Adultery No One Dies a Saint (Completed)

[BedWinner]

Holy shit! I have been reading this story non-stop(currently at page 5) since I discovered it and have already ejaculated twice and still reading lol. It is a record for me. I love the flirting and the story line and different variety of characters. I wish in the next update I would read that somebody bombed the fuck out of Canada and as a result ankita and sahil don't have to leave. The flirting between ankita and atul is soo good that my cheeks are paining for smiling continuously. It is very difficult to find an Indian erotica as good as this. Take a bow man, and if you have time please provide a guide on how to flirt like that with a women.

[Thala07]

Bed winner
Don't rush it. We waited for weeks for every update. Don't skip any part and read it slow

[BedWinner]

I can't stop once I start.

Please read the "PS" I have written at the bottom of this text before you comment on my thoughts


Just finished chapter 19 on page number 14 and I have a bunch of thoughts that I want to share if anyone is interested.
I'm furious with anvita. Pruthvi is clearly and openly flirting with her, complements her for everything like she is his girlfriend, and he asks her to go to pub with him. I mean why does he need to go to pub with a married woman? what business does he have with her? I can't get around my head on how Ankita can't see that he is flirting with her and why she is encouraging him. she thinks of herself like she is sati saavitri, but she didn't tell atul about Rajat kissing her neck and poking his dick between her ass, she didn't tell him about shreyas either and she didn't need to hug varun like a lover on a secluded place where their faces were a just breath away, it is not ok. She never once stops to think that what she is doing is wrong and she has no guilt at all. She is like one of those "stupid but beautiful" She puts him in difficult situations and accepts flirting from everyone but the bitch has the audacity to slap atul straightaway without understanding why he did what he did and cry "this is not my atul". I hate women like these.

Also it is not ok to keep your ex as your friend and be "very" friendly with him and dance with him. It is simply a disaster waiting to happen but of course our darling anvita doesn't see it that way because she has a high opinion of herself and fuck her husband's feelings. Atul had every right to tell her to not dance with Varun intimately in front of everyone, especially when he is her EX who still clearly had feelings for her, no man would allow that. All atul asked her was not to dance intimately with varun but she made a huge thing out of it which resulted in her rejecting his boss's invite to dance(unless she was too dumb to realize that it would cause problem to atul in office or wanted to have revenge on atul, she wouldn't have done that) which further caused problems for atul in office(he is the who always suffers) and guess what, in the end she didn't ask sorry to anyone but instead made all of them apologize to her!! WHAT A MANIPULATIVE BITCH and how subtle it is in the story(kudos to the author). I guess this is the problem with having a very beautiful gf/wife. I won't blame atul because he knows that he fucked up, he acknowledges it and he did feel guilty about it but on the other hand anvita doesn't even recognize that what she is doing is wrong.

PS:JUST TO BE CLEAR, I'm not blaming the author for making her like this. He *is* a wonderful writer(one of the best I have seen) and the story has kept me hooked all day and made me feel many emotions. I just like discussing the characters and said what I felt about the characters(and you may not have the same opinion and that's fine). I hope people here don't mistake me and get offended. I am loving this story.

[Ramesh_Rocky]

I can't stop once I start.

Please read the "PS" I have written at the bottom of this text before you comment on my thoughts


Just finished chapter 19 on page number 14 and I have a bunch of thoughts that I want to share if anyone is interested.
I'm furious with anvita. Pruthvi is clearly and openly flirting with her, complements her for everything like she is his girlfriend, and he asks her to go to pub with him. I mean why does he need to go to pub with a married woman? what business does he have with her? I can't get around my head on how Ankita can't see that he is flirting with her and why she is encouraging him. she thinks of herself like she is sati saavitri, but she didn't tell atul about Rajat kissing her neck and poking his dick between her ass, she didn't tell him about shreyas either and she didn't need to hug varun like a lover on a secluded place where their faces were a just breath away, it is not ok. She never once stops to think that what she is doing is wrong and she has no guilt at all.  She is like one of those "stupid but beautiful" She puts him in difficult situations and accepts flirting from everyone but the bitch has the audacity to slap atul straightaway without understanding why he did what he did and cry "this is not my atul". I hate women like these.

Also it is not ok to keep your ex as your friend and be "very" friendly with him and dance with him. It is simply a disaster waiting to happen but of course our darling anvita doesn't see it that way because she has a high opinion of herself and fuck her husband's feelings.  Atul had every right to tell her to not dance with Varun intimately in front of everyone, especially when he is her EX who still clearly had feelings for her, no man would allow that. All atul asked her was not to dance intimately with varun but she made a huge thing out of it which resulted in her rejecting his boss's invite to dance(unless she was too dumb to realize that it would cause problem to atul in office or wanted to have revenge on atul, she wouldn't have done that) which further caused problems for atul in office(he is the who always suffers) and guess what, in the end she didn't ask sorry to anyone but instead made all of them apologize to her!! WHAT A MANIPULATIVE BITCH and how subtle it is in the story(kudos to the author). I guess this is the problem with having a very beautiful gf/wife. I won't blame atul because he knows that he fucked up, he acknowledges it and he did feel guilty about it but on the other hand anvita doesn't even recognize that what she is doing is wrong.

