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DISCLAIMER - PURE FANTASY 18+ 

This is a completely fictional erotic fantasy story. All characters depicted are 18 years or older. Everything written here is pure imagination and fantasy only. No real persons or real events are involved. This content is created solely for adult entertainment purposes and does not intend to hurt any religious sentiments.

Reader discretion is advised.

 Ye kahani puri tarh se kalpanik rachna hai.inka vastavikta se koi lena dena nhi hai.kahani sirf entertainment ke liye hai umeed krta hu apko pasand aagyegi.

 kahani alternative thread ki tor par start kiya gya hai.original writer ke kahani is link par diya gya hai. RANGIN HAVELI....ye kahani jaha se ruki huyi thi ...kahani wahi se start kar di gyi hai....Mai ye kahani test mode par start kiya hu.....agar story apko aachi lagegi toh story ke update diye jayenge..

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RANGIN HAVELI

 HAVELI ME...  
RANGIN  RAATO KI SURUWAAT HO CHUKI THI.....

.....NIYATI.....

"Ha.. Ha... ha ..  ha.. Kaisi lagi ...Archana tujhe apne yaar se apni dusri milan ki raat ..khub maza aaya na tujhe iske khatiya par.. 

Ab tu auur dekhti ja mai teri aisa maze karwaungi.... jise tu kabhi  sochi na hogi meri behna....khoob maze lutna hai na tujhe..Ha.. ha.. ha.." 

Aab aage aage dekhte hai kya hota hai Archana ki Jindgi me....

   

    

     Suryodai ho  chuka tha....Subha ke 7 baj chuke the....suraj ke kirne kutiya ki choti si khidki se hote huye Archana ki chehre aur karim ka sir ke upar phena huwa uska safed jalidar topi par pad rahe the...

dono ke kapde idhar udhar feke huye bikre pade the......koi kutiya ke kisi kone me feki padi thi to koi darwaje ke udhar....aisa lag raha tha  maano do nange jismo me raatbhar ghamasan yudh chala ..aur dono nange badan thakh nidhal hokar gehri nind ke aagosh me...us choti si khatiya par  soye pade the....Karim ka kala bhari nanga badan bedhang halat me apni  choti maalkin ke dudh si  gori nangi jism ke upar pada tha....

 

Archana ki nind ab khulne lagi.... apni dono aakhon ko dire se  kholti hai.... Usey apne nangi jism par gehri nind me soye huye nange karim ko leta huwa  paati hai...

          Karim se Raatbhar chale apni ghamasan chudai ke baad karim  ka sar uski dono bhare golkai safed  stano ke bich ki narm rekha par tika tha...  aur karim ka khula muh uski dayi safed stan ki bhoori ghundi ko apne thuko se san kar apne gande muh girft  me liya huwa tha...jaise raat ka adhikar chutaa na ho..

 

Archana ab apni komal hath jab niche yoni ki traf le jaati hai to usey apne hantho ki hatheliyon me gilapan aur chipchipasa sa mahsoos hota hai....uski toh sharam se...halki hassi nikal aati hai....

Wo ab samjh gyi thi ....Karim chacha ka kala ajgar ke mafik lund avi bhi uski kasi yoni se jakad kar andar hi sama betha tha.....archana ko ye bhi pta chal rhi thi ki karim ka lund uski kasi yoni ko kitna jyada hi bhaa rahi thi. aur uski yoni se undono  ke milajula kaamras aur viryo ke dhar archana ki gaand ki ched se hote huye niche pade chadar par bahe jaa rahi thi........

Nanga Karim uske upar jis halat me pada huwa tha....Usey apni phela milan ki wo haseen raat yaad aane lagi, 

Flash back...

jab wo car se haveli wapas aa rahi  thi...uski best friend Rita ki 3 dino ke function se,car  karim chacha  chala rahe the car achanak ruk gyi... use thik krne ke liye jab wo bhar nikal gya....toh tufani barish suru ho gyi thi...archana bhi bahar nikal gyi kyunki car me barish ke waqt jangal me akele rehna risky tha... toh dono nikal gye the kahi koi barish se bhigne se bachene ka jagah...lekin...

 JAB BIJLI ACHANAK SE KADDAK UTI  thi..."tadddakkk"....

archana dar gyi...aur karim se lipat gyi....

ARCHANA,KARIM chacha KA PHELA sarrik स्पर्श  ho gya...anjane me hi sahi ...par

Raat jayada ho gyi thi aur tufani barish thamne ka naam nhi le raha tha isliye phir dono   us  jangal  ke ek  रहस्यमय  jhopdi me  raat bitne ka soche jaha wo dono gaye the...barish se bachne ke liye aur ek raat katne ke liye....pr 

NIYATI  ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha.......aur Archana ne apna phela jismani paapi नाजायज  milan karim chacha ke saath raat bitaane ke saath 
apni rangeen कामीछा ka suruwaat kar di......aur 
karim chacha ko apne khubsurat gora  jism ko bhogne ka  puri adhikar de di....uske baad jo NIYATI ne chaha wahi huwa...

                                                          





(karim ne Archana ko raat bhar bhoga.......aur archana ne bhi stree tatva hone ka pura anand liya jo apne pati yash ke saath kabhi nhi le payi...aur jee bhar ke karim chacha ke saath. najayaj  jismani sukh k khub maze liye archana aur karim ne bhi.....)

savera hote hi dekha uski kasi gori yoni ke andar karim ka kala mota lund fasa huwa dera dale pada tha... badi muskil se nikali thi wo uske is ajgar ke mafik lund ko......

 

Aaj bhi aise hi halat the....karim aaj bhi gehri nind me tha....Par aj farsh ki jagah karim ke khatiye par thi......aur karim sote huye khrate  maar raha tha.....ARCHANA ki toh hassi ruk nhi rahi thi.....usne socha yadi unki saas ab usey aur karim chacha ko is halat me dekh li to pata nhi kya hoga... Wo to sochegi ki...uski nayi  naveli bahu karim chacha ke niche aakhir kaise aa padi....aur unki saas ki toh sharam ke maare pani pani nikal jayegi..


Wo  hasne lagi.... Usey apni is besharmi ke liye koi afsoos nhi tha..ab wo soye hoye karim ko badi pyaar se dekhne lagi... Usey niharne lagi....wo karim ko aisa hi apne jism ke upar pade rehna dena chahti thi...par subha ho gyi thi.... Isliye archana ko laga aisi halat me rehna ab munasib nhi....ab archana laite huye karim ko apne upar hatne ke liye usko hilati huyi badi pyaar pukarti hai....

-"Uto karim chacha .....dekho to Subha ho gyi hai..aur kitna der lete rahoge mere upar haan ....."

Par  karim ko kuch fark nhi pad raha tha....Wo ab bhi gehri nind ke aagosh me pada tha aur kharate maar bhi raha tha....

Ab ARCHANA  ko sharart sujhi... Aur  KARIM ko halki si chapat laga deti hai....karim
hadbata huwa nind se ut jata hai.... Archana ki dayini stan ki bhoori ghundi  karim ke gande muh se giraft se azad ho chuki thi.....


-" k ka kya huwa.....  "  karim hadbata huwa bol pda.....ARCHANA ki to jor se hassi nikal padi.. 



Archana -"hi hi hi...arre chacha.... Kal raatbhar se aisa hi lete ho mere upar.... Apni is choti maalkin ko apni khatiya se jaane bhi nhi doge kya.???... "


Karim - " choti maalkin ji .....hame maaf kijeyga ... Hum hosh me nhi the..."


