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Adultery RANGIN HAVELI (alternative thread)
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Ye kahani puri tarh se kalpanik rachna hai.inka vastavikta se koi lena dena nhi hai.kahani sirf entertainment ke liye hai umeed krta hu apko pasand aagyegi.

 kahani alternative thread ki tor par start kiya gya hai.original writer ke kahani is link par diya hai. RANGIN HAVELI....ye kahani jaha se ruki huyi thi ...kahani wahi se start kar di gyi hai....

Mai ye kahani test mode par start kiya hu.....agar story apko aachi lagegi toh story ke update diye jayenge..


RANGIN HAVELI



.....NIYATI.....

"Ha.. Ha... ha ..  ha.. Kaisi lagi ...Archana tujhe apne yaar se apni dusri milan ki raat ..khub maza aaya na tujhe iske khatiya par.. 
Ab tu auur dekhti ja mai teri aisa maze karwaungi.... jise tu kabhi  sochi na hogi meri behna....khoob maze lutna hai na tujhe..Ha.. ha.. ha.." 
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Aab aage aage dekhte hai kya hota hai Archana ki Jindgi me....


Haveli me... rangin raato ki suruwaat ho chuki thi..................




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    Suryodai ka samay ho chuka tha....Subha ke 7 baj chuke the....suraj ke kirne kutiya ki choti si khidki se hote huye archana ki chehre aur karim ke ganje sir par pad rahe the...


dono ke kapde idhar udhar feke huye bikre pade the......koi kutiya ke kisi kone me feki padi thi to koi darwaje ke udhar....aisa lag raha tha  maano do nange jismo me raatbhar ghamasan yudh chala ..aur dono nange badan thakh nidhal hokar gehri nind ke aagosh me...us choti si khatiya par  soye pade the....Karim ka kala nanga badan bedhang halat me apni  choti maalkin ke gori nangi jism ke upar pada tha....
 

Archana ki nind ab khulne lagi.... apni dono aakhon ko dire se  kholti hai.... Usey apne nangi jism par gehri nind me soye huye nange karim ko leta huwa  paati hai...



          Karim se Raatbhar chale apni ghamasan chudai ke baad karim ka ganja sar uske dono golkai safed stano ke bich ke rekha par pda tha...  aur karim ka khula muh uski dayi safed stan ki bhoori ghundi ko apne thuko se san kar apne gande muh girft  me liya huwa tha....



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Archana ab apni komal hath jab niche yoni ki traf le jaati hai to usey apne hantho ki hatheliyon me gilapan sa mahsoos hota hai....uski toh sharam se...halki hassi nikal aati hai....


Wo ab samjh gyi thi ....Karim chacha ka kala ajgar ke mafik lund avi bhi uski kasi yoni se jakad kar andar hi sama betha tha.....archana ko ye bhi pta chal rhi thi ki karim ka lund uski kasi yoni ko kitna jyada hi bhaa rahi thi. aur uski yoni se undono  ke milajula kaamras aur viryo ke dhar archana ki gaand ki ched se hote huye niche pade chadar par bahe jaa rahi thi........


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 Nanga Karim uske upar jis halat me pada huwa tha....Usey apni phela milan ki wo haseen raat yaad aane lagi....




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wo tufani barish ki kali raat...jaha us sunshaan jangal ke....us jhopde ke andar zameen me padi sukhi ghass ki pattiyon par isa hi nangi behaya hokar bedhang halat me isi nange karim ke saath apna phela sharirik milan ka charmsukho ki kaampurti ke baad soyi padi thi.....
uski kasi gori yoni ke andar karim ka kala mota lund fasa huwa dera dale pada tha... badi muskil se nikali thi wo uske is ajgar ke mafik lund ko......

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Aaj bhi aise hi halat the....karim aaj bhi gehri nind me tha....Par aj farsh ki jagah karim ke khatiye par thi......aur karim sote huye khrate  maar raha tha.....ARCHANA ki toh hassi ruk nhi rahi thi.....usne socha yadi unki saas ab usey aur karim chacha ko is halat me dekh li to pata nhi kya hoga... Wo to sochegi ki...uski nayi  naveli bahu karim chacha ke niche aakhir kaise aa padi....aur unki saas ki toh sharam ke maare pani pani nikal jayegi..