PS:JUST TO BE CLEAR, I'm not blaming the author for making her like this. He *is* a wonderful writer(one of the best I have seen) and the story has kept me hooked all day and made me feel many emotions. I just like discussing the characters and said what I felt about the characters(and you may not have the same opinion and that's fine). I hope people here don't mistake me and get offended. I am loving this story.

Ha ha ha we are all fece the same questions long time ago. you are the one newly faciing them but you can have answers sooner than us.

Read slow and steady if you Miss single point you will miss the fun.

Enjoy rest of the story.

[BedWinner]

haha I can't wait. It is 4:30AM and I'm still reading. You can see how much I'm enjoying but I came here to say I'm very very disappointed with chapter 33(called anvita) on page number 34. When you create a virtual world and set the rules of your virtual world, you should not break those rules, else the story would stop making sense. In this virtual world created by Krish, one of the rule is that Atul is a very handsome and very intelligent person who can seduce anyone and he is neither a cuck nor a stupid person, and certainly doesn't like it if someone tries to fuck his wife(we are provided many examples for that).

In chapter 32, we see that he knows that varun is kissing anvita on the top of the terrace and that he just adjusted himself between her legs and then we see that atul is watching this and is very very angry and sad. But then in the chapter 33, when atul confronts them, they cook up some story and he believes them. I don't understand why he believes them when he knows the they were screwing each other. He isn't the same atul we saw when he busted varun and her gf having sex in the car thinking it was anvia. I wanted confrontation between them and but instead he made love to her when they got home. It is unbelievable and I feel cheated since the author had been teasing about anvia getting caught since a long time. I feel let down. I hope I will find an answer to this in the next chapters. And how come that atul never tries to improve his performance in bed even after getting so many hints that it would ruin his marriage if he doesn't improve. And I would have loved to know what anvita was thinking before going on a night date with her hubby's boss or when inviting her student to her house when he hubby was on a trip, I know there are some explanations in one sentences but I wasn't satisfied with them, it looked out of character for her and I really wanted to know what went through her head when making those decisions.

[Wildman]

Please write knowing my wife part 3,its blockbuster series.. Please bro, wanna read more about meera

[BedWinner]

Just finished chapter 46 on page 59. Rajyavardhan is my man, cut off rapist George's hand. I don't know how a pussy grade-A chutiya like atul who is now setting up a date between his wife and his wife-cheater friend rajat become his son. We must ask that to Rajyavardhan's wife. Acutally, fuck both atul and anvia, both of them are shitty people and deserve what they are going through. Anvita is already thinking about screwing her father in law, I have no sympathies for this couple. At least people like Rajat, varun and neemi(?) know who they are and they accept their feelings but A&A want to play with the fire without burning their hands.

I don't know what I will read about Rajyavardhan in the next chapters but I love the way you have built this character.

[Ramesh_Rocky]

Just finished chapter 46 on page 59.  Rajyavardhan is my man, cut off rapist George's hand. I don't know how a pussy grade-A chutiya like atul who is now setting up a date between his wife and his wife-cheater friend rajat become his son. We must ask that to Rajyavardhan's wife. Acutally, fuck both atul and anvia, both of them are shitty people and deserve what they are going through. Anvita is already thinking about screwing her father in law, I have no sympathies for this couple. At least people like Rajat, varun and neemi(?) know who they are and they accept their feelings but A&A want to play with the fire without burning their hands.

I don't know what I will read about Rajyavardhan in the next chapters but I love the way you have built this character.

You are reading too fast I am bit feeling jealousy of you because you are reading this story in one go but we waited for days and weeks for update and the story worth the waiting.

[BedWinner]

EDIT: Added a few more words in the morning.

haha Rocky I finished the entire story :P . Yep, I finished what took 16 months for the author to write in just 3 days, so people should stop complaining when updates are delayed. It is not easy to write. (but it is also easy for me to say this since I never had to wait and I noticed he left you people with cliffhangers many times causing you frustration :D ) 

Krish, you are a genius man. The way you created all these characters, put life into their stories and the way you managed to tie up all loose ends are evidences for your brilliant writing capabilities. I have not slept for more than 15 hours in total in the last 3 days. I also skipped office so that I could completely lose myself in this fictional world you have created and I have no regrets for skipping work. I really loved that way you wrote the conversations between atul and other women. I wonder what you are like in real life. I bet you make women orgasm just with your words  :D

I have both pros and cons. I'll start with the former. 