Archana -"koi baat nhi karim chacha... 
dekho to apka bada ling meri choti si yoni ke andar ab bhi satak kar baita hai...meri toh yoni me sujan ho rahi hai chacha......Please ap apne ling ko bahar nikaliye na.."


Continued.....

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Thanks....to All

Next update par work kar raha hu....

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Kha ho dost iske alternative thread shuru to karo yr ....apne to thread khol kar ek bhi update nhi diya ...eagerly waiting bhai....

Bro i Want to continue this thread but mujhe idea nhi aa raha hai... Original writer ka quality match krna bhi bhut hi muskil hai....time bhi lagta hai.

Sorry for waiting.. I was too busy in my personal life....Agla update krne me koshis kr raha hu...jald ayega.

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Ab Karim archana ki choot me apne kala mahakai lund ko dale huye hi.. apne dono  hantho  ke panjo se utne laga....

Karim ka kaala badan archana ki gora jism se alag ho raha hota h.....aur  idhar
Archana ki nigahe... uske badan ko niharti huyi.... Karim ke aankhon ko apni nashili aakhon se katilana nazare dene lagi...
 Usne apni gulabi laal hontho ko donto se kathe huye apni jawani ke hawas ka didar karim ko krane lagi....


Apni is kaamuk husn se karim ka kaala ghatila badan ka bhaar hatne se Archana ne ab rahat ki saase li....aur wo bhi apne sarrir ko thoda hila dula kar adjust hone lagi....

phir apni dono gudaaz gori jangho ko thodi aur faylayi... karim  ab  uske dono jango ke bich ke jagah ke par ghutno ke bal bait gya....

Par ab bhi karim ka kala lund ab bhi uski gori choot me dera dale pada tha.....lekin archana ki kaamsin choot bhi kam na thi..... Usne bhi is kaale mote ajgar ko apne choot ke andar ki gulabi deewaro se jakad rakhi thi.....

Ab Archana niche pit ke bal padi huyi....  karim ke agle harkat ka intejar krti .....

Karim apna mote kala lund pakdta .. aur  lund ko thoda dayi bayi karke archana ki choot se bahar ki traf khichne laga.....

Jisse Archana ke yoni me halki halki  meethi dard  sancharan hone lagti hai..

-"Aaah karimmm...... Chachaaa....mmmmm...  sssssh.......... ... eesssh......"

Archana ki raseeli mukh se madur sabd vaaniyon ki siskariyan is chote se kamre ke andar charo aor gunjan hone lagi........

apni gulabi laal pankhudiya jaise honto ko halke danto se chabate huye...uski adkhuli naseeli aankien ke palakhein  band hone lagi.....
Archana ki kaamuk bhari aahe...  Karim   ke lawde ko phir se jagrut krne ko uksa rahi thi....






Par karim isa chahte huye bhi apne ko sambhalne ki puri koshish krne me laga raha...

lekin is apsara jaise behad khubsurat kaamsundari ki lubhawana jism uska kale muh se juban ko laar se tapkane me majboor kar rahi thi.....jise wo nigalne ki nakam koshish krne me raha....aur laar uske muh se hote huye  niche Archana ki pet par tapakne laga... Jo uski nabhi ki aur ja raha tha....

Archana ko man hi man hasi aa rahi thi....Karim ke isa halat ko dekhkar.....
 apne yaar Karim ko  badi hi pyari si muskan de hi deti bolne lagi.....

- "kya huwa Karim chacha.... aise kyun dekh rahe ho mujhe... meri is komal si chuyi muyi  husn ko...  Ise toh apne raatbhar  jor sor se bhogte rahe..... Ji nhi bhara kya......janab..!!! "

Karim apna kale pile danth Archana ko dikhate huwa thoda hasta huwa...  hadbata huwa bol padta hai...

-"ha...haan....choti maalkin ...."

-" dhat!!!....badmassss....!!! " archana bol padi.....

Phir thodi rukhkar kehne lagi--

-" ab jaldi bhi hato...mere badan se........nhi toh meri saas...teri  badi maalkin aa jayengi...phir dekhlena apka kya halat kregi wo..hi hi hi.... "

archana halki hasi ke saath apne dono hatho ki hatheliyon  se apni chehre ko dhakhkar sharmane lagi...apni   beinteha se bhi hasin khubsurat mukhde ko dusri aur krne lagi......

Karim bhi halka muskura padta hai.... kyunki usko apne badi malkin manjula devi ki ye baat aache se malum tha...  wo itni subha savere uske kutiya ki traf aayegi hi nhi..... Isliye usne archana ko bina kuch kahe chup raha.....

Aur apni choti maalkin ka katilana kaamuk jism ko niharta  huwa apna kala lund nikalne laga....lund ko dayi bayi karke thoda thoda archana ki choot se bahar ki traf kichne laga.....

meetha dard ka ahsaas  archana ko phir se hone lagi.. Par karim ka mote lund ka bada topa andar hi uski  choot me muhane me fasa rah gya........Karim ke is mahakai kaale lawde ne archana ki kasi huyi garm kaamsin choot ki  jaddh tak chod chod uski choot ko suja diya tha....

dono ne Raatbhar apne jismo ke bich ghamashan khoon ko gram kar dene wali bharpur chudai ke beintah maje ke loot machye the.....

Archana  ki kasi gori choot karim ke mahakai hotde jasa lund ke itna vaar jhelne ke baad ab bhi  kafi tight hone ke saath undono ke milanraso se bhari hui thi....
jo ab bhi karim ke lund ke topa  ko apne muhane ke giraft me le rakhi thi....aur azad toh bilkul na krni chahti thi......

Karim ka Ajgar ke mafik Lund ka ye aakhri mota bhag Archana  kasi gori choot se asani se kaha nikalne wala tha....

Isliye Karim apne hatho se lund ko pakadta huwa lund ka topa  ko nikalne ke liye  ab jor lagna hi padta hai....

  -"Aaaah....mummiiii...!!!!!!!!"    Archana  jor se cheekh padi.....

Karim ghabra gya aur archana ki chehre ki traf dekhne laga.....

Archana apni chehre par banawati gusse dikhate huye karim ko uhalna dete huye jor se boli.....

"thoda dire...dire se...nikal nhi sakte kya??......mai bhagi thodi na ja rahi hu karim chacha....Nikalo na shiddat ke saath jaisa ghusaye the ........ "

Archana ki  tej awaz bahar jane lagi... Koi samne hota toh use pata chal jata ki andar kon hai....

Isliye karim dar gya.....

Karim ko laga sayad choti maalkin usse gussa ho gyi....isiliye nazre jhukate huye...halki awaz me kahne laga....

 -"maaf kijeyga choti maalkin ...par apki ye thoda jyada hi kasi hai asani se sayad nikal nhi payega...."

Archana ab karim ke baaton ko sunkar aakien badi krti hai..

"Are Mere traf dekho toh.... Nazre na fero... humse chacha...."

Phir karim wapas thoda nazre milane laga... Aur archana bhi nazre milte huye pyari si smile deti huyi bol padti hai....

-"Kyun Karim.. chacha ....mai toh us din khud hi nikali thi na.. apne in komal hantho se......
aaj to apki baari hai...  jaisa ap chaho jaldi se Nikalo aur meri chinta na kriyo...."aur ank mar deti hai...

Karim samaj jata hai ki archana bhi thodi masti krna chahti hai....aur use thoda shararat sujha..

-"Kya nikalu.......choti maalkin ..."


