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(08-03-2025, 12:52 AM)krish_999 Wrote: First of all, I would like to thank all the dear members for appreciating my story and showering it with your thoughtful comments. Now that the story has ended, everything I intended to convey through it has been shared from my end. After posting the final chapter, I can't express how relieved I feel. I am currently going through a detox and can simply sit idly, do nothing, and think of anything.
But you know, before I could enjoy my much-needed break, I came down with a fever. I was about to write this comment immediately after finishing the story, but the fever drained that energy. I’m feeling better now and finally ready to write something here.
I had previously hinted at giving an epilogue, but I don’t think it’s needed now. Essentially, the epilogue was about Krish waiting outside the operating theater while Meera was giving birth. It would have included some of Krish’s thoughts and reflections on his life after reuniting with Meera. The final moment would have been a nurse coming out of the OT to tell Krish that his wife had delivered a baby. However, I couldn't write this part because I was indecisive about the baby's gender, so I decided not to include it.
So I've decided not to write an epilogue, as I don’t think it’s necessary. The story has come to an end, and an epilogue like that wouldn't add anything new, other than providing a conclusion, which I believe has already been achieved.
Regarding the story, many readers had various doubts, but I’d like to leave it up to you. I mean, I shared Krish’s version of his life, but it could be very different from Meera’s perspective. Even Krish has to guess a lot of things, imagine, and connect the dots. It's similar to how we experience life, isn’t it? We rely on the visuals we have and the words others give us. That’s the essence of writing a story from one person’s point of view. There’s no opportunity to present Meera’s version because, as a writer, I don’t know it, and Krish doesn’t have access to it as a character. So, just like him, readers too have the right to guess and imagine the other side. As a writer, I’m happy with whatever you choose to imagine about this story.
Regarding the climax, I’d like to clarify a few things. As RCF mentioned, this exact ending was in my mind when I decided to rewrite it. I had been building towards it from chapter 41. However, I didn’t intend to turn Desai into a completely cuckold character. It just unfolded that way without him realizing it. In my imagination, Desai loved Meera and had changed into a man who secretly wished he had her. As he observed Krish and Meera’s life together, he unknowingly became open to the idea of bringing Krish into his bedroom, not fully understanding the gravity of his transformation. He only realized this when Meera spoke about it, and it became clear to him that he had changed - becoming like Krish. From that point forward, Desai accepted that he couldn’t provide a different future for Meera, and that’s why he surrendered. In this version, Desai cannot be defeated by anyone except himself.
However, I haven’t shared much of his internal thought process because, as I mentioned earlier, I don’t want to delve too deeply into what’s in his mind. I could have written it as words spoken by him, but Krish and Meera might not fully believe it. Similarly, readers are free to interpret it differently - they might think he’s lying and will return to claim Meera. You all have the freedom to imagine that part however you wish.
Many readers have shared their thoughts and analyses, and I must say, these discussions have helped me stay immersed in the world of Krish and Meera. It was tough to remain in their world for so long, but your insights kept me focused. I believe that's the most beautiful aspect of writing in a forum like this. There have been times when I've gone back to read earlier parts of my story on this site and wondered how I managed to write them that way. After stepping away from that world, it feels almost like a miracle to me.
I’ve seen many comments about how I leave readers eager to read the next chapter, finishing one and wanting more. I’ve read a lot of Sidney Sheldon novels, and I think they’ve helped me pick up a few tricks for keeping readers hooked. My vocabulary has also improved, thanks to the practice. I think many readers here have also benefitted from writing long analyses of this story. Being able to put your thoughts into writing is a skill, and many readers have shared analyses that are almost as long as the chapters themselves. The pleasure of reading has only increased because of those comments.
Regarding the future of my writing in this forum, I won’t be writing a part four until I change my current career. It’s tough to stay in this world for an extended period. One reader mentioned how much you have to sacrifice in your personal and social life to dedicate time here, and that’s true. But it’s not just true for me - it's true for all those who have been following this story for so long. So, when I write something next, it’s going to be more like my previous short story, "A Chapter of Nightmare" - less than ten chapters.
I had previously mentioned writing a sequel to "The Accident", and I think that will be my next project. It will be a romance.
I also plan to write a story about seducing a neighbor. However, more than the sex aspect, the focus will be on how the man seduces a tough, committed woman. I just hope people don’t get overly motivated and decide to try seducing their neighbors after reading my story! Lol.