Flirting between Atul and Ankita, and Atul's first date with ridhima are my favorite parts of the story. They were wholesome. The confidence of Ankita impressed me a lot. She was a mature woman(unlike anvita), she knew what she wanted and seemed like a joyful woman to be around. I wish she had went on more dates with Atul who can make anyone sleep with him with just his charm. Please try to write a character like her in your future stories if possible..

My fav characters are Rajyavardhan and of course Ankita lol. Rajyavardhan was a unique person, he was a ray of hope and he fit really well in the story. His unpredictable behavior and his way with words kept me hooked.
I think Radhika is one of the most underrated character. She was unpredictable and at the same time cunning. She also showed lot of confidence. But in my opinion the most well written character goes to Shreyas. He was the real wolf in sheep's skin. He wasn't stupid, he didn't rush. He consciously made his every move. Played it like a chess and he would have arrived as a champion if Rajat hadn't knocked on the door. Moreover he was also the most believable character. A wealthy boss in an unhappy marriage who wanted to screw his employee's extremely beautiful wife. His character was meticulously written, and nowhere did it feel like he would lose. I don't think anybody could have written it like this.

Although there weren't as many sex scenes in the story as one usually finds in an erotica, most of the them were really well written and did their job if you know what I mean.  ;)


Now coming to the cons...
The biggest con in my opinion is in the last chapter and to my surprise everyone is happy with the last chapter. I think last chapter is the weakest chapter in the whole story.
When Anvita revealed all her secrets to Atul, I was eagerly waiting for Atul's reaction. I mean, this was the moment we all had been waiting for, but I felt like I was let down again. I was waiting for him to break down, instead he did a U-turn and told her that he still loved her. I just couldn't believe it, since just a few hours ago he was in a very painful condition looking at George's video. Whether cucked or not, western liberal or himalayan monk, 99.999% of men in the world would be shattered at such revelations. Atul is no saint I agree(he almost fucked Radhika), but you can't just say Atul is also a cheater and hence he was righ in forgiving her. There is a degree to it. You might think I'm favouring Atul(because I'm a male) but I'm not. IMO Atul's affairs are understandable. Both Ankita and Ridhima were in desperate conditions and their encounters with Atul changed their life for better and it was also a one time thing for both of them. But Antia slept or had sexual encounters with others purely for pleasure. Atul's inability to make her orgasm doesn't allow her to go on dates with any man who compliments her beauty. This is 2019, there are multiple ways to treat that.(I am aware this is an erotica, and this is how it happens but I'm ignoring the erotica part for now) she also lied to him by assuring him that everything was alright when it wasn't. Communication is the key in any relationship and she simply sucked at being a wife. Her sexual adventures weren't just normal betrayals, she betrayed in a big way by going on dates with people whom Atul trusted. Atul respected Shreyas and had huge trust in Pruthvi. When he learned about her secret dates with shreyas or her secretly inviting Pruthvi to her house it should have ripped his heart open. It would have been understandable if she cheated him by accident one or two times. She was lying straight to his face all the time, she would have made out with shreyas with her husband sleeping beside her if Rajat hadn't knocked on the door at the right time. Later she phone sexed with him and he stole her panty which actually aroused her even more. And Atul didn't even have the slightest hint that there was something going on between his wife and Shreyas. Atul felt that he had won over Shreyas by exposing him to stock holders but now Atul should have thought that when he was getting Shreyas fired, Shreyas must have been laughing by thinking "But I almost fucked your wife and I still have her party, unwashed, Atul". Any sane person would have such thoughts.

 He also had trusted in Pruthvi(Atul is a grade-A chutiya though, no doubt about that) but she took advantage of that and used him for her favor. She also fucked him the day before their anniversary. These are not ordinary betrayals. These are huge things. Not just Anvita, everyone around Atul was playing a game, making him a fool, was getting intimate with his wife, with her permission. "Was she like this even before marriage?" he should have thought when she revealed her secrets. He should have questioned himself in his mind whether she really loved him or not like he did when he saw George's video. His heart should have exploded. Look at Mohit, he fucking killed Rajat as soon as he learnt that his wife was cheating. Mohit's action was 100 times more believable than Atul's. Atul at least should have called Ridhima himself and told her to have his child right in front of Anvita as a revenge and then could have calmed down. But he says, "You are truly an Angel, Anvi". I don't understand how he could say he loves her no matter what after all this. What is love when there is no trust? what is his definition of love anyway? Each of them were just trophies for each other. What is it that still made him love her? was it her beauty? or the praises he received for having such a beautiful wife? He didn't love her, he loved her body, he loved the idea of having the most sought after girl as his wife. He loved the compliments he received for other people for being her husband. This is why I think this chapter was poorly written and rushed.

