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Story ko apne hisab se chalne do chahe update 2 din baad ya 3 din baad bas story ke erotic scene aise hi aane do........
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(18-01-2025, 12:01 AM)Omprakash meena Wrote: Hero ki jarurat nahi yaha es story me to sabhi lover lag rahe hai mujhe
(18-01-2025, 12:02 AM)Omprakash meena Wrote: Story me sabhi character ache hai
Explain krain please ky aap ķi is baat ka kya matlab hai¿???
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(18-01-2025, 07:16 AM)pinkbaby Wrote: Explain krain please ky aap ķi is baat ka kya matlab hai¿???
I means adam nick and vinod character sabhi ache hai story ko romantic banaya sabhi character ne jo shayad kahi na kahi hamari story ki lead heroine ke heart ko alag hi feeling de rahe hai......
Aise kuch moments aaye aapke update me jo shayad Maheen ki life ko romantic or erotic bana rahe hai....
Is story me padhne per aisa laga jaise vinod adam or nick apna alag hi level banane ja rahe hai Maheen ki life me.....in character ke aane se Maheen me kafi change aaya hai
Apni maryada me rahni wali Maheen ki life erotic ban chuki hai aisa lagta hai kab kya ho jaye us ki life me
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Stunning and thrilling update! Awesome and amazing writings
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Very nice update
But me kuch kehna chahti hun
Story start Maheen or vindoo se shuru hui h to iska mtlb hero heroine ka pta chalta h yahin se
Baki 2 character hai wo side roll h but smjh ye nhi aara h mujhe shuru k update m story m apne dikhaya k Vinod & dad kafi '. h or maheen & dad mazhabi but abhi tak kuch aesa nazar nahi aaya m soch rhi thi ye story apki pehle story jo thi ajib sii pyaas uss typ hogi bhut yahn to alag h aap ek acche writer ho janti hu me but yhn adam or nick ka roll kuch jldi aagya jiski wajha se i hope sb confuses honge kyu ki first focuse Maheen and Vinod p hona chahiye tha
Todha isme interfaith ache se add hona chahiye kuch mazhabi seen kyu ki aab iss forum pe aesi story bhut log likh chuke h last baat
Apki story h jaisa sahi lage apko likho
Baki apki
Marziii h
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(18-01-2025, 04:12 PM)Samreen khan Wrote: Very nice update
But me kuch kehna chahti hun
Story start Maheen or vindoo se shuru hui h to iska mtlb hero heroine ka pta chalta h yahin se
Baki 2 character hai wo side roll h but smjh ye nhi aara h mujhe shuru k update m story m apne dikhaya k Vinod & dad kafi '. h or maheen & dad mazhabi but abhi tak kuch aesa nazar nahi aaya m soch rhi thi ye story apki pehle story jo thi ajib sii pyaas uss typ hogi bhut yahn to alag h aap ek acche writer ho janti hu me but yhn adam or nick ka roll kuch jldi aagya jiski wajha se i hope sb confuses honge kyu ki first focuse Maheen and Vinod p hona chahiye tha
Todha isme interfaith ache se add hona chahiye kuch mazhabi seen kyu ki aab iss forum pe aesi story bhut log likh chuke h last baat
Apki story h jaisa sahi lage apko likho
Baki apki
Marziii h
Pinkbaby py yaqeen rakhain
Story parhty rahain
Aor dekhty jaain ky aagy aagy kya hota hai.
Don't get panic or judge the story with any single episode or any character.
Waisy konsa interfaith touch chahti hain aap???
Jo is main aagy aaraha hai waisy touch aapny kabhi pahly nahi parha ho ga. I ensure you dear
Thanks
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(18-01-2025, 04:51 PM)pinkbaby Wrote: Pinkbaby py yaqeen rakhain
Story parhty rahain
Aor dekhty jaain ky aagy aagy kya hota hai.
Don't get panic or judge the story with any single episode or any character.
Waisy konsa interfaith touch chahti hain aap???
Jo is main aagy aaraha hai waisy touch aapny kabhi pahly nahi parha ho ga. I ensure you dear
Thanks
Pinkbaby
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Always great writing performance. Hats off
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(18-01-2025, 04:51 PM)pinkbaby Wrote: Pinkbaby py yaqeen rakhain
Story parhty rahain
Aor dekhty jaain ky aagy aagy kya hota hai.
Don't get panic or judge the story with any single episode or any character.
Waisy konsa interfaith touch chahti hain aap???
