10-04-2024, 12:55 PM
Waiting dear
Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III
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10-04-2024, 12:55 PM
Waiting dear
11-04-2024, 01:37 AM
Waiting dear please
11-04-2024, 08:23 PM
(11-04-2024, 01:37 AM)shake chilli Wrote: Waiting dear please There's too much to process dear. I've sat many hours with this story, I have a vision to take the story forward but I'm unable to write it because there are so many plot points in the past chapters that I need to connect to the present. It's too much to process, that's the delay. I think its hundred times easier to write a new story than continuing this one. But I haven't stopped trying, so it's not a hopeless situation. At least I have got ideas to write 3-4 chapters. But I can't say when, to be honest. Thanks for showing extreme level of affection to this story. Thanks for all others who's still thinking about this story. I hope I will fulfil their wish one day.
11-04-2024, 08:43 PM
you can try new story upon this theme,,,,
thanks to inform us
11-04-2024, 08:43 PM
love from Bangladesh
11-04-2024, 08:44 PM
Eid ke din bhi check karta hoon story ka
12-04-2024, 02:17 PM
App ye stories ko 5,6 update or add karo abhi
App ye stories or mast writer kar sakte ho Jese Mr Desai ne Mera ko kahi ka nahi chhoda Wase Mera bhi abhi Mr desai ko barbad karne ko lagi he ???????? Uska business Isme Mera private me Mr desai ko nuksan pochati he App stories 1 update to do please only 1 update to Banta he App bole exam ke badddd abhi to April bhi khtam hoga please sir please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please Ye stories se abhi or umide he usko pura karo dost
12-04-2024, 10:15 PM
5--6 update nahi bro iska ek or part banta hai part 4 kuynki ye story number 1 par hai or me to daily isko padhta hu ek or part banta hai iska jisme new characters ho or mera or krish unse mile bohat maza ayega that,s my suggestion rest is up to you krish bro but ek or part part 4 to banta hai plzzz,?
15-04-2024, 03:05 PM
(12-04-2024, 10:15 PM)सागर एस Wrote: 5-6 अपडेट नहीं भाई इसका एक या पार्ट बनता है पार्ट 4 क्योंकि ये कहानी नंबर 1 पर है या मैं तो डेली इसको पढ़ता हूं एक या पार्ट बनता है इसका जिसमें नए किरदार हो या मेरा या कृष उनसे मिले बहुत मजा आएगा यह मेरा सुझाव है, बाकी सब आप पर निर्भर है कृष भाई, लेकिन एक या भाग, भाग 4 तो बनता है कृपया? Yes brother
17-04-2024, 04:26 AM
Waiting dear please
19-04-2024, 03:26 PM
Krish ji please koi time de do please app kab free ho or kitna time lagega please
Me bhi kitni request karu sorry
19-04-2024, 03:38 PM
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20-04-2024, 06:50 AM
05-05-2024, 09:18 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-05-2024, 01:05 PM by Amit2021msm. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Neve red a worst story in my life !
Krish poor guy n Meera a whore n slut ! How can newar let Desai so easily after so much humiliation to her husband! She is really whore ! For sure in future she will get fuxked by someone else n for sure desi he will contact her n she won’t ignore n have fucked by him ! Worthless story n she is who’re for sure! If krish didn’t come back to talk to Meera she would definitely married desia n settled ! She is a manipulated whore ! She never took any steps towards krish ! It’s only krish who love her not the other end ! I don’t think this story end here! Meera will again go back to someone n get fucked @ like a bitch she is !
06-05-2024, 08:01 AM
(05-05-2024, 09:18 AM)Amit2021msm Wrote: Neve red a worst story in my life ! Bruh story had cuckold and voyeur theme for a reason.. If you want faithful wife sex stories maybe look for other themes
07-05-2024, 11:06 PM
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(06-05-2024, 08:01 AM)thunderstormy Wrote: Bruh story had cuckold and voyeur theme for a reason.. If you want faithful wife sex stories maybe look for other themes If it’s cuck story why krish get hurst al the time - cuck never get hurt they get excited n get pleasure ! Krish always get hurt more then pleasure ! What the fuck ? Meera always get fucked like a whore ! Meera said Desai is a good person - what the hell - how can be she could be so fool - in front of her desi’s humiliated and had sex with so many girls by trik ex - ananaya and now Nidhi ! After knowing all these things how can show soft corner to Desai ! Fuck this story doesn’t make any sense ! If Meera love krish she never hurt him intensely ! Most of the she did ! Now she walks out so freely n easily ! She didn’t even show any regret ! Niether shows any open love to krish ‘ It would have been good if Meera had sex or atleast a foreplay Infront of Desai ! But no she a was pleading to Desai at the end ! Yuck How can a person live like that ! Atleast once Meera or desire should have got humiliated! And this is not a Cuck story at all ! It’s a pure love story ! Worst part there is no POV of Meer or any other person !
07-05-2024, 11:31 PM
But honestly it’s the writer skill who make me hate Meera so much in my life !
Sorry if had said any thing to you krish ‘ but I hate the story so much !
11-05-2024, 05:02 AM
Stories upni jagah sahi he
Ye merra sirf krish ke liye hi kar rahi he Krich ek vicharik pati he ye mat bhulo Brother yar march me app update Dene Wale they exam ke bad abbb may bhi end hone wala he Please yar stories restart to karo Update jab man hoga tab Dena Or ye sahi samay he yar Please
12-05-2024, 05:30 AM
Krich sir app kuh reply to do last ka
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