Archana -  " accha to Karim miya apko nhi ye bhi pata kya nikalna hai... Apne ab bhi kya dala huwa h mere andar... bolun....."



Karim -   " hann.... choti malkin bol bhi do..."



Archana -" aap bhi na... bhut hi shaitan.... ho... karim chacha........mai nhi bolungi abhi... "



Karim hasta huwa -"ye karim..... apka wafadar naukar.....apka ijajat mangta hai...ap hukum kijiye choti maalkin...tabhi ja ke nikalega ye..."



Archana -" To suno..... Karim chacha...mai tumhari choti maalkin tujhe hukum deti hai  ....ab  jaldi se nikalo meri choot se apne lund maharaj ko ....

Ab tum jaldi bhi nilaklo.... Pls...nhi to haveli ke andar jane me der ho jayegi mujhe..samjhe karim miya.."


Phir karim ab achanak se  archana ke muh par hath raktha huwa....daba deta hai...



Fir Apna kamar aur gaand ko hawa me uchal kar lund ko archana ki kamsin choot me ek karara jhatke ke saath uski gulabi komal deewaro ke  ragdta bhedta huwa...jadd tak uski bacchedani ko apne lund ke topa se takrate  huye... "puccchaaaaaaakkkkk..." ke awaz ke saath...ek dam  se bahar nikal deta hai.......
(Aur Usi waqt... Archana jor ki cheekh...karim ke hatheli se dabe hone ke karan...uski muh me hi dab jaati hai)...
jisse archana pagal ho uti aur ek baar phir se joro se jarne lagi.....



Aur ab dono ke milajula garam kaamras archana ki garam choot se saath me bahne lag jati hain..


Archana toh bilkul hakka bakka rah gyi...use yakin nhi ho raha tha... Karim ne ekdam se uske saath aisa kar  diya...Uski dono aakhon se aashu  bhar nikal aati hain....kyunki aisa hone ke liye wo bilkul bhi taiyaar na thi.....



Karim ab hath uski muh se hta deta hai..... Aur archana bhi apni narajgi chehre se baya kar deti hai.... Aur chehre ki ishero me karim ko jawab mangti hai......




Karim ko ab jawab dena tha.........

 -"Hume Maaf kar dijiye Choti Malkin.. Darasal aisa na karta toh apki awaz bhar chali jaati.....isliye hume aisa krna pada.........."

Karim ke baaton ko sunkar ........Archana ne ashuwon ko apni hatheliyon poncha....phir wo khatiye par bait gyi . ...thodi der narajgi se chup rahi phir  karim ko smile dekar kehne lagi.....



-"Maafi kis baat ki karim chacha.....hum toh apke dost hai na....hume toh apko hi sukriyada kehna chahiye ...........meri streetatvon ko jagne ke liye....मुझे  ऐसा चरम सुख देने के लिए ........जो मै कभी भूल नहीं पाउंगी ...... I love you...डार्लिग.."

Karim bhut khus huwa aur wo bhi Archana ko pasand  krne ke baat kehne chahta....Par usay apna hasiyat yaad aane laga....wo muskuraya.....aur..... Sirf itna Kaha....


-" Apki bhut bhut meharbani..... Choti maalkin.....mujh jaisa  garib besahara ko ap jaisi apsara ki streesukh dene ke liye.... "



Aur Archana se wo wada krta h ki wo dono phir se milenge.....aisa hi har raat archana ke liye rangin krenge......


Ab Archana ko wapas haveli jane liye der ho rahi thi ....suryodai bhi...ho chuka tha....... Archana ki najar farsh par bikre uski corset pr padi....
Par in bedhangi corset ko phen kar toh wo haveli ke andar pravesh nhi kar sakti....Par wo abhi pehne kya?..... Wo jaise taise khud ko sambhalti khadi huvi....... Kal raat ki Ghamasan chudai se uska ang ang dukh raha tha.. Thik se chala bhi nahi jaa raha tha.. 


Tabhi Archana ki najar lakdi ke kursi ke niche.....
kone me padi karim ke safed halki gandi si dhoti pe gayi... Jo raat me karim ne giraya tha...Wo vaha gayi aur use uthayi.... Archana ne use apne badan pe lapet liya..
Karim ka dhoti se uski khoobsurat kaya aur bhi katilana lag rahi thi.......




Karim nanga khade use dekh madhosh hone laga.. Uska Soya huva Kala Lund fir se Jaag ne laga. Ek pal to jee kiya ki sidha  jake Archana ko apni banho me kaske le le aur uske sath vapas jee bhar ke bhoge.... Par wo Archana ke ijajat ke baigar bilkul nhi kar skta.....

Archana ab chalti huyi band khidki ke pass gayi aur kholi....Bahar ka najara saaf dikh raha tha.....panchiyan chahchaha rahi thi....Kitna sundar drashya tha samne ka jungle ka...... Wo Samne idahr udahr dekhi toh koi bhi nhi tha.....

Usne Karim ki dhoti ko apne badan se kaske bandh li...aur mudhkar usne Karim ko pyaari si smile dekar dekha... jo nanga apna Lund pakda bhesa ki tarah khada tha....



Archana karim ko dekh hasne lagi....aur usey bhi kaam ichaa phir se jagne lagi....par yaad ayi haveli me unke saas sasur hai..abhi ke liye itna hi phir agle bar jab hoga toh raatdin krenge bina koi rok tok ke puri full masti ke saath...



Phir Archana -" Hame ab chalna chahiye karim chacha bahut der ho chuki hai...."

Lekin karim se muh se sabdh  nhi nikal paye....

Archana ye bolke chalne lagi.... Karim ab bhi vahi nanga khada tha aur Archana ki uski dhoti se lapti matakti huvi Gaand ko dekh raha tha.. Usne apna Lund ko pakdta huwa dabane laga..... Archana jaise hi aakhri step bahar leti usne palat ke dekhi... Karim ki nigahe uske yovan par hi thi.. Archana ne ek kaatilana aur dil ko ghayal karde aisi smile Karim ko di jo uske dil ke paar utar gayi..





Phir Archana hasti huyi ...safed magar halki si gandi dhoti ko saree ki trah bandhe bina bra aur blouse ke hi.... bikhare hue baalo ke saath.....karim ke kutiya se bahar nikal aayi....





Continue......

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bahut bahut kamuk aur garam update! bahut khoob!

Absolutely hot and erotic update!

just superb! mind blowing and outstanding update! yr):

Ekdum lajawab aur mast update, bahut accha likha aapne yaar

What a terrific and erotic update! Absolutely mind blowing writing ✍

Thanks to All

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We want update...

Jald hi update milega... Thoda wait kre

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Archana ab karim ke kutiya se nikalte huye dusro ki nazro se bachte huye  chupke chupke aakhir haveli ke pass aa hi gyi......Is khubsurat alishan haveli ka ye bada sa khubsurat darwaga aaj puri trah se khula huwa tha.....

Lekin direct main dawarge se haveli me ghusna uske liye khatre se khali nhi tha......kyunki use laga is trah se bina blouse.. ar ye dhoti ko apni sarrir ke sath bandhe...dekhkr to koi bhi sawal kr sakta hai.....

Isliye usne tai kiya ki phele kisi khuli huyi..khidiki se hi  dekha jaye  ander koi hai to nhi...... Ander ghanti ki awazien ghunz rahi thi jo bahar bhi sunai de raha tha..


