02-06-2019, 10:16 PM
Aa e wadia update
Mera college te Mera Pind....
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02-06-2019, 10:16 PM
Aa e wadia update
03-06-2019, 03:05 AM
03-06-2019, 03:06 AM
03-06-2019, 08:21 AM
Bs hun ehna dohna di marva di ik bari ikhatia di
03-06-2019, 09:26 AM
(This post was last modified: 03-06-2019, 09:27 AM by The Blue Prince. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(03-06-2019, 03:05 AM)Neo_ Wrote: Thanks a lot bother. I have been a big fan of your writing for along time and your comments means a lot...... Welcome brother. Thank you so much for appreciation. Its really good to know that you too like my writing. Btw you are an awesome writer, even far more better than me brother. Carry on the nice work.
03-06-2019, 12:43 PM
wow....bahut sohna likhde ho.....te jo tussi GURJOT de POV to kahani likh rahe ho....swaad aa janda hai pad ke.....bas GURJOT nu INCEST wich na payo....story adultery hi rakhiyo....
u r too good in explaining scene plot bahut chir baas enni sohni story padan nu mil rahi hai.... thank you so much buddy for ur effort..... bahut wadiya writing hai tuhadi.... keep it up keep writing
04-06-2019, 12:34 AM
Sale updte bade late ande a pencho
04-06-2019, 12:37 AM
06-06-2019, 08:57 PM
Virea kithe reh gya aja
08-06-2019, 12:11 PM
Superb story...
08-06-2019, 12:12 PM
Superb story...
08-06-2019, 07:26 PM
Yar update kar dai
20-06-2019, 10:47 PM
Kithai gayab ho gaya waan veer update kAr dai yar
21-06-2019, 10:37 AM
Update waiting
21-06-2019, 09:51 PM
Veere meNu ta koi update nHi show ho riha ki chkrr aw eh yr
Ds plzz
23-06-2019, 10:22 PM
Hi friends,
I have removed the story as people were getting too impatient for updates and I was not getting time because of some personal reasons. Sorry for the confusion. If I could ever complete the story then I will post it whole.... Thanks to all the readers for liking/commenting the story......
24-06-2019, 02:24 PM
Shame on u mr neo..
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