Adultery No One Dies a Saint (Completed)
Thank you Krish for the update. Finally the story ends and also the reason to visit xossipy. Story ended as expected. Nothing to say much, it was a wonderful story journey with Krish some times commenting , scolding and appreciating. If you are starting anything new keep us informed. However definitely will start to read once the story ends. Can't wait weekly for the update.
Coming to story bit disappointed anvita could not enjoy appart from childish prithvi. It's ur story and we don't have much choice only can follow it. U kept twist in every story and continued till the end upto last part. U r good writer Krish continue with it. Good bye Krish for now meet u in some other story journey of yours................
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Thankyou very much Krish for the beautiful story and EXCELLENT writing skills.
Plot is lacking in some erotic scenes but not less than any Thriller movie.
Thanks a bunch for your quality of writings and baring the readers pressure.

Have a Great day.
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Lovely Story and wonderfully characterized!! I was guessing it to be Prithvi or Mohit, and they both had hand!!

Feel sorry for Rajat's family.

Thanks again for story, though I would have liked some steamy raunchy scenes with Anvita and Rajat, this too is good ending.
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Krish, a big thanks for your dedication and writing skills.

The journey of Atul and Anvita has been emotionally erotic. This story refines your talent as one of the best erotic writers.

All your stories have been fabulous reads and improved one after another in progression. With each new story you have reached a new milestone in creative erotic writing.

Keep it up and hopefully very sooner you would start another story or a part 3 of "Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well".
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This is the best story on this forum.

I loved Rajyawardhan the most. Every story must have one character like him.

Prithvi was childish, but he acted like an adult during Rajat incident. I loved his caring towards Anvita.

You gave a mind blowing updates everytime. Thank you for this great story..
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(06-08-2019, 02:44 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: This is the best story on this forum.

I loved Rajyawardhan the most. Every story must have one character like him.

Prithvi was childish, but he acted like an adult during Rajat incident. I loved his caring towards Anvita.

You gave a mind blowing updates everytime. Thank you for this great story..

This is a sign of a great author every character was well defined, they have their own space. Though the goal of most of the characters was same but still they had unique properties that made the story more interesting. All the characters could be easily related to real life people that we encounter on daily basis. 

The whole concept and execution for the same was well thought of. 

This is the uniqueness in the stories of krish.
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Awesome end, totally worth the wait...

I just loved it, everyone turned to an hero.... Wow

Anvita, Riddhima, Atul, Rajyavardhan everyone has a new and beautiful life ahead..

Thanks a ton Krish...
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I am sorry krish u defeated the purpose of erotica. Nobody is here for the thrillzz....for that we can watch any movie...I am only criticizing for u to improve upon ur writing skills....
Some of fans of aditi want me to complete ADITI BEAUTIFUL WIFE DECEIVED....well give me sone time i might restart it...
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(31-12-2018, 01:18 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 

Have given up on story.. not worth waiting for another unclear-ending   update almost 20 chapters and nothing remains except our expectation of something will happen.

anyway, to be in piece and be far way from this,  have un-subscribed this thread 

Byeeeeee

Above post was on 31-12-2018.

I was not expecting a sex episode on each update, just seduction alone with regular time frame.  

Just out of curiosity , I visited this time.  I see the last few posts before your final update were similar to my level of frustrations.

Am Happy to see it end. Now, I will read peacefully.

Loved your stories always. Loved this as well.

Congratulations Kris. You Best.
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Thanks & Regards,
Givemeextra
One man's wife is another man's slut
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superb story




lot of erotics.........................with happy results...........




great



GREAT



you are GReAT KRISH.......................
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Heart 
Amazing story krish.
Just wow.
Keep writing bro...
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Waah bahut khub janab... Kitani behtarin tarike se hum sab ka chutiya kata hai... The only character in the story I love is Ridhima aur bhai tumne usi character Ko itna neeche gira diya ki kya bolu... Anvita Ko utha ne ke liye tumne ek jo ki powerful character tha usi ki gaand maar li.... Atul to hai hi madarchod saala uska character hi tumne aese built Kiya par mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum bhi Atul ke character mein hi guys jaoge... Sab kuchh faila kar rakh diya yaar bhai tumne... Agar Ridhima ko alag hi karna tha to ye Ridhima ka decision hona chahiye tha na ki Atul chutiye ka....

I love this story very much krish but the Ridhima's pettiness... Atul and Anvita they both deserve each other hahaha..... Atul is same like Manu (the other story character)...

Agar Atul jaise chutiye na rahenge to hum sab Ko Anvita Jaisi chuddakkad aurat kaha se milegi.... Hahahahaha..... Ye ending itna unexpected hai ki saala hasi hi nahi Rukh rahi meri....

And as I said earlier "I never ever going to read your upcoming stories" now change it "I would love to read another one" but this time give updates day to day basis.
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(06-08-2019, 07:12 PM)Punjabi1slut Wrote: I am sorry krish u defeated the purpose of erotica. Nobody is here for the thrillzz....for that we can watch any movie...I am only criticizing for u to improve upon ur writing skills....
Some of fans of aditi want me to complete ADITI BEAUTIFUL WIFE DECEIVED....well give me sone time i might restart it...

Dear punjabi1slut

Hope some day you will read the post.

