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Hi RCF,
To answer the third issue first, I'm quite certain Krish fathered Meera's child. I've noted the technical points others have raised, so have attempted to convince myself that way.
Regarding the first issue, I don't see Meera as impulsive. She's had affairs before, believes Krish is fine with her continuing her relationship with Desai, and only felt stifled by the idea of being under Krish's watch in their home. That's why she sought a separate space, enjoyed her time with Desai, and then went to work. I believe she would have continued this affair, despite some lingering fear of discovery, had something not intervened to force her to face reality. I introduced Maitrei to make Meera realize she'd already lost Krish & wake up to the true nature of Desai and his own set of adventures. Only such a harsh awakening could explain her extreme reaction so soon after a pleasant encounter with Desai.
As for Desai's seemingly easy departure, I disagree. He's a highly competitive businessman who pursued Meera for two years while both Krish & Meera were hostile to him. He's significantly older than her and has limited time for romance & steamy sex before age catches up eventually. His elderly parents likely know about Meera, and he wouldn't easily accept losing her, especially after she is offered in platter & her apparent acceptance of him. He was just short of proposing and she accepting - otherwise she is all form him to lose. He'd fight back, using every tactic – persuasion, gifts, division, and even force – to win her back. He wouldn't give up so easily, especially not with the weak explanation Meera provided. That part of the story felt rushed, unconvincing & thinnest. Desai, whether villainous or reformed, deserved a more substantial conclusion.
Finally, I wanted to provide closure for Nidhi and confirm she's moved on from Desai. The imagined meeting between Meera and Nidhi served this purpose. Both gained valuable information and clarity about their future actions, effectively solidifying their respective paths forward.
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(18-02-2025, 08:22 PM)bineeshm Wrote: Hi RCF,
To answer the third issue first, I'm quite certain Krish fathered Meera's child. I've noted the technical points others have raised, so have attempted to convince myself that way.
For me, its not even a point for discussion as author decided to use it to end the story so we need to accept it that the phase brings clarity to the parents and restraint them from ever looking back into fantasies ever.
Regarding the first issue, I don't see Meera as impulsive. She's had affairs before, believes Krish is fine with her continuing her relationship with Desai, and only felt stifled by the idea of being under Krish's watch in their home. That's why she sought a separate space, enjoyed her time with Desai, and then went to work. I believe she would have continued this affair, despite some lingering fear of discovery, had something not intervened to force her to face reality. I introduced Maitrei to make Meera realize she'd already lost Krish & wake up to the true nature of Desai and his own set of adventures. Only such a harsh awakening could explain her extreme reaction so soon after a pleasant encounter with Desai.
She wouldn't have continued the affair, Based on the events and the dialogues, we got..we see two possibilities:
One where Meera might have met Maithrei as per your theory and understood the true nature of Desai and decided to end it with Desai and seek forgiveness from Krish and try to control her life. Her meeting with Maithrei seems more logical to you otherwise she would continue her affair as per your understanding. I get it, as it seems like such a change seems superficial to you unless some one changes her course.
Other alternative for me, She for the first time in her life, planned and cheated Krish. She did it because last time when she went to Desai's room, when she came back she saw Krish jerked himself twice and she understood that as long as she meets with Desai and Krish has knowledge about it, either he will imagine them or bug them to satisfy himself, that's the impression she got, so for her sanity and for Krish's sake she took the step to sleep with Desai secretly. yet after doing it, and in her mind with out Krish knowing it, she still felt hurt, she felt she did wrong with Krish. On one end she knew Desai wanted to meet again and she wants it too and other end she knew Krish also might enjoy it if she pulls him into this again..but she loathes herself for keep giving into Desai especially hiding it from Krish and meeting some one for first time. Self realization is much better option for me than some one coaxing her into seeing Desai's true nature. Even if we say Maithrei showed her Desai's true nature, it doesn't align with her body language in last chapter as some one who knew Desai's true face. She is sweet to him, infact for first time she was trying to understand Desai's love. She was moved when Desai suggested to meet his parents before bamboo resort as it means he is making it official than just a resort visit. All this shows us that there is no true face that she learned from Maithrei, she in fact realized her mistake after Alpine heights and hence suggested planning for Kid with Krish. But when Krish pushed her away for a solid month and ended their marriage, she went ahead to see his option for her life esp because it would mean Krish will find a new life with out her and away from his fantasies. We saw how that turned out to be...I would have still preferred she chose Krish over perfect Desai.