Jo is main aagy aaraha hai waisy touch aapny kabhi pahly nahi parha ho ga. I ensure you dear
Thanks
Pinkbaby
AAP bhut smjhadar writer ho khud socho interfaith konsa thik rehta hai mazhabi touch konsa hota h
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18-01-2025, 06:42 PM
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(18-01-2025, 06:37 PM)Samreen khan Wrote: AAP bhut smjhadar writer ho khud socho interfaith konsa thik rehta hai mazhabi touch konsa hota h
Har story ka majahab se jodna thik nahi hai jaise story chal rahi hai thik chal rahi
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(18-01-2025, 06:42 PM)Omprakash meena Wrote: Har story ka majahab se jodna thik nahi hai jaise story chal rahi hai thik chal rahi
Naam Maheen rkhte hee mazhab se jodh gai story and Vinod konse religion ka naam hota hai bta skte ho aap mujhe kya
Or vese bhi mene apna suggestion diya h har kisi ko apna view dene ka haq nota MR
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18-01-2025, 07:17 PM
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(18-01-2025, 06:51 PM)Samreen khan Wrote: Naam Maheen rkhte hee mazhab se jodh gai story and Vinod konse religion ka naam hota hai bta skte ho aap mujhe kya
Or vese bhi mene apna suggestion diya h har kisi ko apna view dene ka haq nota MR
Mere ko nahi lagta es story me koi majhab target hai Adam konse religion ka hai ye bhi bata do ......baki aapko suggestions dene ka haq hai......aap kis najriye se story enjoy kar sakte hai vaise karo...mai bhi writer hu maine meri story me kisi ek dharm ko target nahi kiya lekin mai mere se behtar es story ke writer ko samjhta hu jisne apne shabdo me romence ko ukera hai
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Mera sabhi readers se nivedan hai ki abhi to story shura hi ho rahi hai… pinkbaby ko freely story ko develop karne ka mauka dein please… unhe aur unke plot ko bhatkaayein nahin.
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(18-01-2025, 07:57 PM)rohitkapoor Wrote: Mera sabhi readers se nivedan hai ki abhi to story shura hi ho rahi hai… pinkbaby ko freely story ko develop karne ka mauka dein please… unhe aur unke plot ko bhatkaayein nahin.
Bilkul story achi chal rahi hai
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(18-01-2025, 05:24 PM)Omprakash meena Wrote: Waiting
(18-01-2025, 06:12 PM)PakeezaAmmi Wrote: Always great writing performance. Hats off
(18-01-2025, 06:42 PM)Omprakash meena Wrote: Har story ka majahab se jodna thik nahi hai jaise story chal rahi hai thik chal rahi
thanks dear .................
(18-01-2025, 07:17 PM)Omprakash meena Wrote: Mere ko nahi lagta es story me koi majhab target hai Adam konse religion ka hai ye bhi bata do ......baki aapko suggestions dene ka haq hai......aap kis najriye se story enjoy kar sakte hai vaise karo...mai bhi writer hu maine meri story me kisi ek dharm ko target nahi kiya lekin mai mere se behtar es story ke writer ko samjhta hu jisne apne shabdo me romence ko ukera hai
koi bhi dharam target nahi hai .............. naa hi aisa koi iraada hai ....... balky aik doosry ky ly pyaar aor mohabbat ka hi jazba ho ga ............
(18-01-2025, 07:57 PM)rohitkapoor Wrote: Mera sabhi readers se nivedan hai ki abhi to story shura hi ho rahi hai… pinkbaby ko freely story ko develop karne ka mauka dein please… unhe aur unke plot ko bhatkaayein nahin.
thanks dear ...........
(18-01-2025, 08:08 PM)Omprakash meena Wrote: Bilkul story achi chal rahi hai
thanks dear
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Office main pohnch kr Maheen aor Vinod apny kaam main busy ho gy ........... aor us baat ko bhool gye ............. Tea break main Maheen, Neetu, Gina, Vinod, Karan aor Dane ikhaty thy ........ aik saath chaay pee rahy thy .......... usi doraan hi Nick bhi wahin aagya coffee ky ly ...........
jaisy hi Maheen ki nazar Nick py pari to usky dil ki dharkan taiz ho gye .............. kyon ky Nick ko dekhty hi Maheen ko Rock ki yaad aagye ............ jiska chudai ka scene Maheen ny raat hi dekha tha ...........
Nick coffee ki machine ky pass khara apni chaay coffee ly raha tha ........ to Maheen ki nazar khud sy hi Nick ki pant ki zip py chali gye ...........
