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Bs hun ehna dohna di marva di ik bari ikhatia di
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wow....bahut sohna likhde ho.....te jo tussi GURJOT de POV to kahani likh rahe ho....swaad aa janda hai pad ke.....bas GURJOT nu INCEST wich na payo....story adultery hi rakhiyo....
u r too good in explaining scene plot
bahut chir baas enni sohni story padan nu mil rahi hai....
thank you so much buddy for ur effort.....
bahut wadiya writing hai tuhadi....
keep it up
keep writing
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Sale updte bade late ande a pencho
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Kithai gayab ho gaya waan veer update kAr dai yar
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Veere meNu ta koi update nHi show ho riha ki chkrr aw eh yr
Ds plzz
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Hi friends,
I have removed the story as people were getting too impatient for updates and I was not getting time because of some personal reasons.
Sorry for the confusion. If I could ever complete the story then I will post it whole....
Thanks to all the readers for liking/commenting the story......