[Delhidevil2021]

Thanks for all your supports ,

Next update , date and time i will update later and soon

Hi…When will you give next update

[Anoop Nair]

NEXT UPDATE : SATURDAY 27.07.2024

If possible ! i will update before,

both sapna and Riya portion will come on next update ,,,

thank u all

[Anoop Nair]

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[Uma aananthi]

Sorry to say i am very much confused over here... Sapna had already had sex with negro and security officerman... Even riya had a gist of sex.... Why r u still rolling story on and on.... When a virgin getting fucked first time or sanskari wife getting fucked with other guy first time, will be thrill to knw hw she got fucked first time but in this case i feel real thrill will be how these gals change their character into cheap sluts and how they accept it due to fucking and treatment...

Now i feel story is stuck in one place and not moving at all


ANYWAY THIS IS MY OPINION... AUTHOR HAVE ALL RIGHTS TO IGNORE IT... BUT SINCE I LOVE THIS AUTHOR AND HIS STORY I AM SAYING THIS... Nothing else

[Thangaraasu]

When the job of sapna is whore, what is the need of office. client bed is her office. Nice update

[Anoop Nair]

Sorry to say i am very much confused over here... Sapna had already had sex with negro and security officerman... Even riya had a gist of sex.... Why r u still rolling story on and on.... When a virgin getting fucked first time or sanskari wife getting fucked with other guy first time, will be thrill to knw hw she got fucked first time but in this case i feel real thrill will be how these gals change their character into cheap sluts and how they accept it due to fucking and treatment...

Now i feel story is stuck in one place and not moving at all


ANYWAY THIS IS MY OPINION... AUTHOR HAVE ALL RIGHTS TO IGNORE IT... BUT SINCE I LOVE THIS AUTHOR AND HIS STORY I AM SAYING THIS... Nothing else

what u expecting dear?

you wanting me to close the story? i can close this story within one page, for all your entertainment , i rolling the story , 

and how can we forced the girl all time for sex ? Sapna left from lucknow is to live a beautiful and good life with sanjeev, 

i appreciate your suggestion , 

thank u

[damien123456]

one suggestion bro dont let sex between jitendra and riya made a it a sex and hate relationship between harsha and riya to jitendra riya remains a women he likes to have but he can't because of harsha as harsha wants riya to be his only i know he let richard to fuck her but its for money but with jitendra it's not made it like jitendra is lusitng and want to fuck her but harsha saved her and take her

[Rahul156408]

you are getting in track bro

waiting for next riya update

harsha is back the story will be on fire

reply the next update date

[Rahul156408]

very good update

[Uma aananthi]

Look.. I love sapna\'s character more than riya.. I have said this to u many times... So as far as sapna is concerned, first she had sex with that blackie, then security officerman... That too after one round when he said lets have another she said ok to it... If nt wrong she had her ass fucked.. Why still u trying to make her act like sati savitri... U can make story into two angle..


First angle is like how a decent married girl riya who is trying to stick up to her sanskaripan and how people around her is trying to Transform her as slut..




Second angle is sapna who was arrogant wife  and how this guys transformed her into slut and with their support how far this girl transformed and became dirty... So u can show twp variations in a single story....Because me being a woman from chennai, divorcee at the age of 28...i know most of the girls here are slut within them..  Their arrogance is her shield... So when tat is being broken and her inner slut will come out and she will start enjoying her life forgetting morality... Make sapna drink smoke do dirty shameless things with guys... And same negro with whom she once slept by force this time she sbd enjoy and get fucked... He shd be shocked to see her transformationSo this is wat i  meant to say...... So in one story if u shw two variations i feel we wont have feel story is not moving at all...Again this is my suggestion... Ignore if i am wrong... But since i love the story due to which i am commenting

[choocha]

Images seem to be more of a distraction than adding any value. For every few lines, there seem to be almost half page size images. Focus seems to be more on the images, with a few lines added as a background, rather than the other way.

[boredhubby]

Images seem to be more of a distraction than adding any value. For every few lines, there seem to be almost half page size images. Focus seems to be more on the images, with a few lines added as a background, rather than the other way.

bit hyper

we should encourage the effort....

[Prakash7711]

Supperb ,

Continue

[Rocky Rakesh]

Niceeeeeeeeee

[Delhidevil2021]

Brother…. when will be the next update…. current update is too good but it is very short

[Prakash7711]

When you post the next update ?

[Prakash7711]

Waiting for Sapna - Aarif Portion ...

[boredhubby]

Eating

[Delhidevil2021]

Hi Anoop, Please update the date for next phase of the story.