Kya Nick ka lund bhi Rock ki tarah hi lamba aor mota ho ga ........... Maheen ky dimagh main aik lamhay ky ly yeh khayal aaya ............ aor Maheen ky poory jisam main jaisy sansanhat si phail gye ............. aor usny apni nazrain jhukaa lin .............. Maheen ny khud sy hi sharmindah hoty hoy apny is khayal ko jhatka ........ aor apni nazron ko Nick ki pant ki lund wali jaga sy hataya ............ aor apni coffee ky sip lainy lagi .......... Nick ny apna coffee ka cup lya ........ aor sub ko muskraa ky dekhta hoa apny office main wapis chaa gya ................ usky jaany ky baad Maheen ny sukh ka saans lya ............. Maheen ny Jenny ki taraf dekha to woh muskraa ky usi ki taraf dekh rahi thi .............. Maheen sy uski nazar mili to usny Maheen ko aankh maar di muskraaty hoy ........... Maheen ko aisy laga jaisy uski chori pakri gye ho .......... Maheen ny apni nazrain apny cup py jama din .............
Coffee py hi Neetu ny Maheen aor Vinod ko raat ka khana apny ghar khaany ky ly invite kya ........... Maheen ny Vinod ki taraf dekha ....... Vinod ny muskra kr okay kr dya ...... to Maheen bhi muskraa di ....... pta nahi kyon usy theek lag raha tha Vinod ko hi decision lainy ko kahna aor khud uska decision follow krna ....... aor raat ka dinner Neetu ky apartment main final ho gya ........... Neetu ny doosron ko bhi dinner ky ly invite kr dya ....... tea break ky baad sab log phir sy apny kaam main lag gy ..............
Office time ky baad aik baar phir Maheen aor Vinod apartment ki search ky ly niklay ............ ab unky pass siraf 2 din ka stay baqi tha us hotel main ............. woh buhat hi pareshaan ho rahy thy ...... mgar koi bhi hal nazar nahi aa raha tha ................ aakhir thak haar ky wapis apny hotel aagy ........... thora buhat khana khaya aor phir apny apny room main rest krny ky ly chaly gy .............. Vinod ny usy sham ko 8 pm tak ready rahny ko bola ................ Maheen ny okay kr dya ............. aor room main aagye ............
Maheen ka room usi trah sy saaf suthra aor well arranged tha ........ usky ly night dress or toileteries bhi replace kr di gye hoi thin ........ Maheen ny night dress ka packet khola ........ us main pahli night wala hi night suit tha ........ Maheen ny apni shirt aor trouser utara ....... aor woh night suit pehn lya ............ Maheen ky gory mulayam bazu us main nangy ho rahy thy .......... mgar pajama lamba hi tha .......... knees sy neechy tak uski half tangon ko dhaanmp raha tha .........
Maheen unhny pehan kr aram krny ky ly late gye ........ bed py laity hoy hi Maheen ny Asif ko call milaai ........ aor usy saari soorat e haal ka btaya ........ phir usy aaj raat ky dinner invitation ky baary main bhi btaya ........... Asif ko bhi acha laga ky Maheen ky colleagues uski care kr rahy hain .......... thori der baat krny ky baad Maheen ny call end ki aor sony ky ly late gye ......
7 pm py Maheen ki neend mobile ki ring sy khuli ........ Maheen ny dekha to Vinod ki call thi ........... Maheen ny call attend ki
Maheen ........ mmmmmmmm ...... hello ......
Vinod .... Maheen jee uth jaain ....... aor ready ho jain 8 bjy tak nikalain gy hum log ............
Maheen ........ okay theek hai ........ lakin pahly to main chaay peeon gi ...... phir kuch aor kaam kr sakon gi ........ aap ny chaay peeni hai to ajaain ........
Vinod bhi is offer py khush hoa ...... ary naiki aor pooch pooch ........
Maheen ......... okay aap 10 minute tak ajaain ........ main fresh ho jaati hon .........
Call band hony ky baad Maheen uthi aor washroom sy farigh ho kr bahar aai ....... aor khud py aainy main aik nazar daali .......... chehry py halka sa puff kya ........ aor lipstick honton py lgaa li ............. Maheen ny dress change krny ka socha lakin tabhi door knock hoa ........ Maheen ny apny drss py nazar daali ...... ab usko yeh koi khass exposing nahi lag raha tha .............. aor phir usy is dress main Vinod pahly bhi to dekh chuka tha ............. Maheen ny aagy barh ky door khol dya ........ saamny Vinod t shirt aor jeans main khara tha ........... Maheen ny muskraa ky usy andar aany ka rasta dya ............ Maheen ny dekha ky tight t shirt main Vinod ki body buhat hot lag rahi thi ........... mazboot aor tight jisam .......
