Adultery THE UNTOLD STORY OF RIYA & SAPNA

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(20-08-2023, 08:58 PM)Pvzro Wrote:  Very good story ,seems to be most erotic ones ,hello writer move the pace with big updates 

Great writing skills angain

Can I change Riya Photo ? Any one pls
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Apart from Sreejith ,,Riya is not easy to share bed with another males ,

So I have to write Riya character very natural, Give me some days , i will update...
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Any suggestion in the story ,please update me ,
I have to work more for this story ,

How minister taking Riya in to his bed ?
As everyone know ,..It's not a easy task for minister ,

Let's see on next update ...
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Next update will come soon ,,
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(27-08-2023, 08:54 AM)Pvzro Wrote:  3 days passed with an update bro keep posting,or else we  might lose interest in the story 

Eagerly waiting....

Update will come on today 7 Pm , ?
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Part - 6 will come with in 4 to 5 days , ,
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(28-08-2023, 02:58 PM)nerdblunder03 Wrote:  The story is superb and the narration is great but sometimes it feels like Riya is dumb and easy 
You could have added half the sex scene in next part, I mean the scene where she greedly sucking . I felt like she is fully submitted to the minister like a slut
Again narration is really good but please don't move the story in a fast pace.
Pranitha Subhash is soo cute to portray as Riya
Just my thoughts I am not ruining your writing sense
Anyway good job waiting for the next update

Thanks for your feedback dear ,
In this story I portray Riya as an intelligent ,But Riya had aim to join in security officer department , because of his father she can't  achieve her goal , So Minister knew very well , So he played well , 

This story is not going to stop here ,This is only a 15 % of story,  I will come with a new update ...
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(28-08-2023, 08:57 PM)sri7869 Wrote:  Waiting for Update

Working for that....  Will update you soon...
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(29-08-2023, 01:16 PM)Kalyan143 Wrote:  continue bro

Working for that....
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Next update will come on Sunday Evening ,
Any suggestion please post below ,,
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Sorry for the Delay , will try to update within 2 days , Thanks all for your response....
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Update comming this weekend...
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Dear readers ,

I apologized all of for waiting my updates ,some personal reason I can't post updates for last 8 days ,

Update is ready , We can Read beautiful Riya story from today night ,

Following updates will come correctly ,
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