Another thing I was hoping for was that Ankita would confess that she thought Atul was a cuck. Man, this would have been very interesting and I was very looking forward to it. But she didn't tell him about the naughty things she did with pruthvi when she had invited him to dinner thinking that her husband was a cuck. She was a slut and no man accepts a slut as his wife. Everyone deserves a second chance but giving another chance is different from simply accepting everything in an instant. Another thing I was hoping was that she would think about those threesome and other dirty thoughts she had when she had believed that he was a cuck. I wanted her to have a moment of enlightenment that she made it all up in her mind, that her husband was not a cuck, and she almost allowed Rajat to sleep with her because of her stupidity. I wanted her to realize that she was beauty with no brains.

We didn't get to witness Anvita's reaction when she found out that Atul saw George's video.

My another complaint from the last chapter is Mohit's role. It simply felt forced. I mean, what are the odds of Mohit finding out about his wife's adultery on the same day that Pruthvi knocks Rajat out to unconsciousness? It seems like you wanted to give an happy ending but an ending that was not too predictable either.

I also think Pruthvi's character was weak. I didn't find Anivta and Pruthvi's interactions(except sexual situations which were great) as entertaining as say Atul and Ridhima's. Anvita was a goddess but was neither as funny nor as interesting as Atul. Except in some situations, Prutvi's talks were boring and his repeated compliments were getting me annoyed. The pace was a bit slow in the middle of the story(I understand this happens when you have a lot of characters). Whenever a new character was introduced, I was like "Oh man.. Not again". I felt like Anvita's office characters were a bit boring, Of course you had to introduce new characters to keep the storyline open to different possibilities since nobody knew the entire story. So can't really complain much. Also Manjot getting bused exactly at the right time just as he was about to bang Anvita felt it was straight from bollywood.

 Reading comments about cuckold, I also have an interesting fantasy. What if Sahil saw Atul and Ankita fucking and seeing her wife moan like that turned him on which improved his performance with his wife? And then a threesome? I think it would have been very erotic(at least for me, since I love Ankita). It would have made Atul's acceptance to Rajat's idea of allowing Anvita to go on dates with other men to improve his performance in bed more believable. It would have also made Atul more guilty and also Ankita would have found happiness. 

Also you made Atul's character too stupid. It kills the fun since everyone could manipulate him. Rajat was never shown in good light but Atul still believed him. It doesn't take a Rajyavardhan to know that Rajat was a wolf in sheep's clothes.

I may have missed something or misinterpreted something. If that's the case, I'm sorry, I read the whole story in 3 days. For now, these are my honest thoughts and I hope my criticisms would be taken positively if they are valid.
Pros obviously heavily over weigh the cons and it is one of the best Indian stories I have read. These characters touched my heart and I don't know if I will be able to fantasize about married women in my neighborhood anymore lol. Can't believe I have written 1700+ words lol, I have never done something like this. Finally, thanks for giving us this story Krish. We should be grateful that in a world where nothing is free and most of the stories are shit, a talented writer like you chose to spend his time on entertaining us and more importantly you finished the story as promised even if it took you 16 months( I can't exercise straight for a week  :D ). That takes strong will.1

[Ramesh_Rocky]

EDIT: Added a few more words in the morning.

haha Rocky I finished the entire story :P . Yep, I finished what took 16 months for the author to write in just 3 days, so people should stop complaining when updates are delayed. It is not easy to write. (but it is also easy for me to say this since I never had to wait and I noticed he left you people with cliffhangers many times causing you frustration :D ) 

Krish, you are a genius man. The way you created all these characters, put life into their stories and the way you managed to tie up all loose ends are evidences for your brilliant writing capabilities. I have not slept for more than 15 hours in total in the last 3 days. I also skipped office so that I could completely lose myself in this fictional world you have created and I have no regrets for skipping work. I really loved that way you wrote the conversations between atul and other women. I wonder what you are like in real life. I bet you make women orgasm just with your words  :D

I have both pros and cons. I'll start with the former. 

Flirting between Atul and Ankita, and Atul's first date with ridhima are my favorite parts of the story. They were wholesome. The confidence of Ankita impressed me a lot. She was a mature woman(unlike anvita), she knew what she wanted and seemed like a joyful woman to be around. I wish she had went on more dates with Atul who can make anyone sleep with him with just his charm. Please try to write a character like her in your future stories if possible..