Vinod ........ good evening ........... bola ....... aor Maheen pr ooper sy neechy tak aik nazar daalty hoy andar aagya ........... aaj usy saaf dikh raha tha ky Maheen ny apni night suit ki shirt ky neechy bra pehni hoi hai .......... Vinod jaa ky sofay py beth gya .......... aor Maheen ny kettle main paani daal ky garam hony ky ly rakh dya ............. aor khud apny ly dress select krny lagi ......... pta nahi kyon mgar usny do hang kye hoy dress Vinod ki tarf kye aor boli ......... konsa theek rahy ga ....... usy khud bhi yeh poochny py hairani hoi ......... mgar ab woh bol chuki thi ...... Vinod ko bhi Maheen ki is baat py hairat hoi mgar phir bhi ............ Vinod ny aik light pink color ki shirt aor black trouser wali dress ki taraf ishara kya ......... aor Maheen ny blush krty hoy okay bol dya ............. itny main paani garam ho gya to Maheen ny chaay bnaai ......... aor cups laa kr table py rakhy ...... aor khud bhi apna hair brush ly kar doosry sofay pr Vinod ky saamny hi beth gye ........... usky baal khuly hoy thy .......... woh wahin Vinod ky saamny hi apny baloon ko brush krny lagi ............ Vinod chaay pee raha tha .............
Maheen ky dil main khayal aaya .......... kitna casual sa lag raha hai na ........ jaisy Vinod koi ghair aadmi naa ho ....... balky Vinod nahi Asif ho ........... mery saath room main ........ jisky saamny main bina jhijhak ky bethi hoi apny baal bnaa rahi hon ............ Maheen dheery sy muskraai ....... aor phir cup uthaa ky aik sip lya .......... phir woh boli .....
Maheen .......... Vinod jee ..... yeh apartments ka to masla hi ban gya hai ........ koi mil hi nahi rahay humain ....... ab kya ho ga ........
Vinod ........ hmmm ..... sahi kah rahi hain aap ........ aor kal ka din last hai hamary pass ........... isky baad hamain yeh hotel bhi chorna ho ga .......... aor nahi chorty to khud baqi din ka pay krna ho ga .............
Maheen ....... phir ab kya krain .........
Vinod ....... mery zehan main aik idea aaya hai ....... abhi hum ny dinner py jana hai to main soch raha hon ky main Karan sy baat kron ky woh mujhy apna apartment share krwa dy kuch din ky ly ............ aor aap Neetu sy baat kr lo .......... kuch din accomodate krny ky ly .......... ya phir ho sakta hai ky hamain un ky saath permanant bhi sharing mil jaay ............
Maheen chaay ka sip laiti hoi kuch soch ky boli .......... hmmmm ........ yeh to sahi baat hai .......... lakin uski apni family hai uska husband ...... to mujhy nahi lagta ky yeh idea kaam kry ga ...........
Vinod ........... hmmm theek kah rahi ho aap ........ ........... Chaay ky baad Vinod apny room main chala gya aor Maheen bhi ready hony lagi ............
Kuch der baad Vinod ny aaky knock kya to Maheen ny darwaza khol dya ........ woh dress change kr chuki hoi thi ........ Vinod ny dekha ky Maheen ny usi ka select kya hoa dress hi pehna tha ........ yeh dekh ky Vinod ko khushi hoi ......... phir Maheen ny Vinod ky saamny hi final touches dye make up ko aor Neetu ky apartment ki taraf nikal pary .............
9 bajy Maheen aor Vinod Neetu ky btaay hoy address py pohncy ........ Neetu ny hi door khola aor unko welcome kya ........... Neetu ko dekh kr Maheen hairan rah gye ....... usny bohat hi bold dressing ki thoi thi ......... short skirt aor tight t shirt ........... skirt tight aor uski half thighs tak thi ....... mulayam ..... gori tangain aor thighs nangi ho rahi thin ......... aor uski t shirt bhi usky jisam ky saath chipki hoi thi ........ aor usky boobs us t shirt main bohat hi prominant ho ky dikh rahy thy ............ buhat hi sexy look dy rahi thi Neetu .......... woh mudi to uski shirt ky neechy uski bra ky straps aor hooks saaf dikh rahy thy ...........