I get it for your sanity if you want to take first option...I am not here to change it, I am only here to give my reasoning behind not taking that one. we both might be wrong and author might have best option lol
As for Desai's seemingly easy departure, I disagree. He's a highly competitive businessman who pursued Meera for two years while both Krish & Meera were hostile to him. He's significantly older than her and has limited time for romance & steamy sex before age catches up eventually. His elderly parents likely know about Meera, and he wouldn't easily accept losing her, especially after she is offered in platter & her apparent acceptance of him. He was just short of proposing and she accepting - otherwise she is all form him to lose. He'd fight back, using every tactic – persuasion, gifts, division, and even force – to win her back. He wouldn't give up so easily, especially not with the weak explanation Meera provided. That part of the story felt rushed, unconvincing & thinnest. Desai, whether villainous or reformed, deserved a more substantial conclusion.
Yes, I can agree on this one. Desai is not easy to convince but it was too easy at the end. For me truly Desai's reactions are irrelevant. I wanted last chapter to explain Meera better but it didn't happen.
Finally, I wanted to provide closure for Nidhi and confirm she's moved on from Desai. The imagined meeting between Meera and Nidhi served this purpose. Both gained valuable information and clarity about their future actions, effectively solidifying their respective paths forward.
Anything that provides you with clarity..got it. Hope you found it.
~RCF
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I am waiting 8 months for last 2 update part 3
Mera born to baby
Is boy ya girl
This is real stories my life
Mene start se hi krish ko bahot message kiye the stories continue karne ke liye
Wor krish ne stories complete ki
Lakin last me 2 update fast de diye
Meraac or desai to khumbe jane wale the
Ase krish ne socha bhi tha lakin is topic ko kat diya
Stories end is good
Lakin or 3 update ho jaye agar write karte to
. waiting to part 4
1 years later
Nahi to me agge ki stories write karunga
Last update
Lakin 1 years ke baddddd
Stories
And writer is last sentence
Ki hamari kahani kabhi ruk nahi sakti bass pagesss change hote rahenge
Enjoy life?Long struggle in life with success your foot
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1_When will the epilogue of this story be expected?
Or
2_Next part of this story will be started??
What are the bros expected??
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(20-02-2025, 10:56 PM)నూకి Wrote: 1_ఈ కథ యొక్క ముగింపు ఎప్పుడు ఊహించబడుతుంది?
లేదా
2_ఈ కథ యొక్క తదుపరి భాగం ఎప్పుడు ప్రారంభమవుతుంది??
ఏ సోదరులు ఆశించబడతారు??
Till this minut writer krish has not indicated that there will be an epilogue or next part, Nobody knows until writer clarifies, let us see when krish willbe responding for the discussion happened
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(21-02-2025, 09:20 AM)Paty@123 Wrote: Till this minut writer krish has not indicated that there will be an epilogue or next part, Nobody knows until writer clarifies, let us see when krish willbe responding for the discussion happened
Bro you are absolutely right, the reason to write my previous message is that we are all waiting any response from the writer. If he is feel free now then we are all bros waiting a positive response from him soon.
That will precisely decided the fate of this story.
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(21-02-2025, 06:49 PM)nooki Wrote: Bro you are absolutely right, the reason to write my previous message is that we are all waiting any response from the writer. If he is feel free now then we are all bros waiting a positive response from him soon.
That will precisely decided the fate of this story.
Krish is taking the much needed rest and a phase of detachment to the story. Once story completes it will still linger in your thoughts and our comments are also not helpful. We keep analyzing it to the world's end so it would be best to not come to the site and I think that's exactly he is doing it right now.
Once he is emotionally detached with this story, He will visit again and probably update if he is planning to give epilogue or not.
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The show is over, theater is closed, what you guys are doing here. came to spoil the story?
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Maybe Krish didn't interested part four.
If he start part four.
After meera delivery her baby twins.
She's become chubby white milf and more beautiful.
Then Desai is over Piyush or other persons coming story going to Super.