My fav characters are Rajyavardhan and of course Ankita lol. Rajyavardhan was a unique person, he was a ray of hope and he fit really well in the story. His unpredictable behavior and his way with words kept me hooked.
I think Radhika is one of the most underrated character. She was unpredictable and at the same time cunning. She also showed lot of confidence. But in my opinion the most well written character goes to Shreyas. He was the real wolf in sheep's skin. He wasn't stupid, he didn't rush. He consciously made his every move. Played it like a chess and he would have arrived as a champion if Rajat hadn't knocked on the door. Moreover he was also the most believable character. A wealthy boss in an unhappy marriage who wanted to screw his employee's extremely beautiful wife. His character was meticulously written, and nowhere did it feel like he would lose. I don't think anybody could have written it like this.

Although there weren't as many sex scenes in the story as one usually finds in an erotica, most of the them were really well written and did their job if you know what I mean.  ;)


Now coming to the cons...
The biggest con in my opinion is in the last chapter and to my surprise everyone is happy with the last chapter. I think last chapter is the weakest chapter in the whole story.
When Anvita revealed all her secrets to Atul, I was eagerly waiting for Atul's reaction. I mean, this was the moment we all had been waiting for, but I felt like I was let down again. I was waiting for him to break down, instead he did a U-turn and told her that he still loved her. I just couldn't believe it, since just a few hours ago he was in a very painful condition looking at George's video. Whether cucked or not, western liberal or himalayan monk, 99.999% of men in the world would be shattered at such revelations. Atul is no saint I agree(he almost fucked Radhika), but you can't just say Atul is also a cheater and hence he was righ in forgiving her. There is a degree to it. You might think I'm favouring Atul(because I'm a male) but I'm not. IMO Atul's affairs are understandable. Both Ankita and Ridhima were in desperate conditions and their encounters with Atul changed their life for better and it was also a one time thing for both of them. But Antia slept or had sexual encounters with others purely for pleasure. Atul's inability to make her orgasm doesn't allow her to go on dates with any man who compliments her beauty. This is 2019, there are multiple ways to treat that.(I am aware this is an erotica, and this is how it happens but I'm ignoring the erotica part for now) she also lied to him by assuring him that everything was alright when it wasn't. Communication is the key in any relationship and she simply sucked at being a wife. Her sexual adventures weren't just normal betrayals, she betrayed in a big way by going on dates with people whom Atul trusted. Atul respected Shreyas and had huge trust in Pruthvi. When he learned about her secret dates with shreyas or her secretly inviting Pruthvi to her house it should have ripped his heart open. It would have been understandable if she cheated him by accident one or two times. She was lying straight to his face all the time, she would have made out with shreyas with her husband sleeping beside her if Rajat hadn't knocked on the door at the right time. Later she phone sexed with him and he stole her panty which actually aroused her even more. And Atul didn't even have the slightest hint that there was something going on between his wife and Shreyas. Atul felt that he had won over Shreyas by exposing him to stock holders but now Atul should have thought that when he was getting Shreyas fired, Shreyas must have been laughing by thinking "But I almost fucked your wife and I still have her party, unwashed, Atul". Any sane person would have such thoughts.

 He also had trusted in Pruthvi(Atul is a grade-A chutiya though, no doubt about that) but she took advantage of that and used him for her favor. She also fucked him the day before their anniversary. These are not ordinary betrayals. These are huge things. Not just Anvita, everyone around Atul was playing a game, making him a fool, was getting intimate with his wife, with her permission. "Was she like this even before marriage?" he should have thought when she revealed her secrets. He should have questioned himself in his mind whether she really loved him or not like he did when he saw George's video. His heart should have exploded. Look at Mohit, he fucking killed Rajat as soon as he learnt that his wife was cheating. Mohit's action was 100 times more believable than Atul's. Atul at least should have called Ridhima himself and told her to have his child right in front of Anvita as a revenge and then could have calmed down. But he says, "You are truly an Angel, Anvi". I don't understand how he could say he loves her no matter what after all this. What is love when there is no trust? what is his definition of love anyway? Each of them were just trophies for each other. What is it that still made him love her? was it her beauty? or the praises he received for having such a beautiful wife? He didn't love her, he loved her body, he loved the idea of having the most sought after girl as his wife. He loved the compliments he received for other people for being her husband. This is why I think this chapter was poorly written and rushed.

Another thing I was hoping for was that Ankita would confess that she thought Atul was a cuck. Man, this would have been very interesting and I was very looking forward to it. But she didn't tell him about the naughty things she did with pruthvi when she had invited him to dinner thinking that her husband was a cuck. She was a slut and no man accepts a slut as his wife. Everyone deserves a second chance but giving another chance is different from simply accepting everything in an instant. Another thing I was hoping was that she would think about those threesome and other dirty thoughts she had when she had believed that he was a cuck. I wanted her to have a moment of enlightenment that she made it all up in her mind, that her husband was not a cuck, and she almost allowed Rajat to sleep with her because of her stupidity. I wanted her to realize that she was beauty with no brains.