Archana ko samne ek khidiki dikhi jo halki khuli thi.... Archana us khidki ke samne gyi... Aur  wahi se andar ki traf jhaakne lagi..usne dekha..kuch duri par uski saas manjula devi thi...jo  us khidki ki traf pith kiye huye aaj subha savere ghanti bajate huye puja archana kr rahi thi....iswar ko arti de rahi thi.....


Archana ne man me socha yahi sahi samay hai haveli ke andar pravesh karne ke liye..... Phir wo darwage ki traf aa gyi.... Aur jaise hi andar pravesh karti hai..


Andar se achanak hi awaz aayi.....


- "choti bahu Archana.....!!!!!"


Archana bilkul dar si gyi..... Apni Nazre jhuka di...aur Uska dil ki dhadkan bhi bhut joro se dhadhakne laga....wo wahi  par rukh gyi.....

uske Samne wo aa gyi..
Archana ko lag raha tha.. Wo uski saas hogi...

Archana ab dhimi awaz me badbadane lagi-
" ye budhiya pata nhi ab kya sawal kregi mujshe... hey kamarati maa meri madad kro.."

Aur Phir se awaz aayi....

-" choti maalkin ji..."

Archana ko ascharya huwa... Apni nazre utathe huye uske traf dekha toh samne aur koi nhi balki shanta khadi thi...

Ab Archana ki jaan m jaan aayi...

apni ubhri huyi chati pr hatho ki hathli ko rakti huyi dil ki dhadkan ko kabu krne lagi...

Archana -"oh!! God yaar tum ho shanta.... Tumne to mujhe aaj dara hi di..."

Shanta- "Hume Maaf kijiye choti maalkin ji...wo wo galti se mere muh se nikal gya..... "

Archana -"koi baat nhi shanta... par Aise achanak se tum aagyi darwaje pe...."


Shanta -"Darashal Badi Malkin ne kaha hai koi bhi bahar se haveli ke andar pravesh kre to phele naha ke aaye.. Ya.. apne sarir ko saaf sutra kar aaye......par choti malkin aj aap is saree me...??"

Phir Archana ne kuch sochte huye... halki shaitani smile ke saath....apni honto ko ek ugli se dabati huyi...




-"Ssshhhhhh..!!!!...shantaaa."

 Phir shanta ki kano me apni  honto ko samne krte hui dhimi sur me fusfusane  lagi...

"Suno..Shanta mai tumhe baaad me bataungi aur ye baat kisi ko bhi pata nhi chalna chaiye..mummy jee yadi puche to bol dena ki mai abhi naha rahi hu.. Ok"

Shanta- "thik hai... Choti maalkin ji."

Archana -"ok... shanta ab mai chalti hu."

Archana ab sidiyo se chadte huye upar apne kamre ki aur  jaane lagi...



Idhr Shanta ke man me jigyasa ubharne laga tha..(aakir kya baat ho sakti hai...choti malkin is trah??.... Khair meri pyari malkin to mujhe batayegi hi.... aakir choti maalkin ne mujhe aapna dost jo mani hai....)
aur wo muskurati huyi kaam pe lag gyi.

Archana ab Upar apne kamre m phuchte hi..kamre ki door ko jor ka Dhaka de kar andar aa gyi
phir door ko andar se band kar di....kyunki use joro ki pyaas lagi thi to... Isliye wo phele samne pade table par rakhi huyi..pani si bhari glass ko utayi aur puri gatak li..iske baad wo apni alishan bedroom ke andar badi si aayne ke pass chali gyi.




Aur khud ko us aayne ke samne khadi kar di....phir karim ke dhoti se  lapti huyi  apne badan ko niharne lagi...




Kya kayamat lag rahi thi wo... in bikre huye balo ke saath....behad sexy ... itni hasin itni kaamukpan se bhara huwa husn.. jo soye huye namurad ko bhi jaga de...... Wo thodi sharmani lagi.... Kya halat kr di thi karim ne uski..uski ang ang ab bhi dukh rahe the....puri raat bhar chale  karim se apne jism ki bharpur chudai ko sochte huye... Usne aaahe bhari... aur  aakien band kar di...phir  dono hatho se  lapti hui karim ki dhoti ko apni badan se kholte huye apni alishan bade si bed ke makhmali bistar par fekh di... isse wo  Puri trah se nangi ho gyi.....phir khade khade hi apni apsara jaisa husn ko ujagar kamre ke full ujali light me kar di us aayne ke samne....phir dhire se aakien kholi.....wo stabh rah gyi.




Archana ka pura nanga jism mano Sakhshat kaam ki devi ki saman avatar lag raha tha..... Archana ko yakin nhi ho raha tha ki wo kitni behad adhik hasin  khubsurat aur atyadhik kamuk stree hai ..Jism toh bilkul dudh ki trah safed... aur hont bikul gulab ki pankhudyion ki trah surk laal...bikre bal resham ki jhufe ki jaisa.


Archana ko ab pata chalne laga tha  aakhir karim chacha kal raat ko uski kamsin yoni me  apna itna mota lund aakir kyun itni jaldbaji me utar diye the... Uski dono safed vaksh bhi gulabi laal pad gye the karim chacha ne khub chusa tha unke  kaamraso se bhari unnat vaskhstalo ko.... Aur to aur uski chut ki upri safed gori chambi ki rangat bhi karim ke mote kale ajgar lund ne bigad kar gulabi kar rakh di thi... Jo vakai me bhut hi khubsurat pratit ho raha tha....


(Ab archana apni gulabi choot me bayi hanth ki sidhi ungliyon se  halki halki ghiste hui karim chacha ko yaad krne lagi) 

Archana -"Aise kisa chod rahe the wo kal raat mujhe.. Jaise kisi  khubsurat aurat ko kabhi dekha hi naa hoo.. Thoda to apni umra ka lihaj karna chahiye unhe.. Beti ki umra ki hu mein unki..karim chacha aap mere papa ke umar hone ke bawajood apni beti ki umar ki is stree ko... bas guraartte dahaadte huye chode hi jaa rahe the...Kabhi  meri chut ko jor se prahaar dete huye chodte ho...to kabhi chodte huye mere..[apni ubhari chati pe firate huve]..mammo ko bedardi se chus rahe ho...

par iss umra me bhi unka lund ka har stroke meri is chut se hote huye meri kokh me mehsus ho raha tha... Unka Bina chamdi ka wo aage wala bhag..Uski ragdan..Uski Garmahat..Ufffffffffff...[apni choot me ugliyon ko thodi aur jor se ghis di] Kya bataun Janab.... tum muje kitna adhik aanand dila rahe the....Aaaaah ...aur jara bhi nhi soch rahe the na.. ki mere jism me kitna dukh ho raha tha...
Par............ Usme apka bhi kya dosh.. Mein hu hi itni khoobsurat ki muje dekh koi bhi pagla jaye...hi.. hi.. hi..

Aur last me toh achanak.. se tumne meri chut se apna mota lund nikal dala...mere toh aashu nikal aayi...apko Sharm aani chahiye karim chacha... Aise bhi koi chod kar achanak se nikalta hai bhala....... Sayad isiliye ki tum mere jism se aur adhik khelna chahte ho...

Ho na ho jarur wo meri khoobsurati ne unhe Ghayal kar diya hai.. Agli baar to karim chacha apse mai jamke chudwangi....jaisa aap chaho waisa hi meri is naveli khubsurat jism ko chodiyega...hi...hi.. hi..hi....Tu bhi naa Archu bhut hi shaitan hai...."





Ye sochte sochte....wo sharmayi aur Uski halki hasi bhi nikal aayi....aur man hi man behad khush hone lagi...