I took a long break before sharing my thoughts here, so my apologies for the delay. But it was something I was going to do. I needed to thank you all.
Once again, my heartfelt gratitude to all the readers for encouraging me.
Keep reading. Keep posting.
Love. Krish.
I suggest that the Harold Robbins is far better writer as compare to the Sidney Sheldon. The Harold Robbin engages his readers in his novel/s so deeply that the readers himself personified as the hero of his novel and read it in one go.
Harold Robbins is all time my favorite novelist.
I hope you(Krish) sir must read the Harold Robbins' novels if you have some spare time.
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(08-03-2025, 12:52 AM)krish_999 Wrote: First of all, I would like to thank all the dear members for appreciating my story and showering it with your thoughtful comments. Now that the story has ended, everything I intended to convey through it has been shared from my end. After posting the final chapter, I can't express how relieved I feel. I am currently going through a detox and can simply sit idly, do nothing, and think of anything.
But you know, before I could enjoy my much-needed break, I came down with a fever. I was about to write this comment immediately after finishing the story, but the fever drained that energy. I’m feeling better now and finally ready to write something here.
I had previously hinted at giving an epilogue, but I don’t think it’s needed now. Essentially, the epilogue was about Krish waiting outside the operating theater while Meera was giving birth. It would have included some of Krish’s thoughts and reflections on his life after reuniting with Meera. The final moment would have been a nurse coming out of the OT to tell Krish that his wife had delivered a baby. However, I couldn't write this part because I was indecisive about the baby's gender, so I decided not to include it.
So I've decided not to write an epilogue, as I don’t think it’s necessary. The story has come to an end, and an epilogue like that wouldn't add anything new, other than providing a conclusion, which I believe has already been achieved.
Regarding the story, many readers had various doubts, but I’d like to leave it up to you. I mean, I shared Krish’s version of his life, but it could be very different from Meera’s perspective. Even Krish has to guess a lot of things, imagine, and connect the dots. It's similar to how we experience life, isn’t it? We rely on the visuals we have and the words others give us. That’s the essence of writing a story from one person’s point of view. There’s no opportunity to present Meera’s version because, as a writer, I don’t know it, and Krish doesn’t have access to it as a character. So, just like him, readers too have the right to guess and imagine the other side. As a writer, I’m happy with whatever you choose to imagine about this story.
Regarding the climax, I’d like to clarify a few things. As RCF mentioned, this exact ending was in my mind when I decided to rewrite it. I had been building towards it from chapter 41. However, I didn’t intend to turn Desai into a completely cuckold character. It just unfolded that way without him realizing it. In my imagination, Desai loved Meera and had changed into a man who secretly wished he had her. As he observed Krish and Meera’s life together, he unknowingly became open to the idea of bringing Krish into his bedroom, not fully understanding the gravity of his transformation. He only realized this when Meera spoke about it, and it became clear to him that he had changed - becoming like Krish. From that point forward, Desai accepted that he couldn’t provide a different future for Meera, and that’s why he surrendered. In this version, Desai cannot be defeated by anyone except himself.
However, I haven’t shared much of his internal thought process because, as I mentioned earlier, I don’t want to delve too deeply into what’s in his mind. I could have written it as words spoken by him, but Krish and Meera might not fully believe it. Similarly, readers are free to interpret it differently - they might think he’s lying and will return to claim Meera. You all have the freedom to imagine that part however you wish.
Many readers have shared their thoughts and analyses, and I must say, these discussions have helped me stay immersed in the world of Krish and Meera. It was tough to remain in their world for so long, but your insights kept me focused. I believe that's the most beautiful aspect of writing in a forum like this. There have been times when I've gone back to read earlier parts of my story on this site and wondered how I managed to write them that way. After stepping away from that world, it feels almost like a miracle to me.
I’ve seen many comments about how I leave readers eager to read the next chapter, finishing one and wanting more. I’ve read a lot of Sidney Sheldon novels, and I think they’ve helped me pick up a few tricks for keeping readers hooked. My vocabulary has also improved, thanks to the practice. I think many readers here have also benefitted from writing long analyses of this story. Being able to put your thoughts into writing is a skill, and many readers have shared analyses that are almost as long as the chapters themselves. The pleasure of reading has only increased because of those comments.