We didn't get to witness Anvita's reaction when she found out that Atul saw George's video.

My another complaint from the last chapter is Mohit's role. It simply felt forced. I mean, what are the odds of Mohit finding out about his wife's adultery on the same day that Pruthvi knocks Rajat out to unconsciousness? It seems like you wanted to give an happy ending but an ending that was not too predictable either.

I also think Pruthvi's character was weak. I didn't find Anivta and Pruthvi's interactions(except sexual situations which were great) as entertaining as say Atul and Ridhima's. Anvita was a goddess but was neither as funny nor as interesting as Atul. Except in some situations, Prutvi's talks were boring and his repeated compliments were getting me annoyed. The pace was a bit slow in the middle of the story(I understand this happens when you have a lot of characters). Whenever a new character was introduced, I was like "Oh man.. Not again". I felt like Anvita's office characters were a bit boring, Of course you had to introduce new characters to keep the storyline open to different possibilities since nobody knew the entire story. So can't really complain much. Also Manjot getting bused exactly at the right time just as he was about to bang Anvita felt it was straight from bollywood.

 Reading comments about cuckold, I also have an interesting fantasy. What if Sahil saw Atul and Ankita fucking and seeing her wife moan like that turned him on which improved his performance with his wife? And then a threesome?  I think it would have been very erotic(at least for me, since I love Ankita). It would have made Atul's acceptance to Rajat's idea of allowing Anvita to go on dates with other men to improve his performance in bed more believable. It would have also made Atul more guilty and also Ankita would have found happiness. 

Also you made Atul's character too stupid. It kills the fun since everyone could manipulate him. Rajat was never shown in good light but Atul still believed him. It doesn't take a Rajyavardhan to know that Rajat was a wolf in sheep's clothes.

I may have missed something or misinterpreted something. If that's the case, I'm sorry, I read the whole story in 3 days. For now, these are my honest thoughts and I hope my criticisms would be taken positively if they are valid.
Pros obviously heavily over weigh the cons and it is one of the best Indian stories I have read. These characters touched my heart and I don't know if I will be able to fantasize about married women in my neighborhood anymore lol. Can't believe I have written 1700+ words lol, I have never done something like this. Finally, thanks for giving us this story Krish. We should be grateful that in a world where nothing is free and most of the stories are shit, a talented writer like you chose to spend his time on entertaining us and more importantly you finished the story as promised even if it took you 16 months( I can't exercise straight for a week  :D ). That takes strong will.1

Hi,

Everyone thinking Atul point of view that is why everyone feeling Atul reaction was not right. This is just because Krish explain Atul mind & heart completely to us in the story but he explained anvita mind completely not her heart.he did it to keep our mind focus and interest on story. In Varun episode she keep saying about Atul to Varun yes she did some mistakes and just like that Atul did the same mistakes too. Anvita has soft Conner towards Prithvi and Atul has towards ridhima.george blackmailed and forced anvita.atul suduced by ankitha. Krish driving both  anvita and Atul characters parallely.but we understand atut better than anvita.

Note:- I really can't remember this did Krish explain the night party situation anvita with Shreyas and Atul staying with ridhima in hotel room.

[hhhotboy2000]

It’s excellent story......... well written explained........It’s outstanding..........I thanks to krish for so much hard work

Krish your stories are superb


When are you starting new one k

[searuler]

Well reviewed analysis by BedWinner.
I wrote somewhere in between the story that it should be renamed as 'Woman of easy virtue and effects of premature ejaculation''
Not taking anything away from the quality of the story, I feel the course of the story was changed after that comment by me.

[krish_999]

EDIT: Added a few more words....

Hi Bedwinner.
1700+ words. Wow.
I can't tell you in words how delighted I'm to read your review.
You know the writers here in Xossipy constantly ask for comments. Most of them post one chapter and start asking for comments. Many lose interest because of lack of comments and leave without finishing the work. My stories, thankfully, have never been short of comments. 90 percent of posts in this thread were made by the readers. A few of the readers have made more posts than myself in this thread. A number of them have been following this story from the beginning. I said I worked on this story for 16 months; likewise there are people who've followed this story for the whole nine months in running, waiting patiently (I hope so) for each episode.
Many have written long, thought provoking reviews, discussing my characters and their actions. It just amazes me how much they think about Atul and Anvita and other characters in this story. When they discuss in detail, I feel like I have succeeded in telling my story in a believable way. That's all I need to survive in here.
And your review is my triumph. I'm just honoured.
Because you felt compelled to write these 1700+ words, reviewing my story. It takes some effort.
And I thank you for all those words you've penned in this thread, both positive and negative. What makes your review more special is that it comes after finishing the story. I'm grateful for your effort in that regard.

