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I met 2 great characters in this story.
1. Rajyawardhan
2. Ridhima
My life will be great if I meet someone like Ridhima/ Rajyawardhan.
I feel sad knowing that Ridhima is going to be lonely for rest of the life. But, that's life..
For me, Ridhima is the main character, not Anvita.
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Bro if u thinking writing a new story please consider knowing my wife.... Part 3.... Meera is more damn dream girl than anvitha.. Its my request..
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What a story! Great finish. Very emotional and logical story
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Hi Krish post the parts which u had written and planned earlier. Will see it as behind the scenes in movies.
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Guys any other new stories here that match the entertainment provided by this one. Guys please tell
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Krish post the other plots which u have planned in this story
Guys request him for that
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(08-08-2019, 02:46 PM)The Last samurai Wrote: Hi Krish post the parts which u had written and planned earlier. Will see it as behind the scenes in movies.
(10-08-2019, 06:31 AM)Thala07 Wrote: Krish post the other plots which u have planned in this story
Guys request him for that
Sorry guys I can't.
One, I don't have those parts. They are just some ideas. Some were indeed written as chapters, but I think I have deleted them.
Also, I think posting those episodes might disturb the final image that's left by the story in readers' mind.
I hope you understand.
However, about the untold portion of Anvita's relationship with her college professor Manhas, I may come up with a small spin-off. But right now I'm not writing anything.
Keep in touch guys, see you around here.
Keep posting, keep reading.
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Ok krish
We understand
Thank u
Pls take some rest
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It was a great story indeed no doubt about that but for me it will remain unfinished coz the plots like anvita and rajyavardhan intimacy in dream nd anvita's hots of her FIL are neglected.
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Now it's seems previous cuck theme was more realistic and appropriate rather than this version. However this is just my point of view. Who knows to cook only they have rights to decide in which way to cook and serve output.
I am looking forward in hope to read more about neeti and her husband mahesh.
I have no excitement to read anvita - manhas prequel.
Johny bravo got cheating wife.
Now every cheating wife is praying to god that to marry husband like atul aka johny bravo only.
Anvita and atul reactions were very fantasy after knowing their infidelity. Not happy to sought for happy ending.
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With ur permission krish i wud like to rewrite the final chapter again with a small twist. If u allow
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khud ka to thread to likha nahi jaata, doosre ka likhenge. what a joke ?
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(11-08-2019, 05:41 PM)fasterboy Wrote: Now it's seems previous cuck theme was more realistic and appropriate rather than this version. However this is just my point of view. Who knows to cook only they have rights to decide in which way to cook and serve output.
I am looking forward in hope to read more about neeti and her husband mahesh.
I have no excitement to read anvita - manhas prequel.
Johny bravo got cheating wife.
Now every cheating wife is praying to god that to marry husband like atul aka johny bravo only.
Anvita and atul reactions were very fantasy after knowing their infidelity. Not happy to sought for happy ending. The cuck theme is one of the most sought after in this forum. When I said about how this story could have been one of them, it is obvious many of the readers here would look at it like a lost chance. But as I have already mentioned, this theme wouldn't have allowed me to have the ending that I wanted to write. I had chosen the name of the story because of a reason and I wanted to bring the story from Point A to Point B which I was very clear about from the initial thought process itself. It was not supposed to be a cuckold story, and I just made sure it didn't end up something I didn't want. For cuckold story fans, I may write another story, a new one or a Knowing..part III.
About the spin-off with Neeti and Mohit, I do not hold much interest. Because it's a story of desperation and you know it has a tragic end. We don't what happens to Neeti after Mohit's arrest. And that story is too big and serious for a forum like xossipy, and I do not have the confidence to write on how her life is going to be.
Anvita - Manhas prequel can be a campus story. It can have a light tone with the proceedings. It could be something different, with all the characters happening to be amateurs. This story will not have Atul. And we do not know who is going to be.
Quote:Johny bravo got a cheating wife
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Atul himself is a cheater. They deserve to forgive each other.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts bro.
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(12-08-2019, 11:37 AM)Punjabi1slut Wrote: With ur permission krish i wud like to rewrite the final chapter again with a small twist. If u allow
(12-08-2019, 01:15 PM)fasterboy Wrote: khud ka to thread to likha nahi jaata, doosre ka likhenge. what a joke ?
Do I need to add anything here?
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(06-08-2019, 07:12 PM)Punjabi1slut Wrote: I am sorry krish u defeated the purpose of erotica. Nobody is here for the thrillzz....for that we can watch any movie...I am only criticizing for u to improve upon ur writing skills....
Some of fans of aditi want me to complete ADITI BEAUTIFUL WIFE DECEIVED....well give me sone time i might restart it...
(12-08-2019, 11:37 AM)Punjabi1slut Wrote: With ur permission krish i wud like to rewrite the final chapter again with a small twist. If u allow
Charity begins at home. First prove yourself as punjabi1slut by cleaning your mess.
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The main attraction in Xossipy site was Mr. Krish's story. Now that is completed. At the moment, none of the stories are worth reading. One reason, most of the stories are copied from Xossip and not completed. The original authors are elsewhere, or if they are here, they are not continuing like krish did. I appreciate Krish for completing his stories.
I also request Krish to start a new story, may second part the this story or third part to his first story. His writing skills are exceptional. Those who expect some hardcore are disappointed, but that is his style.
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(13-08-2019, 08:42 PM)rv3443 Wrote: The main attraction in Xossipy site was Mr. Krish's story. Now that is completed. At the moment, none of the stories are worth reading. One reason, most of the stories are copied from Xossip and not completed. The original authors are elsewhere, or if they are here, they are not continuing like krish did. I appreciate Krish for completing his stories.
I also request Krish to start a new story, may second part the this story or third part to his first story. His writing skills are exceptional. Those who expect some hardcore are disappointed, but that is his style. Very true.
This story might not have hardcore action but it never bored us. There were many other things that kept us on the edge. People were most of the time on a guessing game. Who is going to get anvita. Who sent the video. Who was in the video. Who killed Rajat. These were some questions that had every one come up with a different answer. Apart from that the end of every chapter left us wanting to read the next chapter ASAP.
Some were able to get their guessing right sometimes. But Krish proved most of them wrong. Anf after all these chapters he still managed to bring it to an emotional end.
How much thrill people want here in Xossipy. I wonder.
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I read the story from the very beginning to the end. And I must say it's an awesome one. Most of the stories here are copied and with horrible grammar. Rare to find quality stories like this.
I used to browse every 2/3 days to check updates cause in the end phase the update wasn't that frequent. And now since the story is ended I don't know what to check in xossipy lol
I would be happy if krish starts another story with cuckhold theme.
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Please start Knowing..part III. I was visiting this site only because of this story.
Anyway thanks for this wonderful story...
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I just found this story. I haven't read a single word yet. I hope it is as good as you all say, I'm also not a fan of just hardcore erotica, I want an interesting story too and I'm not a fan of cuckold stories unless they are really well written. So I think I will enjoy this.
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