Its a crime to leave stories in incomplete and abandoned state. Further its a punishable offense to criticize others  without introspection.
May God bring good sense in you to motivate and complete the story.

If I had 10% of the writing skill of what God have gifted  you, I would have completed the story. I had imagined the story line, but while presenting it was a pity mess. I only could laugh at me.

So, pl pl continue and complete "Aditi beautiful wife deceived." You may not earn money, But you will be appreciated. In turn you will feel happy.
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Good story.
Good ending.
Repped you.
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Whole plot is base on if you got erectile dysfunction go just screw other woman and your will be cured. Only innocent two were harm as mahesh and prithvi both due to atul and anvita's bitchiness.

I hope you will write seprate thread for neeti-mahesh
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(07-08-2019, 11:57 AM)fasterboy Wrote: Whole plot is base on if you got erectile dysfunction go just screw other woman and your will be cured. Only innocent two were harm as mahesh and prithvi both due to atul and anvita's bitchiness.

I hope you will write seprate thread for neeti-mahesh

I don't think so 

No one is innocent in this story they both try to seduce a married woman and Manish(not mahesh) and he didn't harm by any one.
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A great story has come to an end. Why Varun is not mentioned in the final episode. Thank you so much for the story Krish.
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Hi guys, 

A few facts about the story.

1. I started working on this story on 07th April 2018. The story thread was created in Xossip 7 months after that, and by then I had worked out almost 35 chapters. After posting 10 chapters, the Xossip site was discontinued. Then came Xossipy and I restarted posting it from the beginning, since 29 Nov 18.
Now it has ended on 05 Aug 19.
So, how long it took me? Almost 16 months.

2. Initially, the story was developed in the first person, telling the whole story in Atul's point of view. But then I thought it would look exactly like 'Knowing...' series and so I changed it.

3.  The story's working title was 'My wife's friends.' The other considerations were 'The Chase Begins', 'The Chase: the curious case of a husband and wife', and 'the forbidden fruit'. The story's premise was a husband whose wife is being chased/pursued by their friends - whom he cannot restrict. Atul knows that they have dirty dreams about Anvita and he hates that. Then I discarded these titles for I thought they were too cliched in forums like Xossipy.

4. While working on it under the title of 'forbidden fruit', the story had more cuckold theme attached to it. The story had two phases. The first phase was to end after the rooftop night when Varun got intimate with a drunk Anvita. That night Varun would go on to have sex with her, making her cum(for the first time after her marriage, obviously) while Atul was forced to watch it silently because of the presence of his loudmouth colleagues on the same rooftop. The ending of phase 1 was explained like this:-
Atul and Anvita talk more about it (the sex with Varun) and with it, their own sexual experience with each other improves drastically. When he enquires about Varun’s size, she says he was just like Atul. More than the size, it was the ‘forbidden fruit’ factor that turned her on so much. Varun later meets Atul and apologises for his mistake. He claims he had read her signals wrong and he couldn’t control himself as he was under the influence of alcohol as well.
A few more nights later, Anvita mentions to Atul about Varun asking her out for a dinner. She said ‘if you are okay, may I tell yes to him?’ And Atul replied ‘yes.'

After this, in phase 2, the story sticks to the cuckold theme where Anvita would go on with others too. In this phase, everyone gets to fuck her. But there was no thrill once the woman becomes a slut. It would have been a run-of-the-mill story with no scope for a nice ending.

5. During the initial story building, there were many sexual encounters. Varun had sex with Anvita in the rooftop. Shreyas had sex with her in the car which Atul had to witness while hiding in the dicky. Prithvi had sex with her in his dad's room - in a standing position - during the wedding reception. Maniesh had sex with Ridhima twice -the second time being in Atul's presence, him watching and masturbating. Nikunj Sahni had sex with Radhika first and later Atul joining them for a threesome. Manjot would bang Ridhima. And Atul had sex with Ankita not once but twice. However, Rajat doesn't get it even in this version!
I know a lot of readers here might be disappointed that I discarded all of these.

6. Initially, Ridhima's name was Nalini Shrivastav. She was forty-five years old.

7. I was not so sure about including Ridhima's pregnancy theme because in the 'Knowing part-II' I already had one such element - the protagonist leaving one character impregnated in the end.

Looking back, all these things make me realise how long this journey has been. What made it wonderful is, of course, your neverending support and encouragement. There had been times when I struggled to get going, but your support led me through. I know I might have disappointed a few of you with the pace and lack of erotic content towards the end, but we have talked much about it already. About the tone of comments, as I have always maintained, I welcome both positive and negative comments alike, because they inspire me to write more and better.

Now I will take some rest. I'm not thinking about writing anything for a few days (or weeks). I need to shake Atul and Anvita off my mind first. I'll be around, as a reader here, sharing my thoughts about your views and other stories. I also plan to read my own story from the beginning to the end. I need to read to once as a reader. 

Please feel free to write more comments and reviews. Now the story has finished and I expect some reviews on the story as a whole, complete work.

A small request: please do not copy-paste this story anywhere. I don't like it.

Keep reading and keep posting.
With love.
Krish.
Find my stories here:
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Thankyou krish ! for such a story!
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Keep it up bro! It was indeed pleasure Smile
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