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(23-10-2023, 10:56 AM)krish_999 Wrote: Guys, firstly, I would like to thank you all for the comments. And secondly, apologies for the delayed reply.
Now about dropping the idea of re-writing the last few chapters of this story and then writing a whole new part.
I have been working on the re-writing, and I have a good draft of what I am going write. I think it is going to grow bigger than what I had thought. I mean, if I am rewriting last two chapters, then the new version could expand to four chapters. That's what I expect. But I said, I am working on it. And it's really tough to find time because I have other real life commitments. That's why it's taking so much to realize. I would love to take bineeshm's suggestion of dropping it all but I know it would be suicidal if I commit to the other part of suggestion. No, guys! It's just not practical to commit to such a big promise at this time of my life. It would take years to complete. Mostly, my story writing goes smooth when I am travelling. If I have to write a long story, that too, while getting in sync with such a long, already written content, then I'll have to go on a world tour!
Write now I'm going to give you that changed climax. That's the only thing in offer.
Thanks again, guys.
Nice to hear it bro we love to read desai and meera marriage and pregnancy q
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(23-10-2023, 10:56 AM)krish_999 Wrote: Guys, firstly, I would like to thank you all for the comments. And secondly, apologies for the delayed reply.
Now about dropping the idea of re-writing the last few chapters of this story and then writing a whole new part.
I have been working on the re-writing, and I have a good draft of what I am going write. I think it is going to grow bigger than what I had thought. I mean, if I am rewriting last two chapters, then the new version could expand to four chapters. That's what I expect. But I said, I am working on it. And it's really tough to find time because I have other real life commitments. That's why it's taking so much to realize. I would love to take bineeshm's suggestion of dropping it all but I know it would be suicidal if I commit to the other part of suggestion. No, guys! It's just not practical to commit to such a big promise at this time of my life. It would take years to complete. Mostly, my story writing goes smooth when I am travelling. If I have to write a long story, that too, while getting in sync with such a long, already written content, then I'll have to go on a world tour!
Write now I'm going to give you that changed climax. That's the only thing in offer.
Thanks again, guys.
Hello Krish
Thanks for acknowledging the comment and your plans about re-writing. This is your story and you have the right to take it in a way that you see right. Anyway good to hear you have already started with re-writing part. Waiting for the update....
Take care of health, family and life... they come first, always.
Again,
Bineesh!
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Mira Desai se shadi nahi karegi
Bas or new character add honge
Desai fir koi chal chlega
Mera ko fasane ka
Ye bat kisi ko pata nahi hoti he
New job new place full erotica
Harderrrrrrrrr
Thanks for replying friends
Waiting dear
And happy
Ye kahani khtam gone me se nahi he
Iski endeng achi hogi
Bad me Mera or krish
Desai ko sabak sikh denge
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(23-10-2023, 10:56 AM)krish_999 Wrote: Guys, firstly, I would like to thank you all for the comments. And secondly, apologies for the delayed reply.
Now about dropping the idea of re-writing the last few chapters of this story and then writing a whole new part.
I have been working on the re-writing, and I have a good draft of what I am going write. I think it is going to grow bigger than what I had thought. I mean, if I am rewriting last two chapters, then the new version could expand to four chapters. That's what I expect. But I said, I am working on it. And it's really tough to find time because I have other real life commitments. That's why it's taking so much to realize. I would love to take bineeshm's suggestion of dropping it all but I know it would be suicidal if I commit to the other part of suggestion. No, guys! It's just not practical to commit to such a big promise at this time of my life. It would take years to complete. Mostly, my story writing goes smooth when I am travelling. If I have to write a long story, that too, while getting in sync with such a long, already written content, then I'll have to go on a world tour!
Write now I'm going to give you that changed climax. That's the only thing in offer.
Thanks again, guys.
