[Paul5]

Update

[Prabhas Rasigan]

I dont understand why some readers are asking for updates for the completed story and bring it on page 1. does it mean they are unhappy with the ending and want to change the climax. holy shit.
due to this other active stories are pushed back.

[Paul5]

I dont understand why some readers are asking for updates for the completed story and bring it on page 1. does it mean they are unhappy with the ending and want to change the climax. holy shit.
due to this other active stories are pushed back.

Yes we wants to change the end of story the author has also mentioned in previous mail so we are eager for authors response because at that time not a single sorry on this site is likely to read if you know pl suggest

[shake chilli]

Yes

More thriller stories

End pending

Dip

And strong character

Waiting to stories end

And

Desai Ford this stories character

To Mera
Happy to

Last

[RCF]

I dont understand why some readers are asking for updates for the completed story and bring it on page 1. does it mean they are unhappy with the ending and want to change the climax. holy shit.
due to this other active stories are pushed back.

Krish mentioned he will add 4 chapters instead of last 2 to explain the ending better but i do not think the happy ending is being changed. Lot of people who are hoping Meera will settle with Desai will be disappointed. May be a trip to his hometown with some added erotica could be refreshing and her realizing that Desai is not correct for her would be more apt and instead of hearing from Nidhi. Meera making decision herself that she cannot live without Krish will be similar to her feelings from part 2 which shouldn't have changed much in true sense.

Alternative ending is Meera deciding to live alone from here on, would make sense for time being but they tried this earlier and it did not work out so doesn't make sense for this ending looking at longer term.

[shake chilli]

कृष ने बताया कि वह अंत को बेहतर ढंग से समझाने के लिए पिछले 2 की बजाय 4 अध्याय जोड़ेंगे, लेकिन मुझे नहीं लगता कि सुखद अंत बदला जा रहा है। बहुत से लोग जो उम्मीद कर रहे हैं कि मीरा देसाई के साथ बस जाएगी, वे निराश होंगे। हो सकता है कि कुछ अतिरिक्त कामुकता के साथ उसके गृहनगर की यात्रा ताज़ा हो सकती है और उसे यह एहसास होना कि देसाई उसके लिए सही नहीं है, निधि से सुनने के बजाय अधिक उपयुक्त होगा। मीरा का खुद यह निर्णय लेना कि वह कृष के बिना नहीं रह सकती, भाग 2 से उसकी भावनाओं के समान होगा, जिसमें सही मायने में बहुत बदलाव नहीं होना चाहिए था।

वैकल्पिक अंत यह है कि मीरा यहाँ से अकेले रहने का फैसला करती है, जो कुछ समय के लिए समझ में आता है लेकिन उन्होंने पहले भी ऐसा करने की कोशिश की थी और यह कारगर नहीं हुआ था, इसलिए लंबे समय तक इस अंत को देखते हुए यह समझ में नहीं आता है।

Ha bhai

[shake chilli]

Bassss abbb intjar he bas 1 update ka bas 1

Bahot umid he is stories se please update aa jay bas

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Yar koi unousmet to karo yar




Itna bhi rood behiver acchmha nahi he please

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Please app continue Karo bas

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Part 〽️

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Waiting all time sir


Please app bhi ye bat samja karo

[krish_999]

I have deleted chapter 41 and 42.  The story will continue from chapter 41 with small changes, and from 42 and 43 onwards, the story will have more changes. At least four chapters will follow. I'm not sure about how many chapters will be there. If I make small chapters it can take up to 8 chapters as well. By small, I mean a chapter which can be told in one post. 
Now the most important but disappointing aspect about it ;) I'm just half way into my rewriting.

[shake chilli]

मैंने अध्याय 41 और 42 को हटा दिया है। कहानी अध्याय 41 से छोटे बदलावों के साथ जारी रहेगी, और 42 और 43 से आगे, कहानी में और बदलाव होंगे। कम से कम चार अध्याय होंगे। मुझे नहीं पता कि कितने अध्याय होंगे। अगर मैं छोटे अध्याय बनाऊँगा तो इसमें 8 अध्याय भी लग सकते हैं। छोटे से मेरा मतलब है एक अध्याय जिसे एक पोस्ट में बताया जा सकता है। 
अब इसके बारे में सबसे महत्वपूर्ण लेकिन निराशाजनक पहलू ;) मैं अपने पुनर्लेखन में अभी आधा रास्ता तय कर रहा हूँ।

Thanks dost

इसमे देसाई की हर होनी छी

एक एक असली कहानियाँ लगती है वह ऐप की राइटिंग है 

इस्लिए. मैं आपको फोर्स कर रहा हूं वह आपके फैमगोलवी जी 


क्यू की कहानियाँ अभी तो शुरू हो गई हे


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[shake chilli]

Krish sir app aage ki
stories
paid for read

Rakhoge to bhi

Ham log suport karenge

Jese telegram
Ya other site

Please

End strong karna is bar

[shake chilli]

अध्याय 42 भाग 2 हटा दिया गया। इसे पुनः लिखा जाएगा।

 

Thanks waiting long time ? 


To your answer

[shake chilli]

टीanks

[Sagar s]

TY SO MUCH KRISH BRO I AM ALSO WAITING FOR THIS PLZZ GIVE ATLEAST ONE UPDATE SO WE CAN RELIVE THOSE MOMENTS PLZZ yr):

[Rangushki]

Krish please finish the story like Meera running with his lover to shimla and give birth to his babies and her husband krish committing suicide. This is the end many readers want to see. it is the reason they ask you to rewrite the climax of the story. Dirty minds in breaking families.

[Gandhi krishna]

Krish please finish the story like Meera running with his lover to shimla and give birth to his babies and her husband krish committing suicide. This is the end many readers want to see. it is the reason they ask you to rewrite the climax of the story. Dirty minds in breaking families.

Rightly said.   banghead:

[krish_999]

Krish please finish the story like Meera running with his lover to shimla and give birth to his babies and her husband krish committing suicide. This is the end many readers want to see. it is the reason they ask you to rewrite the climax of the story. Dirty minds in breaking families.

Yeah nice idea.  :) But then our friends here would demand continue the story from Krish the ghost, and to have him see how Meera is now enjoying with Desai.