[Marishka]

Bahut mast update hai.

Pls post more.

Waiting

[exbiixossip2]

next update bro...

[maitripatel]

आगे की कहानी कब आएगी ??????????????????

[hibrid1]

आगे की कहानी कब आएगी ??????????????????

Jald aayegi...

[hibrid1]

Bahut mast update hai.

Pls post more.

Waiting

Thanks for comment

[Rizzi1198]

Too hot

[Rohanx40]

Eagerly Waiting for the next updates

[Shahid Khan]

Jab link diye ho to. Updates bhi do bhai

[hibrid1]

Eagerly Waiting for the next updates

Jab link diye ho to. Updates bhi do bhai

Story ka update likh raha hu, jald update aayega 

[Shahid Khan]

Story ka update likh raha hu, jald update aayega 

Kab ayega next update?

[sumitworks777]

Such a hot story. Please give update soon.

Story ko aap jaisa likhna chahte hai waisa hi likhiye. Bas mere mann mein ek aur baat bhi chal rahi thi jo yahan share karna chahta hun. Jo bhi aapne socha hai Archana ke liye waisa hi kijiye, khoob sara sex sab ke saath , threesome, foursome, group sex sab. Par mere mann mein ek aur idea chal raha hai wo ye ki last mein uska husband ye le nahi payega aur bahut mann se toot jayega phir wo kasam khayega chize kuch kuch thik karne ka. Wo bahut paisa karcha karke ek bada operation karwayega aur ek implanted bada lund lagwayega. aur phir wapas aake wo bhi un sab logo ke saath mil ke Archana ko chodega aur dheere dheere uska main pyaar banega par group sex chalta rahega.

[Shahid Khan]

Update nahi ayega??

[hibrid1]

Update 6

Ab Shanta ke saath kiya huwa.....tha...Shanta toh sabse pehle badi malkin Manjula devi ke hukum par upar gayi thi Archana ko bulane. 







Par jaise hi woh seedhiyon ke mod par pahunchi – wahan se seedha Archana ke kamre ki taraf nahi gayi. Kyunki usne dekha ki Archana ka darwaza band hai aur andar se woh ajeeb sexy

hasi ki awz dheemi dhimee   rahi thi. 






Shanta ko pehle se hi shak tha haveli ke  unsuljhi raazon par....






Tabhi Shanta ke kaan mein ek dheemi awaaz aayi... jaise koi usko bula raha ho..Shanta seedhiyon ke modh par pahunchi, jahan ek chhoti si dark gali thi jo haveli ke purane hisse ki taraf jaati thi – 





niche  wahi purana kamra jahan Karim chacha rehta tha, aur jahan kal raat Archana chupke se haveli lang ke gayi thi...

Woh ruk gayi, mudkar dekha – koi nahi tha. Par awaaz phir aayi, is baar thodi gehri, thodi rijahane wali....








**Awaaz** (dheemi, andar se) - "Shanta... idhar aa...jra... jaldi... bahuraani choti  malkin ne bulaya hai...haan hann  Wahi andera  raasta se..."






  


Shanta ka dil dhadak utha.... Woh hamesha se jaanti thi ki haveli mein kuchh na kuchh galat chal raha hai, lekin kabhi muh nahi khola. Usne socha – shayad  haveli ki nayi  bahuraani uski choti malkin Archana ka hi order ho...Shanta ghabra gayi, par usne socha shayad sach mein choti malkin archana ne hi usay bulaya ho – kyuki kal raat bhi usne kuchh  ajeeb dekha tha (Archana ko Karim ke saath). 



Woh chupke se us dark gali mein ghus gayi, jahan roshni bilkul kam thi...

Woh thoda sa darte-darte us gali mein ghus gayi...





Woh wahan pahunchi toh dekha – Karim chacha khada tha, uska woh bada kala badan andhere mein bhi chamak raha tha. Uske haath mein ek chhota sa ganda sa kapda tha, jaise kisi ko muh band karne ke liye.


 



Shanta - kya huwa Karim chacha ji  aap......








KARIM (muskurate hue, dheemi awaaz mein) - "Chup... bilkul chup....
Choti malkin ka hukum hai. Tu bahut zyada jaanti hai, Shanta. Kal raat jo tune jo dekha wo... mai tuje dekh raha tha kal raat.. woh sab bhool jaaa...Warna..."

Shanta peeche hatne lagi, 






 


 


par peeche se hi kisi ne uske muh par kisi ne haath rakh diya. Yeh Ballu Baba tha – uska haath bahut sakht tha, aur aankhon mein wohi shaitani chamak.