Itne me door se "thak tak" ki aawaz ane lagi..

-"Choti maalkin...... Mai shanta... "

Bhar shanta khadi thi...

Archana pura nangi thi isliye thodi hadbada gyi...aur aawaz lagayi..

-"Han han..... Shanta thodi der ruko na..mai aa rahi hu...."

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Ab aage.....



Archana phir apni alishan bed traf nazre ghumayi aur dekhi......  uske makhmali bistar par Karim ka wo safed ganda sa dhoti pda tha...wo smile di... aur khud ko  kehne lagi...




 "Kya mai  ise phir se apne badan se lapet ke le jaw...hi hi hi abhi nhi karim ke dhoti tum aram kro meri bed pe..... Abhi tuje bhi mai bahar apni jism se chipak kar le jaungi toh phir se ye log mujse sawal krenge....tum aram kro... Dhoti mahasay."



Door ke bahar se phir se shanta ne awaz lagayi


 - "are choti malkin ji jara jaldi kholiye...malkin kuch jarruri baaat krni hai....phir mai chali jaungi."



Archana (kamre ke andar dhimi awaz me)- are ye shanta bhi na...


Phir wo bathroom ke bahar tangi towel ko apni nangi badan se lapet kar door ki traf chal di....


Door  ko kholte hi...


Archana (thoda gusse me)- "kya hai...shanta tum itni jaldi aa gyi...nahane bhi nahi dogi kya..??"



Shanta - "maaf kijiye.... Choti malkin... Wo kya he na badi malkin ne apko niche bulayi hai.... Bade malik aur gao ke pujari ji bhi niche aaye huye hain...."



Archana -par yesa kya baat ho gyi shanta...



Shanta -  "darashal wo kya he na... choti malkin...Maine suna hai ki kal raat ko is haweli ke andar apne chote malik ke pardada ji ke tangi photo niche zamin pe gir kar tut gayi thi isliye badi malkin aaj subha se puja archana kr rahi hai... Pariwar ke sabhi sadasyo ko niche bulayi hain... Aj savera Saade aat baje iswar ko pusp arpit ki jaygi..aap tab tak pahuch jaye.."



Archana -  "par itni choti si baat ke liye puja....pata nhi ye mummy jee bhi na aise baato me..itna andvishwas kise kr leti hai....aacha thik hai shanta mai aa jaungi samay se phele ab tum jaw aur haan itni jaldi bhi mat aa jana...mai Nahane ke baad tayar ho kar niche aati hu..."


Shanta- thik hai choti malkin...mai  ab chalti hu...



Phir Archana door ko band kr deti hai.... Aur door ke lock ko jor se ghuma deti hai.... Taki nahane ke samay ko koi disturb nhi kar paye....door jaldi bhi na khule.


Archana ne ghadi ki auur dekha 

-"O shit...itne jaldi.....pta nhi.. Mai kese tayar ho paungi... Muje jaldi krna hoga"



Phir andar jaate huye hi usne apne badan se towel ko kholte huye farsh me  girate huyi aur nangi hi bathroom ke auur chal deti hai...



bathroom Ke andar phuchte hi..wo waha nangi Bathtub par utri aur pit ke bal let gyi... aur pani ko on kar krte huyi mast sampoo se apne mast khubsurat badan ko saaf krne lagi....face.... boobs... underarms...clean shave kiye huye...Bina balo wali Gulabi Choot ko sampoo se ghisti huyi...



pura badan ko puri trah se saaf hone baad wo bathtub se bahar nikal aayi.....



Phir nangi hi bathroom ke aanye ke pass jakar apne khubsurat sexy badan ko thoda nihara...aur ek katilana naughty smile di....Phir towel se pochte huye...uske baad jaldi se panty aur bra pehni....par uski ghani reshmi bal ab bhi bhegi thi.. to wo aayne me dekhte huye sexy andaz me jhadte huyi  sukhane lagi.....





Phir baathroom se nikal kr bedroom gyi aur jaldi jaldi red colour ki peticot...blouse, nhi nhi kuch soch kar...aj red colour ki lehnga phenti hu... Phir peticot aur blouse apni makhmali bistar  fekh di, karim chacha ke dhoti ke upar, aur smile di, phir red colour ki akarshak lehenga apni almirah se nikali phir phenne, wo bhi jaldi jaldi...ab puri trah phen li..

Uske baad face pe thodi makeup ke baad baal ko sawarne ke baad ....chudiyon ko dono hatho me dalke....kano ki baali phene laagi.....


aur apne ko bolte huye..



"Are archu jaldi kro bhi... nhi to  teri saas naraz ho jayengi.."phir gajra lagati hai apne sar ke baalo ke piche..

Aur last me mang me sindur bharne ke baad..apne gale me mangalsutra ko phehne lagi  jo aj subha ko karim ke kutiya ( karim ka stay room) se aane ke baad phele utar di thi...


Archana aj bhut jaldi jaldi tayar ho gyi thi.....
Kyunki wo ye bhi chahti thi is haweli ki acchi bahu bane....unki saas abtak hamesa aise samay par naraz ho jaya krti thi .. to aj wo unki aachi bahu ki trah banke samay se phele jayengi.... pusp arpit karne....


Archana ne ab ghadi ki aur dekha toh samay thoda bacha hi tha....usne socha thodi badan pe malish ki tel lagaye jaye kyunki kal raat ki katiye pe karim se ghamashan chudai use aj bhi dard de raha tha....aur baad me wo puri badan ki shanta se malish krwa legi..

unse almirah se malish ki tel ki sishi nikali aur dhakkan ko kol di... Phir gaddedaar sofa pe apni ek taang ko uthake uspe rakhte huve....

usne apni lehenga  ko ghutne tak uthakar kamar ke upar tak sarka di...

uske baad us sishi se thodi tel nikal kar apni lachkili kamar...gudazz gori jango aur mansal nitambo pe tel lagayi....aur phir se ghadi ki aur dekhi..

Tik.. tik.. tik....ghadi ke khanta jaldi jaldi ja raha tha.... Sade aat bajne hi wale the...

Wo khud ko bolne lagi......

"Are Archana .... bhut late ho gya hai...chalo jaldi....ab"


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Ab aage....
 
Archana apne kamre ke andar...

Archana ab jaise hi door kholne lagti hai door ke knob khul hi nhi paa rahi thi....

kyunki door ki knob bhut hi tight ho chuka tha... Udar niche  pusph arpit hone hi jaa rahi thi... Archana door ki knoob ko kholne ki puri koshish kar rahi thi.....

Par unki dono Hatho ki hatheliyon me tel lage hone wajah se unki hatheli knob se phisal rahi thi archana ki koshish bhi nakaam hoti jaa rahi thi.
Archana ko ye samaj nhi aa rahi thi ki wo door khole  to  khole kaise...
 
                            .... NIYATI ....
-"ha ha ha...meri pyaari archana...tu itni koshish kar bhi kyu rahi hai...
maine hi is darwaje ko band kar di hai....tumari raksha ke liye..jab tak ki ye samay nikal nhi jaata tu yahi kamre ke andar band  rahegi...
...Ha ha ha...aur yaad rakh tu ye punyakarmo ke raste nhi..balki..tuje sirf aur sirf jismani paapi nazayaz sambando ke raste jana hai..maze lutne aur lutwane ....ha....ha...ha.."

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Idhar pushp arpan ka samay ho chuka tha.... Aur Niche Archana ke saas aur sasur archana ki aane ka intezar kar rahe the...
 