But over is over
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This thread is inactive as expected. Still I visit hoping to see an update from Krish_999 saying whether there will be an Epilogue or what went in Meera's head, tie all the loose ends ...
Bineesh!
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At last among my extreme busyness, I had be able to read the concluding part of this story. I reached that conclusion the end is perfect and there is no other perfect conclusion b possible for this story. So there is no need to question or any query regarding the end of this story.
However more queries if readers be have will be clear by the writer in the epilogue part of this story.
Once again I appreciate and thanks to the writer to create such story and also reached its end as well.
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First of all, I would like to thank all the dear members for appreciating my story and showering it with your thoughtful comments. Now that the story has ended, everything I intended to convey through it has been shared from my end. After posting the final chapter, I can't express how relieved I feel. I am currently going through a detox and can simply sit idly, do nothing, and think of anything.
But you know, before I could enjoy my much-needed break, I came down with a fever. I was about to write this comment immediately after finishing the story, but the fever drained that energy. I’m feeling better now and finally ready to write something here.
I had previously hinted at giving an epilogue, but I don’t think it’s needed now. Essentially, the epilogue was about Krish waiting outside the operating theater while Meera was giving birth. It would have included some of Krish’s thoughts and reflections on his life after reuniting with Meera. The final moment would have been a nurse coming out of the OT to tell Krish that his wife had delivered a baby. However, I couldn't write this part because I was indecisive about the baby's gender, so I decided not to include it.
So I've decided not to write an epilogue, as I don’t think it’s necessary. The story has come to an end, and an epilogue like that wouldn't add anything new, other than providing a conclusion, which I believe has already been achieved.
Regarding the story, many readers had various doubts, but I’d like to leave it up to you. I mean, I shared Krish’s version of his life, but it could be very different from Meera’s perspective. Even Krish has to guess a lot of things, imagine, and connect the dots. It's similar to how we experience life, isn’t it? We rely on the visuals we have and the words others give us. That’s the essence of writing a story from one person’s point of view. There’s no opportunity to present Meera’s version because, as a writer, I don’t know it, and Krish doesn’t have access to it as a character. So, just like him, readers too have the right to guess and imagine the other side. As a writer, I’m happy with whatever you choose to imagine about this story.
Regarding the climax, I’d like to clarify a few things. As RCF mentioned, this exact ending was in my mind when I decided to rewrite it. I had been building towards it from chapter 41. However, I didn’t intend to turn Desai into a completely cuckold character. It just unfolded that way without him realizing it. In my imagination, Desai loved Meera and had changed into a man who secretly wished he had her. As he observed Krish and Meera’s life together, he unknowingly became open to the idea of bringing Krish into his bedroom, not fully understanding the gravity of his transformation. He only realized this when Meera spoke about it, and it became clear to him that he had changed - becoming like Krish. From that point forward, Desai accepted that he couldn’t provide a different future for Meera, and that’s why he surrendered. In this version, Desai cannot be defeated by anyone except himself.
However, I haven’t shared much of his internal thought process because, as I mentioned earlier, I don’t want to delve too deeply into what’s in his mind. I could have written it as words spoken by him, but Krish and Meera might not fully believe it. Similarly, readers are free to interpret it differently - they might think he’s lying and will return to claim Meera. You all have the freedom to imagine that part however you wish.
Many readers have shared their thoughts and analyses, and I must say, these discussions have helped me stay immersed in the world of Krish and Meera. It was tough to remain in their world for so long, but your insights kept me focused. I believe that's the most beautiful aspect of writing in a forum like this. There have been times when I've gone back to read earlier parts of my story on this site and wondered how I managed to write them that way. After stepping away from that world, it feels almost like a miracle to me.
I’ve seen many comments about how I leave readers eager to read the next chapter, finishing one and wanting more. I’ve read a lot of Sidney Sheldon novels, and I think they’ve helped me pick up a few tricks for keeping readers hooked. My vocabulary has also improved, thanks to the practice. I think many readers here have also benefitted from writing long analyses of this story. Being able to put your thoughts into writing is a skill, and many readers have shared analyses that are almost as long as the chapters themselves. The pleasure of reading has only increased because of those comments.
