many private messages. I also noticed that this new site was getting a lot of old stories but very less new stories. If that trend continued, it would again be trouble for the site. So I decided to officially announce the arrival of the story by writing a preface. It was not meant to gather comments from readers; but to generate interest in other writers to write new stories. I don't know if I succeeded in that. 
I had a couple of completed chapters only in my hand when I posted the preface. That's why I kept the readers waiting for two months - to have at least ten chapters completed. But as people began to be more frustrated, I was forced to start the story. If I have a number of chapters completed, then I can keep writing peacefully. As I've noticed, it takes me one week to finish one chapter. Some chapters can take even longer than that. It's not very easy. It's not deliberately delayed.

I'm not offended, my friend. I'm actually thankful that you shared your views. I gave this long reply because I know many others too have the same views.

To other friends, you don't have to criticise the criticism unless it's about abusing/threatening/bullying. As long as it's healthy sharing of views (let it be bad review or good reviews), they should be welcomed. Everyone's views are important. Everyone's free here to share them.

Thanks for reading my story. Thanks for reading this reply too.
Love.
Krish.