Regarding the future of my writing in this forum, I won’t be writing a part four until I change my current career. It’s tough to stay in this world for an extended period. One reader mentioned how much you have to sacrifice in your personal and social life to dedicate time here, and that’s true. But it’s not just true for me - it's true for all those who have been following this story for so long. So, when I write something next, it’s going to be more like my previous short story, "A Chapter of Nightmare" - less than ten chapters.
I had previously mentioned writing a sequel to "The Accident", and I think that will be my next project. It will be a romance.
I also plan to write a story about seducing a neighbor. However, more than the sex aspect, the focus will be on how the man seduces a tough, committed woman. I just hope people don’t get overly motivated and decide to try seducing their neighbors after reading my story! Lol.
I took a long break before sharing my thoughts here, so my apologies for the delay. But it was something I was going to do. I needed to thank you all.
Once again, my heartfelt gratitude to all the readers for encouraging me.
Keep reading. Keep posting.
Love. Krish.
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(08-03-2025, 12:52 AM)krish_999 Wrote: First of all, I would like to thank all the dear members for appreciating my story and showering it with your thoughtful comments. Now that the story has ended, everything I intended to convey through it has been shared from my end. After posting the final chapter, I can't express how relieved I feel. I am currently going through a detox and can simply sit idly, do nothing, and think of anything.
But you know, before I could enjoy my much-needed break, I came down with a fever. I was about to write this comment immediately after finishing the story, but the fever drained that energy. I’m feeling better now and finally ready to write something here.
I had previously hinted at giving an epilogue, but I don’t think it’s needed now. Essentially, the epilogue was about Krish waiting outside the operating theater while Meera was giving birth. It would have included some of Krish’s thoughts and reflections on his life after reuniting with Meera. The final moment would have been a nurse coming out of the OT to tell Krish that his wife had delivered a baby. However, I couldn't write this part because I was indecisive about the baby's gender, so I decided not to include it.
So I've decided not to write an epilogue, as I don’t think it’s necessary. The story has come to an end, and an epilogue like that wouldn't add anything new, other than providing a conclusion, which I believe has already been achieved.
Regarding the story, many readers had various doubts, but I’d like to leave it up to you. I mean, I shared Krish’s version of his life, but it could be very different from Meera’s perspective. Even Krish has to guess a lot of things, imagine, and connect the dots. It's similar to how we experience life, isn’t it? We rely on the visuals we have and the words others give us. That’s the essence of writing a story from one person’s point of view. There’s no opportunity to present Meera’s version because, as a writer, I don’t know it, and Krish doesn’t have access to it as a character. So, just like him, readers too have the right to guess and imagine the other side. As a writer, I’m happy with whatever you choose to imagine about this story.
Regarding the climax, I’d like to clarify a few things. As RCF mentioned, this exact ending was in my mind when I decided to rewrite it. I had been building towards it from chapter 41. However, I didn’t intend to turn Desai into a completely cuckold character. It just unfolded that way without him realizing it. In my imagination, Desai loved Meera and had changed into a man who secretly wished he had her. As he observed Krish and Meera’s life together, he unknowingly became open to the idea of bringing Krish into his bedroom, not fully understanding the gravity of his transformation. He only realized this when Meera spoke about it, and it became clear to him that he had changed - becoming like Krish. From that point forward, Desai accepted that he couldn’t provide a different future for Meera, and that’s why he surrendered. In this version, Desai cannot be defeated by anyone except himself.
However, I haven’t shared much of his internal thought process because, as I mentioned earlier, I don’t want to delve too deeply into what’s in his mind. I could have written it as words spoken by him, but Krish and Meera might not fully believe it. Similarly, readers are free to interpret it differently - they might think he’s lying and will return to claim Meera. You all have the freedom to imagine that part however you wish.
Many readers have shared their thoughts and analyses, and I must say, these discussions have helped me stay immersed in the world of Krish and Meera. It was tough to remain in their world for so long, but your insights kept me focused. I believe that's the most beautiful aspect of writing in a forum like this. There have been times when I've gone back to read earlier parts of my story on this site and wondered how I managed to write them that way. After stepping away from that world, it feels almost like a miracle to me.