Regarding the future of my writing in this forum, I won’t be writing a part four until I change my current career. It’s tough to stay in this world for an extended period. One reader mentioned how much you have to sacrifice in your personal and social life to dedicate time here, and that’s true. But it’s not just true for me - it's true for all those who have been following this story for so long. So, when I write something next, it’s going to be more like my previous short story, "A Chapter of Nightmare" - less than ten chapters.
I had previously mentioned writing a sequel to "The Accident", and I think that will be my next project. It will be a romance.
I also plan to write a story about seducing a neighbor. However, more than the sex aspect, the focus will be on how the man seduces a tough, committed woman. I just hope people don’t get overly motivated and decide to try seducing their neighbors after reading my story! Lol.
I took a long break before sharing my thoughts here, so my apologies for the delay. But it was something I was going to do. I needed to thank you all.
Once again, my heartfelt gratitude to all the readers for encouraging me.
Keep reading. Keep posting.
Love. Krish.
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We look to your next story. Start soon
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(08-03-2025, 12:52 AM)krish_999 Wrote: Keep reading. Keep posting.
Love. Krish. Dear Krish,
Thanks very much for the post and clarifying on some assumptions we had.
Hope you have recovered well and doing better. Agree, writing is a commitment and if it gets traction with readers, it could be stressful too.
I believe the story of Krish and Meera is over here and lets not disturb them further. Looking forward for your next story.
Regards
Bineesh!
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08-03-2025, 11:43 PM
(08-03-2025, 12:52 AM)krish_999 Wrote: First of all, I would like to thank all the dear members for appreciating my story and showering it with your thoughtful comments. Now that the story has ended, everything I intended to convey through it has been shared from my end. After posting the final chapter, I can't express how relieved I feel. I am currently going through a detox and can simply sit idly, do nothing, and think of anything.
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Once again, my heartfelt gratitude to all the readers for encouraging me.
Keep reading. Keep posting.
Love. Krish.
krish_999 thank you so much for the love shared through your writing. You are one of the most awesome personality ever. Get well soon, it's fever season for everyone for some reason.
Your new story concept is very intriguing and in line with the type of stories, I spend most of my nights searching in this forum! trying to get that one good story... Can't wait to read it!
Stay blessed Maestro!
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Thanks sir, after all, we hearing something from your side. God will keep you in good health and be happy in your life.
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09-03-2025, 02:52 AM
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(08-03-2025, 12:52 AM)krish_999 Wrote: First of all, I would like to thank all the dear members for appreciating my story and showering it with your thoughtful comments. Now that the story has ended, everything I intended to convey through it has been
Regarding the story, many readers had various doubts, but I’d like to leave it up to you. I mean, I shared Krish’s version of his life, but it could be very different from Meera’s perspective. Even Krish has to guess a lot of things, imagine, and connect the dots. It's similar to how we experience life, isn’t it? We rely on the visuals we have and the words others give us. That’s the essence of writing a story from one person’s point of view. There’s no opportunity to present Meera’s version because, as a writer, I don’t know it, and Krish doesn’t have access to it as a character. So, just like him, readers too have the right to guess and imagine the other side. As a writer, I’m happy with whatever you choose to imagine about this story.
I had previously mentioned writing a sequel to "The Accident", and I think that will be my next project. It will be a romance.
I also plan to write a story about seducing a neighbor. However, more than the sex aspect, the focus will be on how the man seduces a tough, committed woman. I just hope people don’t get overly motivated and decide to try seducing their neighbors after reading my story! Lol.
Keep reading. Keep posting.
Love. Krish.
Thanks for replying back to us and hope you recovered well enough now.
Also I would like to thank you for all your efforts for giving us this masterpiece. There is no story in this forum that comes close to your writing level and is perfect recipe for emotions, sex and betrayals with many twists and turns strategically weaved around the story to give the high needed to keep the readers glued to the plot.
Everything that was written despite some expectations from us still reached insane levels of epic storytelling. Give a thought as I mentioned earlier to open an account and start publishing these to Amazon readers. Over time you will find set of readers looking for your books there...giving you nice part time fun.
A perfect story as you have chosen would be to seduce a neighbor and it would be a masterpiece if its a long saga like this one. I am sure you will take it to insane levels. Your No Saint..is also one such story but the antagonist who tries to seduce his neighbor friend's wife Anvitha is not a good guy and I am thinking in your new story the guy is not that bad and he will surely succeed unlike Rajat. Can't wait for it to be started soon.