Wo  hasne lagi.... Usey apni is besharmi ke liye koi afsoos nhi tha..ab wo soye hoye karim ko badi pyaar se dekhne lagi... Usey niharne lagi....wo karim ko aisa hi apne jism ke upar pade rehna dena chahti thi...par subha ho gyi thi.... Isliye archana ko laga aisi halat me rehna ab munasib nhi....ab archana laite huye karim ko apne upar hatne ke liye usko hilati huyi badi pyaar pukarti hai....

-"Uto karim chacha .....dekho to Subha ho gyi hai..aur kitna der lete rahoge mere upar haan ....."

Par  karim ko kuch fark nhi pad raha tha....Wo ab bhi gehri nind ke aagosh me pada tha aur kharate maar bhi raha tha....

Ab ARCHANA  ko sharart sujhi... Aur  KARIM ko halki si chapat laga deti hai....karim
hadbata huwa nind se ut jata hai.... Archana ki dayini stan ki bhoori ghundi  karim ke gande muh se giraft se azad ho chuki thi.....


-" k ka kya huwa.....  "  karim hadbata huwa bol pda.....ARCHANA ki to jor se hassi nikal padi.. 



Archana -"hi hi hi...arre chacha.... Kal raatbhar se aisa hi lete ho mere upar.... Apni is choti maalkin ko apni khatiya se jaane bhi nhi doge kya.???... "


Karim - " choti maalkin ji .....hame maaf kijeyga ... Hum hosh me nhi the..."


Archana -"koi baat nhi karim chacha... 
dekho to apka bada ling meri choti si yoni ke andar ab bhi satak kar baita hai...meri toh yoni me sujan ho rahi hai chacha......Please ap apne ling ko bahar nikaliye na.."


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#2
Great start dude to a story that was incompletely left inspite of being very promising.
Thanks for this development and taking up the task.Loved the mini update you gave. Description of how it looks like the next morning is itself So So SEXY
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#3
Awaiting next update soon
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#4
Great start
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#5
Nice update and waiting for more
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#6
wonderful start!
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#7
Dear @dekay sutuz,

Superb initiative.... Thank you for starting again this story...
Bahot khub...  clps clps

Added reps....

Please carry on..........

Namaskar Namaskar
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#8
Next update kb aey ga?
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#9
Agle update ka intezaar hai
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#10
Nice...
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#11
Thanks....to All

Next update par work kar raha hu....

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#12
(26-03-2021, 12:33 AM)dekay sutuz Wrote: Ye kahani puri tarh se kalpanik rachna hai.inka vastavikta se koi lena dena nhi hai.kahani sirf entertainment ke liye hai umeed krta hu apko pasand aagyegi.

 kahani alternative thread ki tor par start kiya gya hai.original writer ke kahani is link par diya hai. RANGIN HAVELI....ye kahani jaha se ruki huyi thi ...kahani wahi se start kar di gyi hai....

Mai ye kahani test mode par start kiya hu.....agar story apko aachi lagegi toh story ke update diye jayenge..


RANGIN HAVELI
Bahut mast likha bhai lekin thode bade update dene ka kasht kare 
Aapane bahut achha chalu kiya h
.....NIYATI.....

"Hi hi hi hi hi...Kaisi lagi ... Archana tuhje ..apne yaar se apni dusri milan ki raat ..khub maza aaya na tujhe iske khatiya par.. 
Ab tu dekhti ja tujhe mai kaha kaha kis kis si teri maze karwaati hu...khoob maze lutna hai na tujhe .. hi hi hi" 

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Aab aage aage dekhte hai kya hota hai Archana ki Jindgi me....

Haveli me... rangin raato ki suruwaat ho chuki thi..................




[Image: IMG_20210320_153932_l.jpg]
   

    Suryodai ho chuka tha....Subha ke 7 baj chuke the....suraj ke kirne kutiya ki choti si khidki se hote huye archana ki chehre aur karim ke ganje sir par pad rahe the...

dono ke kapde idhar udhar feke huye bikre pade the......koi kutiya ke kisi kone me feki padi thi to koi darwaje ke udhar....aisa lag raha tha  maano do nange jismo me raatbhar ghamasan yudh chala ..aur dono nange badan thakh nidhal hokar gehri nind ke aagosh me...us choti si khatiya par  soye pade the....Karim ka kala nanga badan bedhang halat me apni  choti maalkin ke gori nangi jism ke upar pada tha....


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Archana ki nind ab khulne lagi.... apni dono aakhon ko dire se  kholti hai.... Usey apne nangi jism par gehri nind me soye huye nange karim ko leta huwa  paati hai...