I’ve seen many comments about how I leave readers eager to read the next chapter, finishing one and wanting more. I’ve read a lot of Sidney Sheldon novels, and I think they’ve helped me pick up a few tricks for keeping readers hooked. My vocabulary has also improved, thanks to the practice. I think many readers here have also benefitted from writing long analyses of this story. Being able to put your thoughts into writing is a skill, and many readers have shared analyses that are almost as long as the chapters themselves. The pleasure of reading has only increased because of those comments.
Regarding the future of my writing in this forum, I won’t be writing a part four until I change my current career. It’s tough to stay in this world for an extended period. One reader mentioned how much you have to sacrifice in your personal and social life to dedicate time here, and that’s true. But it’s not just true for me - it's true for all those who have been following this story for so long. So, when I write something next, it’s going to be more like my previous short story, "A Chapter of Nightmare" - less than ten chapters.
I had previously mentioned writing a sequel to "The Accident", and I think that will be my next project. It will be a romance.
I also plan to write a story about seducing a neighbor. However, more than the sex aspect, the focus will be on how the man seduces a tough, committed woman. I just hope people don’t get overly motivated and decide to try seducing their neighbors after reading my story! Lol.
I took a long break before sharing my thoughts here, so my apologies for the delay. But it was something I was going to do. I needed to thank you all.
Once again, my heartfelt gratitude to all the readers for encouraging me.
Keep reading. Keep posting.
Love. Krish.
story about seducing a neighbor. However, more than the sex aspect, the focus will be on how the man seduces a tough, committed woman. write this soon krish write this soon please
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How r you sir there is no update or any news from your side?
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thanks for everything. keep it up!
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Anybody pls make pdf of this last part
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Hello Krish sir, how r u ?
We all missing you badly! Atleast say hello from your side, When you feel free.
Its my suggestion you can continue this story more. As the Dr. Mitharai can make a emotional connection with Desai inspite of her child why not the meera re-established her relationship with Desai after given birth of her first baby.?
So I think you should continue this story in this line of script.
Its my personal opinion: in English erotic literature the readers of this literature emotional attached this story in so deep, I never experience or not observe their such emotional attachment to any other story so far.!
Because of these reasons:
1: whenever you promise with update of this story you always keep this promise with the readers you never disappoint them in this regard.
2: you never expose sex scenes in haphazard manners rather you depict these scenes in very romantic way.
3: you always create a sense of the suspense among the readers of this story from the very beginning of this story and keen alive this sense of suspense among the readers of this story at the end of this story. To far-fetched this suspense is most difficult Job which you beautifully and successfully done. So this is appreciatable work from your side.
4: another most difficult job you done from the beginning and till the end of this story, you have written this story from the one person I.e from the husband' s point of view, I never find any writer in cuckold literature maintain this side of view continually but you done this magic dexterily even your story like "no one dies as saint", the readers of this story feel very difficulties while you wrote this story bicamerially so personally I found difficulty while to focus on this story.
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(15-04-2025, 11:31 PM)nooki Wrote: Hello Krish sir, how r u ?
We all missing you badly! Atleast say hello from your side, When you feel free.
Its my suggestion you can continue this story more. As the Dr. Mitharai can make a emotional connection with Desai inspite of her child why not the meera re-established her relationship with Desai after given birth of her first baby.?
So I think you should continue this story in this line of script.
Its my personal opinion: in English erotic literature the readers of this literature emotional attached this story in so deep, I never experience or not observe their such emotional attachment to any other story so far.!
Because of these reasons:
1: whenever you promise with update of this story you always keep this promise with the readers you never disappoint them in this regard.
2: you never expose sex scenes in haphazard manners rather you depict these scenes in very romantic way.
3: you always create a sense of the suspense among the readers of this story from the very beginning of this story and keen alive this sense of suspense among the readers of this story at the end of this story. To far-fetched this suspense is most difficult Job which you beautifully and successfully done. So this is appreciatable work from your side.
4: another most difficult job you done from the beginning and till the end of this story, you have written this story from the one person I.e from the husband' s point of view, I never find any writer in cuckold literature maintain this side of view continually but you done this magic dexterily even your story like "no one dies as saint", the readers of this story feel very difficulties while you wrote this story bicamerially so personally I found difficulty while to focus on this story. Another suggestion whether you continue this story or write new or continue any other old story you can also conduct a pool in this regard so you can find out the true interest of your readers Krish sir!!!
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