Babaji -naam BALLU baba (phele khumbhar ka kaam kiya krta tha...ab gaw ka  ballu baba ban gya hai...AGE 59...  baba mante hai wo apne  andar bhut saare shaitani atamao ko kaid kar   rakhe hai... Aur un sabhi sahitani atmao ko gulam banaye hain...)

 


(BALLU-THE BABA)



(Baba JI) -" ...pusp arpan ka samay ho gaya hai.... Aplog pariwar ke sabhi sadasyagan samne aayein aur ishwar ko pushp arpan krien..."

 


Manjula devi -" thoda rukiye.... Baba jee.. hamari haveli ki nayi  bahu abhi tak aayi nhi hai....thoda sa rukhiye avi  bulwa lati hu...."
   


(Aj manjula devi  aisi saji thi jaisi.. badi maalkin khud hi nayi dulhan ho.... )

(Baba JI)-" thik hai.. putri... par hum ab jyada der intejar nhi kar sakte samay nikla jaa raha hai...."

Manjula devi- "jee baba jee.. jald hi hamari bahu aati hogi..."


Manjula devi (Bhanupratap ko  dire se )- "pata nhi ye bahuraani bhi....itni der kyun kar rahi hai...mai abhi shanta se bahu ko bulwa leti hu..'


Manjula devi - "shanta suno toh...."

  

Shanta-" jee badi malkin.....!!"



(Shanta  kuch soch rahi hai- kuch toh gadbadh hai,choti malkin archana...)


Manjula devi -" shanta jaldi se hamari bahu ko bula lao....pusp arpan ka samay ho chuka hai aur ab itejaar nhi kar sakte baba jee bole hain....jaaw jaldi...'

Shanta- "jee badi malkin...mein avi choti maalkin bula ke le aati hu.''

Aur phir Shanta jaldi jaldi upar Archana ki room ki traf jaldi jaldi sidiyaon se chad kr jaati hai..

 

Idhar samay ab nikalne hi wala hai hi hota hai...

Niche..Manjula devi aur Bhanupratap vayakul the.. apni bahu Archana ki aane ko lekar....


Manjula devi(muh banate huve)-" lagta h hamari bahu ko ye sab pasand nhi....jab bhi ghar me aisa ayojan hota ha... Usi samay bahu kuch na kuch ye bahana bana leti hai.."

 

Bhanupratap -"manjula tum chitna na kro...hamari bahu aa jayegi....sayad thodi time lag raha hoga usey.."



 



Manjula devi -" aeji samay nikalne baad aayegi kya wo..mein toh tang aagyi hu hamari  is bahuraani se.... Aap hi bataye baba jee ab kya hum aur  intejar kar sakte hain ki nahi...."




(Baba JI) - "nahi nahi...ab hm aur intejar nhi kar sakte yadi yeh uchit samay paar ho gayi tho phir se apsagun hoga is haveli ke liye..."


Manjula devi - "subh!  subh!...boliye baba jee....kuch upay batayei hume...hamari bahu ke liye..baba ji..bahu ko aane me pata nhi kitna der karegi...wo sajne sawarne mein hi samay laga di hai usey toh bas(phir kuch soch kar chup ho gyi).... 

  
..Ap hi batayie baba jee ham kya krien....."


(Baba JI) -" putri...yadi ye subh samay ke  saath pusp arpit nhi kiya gya... toh ye apsagun hoga yadi haveli ke sadayso ko anarth se bachna hai toh is vakt aap apni bahuraani ke bina upsasthi bhi ishwar ko pushp arpit kar sakti hain  lekin...bas baad me mai apko wo upay bata dunga apki bahuraani  ke liye .."

Manjula devi-" jee..thik hai..baba jee"


Iske baad pushp arpan hota hai.. Phir  manjula devi aur bhanupratap hi yash pardada ke photo frame ko ache se saja ke uspar mala laga kar phir se diwar par laga dete hain....

Ab manjula devi baba se us upay ke liye puchti hai...

Iske baad  baba ji apni  jhole se ek choti si kale rang ki kapde ki potli  nikal kar manjula devi   ko deta hai..

Babaji - ise Pakdo putri...

Manjula devi -"isme kya hai baba jee.."

Baba- putri ye tumari bahu Archana ke liye hai
 is haveli me kuch to gadbad hai..... jo tumari bahu ko prabhawit kar raha hai.... aur ye choti potli me rakhi huyi wo vastu hi tumari bahu ko buri saktiyon se bacha sakti hai...

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Manjula devi ne woh kali kapde ki chhoti potli haath mein li aur use gaur se dekha
 
Uske chehre par chinta aur utsukta dono thi. Potli bilkul halki thi, jaise andar kuchh sookhi jadi-bootiyan ya koi chhota sa taweez ho.

Manjula devi(thoda ghabraate hue) - "Baba ji, yeh kya hai? Kaise yeh meri bahu ko buri shaktiyon se bachaayega? Aur yeh gadbad kya hai haveli mein? Pata nahi kyun, par  kal raat se hi Archana bilkul alag si lag rahi thi.. jaise koi uske andar ghus gaya ho."

Ballu Baba 
 (apni aankhon mein chamak laate hue, awaaz ko dheema aur gehra karte hue) - "Putri, yeh potli mein ek vishesh 'kaala til ka tel' hai, jise maine apne andar kaid shaitani aatmaon se hi taiyar karwaya hai. Is tel ko Archana ke maathe par lagao, aur uske pairon ke talvon par bhi thoda sa chhed do. Yeh tel uske sharir mein ghus kar us par chhaayi hui burai ko bahar nikaal dega... lekin yaad rakhna, yeh sirf bahar nikaalega nahi, balki us burai ko badla dega. Jo shakti us par haavi hai, woh ab Archana ke zariye hi apna mazaa legi... aur yeh haveli ke sabhi paap ko ujaagar karegi."

Manjula devi ki saansein tez ho gayi. Woh samajh rahi thi ki baat kuchh gehri hai, par woh apni bahu ko bachana chahti thi... ya shayad haveli ke raaz ko chhupana.

Manjula devi- "Theek hai baba ji... main abhi jaati hoon Archana ke kamre mein. Par agar yeh kaam na kare toh?


Ballu Baba (muskurate hue, daant chamkaate hue) - "Toh phir niyati apna kaam karegi, putri. Niyati... jo sab kuchh tay karti hai. Ab jao, samay kam hai. Pushp arpan toh ho gaya, ab asli puja shuru hone wali hai."

Manjula devi ne potli ko apni anchal mein chhupa liya aur tezi se seedhiyon ki taraf badhi. Upar pahunchte hi usne dekha ki Archana ka kamra band hai. Bahar se hi awaaz aayi thi pehle – hasi, woh ajeeb si hasi jo Archana ki nahi lag rahi thi.

Manjula ne darwaza khatkhataya.
 

Manjula devi- "Archana beta, meri bahuraani .. darwaza kholo! Pushp arpan ho gaya, sab intezaar kar rahe hain. Kya ho gaya tumhe? Itni der kyun?"

Andar se pehle toh chuppi rahi, phir wohi ajeeb awaaz aayi – ab yeh Archana ki awaaz thi, par usmein ek ajeeb si masti thi.

Archana(andar se, halki hasi ke saath) - "Saasuma... aap fikar mat karo. Main aa rahi hoon... bas thoda sa taiyaar ho rahi hoon. Aap niche jaiye, main abhi aati hoon."

Manjula ko kuchh galat laga. Archana ki awaaz mein woh purani sharam nahi thi – balki ek aag si thi, jaise woh ab control mein nahi thi.

