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(11-04-2024, 08:23 PM)कृष_999 Wrote: प्रिय, प्रक्रिया करने के लिए बहुत कुछ है। मैं इस कहानी के साथ कई घंटे बैठा हूँ, मेरे पास कहानी को आगे ले जाने का एक दृष्टिकोण है लेकिन मैं इसे लिखने में असमर्थ हूँ क्योंकि पिछले अध्यायों में बहुत सारे कथानक बिंदु हैं जिन्हें मुझे वर्तमान से जोड़ने की आवश्यकता है। इसे प्रोसेस करना बहुत ज्यादा है, यही देरी है। मुझे लगता है कि इसे जारी रखने की तुलना में एक नई कहानी लिखना सौ गुना आसान है। लेकिन मैंने प्रयास करना बंद नहीं किया है, इसलिए यह कोई निराशाजनक स्थिति नहीं है। कम से कम मुझे 3-4 अध्याय लिखने का विचार आया है। लेकिन ईमानदारी से कहूं तो मैं यह नहीं कह सकता कि कब।
इस कहानी पर अत्यधिक स्नेह दिखाने के लिए धन्यवाद। उन सभी लोगों को धन्यवाद जो अभी भी इस कहानी के बारे में सोच रहे हैं। मुझे उम्मीद है कि मैं एक दिन उनकी इच्छा पूरी करूंगा. App isme Manoj Jo staff member tha
Usko fir se add karo
Babd me Piyush
Or 1 ,2 chrcheter ke sath aage ja sakte he
Jada socho mat
Stories ka last abi bhi umed pe he apke
Please sir I am humble request for you
Jo Desai ne Jo inki jindagi khrab ki he
To desai ke liye isme bada sanghrch hoga
Or Desa
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Waiting on by on day continue
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16-05-2024, 12:38 PM
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(11-04-2024, 08:23 PM)krish_999 Wrote: There's too much to process dear. I've sat many hours with this story, I have a vision to take the story forward but I'm unable to write it because there are so many plot points in the past chapters that I need to connect to the present. It's too much to process, that's the delay. I think its hundred times easier to write a new story than continuing this one. But I haven't stopped trying, so it's not a hopeless situation. At least I have got ideas to write 3-4 chapters. But I can't say when, to be honest.
Thanks for showing extreme level of affection to this story. Thanks for all others who's still thinking about this story. I hope I will fulfil their wish one day.
Krish bro ur wonderful creator & Writer ..All are waiting for ur story ....so start the first chapter with this knot ......(My suggestion ) Desai's Mother Passed .....Meera & Krish going to the Desai's place .....Desai told meera ..my mom expecting u but i failed to bring u .i'm not honest to u& my mom ...Meera console Desai & slowly stared love making ...next chapter will be go with ur idea bro ....im saying just a starting knot ....... ....
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(15-05-2024, 01:17 AM)shake chilli Wrote: App isme Manoj Jo staff member tha
Usko fir se add karo
Babd me Piyush
Or 1 ,2 chrcheter ke sath aage ja sakte he
Jada socho mat
yes please like how he showed his anger to das In part 2 - same thing he should do to desis ! Let him know how the humiliation feel like !
and Meera too support him
Stories ka last abi bhi umed pe he apke
Please sir I am humble request for you
Jo Desai ne Jo inki jindagi khrab ki he
To desai ke liye isme bada sanghrch hoga
Or Desa
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Ye sahi time he stories kec liye
Ye stories necabb bahot waiting Kiya he
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Presently, the draft that I'm working with for this story's amendment has 93 pages on MS word! A lot of pages are repetitions, based on different versions of same event or events told elaboratively or simply. I have made an outline, and there are around 24 sub parts which will eventually make 4-5 chapters. It's a hell lot of typing/writing required, along with abundance of imaginations. I hope you guys understand why it's getting so delayed. I can only hope that I can deliver. I'm not confident to say when.
Thanks again.
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Ok yar app Kam se kam reply to de rahe ho
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21-05-2024, 02:33 AM
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Please don’t humiliate krish more on your next update !
Make krish like a hero n make krish have sex In front of Desai and go on a good note !
Don’t come up with hurtful episode ! Plz is a request!
And I don’t understand when krish and Meera are together and they both promise each other they never again leave each other n no more games - now why again more updates n it won’t make any sense ?
Don’t make more ugly krish it’s already so much humiliating for Krsih don’t degrade him more ‘
Just end it and write a new one ! It’s a request !
Atleast make Desai feel how das felt when krish had sex with Nidhi!
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(21-05-2024, 02:33 AM)Amit2021msm Wrote: Please don’t humiliate krish more on your next update !
Make krish like a hero n make krish have sex In front of Desai and go on a good note !
Don’t come up with hurtful episode ! Plz is a request!
And I don’t understand when krish and Meera are together and they both promise each other they never again leave each other n no more games - now why again more updates n it won’t make any sense ?
Don’t make more ugly krish it’s already so much humiliating for Krsih don’t degrade him more ‘
Just end it and write a new one ! It’s a request !
Atleast make Desai feel how das felt when krish had sex with Nidhi!
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I can't understand what wants to you say it's a cuck story not a love story between wife and family story the main scenes in this story that Meera as wife Krish as husband have different mindset so is story ko aise hi rahne do
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Waiting new month jun
Jo
Month rain ☔ se start hoga
Wase apki stories phi start kar do thanks
Abbb waiting nahi ho sakti yar
App samaj sakte ho
App ne stories nahi web series writer ki he
KGF ki tarah
Laking end nahi Kiya he
Jab bhi xossip open karta hu
Sbse pahle app ki stories dekta hi ki update Kiya he ya koi reply
App samaj sakte ho
App abhi free ho
Bad me app exam me ya college me bizhi ho jaeoge
To please
Stories start karna
App short update dete raho
Kam se kam part
4 part
Ka unousmet to kar do yar
Fir ye galat bat hogi sabi
Fans ke liye
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28-05-2024, 10:29 PM
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Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part iv@
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Kuch to batt ho or writer ji ka 1 update ho
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Waiting fire update yar please
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Waiting sir
Please appp start to karo
Update 2 month me Dena
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Basss appp start karo stories
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please write more! hottest stories ever
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