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Mera college te Mera Pind....
#81
Aa e wadia update
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#82
(02-06-2019, 09:35 PM)The Blue Prince Wrote: Very good story dost. Carry on the good work. Good conversation between mummy and maami.

Thanks a lot bother. I have been a big fan of your writing for along time and your comments means a lot......
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#83
(02-06-2019, 10:16 PM)Athra jutt Wrote: Aa e wadia update

Thanks brother......
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#84
Bs hun ehna dohna di marva di ik bari ikhatia di
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#85
(03-06-2019, 03:05 AM)Neo_ Wrote: Thanks a lot bother. I have been a big fan of your writing for along time and your comments means a lot......

Welcome brother.  Thank you so much for appreciation. Its really good to know that you too like my writing.  Btw you are an awesome writer,  even far more better than me brother.  Carry on the nice work.
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#86
wow....bahut sohna likhde ho.....te jo tussi GURJOT de POV to kahani likh rahe ho....swaad aa janda hai pad ke.....bas GURJOT nu INCEST wich na payo....story adultery hi rakhiyo....
u r too good in explaining scene plot
bahut chir baas enni sohni story padan nu mil rahi hai....
thank you so much buddy for ur effort.....
bahut wadiya writing hai tuhadi....
keep it up
keep writing
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#87
Sale updte bade late ande a pencho
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#88
(04-06-2019, 12:36 AM)Rajan2 Wrote: ਸਹੀ ਗਲ ਆ ਕਮ ਸ਼ੇ ਕਮ ਇਕ ਦਿਨ ਛੱਡ ਕੇ ਦੇੇੇਵੇ

Hor ki.. sahi aa pencho.  Aida sala story da mza khrb ho jnda.
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#89
Virea kithe reh gya aja
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#90
Superb story...
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#91
happy Superb story...
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#92
Yar update kar dai
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#93
Kithai gayab ho gaya waan veer update kAr dai yar
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#94
Update waiting
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#95
Veere meNu ta koi update nHi show ho riha ki chkrr aw eh yr
Ds plzz
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#96
Hi friends,

 I have removed the story as people were getting too impatient for updates and I was not getting time because of some personal reasons. 

Sorry for the confusion. If I could ever complete the story then I will post it whole....

Thanks to all the readers for liking/commenting the story......
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#97
Shame on u mr neo..
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