Tabhi andar se woh hasi phir se goonji – "Ha ha ha... meri pyaari saasuma... ab darwaza kholne ki koshish mat karna. Yeh darwaza ab sirf tabhi khulega jab main chahti hoon. Aur main... abhi bahut masti mein hoon."

Manjula ne darwaza dhakka diya, par woh nahi khula. Usne potli kholi aur tel ki shishi nikali. Usne socha – shayad abhi yeh kaam karna padega.

Par tabhi niche se Ballu Baba ki awaaz aayi – zor se, jaise poori haveli sun sake.

Ballu Baba - "Putri Manjula! Jaldi aao! Yeh tel ko pehle mere paas laao... main ismein ek mantra daal deta hoon. Warna yeh asar nahi karega!"

Manjula wapas mud gayi, par uske man mein shak tha. Kya yeh baba sach mein madad kar raha tha... ya yeh sab haveli ke paapon ko aur gehra karne ka naya tareeka tha?

Idhar kamre mein Archana akeli thi. Uske haathon mein ab tel nahi tha – woh sab saaf ho chuka tha. Woh mirror ke saamne khadi thi, apne aap ko niharti hui. Uske chehre par ek ajeeb si muskaan thi.

Archana(apne aap se baat karte hue, dheemi awaaz mein) - "Niyati... tu sahi kehti hai. Ab yeh haveli meri hai... aur iske sabhi mard... mere. Karim chacha toh bas shuruaat the. Ab asli khel shuru hoga."



  

Woh dheere se apne lehenge ko upar uthane lagi, jaise koi naya irada ban raha ho...

Ab aage kya hoga? Kya Manjula tel leke wapas aayegi? Kya Ballu Baba ka asli chehra saamne aayega? Ya Archana ab poori tarah niyati ke haathon mein hai?

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Ab aage...

Archana (mirror ke saamne khadi, apne lehenge ke pallu ko dheere se neeche girate hue, halki si hasi ke saath) - "Niyati... tu bilkul sahi keh rahi hai. Ab yeh haveli, yeh log... sab mera khel hain. Bas thoda sa intezaar... saasuma bhi aa rahi hongi ab tak."

Tabhi bahar se seedhiyon ki awaaz aayi. Manjula devi tezi se upar chadh rahi thi, haath mein woh kali potli tightly pakde hue. Uske chehre par ghabrahat thi, par saath hi ek ajeeb si jidd bhi – jaise woh apni bahu ko "bachaane" ke naam par kuchh bada karne ko taiyaar ho.

Manjula ne darwaze par zor se dastak di.
Manjula devi (sakht awaaz mein) - "Archana! Bahuraani! Ab bas karo yeh nautanki. Darwaza kholo jaldi se! Pushp arpan ho chuka, sab intezaar kar rahe hain. Aur yeh kya bakwaas kar rahi ho andar? Awaaz bilkul badal gayi hai tumhari!"

Andar se pehle chuppi, phir dheemi, madhur, lekin bilkul nangi si awaaz aayi.
Archana - "Aa rahi hoon... saasuma. Bas thodi der aur. Aap itni jaldi kyun kar rahi hain? Kya itna bura lag raha hai ki aapki bahuraani thodi si masti kar rahi hai?"

Manjula devi ka chehra laal ho gaya. Usne potli kholi, tel ki shishi nikali aur darwaze ke neeche se thoda sa tel andar ki taraf chhidka, jaise koi purana totka kar rahi ho.

Manjula devi (zor se) - "Bahuraani suno! Yeh tel laga lo maathe par. Baba ji ne kaha hai yeh tumhe buri nazar se bachayega. Jaldi se darwaza kholo, warna main yahin se chillati hoon poori haveli ko!"

Andar se ek lambi hasi goonji – ab yeh hasi bilkul Archana ki nahi thi. Yeh wohi gehri, shaitani hasi thi jo pehle darwaze ke knob ke saath aayi thi...

Niyati ki awaaz (archana ki muh se oar dire se taki manjula devi dire se sune aur confuse rahe)- "Saasuma... aap bahut pyari hain. Bahuraani ko itna pyaar... lekin yeh tel? Yeh toh mere liye nahi bana. Yeh toh aapke liye hai... taaki aap dekh sako jo hone wala hai. "

Manjula devi -pta nhi ye bahuraani,kya badbada rahi hai, kamre ke andar....

Lekin ab, Achanak darwaza khud hi dheere-dheere khulne laga. Knob ab tight nahi tha – jaise kisi ne andar se hi chhod diya ho.
Darwaza khulte hi Manjula devi ne dekha – Archana bilkul taiyaar khadi thi. 

 

Par yeh wahi Archana nahi thi jo kal tak sharmili dulhan thi. Uske baal khule the, aankhon mein ek aag si chamak rahi thi, aur lehenga itna neeche gira hua tha ki uski kamar aur navel saaf dikh rahe the. Haathon mein abhi bhi thoda sa tel laga hua tha – par woh tel usne apne sharir par malish karne ke liye istemal kiya tha, jaise koi tel malish kar rahi ho.

Archana (muskurate hue, dheere se paas aate hue) - "Saasuma... aap fikar mat karo. Main bilkul theek hoon. Bas... thoda sa naya roop dikhana chahti hoon aaj. Aapke saath, sasur ji ke saath... aur poori haveli ke saath."
Manjula devi peeche hati, uske haathon se shishi girne wali thi.

Manjula devi (ghabra kar) - "Yeh... yeh kya bakwas hai bahuraani? Tum... tum bilkul badal gayi ho. Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?"
Archana (ek kadam aur aage badhte hue, awaaz mein masti bhar kar) - "Niyati ho rahi hai, saasuma. Jo hona tha, woh ho raha hai. Ab aap niche chaliye... main bhi aa rahi hoon. Aaj pushp arpan nahi... asli puja hogi. Aur is baar... main khud pushp arpan karungi... sabke saamne."

Manjula devi ka munh khula reh gaya. Woh kuchh bol nahi paayi.

 

 Archana ne uske haath se tel ki shishi cheen li, usmein se thoda sa tel apni ungliyon par liya aur apne honthon par laga liya – jaise lipstick laga rahi ho"

Archana - "Chaliye saasuma... niche sab intezaar kar rahe hain. Aur aaj se... yeh haveli meri hai. Niyati ne yeh faisla kar diya hai."

Manjula devi ko ajib laga phir  socti huyi -kya ho gya hai, humari bahuraani ko, jarrur kisi buri sakti ne bahuraani ko apne prabav me kar leyi ho...

Ab,Woh dono seedhiyan utarne lagi.aage Archana, piche uski saas manjula devi,Niche Ballu Baba khada tha, muskurata hua, jaise sab kuchh jaanta ho. Bhanupratap aur baaki log bhi abhi tak wahi the, pushp arpan ke baad bhi.

Archana ne niche aate hi sabki taraf dekha – uski nazar sabse pehle Karim chacha par gayi,

 


jo kone mein khada tha, aankhen jhuki hui thi. Phir usne Ballu Baba ki taraf dekha aur muskurayi...

Karim (dire se, fusfusate huye) - "Baba ji... aapka tel bahut acha kaam kar raha hai. Ab asli khel shuru hoga haveli me"

Ballu Baba ne sirf muskuraya... aur dheere se bola – "Niyati apna rasta chun leti hai karim,Ab dekhte hain... kaun kiska gulam banta hai."