Now about the content of your review. Of course, I have enjoyed reading the pros. The characters Rajyavardhan and Shreyas have been favourites of many readers. Most of the characters in this story actually have their own story arcs that were to be revealed only when required. The characters of Rajyavardhan and Shreyas were important because at some point they would mould the character of Atul and Anvita. Prithvi's character somehow came out as the weakest. Actually the character was designed as a teen who would have never thought he would get to sleep with Anvita. If Anvita had slept with him, it was merely his luck. But somehow, readers didn't like this scenario. 
Now the cons:

...I think last chapter is the weakest chapter in the whole story.
When Anvita revealed all her secrets to Atul, I was eagerly waiting for Atul's reaction. I mean, this was the moment we all had been waiting for, but I felt like I was let down again. I was waiting for him to break down, instead he did a U-turn and told her that he still loved her. I just couldn't believe it, since just a few hours ago he was in a very painful condition looking at George's video. Whether cucked or not, western liberal or himalayan monk, 99.999% of men in the world would be shattered at such revelations. Atul is no saint I agree(he almost fucked Radhika), but you can't just say Atul is also a cheater and hence he was right in forgiving her....

What you've suggested is the most expected reaction from a normal husband. But Atul's case is a bit different. By the time he got to the point of confronting her, he was tested enough by various incidents and he was not sure whether he had the moral right to show disappointment. He had cheated on Anvita twice. He had impregnated one. And also he knew that Anvita was now aware of his betrayal. 
If you think you can justify his cheating cause, then you can justify her cheating cause also. The truth about cheating is always the same. Everyone is given a chance to say no. But when they ignore it, the cheating happens. In this story, no one is a saint. Radhika is a character who wants to get even with Varun by sleeping with his friend. Towards the ending, we see Varun coming back to Atul to apologise. That's human psyche. The thought that we already had it even might lessen the pain of losing. It's just an idea, not a universal truth. The point is, Atul had no right to stand in front of his wife and ask her one simple question: 'why?'. One more thing, when she said she had murdered Rajat, he realised that there's bigger threat to destroy his life.
Haven't you seen those movies where an avalanche/disaster strikes and it unites a parted couple/friends? In NODAS, the bigger threat unites two souls who were on the brink of separation. That's how I thought about it.

Atul's inability to make her orgasm doesn't allow her to go on dates with any man who compliments her beauty. This is 2019, there are multiple ways to treat that.(I am aware this is an erotica, and this is how it happens but I'm ignoring the erotica part for now) she also lied to him by assuring him that everything was alright when it wasn't.

This issue was just a means to develop desperation in Anvita. Obviously, this is the easiest way to work it in erotica. We need to deny the married woman good sex, in order to make the readers think she might start searching for it very soon. This trick works only if we stop the husband from seeing a doctor, right? The whole story is planned from the wedding to first wedding anniversary. It's a short period of time and also, Anvita was not keeping him informed of his failure.

Communication is the key in any relationship and she simply sucked at being a wife.

Lack of communication between husband and wife has been a complaint I received in the Knowing... series as well. I must remind you that this is the problem that we see a lot in the real world. If they do communicate efficiently, then a lot of fights, divorces and separations wouldn't have happened. 
So basically, letting Anvita and Atul communicate efficiently would kill the issue. That's not what we wanted to happen. 

Her sexual adventures weren't just normal betrayals, she betrayed in a big way by going on dates with people whom Atul trusted. Atul respected Shreyas and had huge trust in Prithvi. When he learned about her secret dates with shreyas or her secretly inviting Prithvi to her house it should have ripped his heart open. It would have been understandable if she cheated him by accident one or two times. She was lying straight to his face all the time, she would have made out with shreyas with her husband sleeping beside her if Rajat hadn't knocked on the door at the right time. Later she phone sexed with him and he stole her panty which actually aroused her even more. And Atul didn't even have the slightest hint that there was something going on between his wife and Shreyas. Atul felt that he had won over Shreyas by exposing him to stock holders but now Atul should have thought that when he was getting Shreyas fired, Shreyas must have been laughing by thinking "But I almost fucked your wife and I still have her party, unwashed, Atul". Any sane person would have such thoughts.

I think you were a bit biased here.
Whatever Anvita did, the same goes true for Atul too.
Anvita has no idea that her husband has slept with her sister. And Atul is not going to tell her the truth. Anvita will keep trusting her sister. Atul had small sessions with Leona, Radhika, Ridhima, and Ankita before he went on to sleep with the latter. There were many instances where he was interrupted, or else he would have slept with all these women. So there's no point in thinking Anvita is the only one faltered.

