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Hi Kk,
What an exquisite episode! Your attention to details is uncanny especially considering so many different nuances that you have to account for.
Also appreciate your effort with the English language in keeping up the characters to continue to convey their natural behavior…Ganga bubbly and cheerful…Shrinu suspicious and agitated, this is really difficult when one is writing a long story.
Please keep up the good work…your writing skills are adorable. The graphics were totally relevant to the scene you were narrating.
Please, please, please don’t turn Srinivas into a cuckold….I and many, many other readers are looking for a different genre in this story.
Thanks for putting so much effort into this episode, it was worth the wait. Already looking forward to the next episode. Thanks.
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Awesome, is chacha recording the whole thing for nearly three hours or is it srinu doing the recording as everything looks from the srinu point of view
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That was amazing. The other side of Ganga is slowly coming out. Ganga turned more bold only after the call with Priya. So definitely priya should have asked her to use the opportunity with strangers, tease them and enjoy the thrill fun in presence of husband. Priya must be already cheating her husband and she has a partner in crime now.
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(15-09-2024, 07:03 AM)Bigil Wrote: Awesome, is chacha recording the whole thing for nearly three hours or is it srinu doing the recording as everything looks from the srinu point of view
I knew this would happen..
Writing multiple POV's is nightmare especially when you have to write same person POV from past and present at the same time.
1) All the videos are recorded by chacha ..
2) Srinu is watching these video.. he can see himself from the past.
3) no it is not single video 3 hrs long.. there are multiple videos as mentioned.. read it again you might have skipped it.
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Hi kk007007,
Can you please say a tentative time of next release, I would prepare my mind until then!!!
I know you are giving long updates which is not easy to compile, still if you can please!!!
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Is Ganga a nympomaniac or serial killer or doing all this to save her family. There has to be a good reason obviously. These kind of stories will keep degrading main lead until last min to reveal the good nature lol
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Superb update KK. Satisfying as always, yet yearning for more!! You rock!!!
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(15-09-2024, 09:59 AM)RCF Wrote: Is Ganga a nympomaniac or serial killer or doing all this to save her family. There has to be a good reason obviously. These kind of stories will keep degrading main lead until last min to reveal the good nature lol
Yeah, could be either.
But having read until now, I feel the big revelation in the end will be that our dearest Ganga has a split personality. Remember how the revelation caught us in utter disbelief and awe in stories like "Dr.Jekyll and Mr.Hyde" or numerous TV series and movies that used the same plot.
This is becoming obvious to me bcoz her alter ego is such a slut that her main personality does not remember what it does. Thats why the inexplicable shifts in her moods and responses and they probably occur when she is under such duress of overtly inappropriate sxual flirtations. Remember how her pre-wedding sexual tryst with Srinu played out in the car, from utmost anger to complete submission and then again to an anger of sorts. Probably this split personality developed in Ganga in response to some repeated childhood molestation experience.
This is the only reasonable explanation I have for how she is able to pull off the act of a dutiful, loving and caring wife without any remorse of cheating, bcoz she is actually bring totally honest and genuine, and remembers none of what her other personality did.
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(15-09-2024, 08:10 AM)Raja Velumani Wrote: That was amazing. The other side of Ganga is slowly coming out. Ganga turned more bold only after the call with Priya. So definitely priya should have asked her to use the opportunity with strangers, tease them and enjoy the thrill fun in presence of husband. Priya must be already cheating her husband and she has a partner in crime now. Yes, this is much more simpler and straightforward too.
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Hello Kk007007,
I would like to commend you on the use of pics and gifs of the sexy, hot, naughty Internet personality for the depiction of Ganga. I am aware who she is and have 'enjoyed' her various insta posts and web shows a lot, for she truly is a sensual seductress, apt for imagining Ganga.
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15-09-2024, 02:42 PM
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Wonderful update. The knots are slowly gettin opened.
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Hi kk007007,
Kudos, for your efforts. Really you are one of a kind. This is not an outright wanking story. You speak of the insecurities men have.
You have a climax in mind, I am very curious to know that. For me all these updates are kind of a foreplay. Waiting for that twist. Everyone, every writer has a template, a hidden desire. Till now you didn't reveal, I just wanna know what's yours.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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15-09-2024, 03:19 PM
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I am still waiting for that one update, soo erotic that which will make your followers UNZIP, which is real.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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(15-09-2024, 03:19 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: I am still waiting for that one update, soo erotic that which will make your followers UNZIP, which is real.
:) :)  :shy:
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Extraordinary written bro tempting ah unthi
Keep the same pase ?
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16-09-2024, 09:25 AM
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Really a good plot What imagination and what writing skills
Waiting for an update eagerly
Val
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Oh man!
This is one of the sexiest slow burn stories I've came across in years. Kudos for doing a great job. Looking forward to more erotic updates. Ganga will go down as one of the most desirable woman in the history of erotica.
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very hot sexy updates waiting for next
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