Andar gy to aik 33 years ka Indian mard sofay pr betha hoa tha jo unko dekh kr khara ho gya ........ Neetu ny uska introduction krwaya ........
Neetu ....... yeh Rajiv hai mery husband ...... aor Rajiv yeh Maheen aor Vinod hain .......
Rajiv ny Vinod sy haath milaya ........... Good evening .....
Phir Rajiv ny apna haath Maheen ki taraf barhaa dya ........ pahly to Maheen thora jhijhki ...... aor phir ahista sy apna haath Rajiv ky haath main dy dya aor usky sath hand shake kya ........ Maheen ny note kya ky Rajiv aik lamby qad ka mard hai ...... usky haathon ki sakhti sy usky jisam ki mazbooti ka andaza ho raha tha .......... body uski buhat zyada muscular nahi lag rahi thi ...... mgar buhat mota ya bhaddy jisam ka bhi nahi tha ....... rang uska thora dark tha ....... Vinod ky muqably main ........ chehry pr choti choti daadhi thi ....... jo usky chehry ko aor bhi attractive bnaa rahi thi .......... matlab ky Rajiv acha smart aor good looking mard tha ........ Maheen uski personality sy kaafi impress hoi thi ........................
Maheen ko hairaani hoi ky Neetu kaisy is trah ky kapray pehan sakti hai woh bhi kisi aor ghair mard ki moujoodgi main ........... jabky usy pata tha ky Vinod usky ghar aany wala hai ..........
Maheen ny apatment ko dekha ........ aik chota sa hi apartment tha ....... single room nazar aa raha tha ........ aik kitchen ..... sitting area tha ........ single person ky ly perfact tha yeh ........ almost aisy hi apartments dekhy thy Maheen aor Vinod ny bhi lakin woh bhi kaafi costly thy .............. Neetu kitchen main busy thi .......... aor Vinod Karan ky sath gup shup krny laga ........
Vinod Rajiv ky saath lounge main beth kr batain krny laga aor Maheen Neetu ky pass kitchen main chali gye .........
Maheen uski help krty hoy idhar udhar ki batain krny lagi .....
Maheen ........ baqi log nahi aay
Neetu ...... unho ny excuse kr lya hai ........ aor Karan ko bhi shayad koi kaam tha ...... isly aaj dinner py hum charon hi hon gy ......... Neetu muskraai
khana jald hi tyyar ho gya aor dono ny mil ky serve kya ....... phir charon log beth kr khana khaany lagy ..............
Rajiv .......... aap logo ki apartments search kahan tak pohnchi ......
Vinod ..... abhi tak to failure hi failure hai ...... aik bhi nahi mil raha munasib rate main ............ aor hum ko to do (2) dhoondny hain .......
Maheen ....... aor ab to hotel ka bhi khatam hony wala hai .....
Rajiv ....... costly to hain hi yahan py apartments buhat ....... lakin aap dono sharing kyon nahi kr lety ..........
Vinod khush hoa ........ ky unky kahny sy pahly hi unho ny sharing wali baat py aagya hai ......... sharing kis ky saath ..... Vinod bola
Rajiv ...... ary kis ky saath ka kya matlab ........ aap dono share kro .... aap aik apartment ly lo aor dono mil ky rah lo .......... mil ky uska rent pay kro ..... half ho jaay ga dono ky ly .......
Vinod aor Maheen dono ko jhatka laga ....... Maheen ky chehry pr to aisi feelings thin jaisy usy yeh baat achi naa lagi ho ..........
Rajiv ..... is mahngy city main to yahi solution hai ........ is sy tumhara rent bhi share ho jaay ga aor bills bhi ............
Maheen ny Neetu ki taraf dekha .......... woh muskraa rahi thi .......... Maheen ..... Theek bol raha hai Rajiv ..........
Vinod ..... lakin yeh kaisy possible hai yaar ........
Rajiv ..... aap 2 rooms ka aik apartment ly kr dono share kr sakty ho is sy aap logo ki privacy bhi disturb nahi ho gi ...... aor aap logo ka masla bhi hal ho jaay ga ........
Maheen ahista sy boli ...... no ..... its not possible ....
Vinod aor Maheen dono chup ho gy ........
Khany ky baad Maheen aor Neetu chaay ly kar bedroom main chaly gy ..... aor Vinod aor Rajiv sitting room main thy ......
Neetu ...... Maheen Rajiv ny jo suggestion di hai na usko seriously socho ......
