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Thanks for all the wonderful comments - both positive and negative comments-, guys. I post a new chapter here, but so many comments in such a short time make it look like the chapter was posted long ago. I can't ask more from you all.
Now it's time to start asking about the next update. This time I'll do it for a change. How much time do you guys like to give me to post the next one? Of course it's not ready at the moment; so you must give me enough time that you can justify according to the quality of my writing you expect and the subject you think I would be covering in the next chapter.
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(28-07-2019, 10:06 AM)krish_999 Wrote: Thanks for all the wonderful comments - both positive and negative comments-, guys. I post a new chapter here, but so many comments in such a short time make it look like the chapter was posted long ago. I can't ask more from you all.
Now it's time to start asking about the next update. This time I'll do it for a change. How much time do you guys like to give me to post the next one? Of course it's not ready at the moment; so you must give me enough time that you can justify according to the quality of my writing you expect and the subject you think I would be covering in the next chapter.
Krish you can take your own time, we shall wait, we just don't want you to compromise with the quality. Your writing is precious and worth the wait.
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If the next update is not ready you can take ur own time.. but don't take too much.. we readers are supporting you.. give it a bang...
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(28-07-2019, 10:06 AM)krish_999 Wrote: Thanks for all the wonderful comments - both positive and negative comments-, guys. I post a new chapter here, but so many comments in such a short time make it look like the chapter was posted long ago. I can't ask more from you all.
Now it's time to start asking about the next update. This time I'll do it for a change. How much time do you guys like to give me to post the next one? Of course it's not ready at the moment; so you must give me enough time that you can justify according to the quality of my writing you expect and the subject you think I would be covering in the next chapter.
Take your time but not so much that there's no site left to post. Will be deja vu after xossip.
Also personally am not liking where the story's heading. From seduction of anvi it has moved to complete Forcing on her first by George and now (& before when he drugged Atul) by Rajat. Even that would have been acceptable if she would have somewhat enjoyed it.
On the other hand Prithvi has dipped his hand in the till numerous times. Will see how the climax unfolds since everyone's expectations have peaked due to your writing. Will be a huge disappointment if you can't bring it home. Waiting for next update.
You have 70 hours to post it. (Chak De Style).
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How much time do you guys like to give me to post the next one? Of course it's not ready at the moment; so you must give me enough time that you can justify according to the quality of my writing you expect and the subject you think I would be covering in the next chapter.
Take 6 months that's fine by me afterall you are creating a masterpiece
And I am just reading which hardly takes 10-15 minutes. But still awesome man every single sentence, emotions just awesome.
And don't kill the unborn child he will have to face his karma no matter what and in order to do that he must be born
Some would say I am the REVERSE
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Krish im giving u a straight answer
1 update per week
Saturday night is perfect for reading ur story
Guys dont tell take ur time and dont shout at him when he takes his time which is 3 weeks
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28-07-2019, 04:03 PM
(This post was last modified: 28-07-2019, 04:14 PM by rombyzomby. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
1 week is fairly enough time for a update, otherwise one starts loosing interest in the story and one has to start scratching the sequential events to meet the broken ends.
A fairly good idea is to start reading completed stories rather than waiting for the updates.
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Give one big update every Sunday. 
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This is a masterpiece. And masterpiece takes time. Writer is truly amazing person who is showing all kind of human behaviour through 2 main characters.
At first, I thought this is regular erotic story where husband and wife are going to cheat. I was wrong.. BEST STORY..
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By confessing, Atul turns into Hero and Anvi's remorse would like a stab to him...
Thanks Krish, you're doing an excellent story. Atul, rightfully deserves to be the Hero and Rajat needed to be out to give the story a nice ending.
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29-07-2019, 04:15 PM
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Nice work, waiting for next update...
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Great going!!! But Krish, I got a feeling that the story is rushing to end.
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Like, Comment and Give Rating.
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Are you going to end it hanging in the air like Knowing part 1.
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coming back after long time just amazed with your updates thanks for your great work waiting for the next update
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(25-07-2019, 03:20 AM)Punjabi1slut Wrote: U r a gr8 story teller. Knowing my wife is proof of that. But gr8 authors sometimes make a mess of the story. U have messed it up. U just cant redeem urself. I have lost intrst in the story
(25-07-2019, 09:13 AM)david_10 Wrote: yes i am a big fan of krish for a long time. this story is too good. but last few updates seems messed u I have lately started to feel as if I'm watching some Bollywood thriller movie rather than reading an erotica (which is actually disappointing)
Although your writing skills and ideas are amazing and so damn logical but it lacks the crucial theme for which users are here on xossip ie "erotica". Honestly , I do not even remember , when I had cummed last while reading this story or got sexually turned on .The story lately has failed to provide sexual interest.
It started so well in the beginning but I felt as if from he mid of the story, protagonist's ( Anvita & Atul) characters got suddenly changed and they were shown in a confusion state. Earlier Anvita was projected as a bold woman who had the sexual power and wittiness to control men ( she oftenly did that to Atul and used to call Atul a "boy" in that conversation mode. She had power over him) .It felt as if Anvita was on the path to convince Atul that a little sexual games were okay to go for.
But suddenly coz of so many characters , the story took a u turn and started on a totally different path
Yes , I do come online on regular basis just to know what's gonna happen next as I do not want to leave the story in mid but the eagerness to read it has definitely vanished.
I felt as if lately ,Krish had started focussing more on storyline and forgot that its in the genre of "erotica". The sexual scenes do come in but just like in all random Bollywood movies as if they are just a part of it and have to be shown mandatorily. "Turning on" the readers does not seem to be the crux of the story now.
I believe the real erotica, which is able to make impact is the one which has both storyline and logical sexual content revolving around it. You have given the best storyline any story could give but abruptly failed to deliver the latter part. I feel the reason for the timings of updating the story has got bad is because you are thinking a way too much in the storyline. You have made the story as way more complex than it should have been. Since the story is in its end phase so of course we can not expect a miracle. For sure juts like a Bollywood movie , you would be giving it a happy ending.
Sometimes in order to provide the best, even great writes make a mess of their stories but it does not mean they have lost it. There is always a next time.
On this I agree with Mr "Punjabi1slut" that story got ruined, but we all love you because you have never left any of your stories unfinished . I feel Mr "Punjabi1slut" should learn that from you as he too had written a really great but unfinished story which actually is more frustrating for readers ,depicting an attitude that you do not care for your readers. I wish he could continue the story as readers including me still aspire of that story.
Dear Krish ,I am sorry to give negative review of the story but may be that's only because I am a great fan of your writings and know what an amazing writer you are.You actually create impact on the mind by your convincing writing skills.
Take care.
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