09-03-2024, 06:20 AM
But anyways still waiting for the next update
Adultery THE UNTOLD STORY OF RIYA & SAPNA
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09-03-2024, 06:20 AM
But anyways still waiting for the next update
09-03-2024, 06:58 AM
The title is still conflicting the crux of the story. Is it gonna be all politicians going to enjoy these women or all men on high positions or business tycoons. strange that riya husband did not have any doubt about his wife.
09-03-2024, 07:15 AM
(09-03-2024, 06:15 AM)Uma aananthi Wrote: I am really sorry if my comment hurts you... but to be frank I didn't like today's episode... Though riya is main character in the story, people like me enjoyed when Sapna came into limelight because we were able to relate sapna's character with day to day life... but Swetha's character is bit forced... Also your template of story telling is being repetitive... Author mentioned Riya is tha manin lead remaining characters is just a passing clouds Then why you always keeping your eyes on sapna Leave author to write the story in his own way , If you want Kajal Agarwal as a lead ? Author should have to rewrite tha characters from the start ,
09-03-2024, 07:50 AM
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(09-03-2024, 06:15 AM)Uma aananthi Wrote: I am really sorry if my comment hurts you... but to be frank I didn't like today's episode... Though riya is main character in the story, people like me enjoyed when Sapna came into limelight because we were able to relate sapna's character with day to day life... but Swetha's character is bit forced... Also your template of story telling is being repetitive... Dear Readers , As i told you all before ..? Riya is the main lead in this story , Remaining female characters are just for adding some fuel to the story and for readers who could like see there favourite actress stories in xossipy.com , you always asking Sapna in this plot ? Making sure '' Sapna and Swetha characters will not link with the heroine RIYA ''' Story - 1. Sreejith demolished the building of Minister Harsha , 2. Minister Harsha was anger and decide to revenge on him "" 3. after seeing his Beautiful wife Riya ''' he flattened by her beauty and decide to fuck her anyhow 4. Riya is the homely housewife , when she came to another stated leaving her Parents , she slowly leaving the grip from her parents and she decide to fulfil her dreams which she missed in her life ''' 5.Using this chance Many politicians and goons trying to taste her '' 6. after got cheating from minister Harsha , still riya did not allow anyone to touch her body like what harsha and richard did to her .. Sreejith was loving her wife , still he not hear bad about riya from others ..? may be in future ....? , lets see ..?, Thank you all ,
09-03-2024, 07:53 AM
09-03-2024, 08:06 AM
i knew all your pulse,
comparing to Pranita , Kajal agarwal is the perfect slut for fuck, everyone having different taste , even i admire beauty of kajal body more than pranita , Priyanka mohan is more pretty than Kajal and Pranita , but common thing is they all are slut in there own industry '' they must had share bed with many high class to low class men '' So we using there photos and videos and shaking for them , some peoples morphing the photos of them for there pleasure , some people writing stories in the name of them '' this is just a story for passing time of mine '' Do not rush me ''
09-03-2024, 09:31 AM
Go with your own flow dude.
09-03-2024, 10:24 AM
(09-03-2024, 07:50 AM)Anoop Nair Wrote: You Rocked in last part .. Eagerly waiting to See whats going to happen for Swetha ,
09-03-2024, 04:05 PM
10-03-2024, 08:22 PM
10-03-2024, 10:45 PM
(09-03-2024, 07:15 AM)Prakash7711 Wrote: Author mentioned Riya is tha manin lead remaining characters is just a passing clouds Author is asking for suggestion we are expressing our views... Thats it
10-03-2024, 10:50 PM
(09-03-2024, 08:06 AM)Anoop Nair Wrote: i knew all your pulse, No one asked u to mix sapna with riya story... Atleast i didnt ask... Now ending for sapna is abrupt.. Just a fantasy to see how much dirty became After being slut BY CHARACTER AND ATTITUDE... thats all.. And as far as priyanka story i cannot connect myself is what i said... May in future i may but not in this episode..
10-03-2024, 10:52 PM
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Lastly i felt u r a person who accepts our suggestions... These are just suggestions... End decision is urs... If u felt bad hereafter i wont send any suggestion
10-03-2024, 11:10 PM
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Oh..I thought priyanka will play as reporter role.And I dream about she will loose a virginity to old politician.Anyway no problem I think she will loose a virginity to king jumba.And compare to pranitha ( Riya) and kajal ,priyanka is much prettier.And also I have connect with my Kollywood friends,priyanka is still virgin.and anyone cannot easily touch her.And wisely she chooses her character without glamour.
so pls use role some better.it's my request
11-03-2024, 10:35 PM
Dear Readers ,
I understood all your wish '' and also i felt the mistake in the writing ,, Too much characters will affect the story pulse , i could like to make this story very supper natural and high seductive , i decide to take this story with beautiful MILF's Riya and Sapna ' ( yes yours sapna singh will be back soon ) swetha chapter i will close shortly on the next update , and also i like to change the story title as a ''THE UNTOLD STORY OF RIYA & SAPNA '' from next updates , Here i have presented a first look posters of the Title below ''' Thank you all dears for made this story in to 200000 Views ..
13-03-2024, 06:57 PM
waiting for updates
13-03-2024, 09:18 PM
Awesome, go ahead
14-03-2024, 01:10 AM
Sorry Readers
this week do not expect update from me , i have some personal works , you can expect the big updates from next week end , thank you
15-03-2024, 09:51 AM
i hope from next week gonna get some big updates
16-03-2024, 10:52 PM
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