Maheen ........ Neetu lakin yeh kaisy mumkin hai ........ main kaisy Vinod ky saath rah sakti hon aik ghar main ........ you know i am married ......
Neetu ..... so what yaar ...... tumhara husband to India main hai na ..... to usy kya pta .......... aor phir saath rahny ka matlab yeh to nahi ky laazmi kuch relationship bhi ho .....
Maheen blushed .......... lakin Neetu ..... phir bhi ....... aik ghar main rahna asaan to nahi hai na ...... privacy hoti hai ..... gharon main buhat casual andaaz main rahna hota hai ........... aor phir hamary culture aor relegion main bhi faraq hai ........
Neetu ....... yaar tum buhat zyada soch rahi ho .......... dono ky culture aor relegion apni apni jaga rahain gy ........... waisy aajkal in sub cheezo ko ahmyat nahi di jaati aor khaas kr is country main ........
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Bahar bethy hoy Rajiv ny bhi Vinod ko saari baat btaai ........ aor usy samjhaya ky apartment sharing hi aik acha option hain unky lye .........
Vinod ..... lakin yar Maheen nahi maany gi ........ you know she is too much conservative .......
Rajiv ...... Neetu bhi aisi hi thi ...... lakin ab woh buhat change ho chuki hoi hai yaha aakar ........ tumko uski dressings sy hi andaza ho gya ho ga ..... yeh sub kuch changes aa hi jaati hain time ky saath is country mai ........ waisy aik baat btaao ..... tumhara dil nahi krta ky Maheen jaisi hot larki ky saath raho tum aik hi apartment main ......... hahahah
Vinod bhi hansa ........ woh to hai pr aisa possible nahi hai yaar ........
Rajiv ....... buhat kuch possible ho jaata hai jab aik jawan larka aor aik jawan larki aik saath rahty hain to .........
Rajiv hansa aor Vinod bhi hansny laga ........
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Neetu ........ Maheen aik aor baat bolon tum ko ....... aik friend ky tor py ...... agar tum bura naa mano to ........
Maheen .... haan haan bolo tum .....
Neetu ........ you know yeh tumhara probabation period hai ...... aor is duration main tumhari har tarah sy assesment honi hai ...... tumhary skill ki, tumhari dealings ki .... tumhary behaviour ki ......... tumhari dressing ki .......
Maheen ........ hmm ..... to phir .....
Neetu ...... mera matlab tha ky tum apni dressing ko bhi thora westren kro ...... yeh veil hataa do ........ office main ...... aor dressing style bhi change kro ....... warna mujhy dar hai ky is sab ka tumhary contract py bura effect na pary ........
Maheen chup rahi ......
Neetu .... meri baat ko ghalat nahi samjhna tum ........ lakin tum jaanti ho na ky yeh kaisa conuntry hai ..... ....... yahan pr hamari conservative dressing ko pasand nahi kya jaata ......... aor main nahi chahti ky tumko jo yahan kaam krny ka mouka mila hai woh tum kho do ......
Maheen kuch soch main doobi hoi thi .........
Neetu ...... sorry agar tumko meri baat ghalat lagi ho .....
Maheen ..... nahi nahi ........ main samjh rahi hon tumhari baat ......... tum theek kah rahi ho ......... lakin meri family ..... mery parents ..... woh kaisy ijazat dain gy mujhy .....
Neetu ..... to tumko koun un sy ijazat leny ko bol raha hai ....... pta hai kya main bhi buhat conservative dresses hi pehnti thi jab yahan aai thi ........ woh to ahista ahista change hona para ... ........
Maheen ....... aor Rajiv ...... usy koi aitraaz nahi hai kya ....
Neetu ...... nahi .... bilkul bhi nahi ........ woh yahan ky culture aor yahan ki requirements ko samjhta hai ...... isly usny kabhi object nahi kya balky yeh changes bhi usky hi encourage krny sy ly paai hon main ...........
Maheen chup ho gye .........
itny main bedroom ka door knock hoa .......... Vinod aor Rajiv bhi bedroom main aagy ........ aor sofay pr beth gy .......
Rajiv ...... ary kya batain ho rahi hain .........
Neetu .... wohi apartment ky ly btaa rahi thi main Maheen ko .....
Rajiv .... yaar is sy behtar koi option nahi hai ........
Vinod ...... lakin yeh possible nahi hai na ....... hum log aik saath aik apartment main nahi rah sakty ............ hamari apni apni families hain ..... na Miss Maheen ky husband is baat ky ly agree hon gy aor naa hi meri wife ko acha lagy ga .........
