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Nice mystery thriller. I am guessing this guys helped her kill chacha and Javed and she is doing this in return as favour or they blackmailed her or she is split personality or she is muskan from that same slum who hide her past. My mind is going to bust with the suspense. Great story brother

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Looks like KK is back to office this week so it's going to be a long wait till the weekend!
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Such prolong gaps may result in some readers losing interest. Atleast there must be some kind of consistency between episodes
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Eagerly waiting for ur update sir I'm waiting
Seeing same page 43 hurting
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This story is at the peak
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24-10-2024, 08:13 PM
(This post was last modified: 24-10-2024, 08:14 PM by val.coutinho. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
KK bro give us some good and long update as Diwali dhamaka..... Hope you make our Diwali happy and enjoyable
Val
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Mega update loading this weekend, waiting bro
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Bro can you please tell if u can update today or tomorrow?
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26-10-2024, 05:54 PM
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Kk seems to have forgotten all about his previous promises of updating the story in a week. Now requesting for one seems like falling into deaf ears.
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Sir please update gave sir
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