Rangin haveli ki Kahani ab aur gehri hone wali hai...NAYATI ka agla naya khel kya rachne wali hai
Ab aage kya hone wala hai? Archana ka agla kadam kya hoga?kya karim chacha aur ballu baba sath me mile huye hain??



Ballu Baba ka asli plan kya ho sakta hai? Ab Manjula devi kuchh karne ki koshish karegi??aur shanta kha gyi??

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Update 6

Ab Shanta ke saath kiya huwa.....tha...Shanta toh sabse pehle badi malkin Manjula devi ke hukum par upar gayi thi Archana ko bulane. 







Par jaise hi woh seedhiyon ke mod par pahunchi – wahan se seedha Archana ke kamre ki taraf nahi gayi. Kyunki usne dekha ki Archana ka darwaza band hai aur andar se woh ajeeb sexy

hasi ki awz dheemi dhimee   rahi thi. 






Shanta ko pehle se hi shak tha haveli ke  unsuljhi raazon par....






Tabhi Shanta ke kaan mein ek dheemi awaaz aayi... jaise koi usko bula raha ho..Shanta seedhiyon ke modh par pahunchi, jahan ek chhoti si dark gali thi jo haveli ke purane hisse ki taraf jaati thi – 





niche  wahi purana kamra jahan Karim chacha rehta tha, aur jahan kal raat Archana chupke se haveli lang ke gayi thi...

Woh ruk gayi, mudkar dekha – koi nahi tha. Par awaaz phir aayi, is baar thodi gehri, thodi rijahane wali....








**Awaaz** (dheemi, andar se) - "Shanta... idhar aa...jra... jaldi... bahuraani choti  malkin ne bulaya hai...haan hann  Wahi andera  raasta se..."






  


Shanta ka dil dhadak utha.... Woh hamesha se jaanti thi ki haveli mein kuchh na kuchh galat chal raha hai, lekin kabhi muh nahi khola. Usne socha – shayad  haveli ki nayi  bahuraani uski choti malkin Archana ka hi order ho...Shanta ghabra gayi, par usne socha shayad sach mein choti malkin archana ne hi usay bulaya ho – kyuki kal raat bhi usne kuchh  ajeeb dekha tha (Archana ko Karim ke saath). 



Woh chupke se us dark gali mein ghus gayi, jahan roshni bilkul kam thi...

Woh thoda sa darte-darte us gali mein ghus gayi...





Woh wahan pahunchi toh dekha – Karim chacha khada tha, uska woh bada kala badan andhere mein bhi chamak raha tha. Uske haath mein ek chhota sa ganda sa kapda tha, jaise kisi ko muh band karne ke liye.


 



Shanta - kya huwa Karim chacha ji  aap......








KARIM (muskurate hue, dheemi awaaz mein) - "Chup... bilkul chup....
Choti malkin ka hukum hai. Tu bahut zyada jaanti hai, Shanta. Kal raat jo tune jo dekha wo... mai tuje dekh raha tha kal raat.. woh sab bhool jaaa...Warna..."

Shanta peeche hatne lagi, 






 


 


par peeche se hi kisi ne uske muh par kisi ne haath rakh diya. Yeh Ballu Baba tha – uska haath bahut sakht tha, aur aankhon mein wohi shaitani chamak.



 

  


Karim ne uske muh par haath rakh diya, aur peeche se Ballu Baba. Un dono ne usko pakad kar us purane store room mein le gaye – wohi kamra jahan purani khatara furniture, toote bartan, aur dhool bhari cheezein padi rehti hain. Kamra bilkul andhera, sirf ek chhoti si roshni ki kiran crack se aa rahi thi...




 




Us Karme ka  Darwaja band hote hi..Shanta chillane ki koshish kr rahi thi par karim ka uski muh par  halki hatho dabe hone ke karan awaz dab gyi aur dono se request krne kagi - " are choddho muje... aaplog.. Dono  kya  ho gya ap logo ko... "

 

 


BALLU BABA (shanta ki kaanon mein fhusfusaate hue) - "Shanti rakh shanta beti... yeh sab niyati ka khel hai. Tu ab yahin rukegi... jab tak bahuraani ka kaam poora na ho jaaye. Tujhe kuchh nahi hoga... bas... thoda sa maze aur saath dena padega.... Haa haa haa.



Shanta - kya matlb....

  

par Karim ne uske muh par kapda daba diya...




 


Ballu Baba  (muskurate hue, aankhen chamkaate) - "Chinta mat kar beti... tu yahin rukegi thodi der. Bahuraani abhi taiyaar ho rahi hai... aur tujhe kuchh nahi hoga. Bas... agar tu chup rahi toh. Warna yeh shaitani aatmaayein... jo maine kaid ki hain... tujh par bhi haavi ho sakti hain....



 




Shanta ki aankhon mein aansu aa gaye. Woh samajh gayi ki yeh sab plan tha – usko rokna taaki woh Manjula devi ko ya kisi ko na bata sake ki Archana aur karim chacha ke bich ka ajeeb samand...jo jaane anjame me hi haveli ki  jismani nijayaj ka paap surwaat bhar thi...haveli me aur kya kya raaz hai ye ane wala waqt hi batayega.

Woh ladti rahi, par Karim ka zor bahut tha. Ballu Baba ne uske haath pair bandh diye ek purane rassi se, aur bola:


Ballu Baba - "Ab tu yahin maze kar... hum waha  jaa rahe hain. Bahuraani ka asli roop sabke saamne  aayega par abhi bilkul nhi ... Aur tu...shayad tu bhi chahe toh is khel ka hissa ban jaa....toh hum tuje bhi wo kimti uphar de denge... Ha ha ha...



Shanta soch me pad gayi kon sa kimti uphar..... Ballu baba bole ki toh itni soch mat wo uphar de denge tujhe....agr toh wakai me hamare saath is khel me shamil hogi toh.....




Phir dono karim aur ballu baba bahar nikal gaye, darwaza lock kar ke. 

Shanta akeli thi andhere mein, muh bandha hua, haath-pair bandhe hue. Woh soch rahi thi – kaise bahar nikle, aur wo kimti uphar kya ho sakta hai?





Idhar upar Manjula devi Archana ke kamre pahunch chuki thi, darwaza khatkhatati hui... aur Shanta ki kami ko notice hi nahi kar paayi kyuki us waqt uska dhyan sirf bahuraani par tha.




Is beech Manjula devi Archana ke kamre tak pahunch chuki thi, darwaza khatkhatati hui. Usne peeche mudkar dekha – Shanta kahan gayi? Par us waqt usko itni fikar nahi thi. Woh bas apni bahuraani ko "theek" karna chahti thi.




Ab niche sab log wait kar rahe the... pushp arpan khatam, par asli drama shuru hone wala tha.



Aur Shanta? Woh ab us andhere kamre mein band thi... Karim chacha aur Ballu Baba sath me. Unka plan tha – usko chup karwana, taaki woh kisi ko na bata sake ki Archana kal raat kahan thi, aur ab us par kya chha raha hai



Par Shanta itni aasani se nahi maanti... shayad woh bhi khel mein shamil ho jaaye... ya phir woh hi pehli shikaar ban jaaye....





- Shanta kaise bachke bahar aati hai aur sabko sach batati hai?  Ya

- Ya woh bhi niyati ke haathon mein aa jaati hai aur Archana ke saath milkar khel shuru karti hai?  

- Ya Ballu Baba aur karim chacha ke saath saath kuchh aur shaitani kregi...??

Ab Nayati naya khel rach rahi ha ya balki in harami buddhe logon ka shaitani plan hai...
Continued.....