Rajiv ...... lakin yaar woh dono to India main hain na ......
Maheen ..... lakin phir bhi aik apartment main rahna to impossible hai na ...... you know buhat si batain hoti hain na ........ privacy hoti hai apni apni .... to aisy kisi bhi doosry shakhs ky saath rahna ......... i am sorry Vinod .. please dont take it wrong ........ Maheen ny Vinod ki taraf dekhty hoy kaha ....
Neetu ...... sahi kah rahi ho .. lakin aap log apni boundaries set kr sakty ho ...... apni limititions ....... aor aik doosry ki privacy ka dono khayal rakho ....... koi interferance nahi kro ....... aap dono mature ho ........ samjhdar ho ........ naa chaho to kuch bhi nahi ho ga aisa waisa aap logo main jiska tum ko dar lag raha hai ........... Neetu hansi .......
Maheen thori sharmaai ....... in sb baton ka khayal rakh bhi lain to bhi mery husband ....... aor Vinod ki wife ........ unko agar pta chala to ......
Rajiv ....... koun btaay ga unko ........ agar aap log nahi btao gy to unko kaisy pta chaly ga ............. aor naa hi woh kabhi yahan aany walay hain aap logo ko dekhny ky ly ...........
Maheen ny sir jhukaa dya .......... kuch sochty hoy ..........
Vinod .......... lakin aksar to video call py hi baat hoti hai na ....... to ....
Neetu ...... ary jab video call ho to aap log careful raho ky saamny na aao aik doosry ki call main ...........
kuch der tak Neetu aor Rajiv un dono ko convince krty rahy ....... aor phir Maheen aor Vinod dono wapis hotel aagy ............ raasty main bhi dono chup thy ...........
Room main aa ky Maheen ny apny kapray utaary .......... bra aor panty bhi utar di ...... aor night dress pehn lya ........ Maheen ky utary hoy kapray aor uski bra panty bed py hi pary thy ky door knock hoa ..... Maheen jaldi s darwazy ki taraf gye ........... usy pta tha ky room sevice hi ho gi ...... Maheen ny darwaza khola to Vinod khara tha ....... Maheen ny uski taraf dekha ..... jaisy poch rahi ho ky woh kaisy aaya hai .....
Vinod ....... Maheen jee kuch der baat ho sakti hai kya .....
Maheen ny Vinod ko andar aany ka raasta dya ........... Vinod andar aaya ....... uski nazar bed py bikhry hoy Maheen ky kapron py pari ...... wahin Maheen ki black color ki bra aor panty bhi pari hoi thi ...... usky aaj shaam ko pehny hoy kapron ky saath..... jis py Vinod ki nazar pari ..... woh samjh gya ky aaj shaam main Maheen ny black bra aor panty pahni thi apni dress ky neechy ........ Maheen door band kr ky mudi to uski nazar bhi bed py rakhy hoy apny kapron py gye .........
Maheen ..... oh ...... i am sorry ...... main kapray change kr rahi thi bus ...
Vinod ....... i am sorry Maheen jee ..... mairi wajah sy aap disturb hoin .....
Maheen ..... no no ..... i have already finished .......
Maheen jaldi sy bed ki doosri taraf gye .... aor apny kapray samaitny lagi .......... Vinod usi ko dekh raha tha ........... Maheen ny apni bra aor panty uthaaty hoy Vinod ki taraf dekha to uski nazar Vinod sy mili ....... Maheen ny thora sharam sy apni nazar jhukaa li ........ aor apny kapray samait kr cupboard main rakh dye ........ aor wapis aa kr Vinod ky saamny sofay pr beth gye ........
Maheen ....... is everything okay ..... chaay lain gy aap kya ???
Vinod ...... jee agar aap ko zehmat na ho to ........
Maheen ..... nahi nahi ......... zehmat kaisi .... main abhi bnaati hon ....
Maheen ny electric kettle on kr di ....... aor cups prepare krny lagi ......
Vinod ............ Maheen jee ... actually main Rajiv aor Neetu ki suggestion py baat krny aaya tha .........
Maheen dheery sy ...... woh to pagal hain ........ aor unki suggestion bhi pagal pan hai ....... jaisy woh dono kah rahy hain ...... woh bhala possible bhi hai ......
