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Adultery THE UNTOLD STORY OF RIYA & SAPNA
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21-08-2023, 11:14 AM
22-08-2023, 01:04 AM
Apart from Sreejith ,,Riya is not easy to share bed with another males ,
So I have to write Riya character very natural, Give me some days , i will update...
So I have to write Riya character very natural, Give me some days , i will update...
24-08-2023, 10:16 PM
Any suggestion in the story ,please update me ,
I have to work more for this story ,
How minister taking Riya in to his bed ?
As everyone know ,..It's not a easy task for minister ,
Let's see on next update ...
I have to work more for this story ,
How minister taking Riya in to his bed ?
As everyone know ,..It's not a easy task for minister ,
Let's see on next update ...
27-08-2023, 01:17 PM
28-08-2023, 05:53 PM
(28-08-2023, 02:58 PM)nerdblunder03 Wrote: The story is superb and the narration is great but sometimes it feels like Riya is dumb and easy
You could have added half the sex scene in next part, I mean the scene where she greedly sucking . I felt like she is fully submitted to the minister like a slut
Again narration is really good but please don't move the story in a fast pace.
Pranitha Subhash is soo cute to portray as Riya
Just my thoughts I am not ruining your writing sense
Anyway good job waiting for the next update
Thanks for your feedback dear ,
In this story I portray Riya as an intelligent ,But Riya had aim to join in security officer department , because of his father she can't achieve her goal , So Minister knew very well , So he played well ,
This story is not going to stop here ,This is only a 15 % of story, I will come with a new update ...
28-08-2023, 09:06 PM
29-08-2023, 03:47 PM
01-09-2023, 10:21 PM
Next update will come on Sunday Evening ,
Any suggestion please post below ,,
Any suggestion please post below ,,
04-09-2023, 11:16 AM
Sorry for the Delay , will try to update within 2 days , Thanks all for your response....
13-09-2023, 12:00 PM
Dear readers ,
I apologized all of for waiting my updates ,some personal reason I can't post updates for last 8 days ,
Update is ready , We can Read beautiful Riya story from today night ,
Following updates will come correctly ,
I apologized all of for waiting my updates ,some personal reason I can't post updates for last 8 days ,
Update is ready , We can Read beautiful Riya story from today night ,
Following updates will come correctly ,
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