Sir me apko kuch bolu ye
Mere jese chote insan ke liye layak nahi he fir bhi
Desai Mera krush alag ho jate he
Job ,sab chiso me,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Desai abbb bada admi Banta he
Dubai shift hota he
India me compani mhe kuch karodo piso ka
Ghotala karke chla jata he
Isme Mera ke kuch 1,50 cr atak jate he
Buisness losss krish ka
Fir Desai apna badla le liya
Lakin Mera or krish usko sabak sikhne ke liye
Kuch plan karte he
Uske bisness me shamil hote he
Mera ko or naw character melenge
Jo Desai ke .maneger.driver.ofice ke kuch log hone
Ye Mera ka maja lete he
Or
Mera or krish plan karke Desai ki sachai
Bahar nikale he
Or deai ko barbad karte he
Or krish ka badla pura hota he
Kai partiya hogi
Sex hoga
Thriller stories hogi sespens hoga
Ir hamare writer hamare sath hone thanks
Meri soch galat he lakin muzhe Jo acha laga wo mene try Kiya
Thanks
And sorrryyyyy
Ap stories start karo 1 month me 1 update shota
Diya to bhi chlega thanks
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writer has tobe ready with part 4, and if not he can't start, reminding every day is not good, if I hurt anyone with this comment I am extremely sorry
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We are waiting krish for your magical write
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(02-11-2023, 04:30 PM)shake chilli Wrote: Small update bro wating someone dayes
Bro , you have to calm down , no point in sending these many messages , he'll only post new updates when he's ready anyway , so unless that happens no point in spamming!!
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(01-11-2023, 01:46 AM)shake chilli Wrote: Waiting......
Sorry to disappoint you, my friend. There's no way I can commit to writing the fourth part as of now. Please try to understand. If I find time to reverse my decision, I will myself come here and announce it.
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Ok my dear friend
I am waiting any time
Part 4
Thanks
Ang sorry message me to force update
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07-11-2023, 02:46 AM
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Dear Krish,
when you announced your decision to end the story, many readers (fans) reluctantly accepted and respected
your decision, even though many events and circumstances were in the dark and there was no clarity...
But we respected your decision, "without ifs and buts!"
But after you have changed your decision and told us that you will write the last chapters of this story
again from the beginning, you are raising new expectations and hopes for us (your fans) for a detailed and
broadly described emotional and mental world of the main protagonists "Meera and Krish".
Therefore, this long break (which you have taken!) is incomprehensible and hard to understand.
Because with the announcement (to rewrite the last chapters, possibly with changed content) you also make
it clear to us that the new content has taken shape in your head and was waiting to be written...
So why wait so long?
What is stopping you?
Either continue or finally set a POINT!
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda
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Thanks for re-writing the last two chapters..excited to read them now that they have become 4 chapters. Waiting for conversations between Krish and Meera once Desai leaves the house.
As for me..part 4 is not needed. There is no fun in reading the story from Meera's perspective when you have become so used to reading it from Krish's mind.It only will work if the other character is a mystery and you know nothing about how they act or behave in certain situations..take an example of Twilight by Stephanie Meyer..she wrote the first book back in Edward's perspective ...For readers after reading all series from Bella's perspective, one thing that was a mystery was why Edward was obsessive over her so much and it was super hit because reading Edward's perspective gave new meaning to the series as it showed why he is obsessed so much...there is no such mysterious character here...though i know many people call Meera as manipulative and a cheater and her perspective should bring light into her nature..I feel if author writes her perspective it will be all filled with her love for Krish which many readers are not ready to accept so why push for a part 4 from her perspective. Meera whether cheater or not always loved Krish and probably even more than Krish loved her...hard to believe for so many here but its true.
Personally i hate going through the roller coaster of a ride for part 4 for this series..I had similar emotions when Krish announced part 3 as well...I would rather read a fresh story like No one dies a saint than this series.
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please do not change anything, just continue the story from where u left. if not sequence of story will be distorted. continue with a twist or as u wish but dont change what u have already written.
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(23-10-2023, 10:56 AM)krish_999 Wrote: Guys, firstly, I would like to thank you all for the comments. And secondly, apologies for the delayed reply.
Now about dropping the idea of re-writing the last few chapters of this story and then writing a whole new part.
I have been working on the re-writing, and I have a good draft of what I am going write. I think it is going to grow bigger than what I had thought. I mean, if I am rewriting last two chapters, then the new version could expand to four chapters. That's what I expect. But I said, I am working on it. And it's really tough to find time because I have other real life commitments. That's why it's taking so much to realize. I would love to take bineeshm's suggestion of dropping it all but I know it would be suicidal if I commit to the other part of suggestion. No, guys! It's just not practical to commit to such a big promise at this time of my life. It would take years to complete. Mostly, my story writing goes smooth when I am travelling. If I have to write a long story, that too, while getting in sync with such a long, already written content, then I'll have to go on a world tour!
Write now I'm going to give you that changed climax. That's the only thing in offer.
Thanks again, guys.
Can we expect and re-write of the last 2 parts by the end of November?
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(14-11-2023, 02:27 AM)shake chilli Wrote: Part 4 waiting
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