18-10-2020, 03:56 PM
(This post was last modified: 18-10-2020, 03:56 PM by krish_999. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Good. But I would have liked it more if it didn't happen so early. I would have loved if she eventually went back to her house and then inviting him to her place. Maybe I little more game, a little more frustration, a little more uncertainty, a little more affection, etc, would have lifted the story to another level. Anyways I don't know how the writer is planning his story forward.
I enjoyed how the inner battle of protagonist while dealing with a helpless girl was narrated. Looking forward.
I enjoyed how the inner battle of protagonist while dealing with a helpless girl was narrated. Looking forward.