Adultery THE UNTOLD STORY OF RIYA & SAPNA
Good going... Waiting to Richard's action
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Whateey Excellent Writing @Anoop.. Staging The Scenes Very Beautifully.. Top Stuff..

Kindly Do Update This Part As Soon As Possible..
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Ur kidding story pls update more plss dear friend
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Marvelous update
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Clever move by cunning Javed Singh is interesting ! To a certain extent Riya understood about Javed, but unable to move away from him. Interesting ! Please continue the next update
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Nice update bro keep going on more updates
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Working on Next update ,Will update Sunday Evening ,

Thanks Readers...
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Great going
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Waiting bro
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Dear Author, Kindly follow the timing what ever u said or else provide us the update about when the story update happens. We all are eagerly waiting for ur update for 1week but sill now no update or reply from ur side..

Kindly provide the update or else let us know when it will be update.
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Boss, waiting for ur update
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Sorry Readers , Personally had some problems ,that's why I didn't update the story , Here after I will write and update the story regularly ,
RIYA *********
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When we have next update
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Please continue
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(04-10-2023, 09:39 PM)Anoop Nair Wrote: Sorry Readers , Personally had some problems ,that's why I didn't update the story , Here after I will write and update the story regularly ,
RIYA *********

Take your time.
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I don't know whether you asked for this or not, but I am going to tell you something. Consider these below listed points as constructive feedback.

1. Update the title of the story. Presently, "Riya the Mallu pay for his husband in North India", whereas it should have been, "Riya the Mallu pays for her husband in North India".
At least in the title of the story, get the grammar right.

2. People who are in this forum from years know from where you took the reference of first sex scene. Please add your flavour to that. There's nothing wrong in taking a reference but your signature writing should be there.

3. Riya has been fucked by Minister twice now. First time in the night when minister kind of forced himself on her and secondly in the pretext of training her how to save herself from a goon. Riya must now acknowledge that Minister fucks her and should play the game to tease him. Dont make her like that she doesnt understand what minister is doing to her in pretext of playing games.

I hope you take these in positive framework and don't get offended.

Keep up, waiting for the future updates.
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Nice one
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Where r u boss
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The story was going nice but stop in middle itself hope ate righter will continue the story
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