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its definitely going to be Prithvi. And Rajat is going to film the session. Later Rajat is also going to be with Anvita. Atul will hate Anvita and allow Ridhima to bear the child. But how does the story going to end? Will Atul divorce Anvita? Or will he become a playboy? Or Anvita goes on to sleep with Rajat, Prithvi, Rajyavardhan etc.....? It will be nice if Atul have some fun with the newly met Disha.
Thanks krish but please make sure the next update comes soon. The more we wait, the more frustrating it is. I hope u understand us buddy. Thanks a lot.
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Thank you very much for the update Krish.
Plot is getting it's grip towards the final episode and your great writing skills keep promoting the story to next level.
Your quality writing skills and words you choose for narration enhancing the grace of the plot.
Keep rocking.....
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17-06-2019, 06:23 PM
(This post was last modified: 17-06-2019, 06:26 PM by Silverstone93. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
That was nice update. Atul and Ridhima conversation shows your talent.
PERSON IN VIDEO -
I think lot of readers are thinking that it'll be Prithvi. If I have to predict, then I think, the person in the video is not Prithvi.
You don't give predictable results, Do you? If he is Prithvi then it was already predicted by readers. I don't want to spoil this masterpiece by sharing my views on future updates, but I don't think that Anvita will sleep with Prithvi. He'll try to seduce her and she'll allow him too. But, it'll end abruptly.
Atul had invited his father for their anniversary. He might see something and protects Anvita. And then......
WHO SEND VIDEO -
Video was sent on mail. Only few knows Atuls email ID. (Eg - Ridhima, Shreyas, Rajat are one of them).
1. Don't forget about Shreyas. He had great time with Anvita. He has chance to enter her home without trying hard. He was thrown out of his company because of Atul. Atul never suspected that Shreyas and Anvita had some quality time. He was angry with Shreyas because of professional issues. Shreyas might record the video and send it to Atul to destroy their marriage.
2. I don't wanna doubt Ridhima, but I think she is too involved with Atul and is also pregnant with his child. ( I personally hate this. I love her character). But, Atul got email as soon as he left Ridhima alone in her room. Doesn't it sound suspicious. She might have received that video through someone. She was not going to show it to Atul if he had allowed her to bear his chold. As he declined her request, she sent the video to show him that his ONLY WOMAN was fucking behind his back.
3. Rajat is true bastard. Hats off to draw such a manipulative character. He can easily implant camera in her room through window.
(These are just observations. I don't want any of these to be true. I am looking forward to your next update. )
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Excellent update Krish! You are using Atul version vs Anvita version to draw suspense well by mixing the updates from both ends.
Guess 1: I have always felt this story will definitely have happy ending, though there are testing times ahead for the couple. Rajat should be the only guy logical at this point who can send the video, my point being Rajat is the only guy who has access to the Window which Atul used it before to check his bedroom. So the person in the video could definitely be Prithvi reason being he is the only person Atul thinks as a friend at this point and also only person Anvita will allow to touch her.
Question for this theory : Does Rajat gets Anvita before sending the video to Atul as it doesn't make sense to send the video to Atul just to make his point rather than to use it to blackmail Anvita which is easier option ahead for him also since Atul is not there for the weekend.
Conclusion : FIL should help patch this marriage as he knows both sides of story and also blames his son for extra adventures from Anvita for not being able to satisfy her.
Guess2: This guess is far fetched but not as much if there is a strong motive. FIL could be the villain in this story , He always hated his DIL and also blames his son for choosing her or atleast we got that pretense from other characters. No FIL should ever advise his DIL to go ahead and sleep with his lover one more time to be sure that her husband is better than her lover (that's pure BS) , that is my sole reason for this guess so he might be misguiding her so Atul could see her as a slut and leave her for good.
Conclusion : Couple should figure out the real intentions for FIL and throw him out of their lives.
Guess 3: Shreyas might have been contacted by Rajat to prove to Atul that Anvita is no Sati Savitri as he has seen her with Shreyas before and guess what they might have hit jackpot when they visited her and caught her with Prithvi and record the video and maybe use her afterwards. Nice threesome which is also one more thing for Rajat to prove to Atul that she likes it. Not far fetched if we want to include huge action in final episodes where we give opportunity to all Anvita's fans lol.
Conclusion : FIL should help patch this marriage as well and ofcourse punish Rajat and Shreyas.
Anyways all should be well with this couple atleast as No one dies a Saint, both committed sin. so should be able to forgive each other.
Great Story!
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Again you proved u r the best writer.. u keep the readers in lot of expectations after every update... Excellent Kris... Give the next update soon and finish the story... (Because we want you to start a new story) ..