 

  


Karim ne uske muh par haath rakh diya, aur peeche se Ballu Baba. Un dono ne usko pakad kar us purane store room mein le gaye – wohi kamra jahan purani khatara furniture, toote bartan, aur dhool bhari cheezein padi rehti hain. Kamra bilkul andhera, sirf ek chhoti si roshni ki kiran crack se aa rahi thi...




 




Us Karme ka  Darwaja band hote hi..Shanta chillane ki koshish kr rahi thi par karim ka uski muh par  halki hatho dabe hone ke karan awaz dab gyi aur dono se request krne kagi - " are choddho muje... aaplog.. Dono  kya  ho gya ap logo ko... "

 

 


BALLU BABA (shanta ki kaanon mein fhusfusaate hue) - "Shanti rakh shanta beti... yeh sab niyati ka khel hai. Tu ab yahin rukegi... jab tak bahuraani ka kaam poora na ho jaaye. Tujhe kuchh nahi hoga... bas... thoda sa maze aur saath dena padega.... Haa haa haa.



Shanta - kya matlb....

  

par Karim ne uske muh par kapda daba diya...




 


Ballu Baba  (muskurate hue, aankhen chamkaate) - "Chinta mat kar beti... tu yahin rukegi thodi der. Bahuraani abhi taiyaar ho rahi hai... aur tujhe kuchh nahi hoga. Bas... agar tu chup rahi toh. Warna yeh shaitani aatmaayein... jo maine kaid ki hain... tujh par bhi haavi ho sakti hain....



 




Shanta ki aankhon mein aansu aa gaye. Woh samajh gayi ki yeh sab plan tha – usko rokna taaki woh Manjula devi ko ya kisi ko na bata sake ki Archana aur karim chacha ke bich ka ajeeb samand...jo jaane anjame me hi haveli ki  jismani nijayaj ka paap surwaat bhar thi...haveli me aur kya kya raaz hai ye ane wala waqt hi batayega.

Woh ladti rahi, par Karim ka zor bahut tha. Ballu Baba ne uske haath pair bandh diye ek purane rassi se, aur bola:


Ballu Baba - "Ab tu yahin maze kar... hum waha  jaa rahe hain. Bahuraani ka asli roop sabke saamne  aayega par abhi bilkul nhi ... Aur tu...shayad tu bhi chahe toh is khel ka hissa ban jaa....toh hum tuje bhi wo kimti uphar de denge... Ha ha ha...



Shanta soch me pad gayi kon sa kimti uphar..... Ballu baba bole ki toh itni soch mat wo uphar de denge tujhe....agr toh wakai me hamare saath is khel me shamil hogi toh.....




Phir dono karim aur ballu baba bahar nikal gaye, darwaza lock kar ke. 

Shanta akeli thi andhere mein, muh bandha hua, haath-pair bandhe hue. Woh soch rahi thi – kaise bahar nikle, aur wo kimti uphar kya ho sakta hai?





Idhar upar Manjula devi Archana ke kamre pahunch chuki thi, darwaza khatkhatati hui... aur Shanta ki kami ko notice hi nahi kar paayi kyuki us waqt uska dhyan sirf bahuraani par tha.




Is beech Manjula devi Archana ke kamre tak pahunch chuki thi, darwaza khatkhatati hui. Usne peeche mudkar dekha – Shanta kahan gayi? Par us waqt usko itni fikar nahi thi. Woh bas apni bahuraani ko "theek" karna chahti thi.




Ab niche sab log wait kar rahe the... pushp arpan khatam, par asli drama shuru hone wala tha.



Aur Shanta? Woh ab us andhere kamre mein band thi... Karim chacha aur Ballu Baba sath me. Unka plan tha – usko chup karwana, taaki woh kisi ko na bata sake ki Archana kal raat kahan thi, aur ab us par kya chha raha hai



Par Shanta itni aasani se nahi maanti... shayad woh bhi khel mein shamil ho jaaye... ya phir woh hi pehli shikaar ban jaaye....





- Shanta kaise bachke bahar aati hai aur sabko sach batati hai?  Ya

- Ya woh bhi niyati ke haathon mein aa jaati hai aur Archana ke saath milkar khel shuru karti hai?  

- Ya Ballu Baba aur karim chacha ke saath saath kuchh aur shaitani kregi...??

Ab Nayati naya khel rach rahi ha ya balki in harami buddhe logon ka shaitani plan hai...
Continued.....

[Shahid Khan]

Shukriya bahut Shaandaar update

[Shahid Khan]

Waiting for update