Adultery The Cheating Wife ?
(10-08-2025, 10:13 PM)Ganges_pithoras Wrote: Kindly take your story and shove it in your great canyon if you can't keep your promises one after another playing with the readers and getting entertainment from their desperation. You are a dumbfuck who runs away and you prove it everytime.
Regards ☺️

Bro, I dont give a fuck about you.. why in the hell should i keep my word for your sake. who the fuck are you? i wish i could play with your desperate lonely virgin ass and never give any update. now go read the latest update and jack off. you piece of shit  Lotpot
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Fantastic come back bro suspense full update keep going good luck for the next update I hope next update will come fast best of luck
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Welcome back buddy. was really missing your updates.
All the best
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Ganga is clearly getting fucked. Thanks for the update. But we are starved of sex scene. especially between ganga and chacha. Still loves to masturbate with round 2 update. Need something like this soon. Hope you will bless us with your wonderful erotica.
And thanks for not leaving the story.
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Bro very thanks for the update
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Oooo what an update.... building the suspect and the last part of the update it's amazing.....can't wait for more  clp);
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Thanks for the came back, excellent update especially last suspense conservation, keep going bro
I hope next update will be in short time thank you
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Amazing comeback. That flowchart was amazing and all the gufs. Super thrilled.
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Your writing style is awesome
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(12-08-2025, 02:44 AM)Abhi T Wrote: Fantastic come back bro suspense full update keep going good luck for the next update I hope next update will come fast best of luck

(12-08-2025, 03:19 AM)Alvinthomas Wrote: Welcome back buddy. was really missing your updates.
All the best

(12-08-2025, 12:34 PM)Andy Smith Wrote: Bro very thanks for the update

(12-08-2025, 04:45 PM)Nobita Wrote: Oooo what an update.... building the suspect and the last part of the update it's amazing.....can't wait for more  clp);

(12-08-2025, 05:36 PM)Milfaddict Wrote: Thanks for the came back, excellent update especially last suspense conservation, keep going bro
I hope next update will be in short time thank you

(12-08-2025, 05:53 PM)Projectmp Wrote: Amazing comeback. That flowchart was amazing and all the gufs. Super thrilled.

thanks yr):
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In ome word it was owsome i request in finding answer of wife life sinu also enjoy why only girls have all fun
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woah KK is back!!

what an update bro.. came back with a bang with rocking update, and left us hanging on such a delicious cliffhanger.. Ganga being clapped on the bus. I wonder after all that he's seen, Srinu is still looking for more proof instead of letting go his wife.

Amazing updates as always brother! Waiting to see how this saga unfolds!.

Thanks KK!
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(15-08-2025, 11:22 AM)tomdickharry2024 Wrote: woah KK is back!!

what an update bro.. came back with a bang with rocking update, and left us hanging on such a delicious cliffhanger.. Ganga being clapped on the bus. I wonder after all that he's seen, Srinu is still looking for more proof instead of letting go his wife.

Amazing updates as always brother! Waiting to see how this saga unfolds!.

Thanks KK!

You sound like Yang 
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Amazing update BRO...

.Srinu can't read further now.....now How will Sreenu know what happened to Sundari's phone call? How will we know what she talked to sundri... KK bhai you have kept us in more suspense...and now He is going to Priya's house for Ganga past...but will Priya tell him about Ganga...and is there any guarantee that she will tell him truth bhai...let see what happens upcoming update...
And bro my main question is What will he do after knowing about Ganga's past... He knows that she has betrayed him... But still he has to find ganga past ...and who involve in the matter ...last part the clear that she is sex with someone..but he doesn't know ... can' Wait for upcoming unfold truth for ganga ...
Bro can you tell us... whan are you giving the next update ....

Your fan
Raja shri
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Guys no update this week.. i will be out of station 
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(16-08-2025, 10:07 PM)kk007007 Wrote: Guys no update this week.. i will be out of station 
Ok bro no problem...but please next update should be bigger ..if you have enough time .
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too many female characters, i m not sure what's the point of diverting focus from ganga
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Looks like this wimpy husband srinu will father a bastard child. Nice update.
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(16-08-2025, 10:07 PM)kk007007 Wrote: Guys no update this week.. i will be out of station 

Appreciate the heads-up bro!
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Few thoughts!

OP - This was a great story, one of the best! Detailed, erotic and slow. Loved every bit of it.

Now, coming to critique:

1. Too many female characters - This is Ganga's story (no not even Sreenu's) and most of the readers like to have one central character - The fire of out Loins. Please don't dilute that with side characters.
2. Divulging in past puts a Dampner on what's happening in the present - We loved the way Ganga behaved, but what are we trying with the past stuff here - yes, there is a hidden desire, but story (mostly) should move forward.
3. Slow updates - Kills the joy! Maybe not huge ones, but once a two week or so could be a good pace.
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