These are not ordinary betrayals. These are huge things.

Again, biased. Look at the incident when Atul slept with Ankita. He was with Anvita that morning; then he took Ankita to her house and fucked her, and returned home, to an unsuspecting Anvita, pretending innocent. Do you think it's ordinary betrayal?
Of course, if you weigh their actions you might find one's betrayal is more sick than the other. But I think some readers might just think the opposite. 

The woman characters in these erotic stories are always on the verge of being categorised. If she makes a choice about whom to fuck, she's called a manipulative slut. If she doesn't make such a choice, (she still gets fucked - it's Xossipy ;P ) she's too weak. If she doesn't fuck at all, then that story shouldn't be in Xossipy.
With male characters, we do not have this issue. If they fuck around, they are smart. If they do not, they are just unlucky?

What is love when there is no trust? what is his definition of love anyway? Each of them were just trophies for each other. What is it that still made him love her? was it her beauty? or the praises he received for having such a beautiful wife? He didn't love her, he loved her body, he loved the idea of having the most sought after girl as his wife. He loved the compliments he received for other people for being her husband.

Debatable, interesting questions to ponder over.

Another thing I was hoping for was that Ankita would confess that she thought Atul was a cuck.

I had given the hint of a cuck theme in the middle of the story, and it was wound up there itself. I think she would have confessed it (and it would be an accusation because we have Atul's point of view + the prologue proves he isn't a willing cuck) if her doubts weren't cleared already. During the climatic chapters it had become an issue long gone.

We didn't get to witness Anvita's reaction when she found out that Atul saw George's video.

Atul doesn't tell her that he knows. There's no point in telling her that he saw it and thought she cheated on him, after it was revealed as a bang.

My another complaint from the last chapter is Mohit's role. It simply felt forced. I mean, what are the odds of Mohit finding out about his wife's adultery on the same day that Pruthvi knocks Rajat out to unconsciousness? It seems like you wanted to give an happy ending but an ending that was not too predictable either.

Exactly like you thought. A little twist is needed. Otherwise you'd write the ending was too predictable. The twists in the stories are acceptable when they are written in a believable manner. If you think it was forced, I'm very happy to say I've noticed it a feedback on my writing. This is why I don't hate negative reviews at all. It improves my writing.

Whenever a new character was introduced, I was like "Oh man.. Not again".

I had this fear in the beginning but couldn't avoid the risk. The story was intended to have a lot of characters.

Rajat was never shown in good light but Atul still believed him.

Noted. Their friendship was not established well.

Reading comments about cuckold, I also have an interesting fantasy. What if Sahil saw Atul and Ankita fucking and seeing her wife moan like that turned him on which improved his performance with his wife? And then a threesome? I think it would have been very erotic(at least for me, since I love Ankita). It would have made Atul's acceptance to Rajat's idea of allowing Anvita to go on dates with other men to improve his performance in bed more believable. It would have also made Atul more guilty and also Ankita would have found happiness.

That's a very nice thought. /font]
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It was a very pleasing review. I want to repeat my earlier words that I have no issue with anyone giving me a negative review. 
The fact that my story held your attention for straight three days itself is a huge compliment. And the fact that it forced you to write a 1700+ words review is like a bonus. I have read all of your comments here and they are worth reading again and again. Thank you for spending your valuable time to give such a long review.

Keep reading and keep posting.
Krish.

[Billad980]

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[sachinboy]

Hi, Does anyone have a pdf link to the whole story? If yes, could you please share. Thanks in advance

[koolme98]

Awesome end, totally worth the wait...

I just loved it, everyone turned to an hero.... Wow

Anvita, Riddhima, Atul, Rajyavardhan everyone has a new and beautiful life ahead..

Thanks a ton Krish...

[Sparrow89]

Thanks for completing this story Krish. Great finish. Eagerly waiting for ur new story. Please continue to write.

[Thala07]

krish please consider posting the episodes which u thought to post and then cancelled them... it will be nice to read them now

[Johnyg484]

Thanks a lot for this beautiful story Krish. It's among one of the best, I have ever read. It's written so beautifully that the characters will be there in my mind for some time. I think ,the situations and the character's response to the situations was the main thing in this beautiful story. I was expecting something between the father in law and the daughter in law, and the story of anvita's professor, maybe for another time. Thanks again for the story. Will be looking for your other works.
Thanks ???

[ronv74]

Thanks Krish for this amazing story. It does remind you of characters you have met in life. You are one hell of a writer and should seriously consider publishing.
Hats off to you for maintaining your cool despite all the comments and providing us readers a quality read. Will look forward to your stories; you simply can't squeeze creativity.