As for the comments from you on the story, very clever Krish ...really very clever like your story writing. It was a nice ploy to throw the perspectives on to us and asking us to imagine our own versions of what would it be and why would it be...The part I highlighted above is where I do not agree with you lol...I cannot believe for a min that you have no clue on what Meera thinks and how she thinks in every situation, with out that you could not have been able to write her hints, statements and placing them at right times well. You know her in and out my friend and you just let us be the deciders to understand her well, as I am guessing, You giving an explanation to her perspective will soon spin a wheel with chain of comments either agreeing or disagreeing and I understand that you do not want to delve into it at this point.
As for me I truly found peace with the character after reading the second part last few chapters again..few of them below gave me the much needed answers I was seeking at the end of this story.
“When I came to know Meera was your wife, I was like... it was shocking to me. And even more shocking was Meera’s behavior. The moment she knew you were with someone else, she went mad. I saw how much she was possessive of you. It was incomprehensible to me because she was already having sex with me and still, she couldn’t digest what you were doing. When I tried to reason my views on this, she screamed at me that if she has ever slept with me, that’s because her husband liked it.”
“And... that day I made a huge mistake. I couldn’t stop Sunny when he...when he took me to our bedroom. And I enjoyed it. I couldn’t stop him. I didn't have sex with him, but I would have. I had got myself prepared for it.”
“When you were making love to me, I often used to imagine it was him, Sunny, that I was having sex with. I didn't love him, not even for a moment, but thinking about having sex with him excited me. My stupid mind was filled with fantasies.”
“We shared, encouraged, and nurtured our fantasies, With Shekar I enjoyed sex with him. Though we both tried to behave and make believe it was just another accident, I secretly cherished the experience of lying under someone other than you. I knew it was foolish as well as dangerous and I tried my best to resist it.
Every time I made love to you since then, I fantasized and tried to imagine them - Sunny, Shekhar or Armaan - in you. I loved you always; I never stopped loving you. But my fantasies, they were like drugs to me. I couldn’t stop them. When I came to know you too had fantasies, I should have stopped you. But I didn't.
There stood my wife Meera. She was not perfect. She could make mistakes. She could have made the wrong choices. One of them was me. If she had married a normal man, she wouldn't have been encouraged to date another man. She wouldn't have been made to accidentally sleep with other men. She wouldn't have been made to question her own integrity.
I was the partner in anything and everything she found herself guilty of. I was the biggest choice she ever made. And I was destined to love not only her perfections but also her imperfections.
In short summary, both Krish and Meera are two sides of a same coin, she has her own fantasies and Krish has his cuckold fantasies, and they were perfectly made for each other with their fantasies, one of such fantasy triggered their life events which was started by Meera when she was with Sunny. Everything that happened after that, including Desai, is still part of those fantasies. The more I read previous part, the more I felt it applies here for part 3 as well…All the situations where Meera slept with others are her fantasies driven by the fantasies Krish harbored of her sleeping around. A firm “No” would have stopped this forever, but it never came because they both are alike.
Krish needs Meera for himself even though she sleeps around and that knowledge of her experience drives his desires for her and yes, he is a faulty piece and on other side Meera is also a faulty piece too, Meera wants Krish to say no for his and her fantasies and be possessive and she never got that so she felt the freedom to pursue her fantasies, Desai is one of those fantasy and a hard one which she couldn’t resist, If Krish can let go of his fantasies, Meera would have the strength to let go of her fantasies.
The couple are made for each other, Meera does not want to live in her fantasies, regrets it later and Krish does not want to put his love at risk, yet they are humans who give into their fantasies from time to time and they crawl back to each other at the end.
One has no strength to say no to his fantasies and Other has no purpose to not live her fantasies.
This is their fate, and they cannot escape it. A baby is merely a step and a significant one in their life ladder, but fantasies are just buried for the time being but not dead.
I hope you do not mess with this story ever again with another part!
~RCF
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I hope in far future Writer Krish bro will write part 4 with young characters. Bro RCF would not like it as he is the most respectful reader to Bro Krish. I also hope bro RCF kind enough to peruse Bro Krish to write part 4 in distant future. It is not offensive to hope the impossible to be seen to happen possible.
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