Vinod ........ aap theek kah rahi ho ...... lakin aap socho to hamary pass koi aor solution bhi to nahi hai na .......... kitni to struggle kr chuky hoy hain ........ agar hum aik apartment ly kr sharing kr lain to hamain economical pary ga ............ aor phir jab hamain koi munasib apartments milain gy hum alag alag ho jaain gy ...........
Maheen chup ho gye ..... usky chehry pr surkhi si doud gye ..... usy Vinod ki baat theek lag rahi thi .........
Maheen chaay ky cup bnaa kr aai aor Vinod ky saamny jhuk ky aik cup rakha ....... Vinod ki nazrain seedhi Maheen ki night dress ky khuly hoy galy sy andar ko gyn ....... aor usy Maheen ky boobs ky ooper ka thora sa hissa dikha ....... Maheen apna cup ly kr Vinod ky saamny sofay pr beth gye .....
Maheen ........ theek hai agar hum log aisa kr bhi lain ...... to phir bhi Asif aor Priya ....... kya woh yeh baat manain gy ........ is baat ky ly hamain ijazat dain gy ........
Vinod ..... haan kabhi bhi nahi ....... woh hamari situation ko nahi samjh sakain gy ....... aor naa hi unko hamari baton py yaqeen aay ga chahy hum jaisy bhi unko aitbaar kraany ki koshsish krain .........
Maheen ........ jee ...... bilkul ....... to phir ..
Vinod ...... to phir yeh ky hamain un sy yeh baat chupaana ho gi ........ kaisy bhi kr ky ........... unko is baat ka pata nahi lagny dain gy ......
Maheen ...... lakin yeh to buhat mushkil hai na .....
Vinod ........ haan mushkil to ho gi .......... lakin hum log unsy phone py baat krty hoy aik doosry ko avoid krain gy ..... door rahain gy ...... aor waisy bhi to phone call ya video call py baat hum log apny apny room main krain gy na ...... ..........
Maheen ........ and what about other matters of privacy .... etc
Vinod ..... woh to jaisy aap kaho gi waisy hi kr lain gy ....... aik doosry ki privacy koi bhe breech nahi kry ga .........
Maheen sir jhukaay apni sochon main thi ............. mujhy to kuch samjh nahi aa raha .............
Vinod ....... hum kuch arsa ky ly aisy sharing kr lety hain ....... agar koi problem hoti hai to phir ya phir koi achi options milin to hum separate ly lain gy apartments .......
Maheen dheery sy ........ hmmmm .
Vinod ...... to phir kal chal ky koi double room apartment dekh lety hain ........
Maheen ny ahista sy haan main sir hilaa dya ............ Vinod ky saath aik apartment main tanha rahny kay khayal sy hi Maheen ki ajeeb si halat ho rahi thi .......... aor khaas tor pr Neetu ki baton ky baad to uski dil ki dharkan bhi taiz ho gye thi ............ usny aik nazar apny saamny bethy hoy Vinod py daali aor phir apni nazar jhukaa li ........... kuch der main Vinod utha aor apny room main chala gya .......... Maheen ko good night bol kr .......... Maheen ny darwaza band kr dya ..............
Koi 15 minute ky baad dobara knock hoa ......... aor bahar sy Adam ki awaz aai ......... Room service mam ...........
Maheen apny bed sy uthi .......... apna dress thora theek kya aor jaa ky door khol dya .......... saamny Adam khara tha ...... apny haath main dresses ky packets lye hoy ............ Maheen ny usy andar aany ka raasta dya .............
Adam ny andar aa ky woh packets table py rakhy ......... usny Adam ko thanks bola ....... aor phir Maheen ny Adam ko subah ky ly apna dress dya aor woh usy ly kar waha sy chala gya ........... Maheen ny woh packets dekhy to unky ooper usky room number ka sticker laga hoa tha ......... Maheen ny muskra ky woh packets apni cupboard main rakh lye ...... phir Maheen bed py late gye .......... aor Vinod ky saath rahny ky consiquences ky baary main sochny lagi ........ usy yeh sub buhat hi ajeeb lag raha tha ..... ky akisy ho ga jab woh aik ajnabee to nahi ...... mgar aik ghair aadmi ..... aor woh bhi ghair mazhabi aadmi ky saath rahy gi ..... aik hi ghar main ..... aik hi chath ky neechy ............. saath hi woh khud ko samjhaa bhi rahi thi ky woh kuch bhi aisa waisa nahi hony dy gi ........... aor umeed hai ky naa hi Vinod aisi koi koshish kry ga ........ inhi baton ko sochty hoy Maheen ki aankh lag gye ............
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