          KARIM se Raatbhar chale apni ghamasan chudai ke baad karim ka ganja sar uske dono golkai safed stano ke bich ke rekha par pda tha...  aur karim ka khula muh uski dayi safed stan ki bhoori ghundi ko apne thuko se san kar apne gande muh girft  me liya huwa tha.... 

Archana ab apni komal hath jab niche yoni ki traf le jaati hai to usey apne hantho ki hatheliyon me gilapan sa mahsoos hota hai....uski toh sharam se...halki hassi nikal aati hai....

Wo ab samjh gyi thi ....Karim chacha ka kala ajgar ke mafik lund avi bhi uski kasi yoni se jakad kar andar hi sama betha tha.....archana ko ye bhi pta chal rhi thi ki karim ka lund uski kasi yoni ko kitna jyada hi bhaa rahi thi. aur uski yoni se undono  ke milajula kaamras aur viryo ke dhar archana ki gaand ki ched se hote huye niche pade chadar par bahe jaa rahi thi........

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 Nanga Karim uske upar jis halat me pada huwa tha....Usey apni phela milan ki wo haseen raat yaad aane lagi....

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wo tufani barish ki kali raat...jaha us sunshaan jangal ke....us jhopde ke andar zameen me padi sukhi ghass ki pattiyon par isa hi nangi behaya hokar bedhang halat me isi nange karim ke saath apna phela sharirik milan ka charmsukho ki kaampurti ke baad soyi padi thi.....
uski kasi gori yoni ke andar karim ka kala mota lund fasa huwa dera dale pada tha... badi muskil se nikali thi wo uske is ajgar ke mafik lund ko......

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Aaj bhi aise hi halat the....karim aaj bhi gehri nind me tha....Par aj farsh ki jagah karim ke khatiye par thi......aur karim sote huye khrate  maar raha tha.....ARCHANA ki toh hassi ruk nhi rahi thi.....usne socha yadi unki saas ab usey aur karim chacha ko is halat me dekh li to pata nhi kya hoga... Wo to sochegi ki...uski nayi  naveli bahu karim chacha ke niche kaise aa padi....aur unki saas ki toh sharam ke maare pani pani nikal jayegi..

Wo  hasne lagi.... Usey apni is besharmi ke liye koi afsoos nhi tha..ab wo soye hoye karim ko badi pyaar se dekhne lagi... Usey niharne lagi....wo karim ko aisa hi apne jism ke upar pade rehna dena chahti thi...par subha ho gyi thi.... Isliye archana ko laga aisi halat me rehna ab munasib nhi....ab archana laite huye karim ko apne upar hatne ke liye usko hilati huyi badi pyaar pukarti hai....

-"Uto karim chacha .....dekho to Subha ho gyi hai..aur kitna der lete rahoge mere upar haan ....."

Par  karim ko kuch fark nhi pad raha tha....Wo ab bhi gehri nind ke aagosh me pada tha aur kharate maar bhi raha tha....

 Ab ARCHANA  ko sharart sujhti... ab  KARIM ko halki si chapat lagati hai....karim
hadbata huwa nind se ut jata hai.... Archana ki dayini stan ki bhoori ghundi  karim ke gande muh se giraft se azad ho chuki thi.....

-" k ka kya huwa.....  "  karim hadbata huwa bol pda.....ARCHANA ki to jor se hassi nikal padi.. 


Archana -"hi hi hi...arre chacha.... Kal raatbhar se aisa hi lete ho mere upar.... Apni is choti maalkin ko apni khatiya se jaane bhi nhi doge kya.???... "


Karim - " choti maalkin ji  mujhe maaf kijeyga ... Mujhe hosh nhi tha..."

Archana -"koi baat nhi karim chacha... 
dekho to apka bada ling meri choti si yoni ke andar ab bhi satak kar baita hai...meri toh yoni me sujan ho rahi hai chacha......Please ap apne ling ko bahar nikaliye na.."

Continued.....

Bahut bdiya lekin thode bade update dene ka kasht kare
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#13
Great initiative 
Good work man, keep this thread alive and active
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#14
No update??
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#15
Ek Update k bad lambi khamoshi
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#16
Aage...???
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#17
Grt start of the abandoned story......
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#18
Thanks Sarah sutuz for taking up this incomplete story..Good start n nice scene development
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#19
bro,
khani ko aage bdao

waiting
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#20
Bro one of best story please update please

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