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George is the person in the video. As mentioned in post 1 he is only one behaved like a monster with anivta.
Rajat might have recorded the encounter, since it took place in the day time. As rajat always have his eye on the persons who are all coming to atul house.
Prithvi is too soft, he doesn't the discription of monster.
since both atul and anvita are now aware of rajat, he tries to get anvita by blackmailing her as his last resort.
with privithi help anvita will be saved.
So, he took revenge by sending the video
hope my assumption are correct, will be more happy if i'm wrong
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Thank you Krish for writing a superb story. The way u r narrating the story from both the characters point of view and characterisation of every character in the story is portrayed very well. Hope the story runs the same till it ends.
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her dignity is ravaged by my friend who has now revealed himself as a monster....it can be rajat shreyas or george...most probably george...this may be my last story as a reader
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It’s Suspense
Update yaar
Update earliest
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Update soon Kris.. when can we expect???
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Awesome story, please continue..
Ready my story:- A Mom's game
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While, Atul is in Delhi now with ridhima, the same night anvita is waiting for prithvi with ancipation of good foreplay with her, She opens doors for him........................... Suddenly She had found he is not Prithvi, ............. He is Manish and or with Manjot Srivastava.
Manish warn atul to stay away from Manhot, and he found that atul tricked sonakshi against manjot for revenge. Manish and Manjot both hunts women willingly and unwilling together. So Manish gets forced sex with anvita and He recorded that forced sex or bang with his mobile to keep in shelf or by manjot himself or they found prithvi in bedroom naked and they forced him to record that video.
After that they stay whole night with anvita in her house and next day the send him this fresh video to teach him lesson. Manish knows email id .
So, this video is fresh recorded at previous night and if meant nothing with george and prithvi or rajat.
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After complete the story, think about newer version of atul and anvita.
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When will be the next update...
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Before guessing who is in that video with Anvita you have to read the introduction of the story... A lot of expectations Kris... Give us update soon... Don't make readers to wait long... When can we expect update????
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Hello Krish
Created account only for your story. Great story and narration
Would love to read your previous stories
Can you provide here in pdf or posts
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(19-06-2019, 03:45 PM)fasterboy Wrote: While, Atul is in Delhi now with ridhima, the same night anvita is waiting for prithvi with ancipation of good foreplay with her, very She opens doors for him........................... Suddenly She had found he is not Prithvi, ............. He is Manish and or with Manjot Srivastava.
Manish warn atul to stay away from Manhot, and he found that atul tricked sonakshi against manjot for revenge. Manish and Manjot both hunts women willingly and unwilling together. So Manish gets forced sex with anvita and He recorded that forced sex or bang with his mobile to keep in shelf or by manjot himself or they found prithvi in bedroom naked and they forced him to record that video.
After that they stay whole night with anvita in her house and next day the send him this fresh video to teach him lesson. Manish knows email id .
So, this video is fresh recorded at previous night and if meant nothing with george and prithvi or rajat.
very much likely outcome...
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(20-06-2019, 11:47 AM)Ajayreddy Wrote: Hello Krish
Created account only for your story. Great story and narration
Would love to read your previous stories
Can you provide here in pdf or posts Hello Ajay,
It's really great to see people joining xossipy because of my story. Thanks for commenting.
My earlier stories are reposted by others here:
The Accident
Knowing my wife, Knowing me as well - part I and part II.
You can find links at the sticky thread for Completed Stories Index. Look for stories starting with 'K' and 'T'.
I thank all other readers for expressing your views, and for all the comments. Thank you so much for inspiring me to keep writing. I expect next update will complete by tomorrow. I'm hoping to post it tomorrow. If not, it will surely come on Saturday.
Keep reading and keep posting and keep cooking up theories :P. A lot of things are happening around here.
With love,
Krish.
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(20-06-2019, 03:43 PM)krish_999 Wrote: Hello Ajay,
It's really great to see people joining xossipy because of my story. Thanks for commenting.
My earlier stories are reposted by others here:
The Accident
Knowing my wife, Knowing me as well - part I and part II.
You can find links at the sticky thread for Completed Stories Index. Look for stories starting with 'K' and 'T'.
I thank all other readers for expressing your views, and for all the comments. Thank you so much for inspiring me to keep writing. I expect next update will complete by tomorrow. I'm hoping to post it tomorrow. If not, it will surely come on Saturday.
Keep reading and keep posting and keep cooking up theories :P. A lot of things are happening around here.
With love,
Krish.
Thanks
Waiting
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